Hi everyone. Did you miss me? 😉 I have made it twice as long as the last time, and I hope you guys enjoy it. And this episode is written with Shivaay’s point of view. I hope I have lived up to all your expectations. Thanks a lot for all your love and support.
Episode 2: Precious
Something is wrong, I can feel it. I walked around restlessly, hoping that the hunch would get tired and go away. Om and Rudra were watching me closely as if they were seeing me for the first time. I raise my eyebrows and they shake their head at me, looking away at once. But they resumed their favourite pastime as soon as I looked away. ‘What will become of them?’ I wonder. “Khanna! Updates!” I shout into my phone, and the reply from the other end made me almost dizzy.
“Sir, Anika madam left the Oberoi Mansion without security. We didn’t realize when she went.”
“Anika!” the name escaped my lips as the threat I received resounded in my ears and my brain skimmed through all the dangerous possibilities.
The fear in his voice was obvious, but that would definitely not prevent me from firing him. But at this moment, my thoughts were only for Anika. “Track her phone using mine. Check the cameras in the surroundings. She could have just gone back home, so send someone there too. I’m coming.” I hope she’s okay. I know that she can take care of herself, but I just can’t ignore the possibility that she could be in danger. As I reached our control room shadowed by Om and Rudra, Khanna’s expression scared me. “Sir, it seems they did mean it. She’s kidnapped.” Quietly I went through all the location results and the videos. And that’s when I received the cliché call by them. I signaled my men to record and track the call, picked up the call and quietly listened to the irritating rant.
“Why is she so important to you, SSO? She talks so much, even under the drug’s effect, she managed to annoy all my men. I wonder what she’ll do if I make a small cut on her hand?” I heard a small hiss and then the mystery woman was back on line. My balled up hands hurt, but not more than my head. My blood was at its boiling point. “She’s a brave girl. Not a scream! So, when are you coming to save her? You know what, I don’t really want to hurt her. But watching you like this, I’m totally loving it!” The wicked laugh did it. “You’ll regret it. I warned you, but now you’re dead.” My voice was unnervingly quiet and my eyes were flashing with fury. I cut the call and asked Khanna for the location. It seemed to be some kind of remote place. Could it get any filmier than this?
We left without wasting much time. Om and Rudra wanted to come too and I didn’t object. I was getting edgier by the minute. My palms were sweaty and driving was a struggle. We finally reached as the terrible road ended at a one story building. All the security guys surrounded the place. It looked like the dark, dingy bhoot bangla, as Anika would have said. The ground floor was absolutely empty but it didn’t seem too dirty, as if someone had cleaned it a few days ago. I speedily climbed the broken stairs and the sight that met me brought tears to my eyes.
“Anika”, I breathed. Her hand was covered in blood from a long cut on her left forearm. I rushed to her and carefully placed her head on my lap, cradling her like my baby. She was whispering something. I leaned closer to her such that I was shielding her partially.
“My Billuji… SSO… My Billuji… SSO…” I looked at her with tearful eyes, blaming myself for the pain she was bearing. “It’s okay. You’ll be fine. I’m here now.” I said reassuringly. Om and Rudra also came and knelt beside me. Om placed a hand on my shoulder and Rudra stared at her with tearful red eyes. Khanna also came and told me something I already knew. “Sir, they left already. We have checked the surroundings too. There’s no evidence left either. I have informed the doctor to come to the Oberoi Mansion too. We should leave.” I nodded at him and picking up Anika in my arms moved downstairs, taking extra care to not hurt her.
