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Preetan FF : Truth Of Life Part 100

The goons catch Tanya from road and bring in front of Usmaan mercilessly.

Rocky ; one thing you have to accept boss this girl is truly a bomb, what she did with Rajveer Singh is applaudable

Usmaan (grabs her hair) : you are the one who have shaken my whole life’s business, what two countries government could not do you did in one day

Tanya : thats why I say, you should never underestimate others specially enemies, and one more thing this deed only scoundrel like you can do

“Rocky give her such death even the soul shakes up” orders him to burn her alive

Karan : no don’t (says softly with pain)

Rocky drags her to the deserted store room filled.

“Any last wish, even if it was who would fulfill it” Rocky makes fun of her while igniting fire

Rishab comes at the right time and have lengthy fight with him.

“Even fate thought twice before taking her away from me what is your worth” Rishab clutches his neck but stops seeing her plea

“Tanya you are okay” goes to her immediately who is holding her stomach

Tanya : don’t worry about me please go save your brother and Preeta

Rishab : I cannot leave you alone, come on get up you are not weak

“I won’t be able to, please go before you lose your brother, he is your life na or else whole world will lose trust on this pure brother relation go please” Tanya begs him crying with pain

Rishab : I will come back okay (kisses her forehead and leaves tearfully) but you promise me you won’t lose your spirit

Kya Kabhi Savera.. Ha Ha

Laata Hai Andhera.. Ha Ha

Sookhi Siyahi

Deti Hai Gawaahi

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

Ankahee..

Kya Kabhi Savera.. Ha Ha

Laata Hai Andhera.. Ha Ha

Sookhi Siyahi

Deti Hai Gawaahi

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

Ankahee..

“I will wait for you come back soon” she embraces him tightly with some bleeding on head

While separating their hands both recalls their marriage vows of not leaving each other. Tanya stabs Rocky in defense with the knife but in process hurts herself too. Rishab goes to save his other siblings sneaking into the mansion.

Kritika : so much time passed why they have kept us here don’t know how bhai and Preeta must be

Rishab comes to the place all of them are captive except Preeta and Karan.

“Bhai thank god you are here, please save us this people are monsters” Roo requests him

Rishab : don’t worry I am here to save you all, Sahil you take girls with you and call cops, Dhruv come with me to find Karan and Preetaji

Dhruv : yes bhai

Sahil : lets go come on

“Take care” Krtika tells him

Dhruv : I wil bring your brother back stay assured, go

The trio leaves out of mansion safely. Rishab and Dhruv fights with the guys reaching Karan Preeta. They are dumbfounded with couple’s condition.

“Bhai you finally came” Karan smiles seeing his brother in front of him

Rishab : yaar you have become so weak, where did that passion go of fighting (hits him)

“Oouch it hurts bhai” Karan gets in funny mode

Rishab : you think its funny, idiot seeing you in this condition if my heart is wrenching imagine what mom dad and dadi will go through

Dhruv helps Preeta get up properly

Rishab : now come on we have to go from here

“No bhai you take Preeta, I cannot even walk they hit so badly” Karan request him

Rishab : shut up or else I will hit very badly get up (makes him stand up)

The four of them fights with all goons but is stopped by Usmaan who is waiting for them at doorstep.

Rishab : he is the one?

Karan : yes bhai he hit us badly

“You want to go from here, then you are free but before leaving I have a surprise for you” shows captured Tanya in godown

Karan : bhai she is still with them and you came to save us here

Usmaan : now you have two choices take your brother freely from here and leave your beloved or here I will bury all your corpse

Rishab : leave my brother if your enmity with us

Preeta : what are you saying? how can you leave her with this monster

Karan : bhai have you lost it?

“Hey mouth shut only he will speak” Usmaan makes the duo quiet

Rishab : let them go, you won’t get anything keeping my brother with you

Usmaan : I knew only you are sensible, Mona let them go

Mona ; but Sir

“Bhai have you gone crazy, you are willing to leave the girl for who you fought till today” Karan blasts his brother first time

“That same girl have told me to save you both, you know what she said one always have to pay for being right” Rishab breakdown

Dhruv : no bhai this is wrong, we all decided to face everything together

Mona : all of you do this melodramatic scene outside move

The siblings go out of mansion

Karan : I won’t go anywhere neither you, we will go back with Tanya only

Rishab : you are not going anywhere  do you get it, you all will go to hospital directly (warns him)

Karan : and leave you both here in hell no way

Rishab : you can’t even stand properly, Preetaji at least you make him understand

Preeta : sorry Rishabji but this time I am with Karan, the girl for who you went against whole world now you want to leave her when she need you most

Rishab : so easily you all thought I would leave Tanya alone here to die, she is my everything

Dhruv ; now I see you were planning to send us and fight alone for her

Karan ; you didn’t do this right bhai

They hear stopper landing outside the mansion

Dhruv : I think they are making arrangement to take Tanya somewhere

Shrishti informs them about calling cops who are hidden around the mansion to catch culprits. The men bring Tanya to take her in stopper.

