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The precious gift of love (kaanchi) Episode 13

Heyy Guys Hope you’re fine…. ? Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my previous article… My last exam will be on next Thursday so after that I’ll read and comment so the articles i missed… So let’s start…

Recap:- Kaanchi moments.. The gang visited the mountains of Shimla and played truth and dare game… Jaya visited Kapoor Mansion to meet Kusum.. Both mothers decided to get Kaanchi engaged.

Now let’s continue….

Next day ….

Kaanchi and the gang got ready. All gatherered in the lobby of the hotel and left.. They went to a restaurant for their breakfast which was located between the mountains and had a beautiful view… They ordered their food..

Kabir: So guys.. Today is the last day here in Shimla… Tomorrow afternoon we’ll be leaving…

All: Ohk..

Breakfast was served.. Everyone started eating…

Dr Jay: Guys… We should leave now….

Everyone left…

They visited some shops… Kaanchi played in the snow… Everyone enjoyed a lot… They clicked thousands of selfies.. It was dark thus they decided to head back…

They arrive at the hotel…

Dr Kabir: Go guys.. Pack your stuff… And rest… We have to return tomorrow…

All: Ok

They left…

Sanchi went to her room… She went to take a warm bath…

Kabir comes in her room and the door was open. He goes inside. Sanchi comes outside, drying her wet hair with a towel. Kabir was sitting on the couch and was using his phone.. Sanchi didn’t noticed Kabir..

She continued drying her hair and Kabir kept staring he lovingly… He was mesmerized by her beauty.. She sided her hair to one side at the front…. Kabir noticed the dori of her dress was open… He goes near her.. Sanchi saw him on the mirror..

Sanchi: You here..?

Kabir: Next time don’t forget to close the door…

Sanchi: Oh .. Sorry i will take care next time…

Kabir hugs her from behind… Sanchi smiled

Sanchi: Aren’t you getting too much romantic these days..?

Kabir: Sanchi.. Mom called me in the morning..

Sanchi: Is she fine. ??

Kabir: Yeah.. There’s a good news for us…

Sanchi: What good news..?

Kabir: Sanchi… Maa and Jaya aunty has fixed our engagement…

Sanchi: Seriously..?

Kabir: Yeah..

Sanchi: I’m so happy Kabir..

Kabir kissed her shoulder…

Sanchi: Kabir door is open…

Kabir leaves her and locks the door. He started moving towards Sanchi. She gets shy…. He holds her hand and pulls her closer.. She closed her eyes. Kabir kissed her eye… She started blushing… He leaves her and make her turn.. He kissed on her back… She shivered when she felt the touch of his lips… He ties her dori and makes her turn to face him… He pins her to the wall…

Kabir: May I..?

Sanchi nodded yes.. Still having her eyes closed…

Kabir smiled and kissed her chin. He gently kissed her cheeks.. He intertwined his fingers with hers and started kissing her lips again and again..?… He kept it continued for some minutes.. Her heart was beating fast while her breath was stopped… Both of them wanted this moment to last forever.. Every second if their closeness was special for both… He deepened the kisses even more.. He removed her chain and began to kiss every corner of her neck… She was blushing heavily… He hugs her.. They parted in a few minutes..

Kabir whispered in her ears: I can’t wait for the marriage.. When you’ll be mine forever…

He kissed under her ears…

Sanchi: I’m already yours…

Kabir: I love you Sanchi..

Sanchi: I love you too..

He kissed her again…

They parted..

Kabir: I have to go now…

Sanchi: Good night….

Kabir: Good night sweet heart..

Kabir kissed her forehead and leaves…

Next Morning everyone had their breakfast and start packing their stuff… They left the hotel..

Sanchi looking at mountains while they were on the way to airport..

Kabir: Sanchi… What happened..?

Sanchi: Look na Kabir… It is so beautiful place.. Don’t know when I’ll get another chance to come here again…

Kabir: Very soon…

Sanchi: When..?

Kabir: Maybe next month.. On our honeymoon…

Sanchi blushed…

Kabir: You look even more beautiful when you blush…

Sanchi smiled…

They reached airport and their plane took off..

They reached Mumbai…

Kabir: Sanchi if you don’t mind, can you come to my home..Maa wanted to meet you…

Sanchi: What do you mean by your home…it’s my home too.. I myself wanted to meet Kusum aunty..