Reaching home, I took Anika to Prinku’s room and let the doctor do his work. Her closed eyes troubled me to no end. I yearned to see mischief dancing in her eyes and her lips smile at the slightest hint of happiness. The past two and a half hours had brought such a flood of emotions in me for that ordinary girl lying there. No, she was anything but ordinary. Ordinary girls shout on getting a small cut, they don’t just let out a hiss on getting such a long and deep cut. Normal people fall into deep sleep under drug’s effect, they don’t keep talking and annoying people in sleep! Just thinking about today’s events made me angry again. Something gave me a hunch that it was someone closely related to our family, and someone resourceful. She must have a full-fledged team working for her to hack into our systems and camera footages and carry out all the dirty work for her. I settled myself on a nearby chair and started swiping through my mails. There was one thing that I noticed about myself at this particular moment. Although I was angry, I still felt calm knowing that she was safe now, with me. And I smiled slightly at the thought.
Do let me know your views guys. I’m waiting for your comments. 🙂
40 Comments
It was amazing
Thanks Namrata ?
Its superb samm post next asap
Thanks nans ?
awesome samm 🙂
loved it 🙂
update next part soon 🙂
Thanks Priyanka ?
Nice. Dr
Thanks ishqkum ?
wow caring shivay
Yep, sadia. Thanks for commenting ?
It was superb!!
Thanks Priyanka ? Btw, I think there are 2 Priyankas here, right?
wow!wow! wow! keep it up, this is a very wonderful write up
Thanks Juliet ?
Niceeee could you please add a precap to ur ffs plzzz ?
Thanks shaista ? I’ll try adding a precap next time, but no promises, ok? ?
Ok but thanks ??
Guys, all your suggestions are more than welcome, so please do share them. I’ll be really happy to know your views. ?
It was very interesting to read. Is Sahil still in picture? I always get worried about him being aline at home ?
Alone
??? yeah Diya, but I think Sahil has known struggle too, so he can take care of himself to an extent. He’s a kid after all! Btw, I love Sahil’s character in the story too, as he’s the only one who can get through to Anika. And thanks for the comment. ?
brilliant. continue soon
Thanks Elle ?
nice update next soon
Thanks Shivu ?will do
Damn, you are a great writer dear,
I am sorry for the late comment
Please forgive me
And today shivaay point of view was superb
He could guess annika ain danger.
He just couldn’t be a second without her
That was lovely
Annika being kidnapped and shivomru saving her, the whole kidnapping scene was fantastic
And also shivaay thinking about annika that she is a brave girl and all was a superb scene
And please update the next part was awesome???
Thanks Sat. ?And please don’t be sorry, I’m so glad that you commented. I’ll try to update it today itself ??
Caring shivaay was so sweet to see!!! Standing ovation wala episode!!! post next asap
Thanks a lot Priyali. ?
Hey sammm…u rocked ittt….?
Thanks Tulasi ?
It was awesome…. Speechless…..??
Thanks Vincy ?
Nice ep plz post soon
Thanks Mihra ? I’m working on it, and I’ll try to post the next episode tonight itself ??
Guys, why is it taking eternity for my post to be updated? I posted the next episode last night and it is still being reviewed! ?
Amazing episode samm. Its lovelyyy. And dnt mind my late comment. Well ur writing style is superb. Ur way of expressing the leads’ emotions is jst fabulous. Tis is ur frst ff i presume? If so where hav u been all these days? Thank god atleast nw u r writing. Otherwise we wld hav missed out on someone so talented as u. The episode length is jst ryt. Maintain this tempo and i am sure ur ff wll be a hit
And i too write a ff. Though its nt as good as urs plz do check it out if possible. My ff is nt on shivika. I post my ff wth two leads – swasan and ardhika. Plz do read anyone of them. The name of the ff posted wth swaragini characters(swasan) is the miracle of my life. The name of the ff posted wth manmarziyan characters(ardhika) is locked.
Love u loadsss❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Update soon???????
Yeah, this is my first ff, and all your comments motivate me so much. Thanks.? I have uploaded the next one but it’s not updated till now ? and I’ll try to read your ffs too ?
I really loved it….plz continue ur ff yaarr…..precious is a perfect bame for shivika’s relationship…..good going
Thanks Priyanka ?
You’re the third Priyanka who commented on my post. ??