Mona : but bhai where are you taking here?

“I know those people won’t remain quiet and it is very necessary to shift her from this place, what are you seeing take her in stopper at our farm house in Thailand” Usmaan orders Mona to go with Tanya

“Stop hands up” A young indian cop Rehaan comes there with gun

Usmaan ; don’t even think about it, or else this girl will lose her life (points gun at Tanya)

Rehaan : send the girl to us and surrender yourself

Mona ; officer tell all the cops to put down the gun or else we will blast this place

Rehaan : oh please, I am not that fool, if you blast then you all will also die

Usmaan : we won’t you because god also does not want to deal with people like us

Rishab : please leave her you won’t get anything

“Of course I will, she has shaken up my beliefs of whole life and challenged me, she might something in her ” Usmaan starts walking towards stopper

Another helicopter comes but of police who fires bullet on his chest. The siblings holds Tanya who is half unconscious. Usmaan holds knife towards her but shockingly Rishab gets injured stabbed.

“Bhai” Karan shouts

Another big fight ensues between cops and gangster. Shrishti who comes there slaps Mona and beats brutally but is stopped by her sister. Rehaan finally arrests Usmaan and Mona cleaning corruption from whole city.

“Rishab wake up, you told me you will come back” Tanya pats his face

“Bhai you cannot do this to us, Preeta tell him, he will listen to you” Karan urges her to say something

Preeta : Rishabji, you are again breaking promise, get up we have to go back to our motherland, our family, home (wipes her tears)

“Hey wrestler stop crying now, I fulfilled my promise to come back” Rishab smiles at her with tears

Tanya (weeps) : why you did this? now what will I do without you

Rishab : who said you are alone? now you have got reason to live right, Khushi

“No you said we will both raise her together, I cannot do this alone do you understand” she roars

Karan : bhai you have become very mean now, you don’t love me anymore

Rishab : crazy boy, you are still on same track, now you have so many people

“NO I only want you” his eyes turn red

Kya Kabhi, Bahaar Bhi, Peshgi Laati Hai

Aane Wale Patjhar Ki..

O.. Baarishein Naaraazagi Bhi Jataa Jaati Hain

Kabhi Kabhi Ambar Ki..

Patte Jo Shaakhon Se Toote

Bewajah Toh Nahin Roothe, Hain Sabhi..

Khwabon Ka Jharokha.. Ha Ha

Sach Tha Ya Dhokha.. Ha Ha

Maatha Sehla Ke

Nindiya Churaai

Sadiyon Puraani

Aisi Ik Kahaani

Reh Gayi, Reh Gayi

Ankahee..

O Ankahee..

Rishab closes his eyes slowly holding Karan and Tanya’s hands leaving both devastated. Both meant everything to him more than his parents. Karan Tanya cries leaning head on Rishab.

Screen turns dark with their emotional scene.

After few months 

Luthra house 

The siblings arrange for Rishab and Tanya’s nuptial night.

Rishab : Karan can you tell me now what is this?

“This is for my brother who has right to live for his life now, time has come bro for you to leave the burden of responsibility go enjoy” Karan tells him to breath peacefully

The girls help Tanya get ready for the night. She wear simple red saree with no heavy jewelry.

“Preeta I am very nervous, my heart is getting restless” Tanya talks to her alone

Preeta : don’t be tonight is your day, bridge all the gap between you and Rishabji, you both have suffered a lot till today, make this night memorable for you both

Tanya nods positively and goes to the room. Rishab lights up small candles in the dark room and decorates very simple unlike their life. Tanya comes there fixing her saree. Both feels embarrassed avoiding eye contact.

Rishab : sorry everybody insisted

The couple lean near the window for a while after storm passed their life clearing all misunderstandings.