Kabir: So let’s go then…

Kabir reaches Kapoor Mansion..

He rings the doorbell.. Kusum opens the door. Kabir touches her feet and takes blessings.. He saw Riya standing behind Kusum..

Kabir: Riya..?

Riya: I knew, you’ll come to meet your mother first.. So I came here to welcome you…

Sanchi came from behind and touches Kusum feet. Kusum gives her blessings..

Kusum: How are you beta..?

Sanchi: I’m fine aunty.. How are you..?

Kusum: I’m also fine…

Kusum: Did you both enjoyed the trip..?

Sanchi: Yes aunty.. It was really beautiful place…

Riya was surprised..

Riya: Sanchi… Why did you came here ..? I mean you must be tired.. You should rest..

Sanchi: No .. I’m not tired at all…

Kusum: I asked Golu to take her here…

Riya rolled her eyes..

Kusum asked everyone to have lunch.. All sit in the dining table.. Their maid served the food..

Sanchi: Yumm… Aunty i it’s so tasty… You have magic in your hands..

Kusum smiles..

Riya in mind ” Oh no… She’s trying to impress Kusum aunty.. No no no… I can’t let it happen…

Riya: Aunty, aunty… It’s so yummy… I have never ever tasted so yummy food in my life… It’s really good… No one can cook like you not even my mother.. If you become a Chief of any restaurant.. I swear people will go crazy..

Kabir: Riya.. Stop buttering her… and eat your lunch quietly…

Sanchi and Kusum silently laugh.

Kabir started touching Sanchi’s feet with his. Sanchi coughs.. Kabir winks at her..

Riya’s spoon falls and she bents down to grab it.. She saw their under table romance..

Riya was full of anger..

Kusum: You all sit here.. Ill bring Sweet dish…

Riya smirks…

Riya: Aunty you sit.. I’ll bring it .

Kusum: Ohk…

Riya enters the kitchen and mixes rat poison in one of the bowl.

Riya: Sanchi.. You tried to steal my Kabir right.. Now see what will happen to you..

She serves the sweet dish.

She was going to give that bowl to Sanchi.. When Kabir snatched it from her hand..

Kabir: My favorite custard… Yummm…

He was about to eat when Riya hits the bowl and it falls and cracks.. Everyone got shocked and stood up..

Riya: KABIIRR YOU CAN’T EAT THIS..

Riya hugs him.. Everyone is shocked especially Sanchi.. Kabir jerks her away..

Kabir(shouts): WHAT WAS IT RIYA..?

Riya: IT WAS HARMFUL FOR YOU ..

Kabir: HARMFUL… WHAT DO YOU MEAN

Riya: BECAUSE I HAD MIXED POISON IN IT TO KILL SANCHI..

Kabir is dumbstruck.. Kusum makes her turn and gives her a tight slap on her face…

Kabir: Get out of my house.. Right now..

Riya cries…

Riya: Plz listen to me Kabir…

Kabir: I SAID GET OUT…

She leaves..

Kusum: I am sorry Sanchi..

Sanchi: Aunty plz you are embarrassing me…

Kabir hugged Sanchi….

Kabir: I would for if something happens to you.. I can’t live without you.. I love you so much Sanchi..

Kusum smiles and coughs..

Kabir realized his gesture and leaves Sanchi at once…

Kusum: Sanchi beta… I and Jaya have fixed your engagement.. It’s tomorrow.. I know it’s too early but Pandit jii said it’s a very nice time for this engagement… I hope you don’t mind..

Sanchi: No aunty.. Why would I mind..? I am very happy..

Kusum hugs both of them..

Sanchi: But Kabir, the management has made a new hr rule which has restricted the staff to involve in relationships.. If this news spreads in the hospital then…?

Kabir: Sanchi… I have decided that we’ll have a simple engagement only a few close ones will be invited and as soon as you complete your internship I’ll resign from the hospital… You can continue your practice as a doctor in Sdch..

Sanchi: But Kabir… You have done so much for this hospital.. You’re the best doctor of Sdch..