Rishab ; what are you thinking

“Nothing seeing death close that day my heart was stopped, do you even realize how I felt” Tanya asks him furiously

Rishab : you should know by now our soul is one, how would I let you die

“Then bind me in your love today so I can become yours for every birth” holds his fcae

Rishab : Tanya? (says in confusion)

“This distance always made me guilty inside that I could not give you that happiness you deserve” put her head on his chest sobbing

“Remember what I told you, our love will always be unique and I can wait for lifelong” grabs her hair gently without hurting her

“But I can’t, I feel my heart is still far away from you “ clutches his collar tightly

Rishab wipes her tears with his finger on one side and kissing on her forehead.

The moment heat up with their soft kiss turning into sensual like never before. Tanya puts her hands wrapping around his neck through whole moment pouring her love and passion they were craving. Both lets their all pain out hiding in their heart from all torture and separation. None of them feel uncomfortable of the gesture and stays on same position for long time.

Sapna jahan dastak na de

Chaukhat thi woh aankhein meri

Baaton se thi tadaad mein

Khamoshiyan zyaada meri

Jabse pade tere kadam

Chalne lagi duniya meri

Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi

Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai

Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon

Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai

Rishab make her lay on the rose petal spread at floorand continued to kiss her down her neck covering each and every bit of her skin with his lips while Tanya felt like burning in the fire of intensity. Their hands entwined whole time

Tu rooh hai toh main kaaya banu

Taa-umr main tera saaya banu

Keh de toh ban jaaun bairaag main

Kehde toh main teri maaya banu

Tu saaz hai, main ragini

Tu raat hai, main chandni

Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khali thi

Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai

Main bhatakta huaa sa ek baadal hoon

Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai

Both of them have their most beautiful night together and consummating their long lasting marriage.

Next day the bright sun rays wakes up Risbab only to find his loving wife sleeping in his arms peacefully after long time. She adjusts herself in sleep laying head on his hands. Rishab removes hair disturbing her in the sleep putting small peck on cheek.

New year Party 

All the siblings gather for new year celebrating big party in hotel.

“Cheers everybody” all of them holds glass of wine together

Sameer : what a party, amazing brother

Shrishti : hello have some shame, don’t even think about flirting

Sameer : somebody explain this dumbo, no girl will even look at me you know why she knows that my wife is too dangerous

Preeta : god stop it both of you

Sherlyn and Sanjana comes there too joining the celebration.

Tanya ; happy new year masi, and my sister

Sherlyn : happy new year by the way with this new year I have got big surprise

Karan : wait wait don’t tell me you are becoming scapegoat of marriage

Preeta : whats your problem with marriage? at least don’t stop that poor girl

Sherlyn : you both are very mean, spoiled my whole surprise

“Wait what? you are? Tanya asks confusingly

Sherlyn : you heard it right, I found my dream man finally (hugs her happily)

Tanya ; oh my god, congratulation but where is my jiju you didn’t bring him

Lights turn off

Sahil plays guitar entering the stage with another dashing guy who turns out to be Rehaan.

Tanya ; he is the one?

Sherlyn : I know he saved you all last time, i met him in India only but trust me he is very nice just how I wanted

Tanya : does he know about your past?

“I have learned from mistakes, he accepted wholeheartedly” Sherlyn says

Dhruv and Kritika calls everybody on dance floor

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Salsa

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Rumba 

Fiesta, Latina, It’s Driving Wild, Come Salsa With Me, It’s Party Time… (2)

( Dekho Diwaanon, Kya Mast Mast Hai Sama

Jo Hai, Abhi Hai, Ye Waqt Waqt Phir Kahaan ) …(2)

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi

Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame… (2) 

( Dekho Diwaanon… Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare ) 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame… (2)

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Salsa

Me Gusto Mucho Bailar Bailar, Quiero Samba Quiero Rumba 

La La Laai, La La Laai… 

Behka Nasheela Nasheela Sama

Ab Hosh Mein Ham Kahaan 

Thhokar Mein Apni Hai Saara Jahaan

Ham Toh Abhi Hai Jawaan 

Jab Tak Jawaani Hai, Tab Tak Kahaani Hai

Kehna Mera Maan Le 

Do Din Ki Masti Hai, Do Din Ki Hasti Hai

Sach Kya Hai Pehchaan Le 

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi

Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame…(2) 

Fiesta Latina, It’s Driving Wild, Come Salsa With Me, It’s Party Time… (2 ) 

Saare Zamaane Se Ham Bekhabar

Ham Pe Na Koyi Asar 

Jaane Rukega Kahaan Aur Kidhar

Awaargi Ka Safar 

Ham Toh Diwaane Hain, Kab Se Begaane Hain

Jo Chaahein Ham Woh Kare 

Koyi Sune Kuchh Bhi, Koyi Kahe Kuchh Bhi

Ham Na Kissi Se Darre 

Nayi Raat Hogi, Nayi Baat Hogi

Naye Kal Ko Aao Kare Ham Kare Ham Kare 

Salaame, Salaame, Salaame Kar Le Salaame… (4)

“Attention everybody countdown has begun for new year” Karan holds mike

“5, 4, 3, 2,1” All of them shouts loud

“Happy new year” Whole crowd says together for entering into another year.