Kabir: Sanchi I can sacrifice anything for you…

Kusum: Yeah Sanchi.. Golu is right… Now you should start planning for your engagement.. We have only one day…

Sanchi nods…

Kusum: Now you go and rest… I and Jaya ji will go for shopping.. Kabir go and drop her safely…

Sanchi: It’s OK aunty… I’ll go home myself… Let him rest.. He must be tired…

Kabir: No Sanchi.. Maa is right… I’ll drop you.. Come…

Sanchi: Ohk..

Sanchi touches Kusum’s feet.. Kusum hugs her.. Kaanchi leave…

Kabir drops Sanchi.. Jaya and Kusum did the shopping…

Next day…….
At Kapoor Mansion…..
Engagement….

Kapoor mansion was lightly decorated.. The decoration was yet simple.. But really beautiful.. Only a few close family members were invited… No doctor or intern was aware of this engagement except Dr Jay, Ishpraveer and Garv… These were invited at the ring ceremony…

Kusum was wearing a blue saree with silver embroidery and silver jewelry.. Isha came wearing a black gown with white ear tops and pendent.. Pragya was wearing a pink simple lehnga on white top and pink earrings… Garv was wearing a black tuxedo while Veer came wearing a white shirt and grey coat..

Everyone was waiting for the couple..
Sanchi was on the way..

Kabir comes downstairs wearing a green sherwani and silver embroidery.. He was looking too handsome..

Veer: Omg… Dr Kabir … Is that you..? I mean i never knew you are more handsome than me…

Kabir laughs..

Dr Jay: Look.. Our Sanchi bhabhi has changed him so much.. He even learnt to laugh..

Veer: But where is our bhabhi…

Isha: She is on the way..

Veer:OK

Pragya: Look she’s there…

Everyone turns… Sanchi enters wearing golden lehnga with silver light work and gold jewelry… Jaya was wearing a yellow saree with matching jewellery…

Kabir is mesmerized by her beauty.. He keeps staring her…

Sanchi touches Kusum’s feet. Kusum blesses her…

Kusum: My daughter is looking so beautiful..

Sanchi: Thank you aunty..

Kusum: Aunty..? Beta call me Maa

Sanchi: Ok maa..

Kusum smiles and hugs her…

Kusum: Kabir … What are you doing over there..? Come here…

Kabir comes..

Kusum: Pragya, plz go and bring the rings..

Pragya: Ohk aunty..

Sanchi: You are looking really nice..

Kabir: Thanks…

Sanchi: And me..?

Kabir: You are looking really hot…

Sanchi blushes..

Pragya beings the rings..

Kusum: Kabir you make her wear the ring first …

Kabir holds Sanchi’s hands and make her wear the ring…

Everyone clap…

Kusum: Sanchi.. Your turn…

Sanchi holds his hand and make him wear the ring…

Everybody clap…

Kaanchi look at each other…

A lady was passing by and she stumbled and her drink fell on Sanchi’s dress..

Lady: Oh.. I- I am so sorry..

Sanchi: It’s ok aunty…

Kusum: Go Sanchi wash your dress..

Sanchi goes..

Kabir saw her going in his room and he too went there hiding from the eyes of everyone..

Sanchi comes out of washroom and saw him standing in front of the mirror..

Sanchi: Kabir..?

Kabir turns…

He goes near her and holds her hand..

Kabir: Sanchi.. You have no idea how much i am happy…

Sanchi: I am also very happy Kabir..

Kabir takes out a bracelet and makes her wear it..

Sanchi: Wow Kabir…Did you brought it for me..?

Kabir: No it’s for the watchmen.. Of course you..

Sanchi: It’s really beautiful..

Kabir smiles..

Kabir: You like it..?

Sanchi: A lot…!!

Kabir kissed her hand…

Sanchi hugs him..

Sanchi: Thanks for the gift..

Kabir: Just thanks..? Where’s my gift..

Sanchi: Kabir actually i didn’t bought anything for you..

Kabir: Never mind.. I’ll still take my gift..

Sanchi: …

Kabir started to move towards her.. She understood his intentions..

Kabir pins her to the wall ..

Sanchi: Kabir… guests are waiting…

Kabir: Let them wait…

Sanchi: Kabir.. Let me go… What will maa think…?

Kabir: I don’t care…

Sanchi: But Kab-

Kabir puts finger on her lips…

Kabir: Shhh….

Kabir leans closer.. Sanchi closes her eyes…

Kabir kissed the corner of her lips..

She opens her eyes..

Kabir: I’ll take rest of the gifts later..

Kabir winks at her… He moves back and leaves..

Sanchi was totally red and there was sweat on her forehead.. She consoles herself and comes downstairs…

Kusum makes her sit on the sofa beside Kabir..

Veer: So ladies and gentlemen, on this beautiful moment, our two most beautiful ladies Isha and Pragya will perform a dance…

Everyone cheer for them…

Song plays ( Luv Letter )

Meri… Meri…

Meri neendein hain faraar
Tere sang mere yaar
Tune ki jo mere saath shararat ve

Ho.. kaajal ki siyahi leke
Aankhon ke chiraag se
Kaise main bataaun tujhko
Sau sau ratiyaan jaag ke

Ankhiyon ne likhe love letter ve
O meri ankhiyon ne likhe Luv Letter ve
Sajna tu chaand se better ve
Sajna ve…

Chitthiyan saadi chitthiyan padh le re
Re chaton waton pe chadh ke
Padh ke bado bado se lad ke
Meet’on ki chithiyan

Haye kariyo na mujhse
Tu jhuthe moothe waade
Reh jayenge hum toh
Tere bin aadhe aadhe

Tere liye hi bani hoon
Main teri destiny hoon
Le maine clear kar diye
Hain apne iraade

Ho.. raahein maine dekhi teri
Jugnuon ki aag pe
Kaise main bataun tujhko
Sau sau ratiya jaag ke

Akhiyon ne likhe luv letter ve
O meri akhiyon ne likhe luv letter ve
Sajna tu chand se better ve
Sajna Ve! Yeah..

Isha: Thank you so much guys.. And now it’s time for the boys to prove themselves.. So Veer Garv come on the stage…

Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya

Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
PALAT…

Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat…

Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
ki tera dhyan kidhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai

Ho kehta hai mujhse kyun zamaana..
Arey haan, nahi aasaan hai tujhko paana
Aah.. tere nakhre uthaaun sanam
Mujhko teri kasam
Taang dun chand ko, teri kurti mein
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
Arey PALAT…
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat na…

Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
Ke tera dhyan kidhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai

Everyone clap for them…

Pragya: Now it’s time for our cute couple to show their Jalwa…

Kaanchi look at each other…

Pragya: Abeo Sanchi madam… You have whole life to stare him.. But now it’s time for some fun… Come dance…

Kabir stands up and forwards his hand towards Sanchi.. She holds his hand.. They both come in the middle of the hall.. A beam of light was shining on their faces while the lights were dimmed.. Kaanchi were holding each others hands while Sanchi places her one hand on his chest and Kabir holds her waist… He pulls her closer.. They were lost in each other’s eyes.. Bg song plays…

Mangaan ae hi duavaan main
Channa tu mainu mill jaa
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja

Saamne baith ja takda jaaun
Akhiyon mein teri gum ho jaaun
Mujhe dhoondhe na phir koi..

Mangaan ae hi duavan main
Channa tu mainu mil ja
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja…

Tu jo mere saath chale na
Manzil meri sab kho jaaye

O… mmm…

Ik pal tu jo nazar na aaye
Dil mera haaye ghabraaye
Jeena nahi bin tere sun tu
Mera toh haasil bas tu hi tu

Bin tere na mera koi..

Mangaan ae hi duavaan main
Channa tu mainu mil ja
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja…

Tu guzre jin raahon se maahi
Apne do naino ko bichaaun
Dekh na loon main jab tak tujhko
Laut ke apne dar na jaaun

Shaamil hoja mujhme yun tu
Aks jo dekhun mujhme dikhe tu
Main Ranjha Heer tu meri huyi

Mangan ae hi duavan main
Channa tu mainu mil ja
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja

Precap:- Kaanchi moments and Kabir handling a drunk Sanchi..

Guys one important thing… My comments have reduced… Maybe readers are not enjoying my ff… Sorry for boring you guys with my stupid stories… I am confused whether i should continue this ff or not… I’ll give a final ending to this ff by getting Kaanchi married.. And end this ff within further 2 episodes.. I’ll start writing OS then .. Plz give your suggestions.. Love you all…

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