Lights turn off again but this time projector starts running showcasing all the past events of all the couple’s lives.

The story started with Preeta and Shrishti coming to Mumbai in search of their mother. Amidst they found their soulmate and friends for lifetime in form of Luthra family boys Karan, Rishab and Sameer including elders. In between the season of love and heartbreak enters another cool breeze  Tanya who coming brought change in both families. She became life of Luthra brothers be it love or friendship. With the course of time Rishab and Tanya learned real meaning of love as well Karan Preeta whose hate turned into passionate love binding them into commitment. On parallel side are their siblings whose lives also get intertwined in web of love, romance, friendship and heartbreaks.

“Hey guys one last announcement for tonight, this is dedicated to most important person of my life, Rishab my brother, if you were not with me then I would have lost myself long time ago thank you for everything, my only wish to god will be to give a brother like you to everybody” Karan gets emotional

Mahesh and Rakhi are overwhelmed with the love within their children that nobody could break. Luthra family share group hug followed by all siblings and couple.

The end scene is credited with dance of all five couple happily.

Aiyo, Aiyo, Aiyo, Aiyo 

Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 

Oh, Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 

Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 

Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Neend Udti Hai Udne Bhi De 

Chain Khota Hai Khone Bhi De 

Jaan Jaati Hai Jaane Bhi De 

Ishq Hota Hai Hone Bhi De 

Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 

Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Mera Dil Dhadkaaye 

Mr. Lova Lova Meri Jaan Yeh Jaaye 

O O O O Oh, O O O Oh… (4) 

O Oh, O O O O O O Oh, O O O O O O Oh… (2) 

Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye 

Pyaar Tera Jeena Ka Ek Bahaana Hai 

Jab Tak Jeena Hai Yeh Pyaar Nibhaana Hai 

Arre Soch Le Phir Jaldi Hai Kya 

Soch Liya Ji Soch Liya 

Kya Bole Tum Phir Se Bolo Na 

Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 

Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Neend Udti Hai Udne Bhi De 

Chain Khota Hai Khone Bhi De 

Jaan Jaati Hai Jaane Bhi De 

Ishq Hota Hai Hone Bhi De 

Ankhiyan Tu Mila Le Raja 

Aaye Hai Din Bahaar Ke 

Oh, Ankhiyan Tu Chura Na Raja 

Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Teri Baaton Ka Jaadu 

Mr. Lova Lova Mera Dil Dhadkaaye 

Mr. Lova Lova Meri Jaan Yeh Jaaye 

Ankhiyan Tu, Aaye Hai Din 

Ankhiyan Tu, Jaaye Na Din Yeh Pyaar Ke 

Mr. Lova Lova, Teri Aankhon Ka Jaadu 

Ankhiyan Tu, Aaye Hai Din 

Hey Ho, Hey Ho, Hey Ho, Haan

The screen freezes with Karan lifting Preeta up happily.

“Where are you going, movie is not over yet” a voiceover of male laughs

Luthra house is filled with happiness and peace due to noise of small children.

Khushi : Daughter of Tanya and Prithvi (given name by Rishab). Another version of her mother and eldest one, very protective of all siblings. She is fearless and often create chaos everywhere but at the same time is shrewd from others.

2nd  Dev: Son of Karan Preeta six and half years old. Very quiet and reserved like his mother but ambitious like his father. He is often studios

Son of Karan Preeta

3rd : Pari; daughter of Rishab Tanya; She has taken mixture of both her parents. Mature from all children’s in the clan and often tries to stop the fighting between all the siblings.

4th : Rajiv : another mischievous of Luthra family clan. Son of Sameer Shrishti. Carbon copy of Shrishti who is always on verge of making pranks. He is shortest in height like Sameer.

5th : Krissh/Sona : Twins of Kritika and Dhruv. Sona is another prankster like her dad while Krisshh becomes the scapegoat of pranks done by Khushi and Rajiv.

PS : I will include more of this in epilogue later. One thing I want to say to all readers who left feedback or silent ones. “THANK YOU VERY MUCH” for supporting me and crossing century to this longest running story. This is my first story that will be remembered my most readers. I hope to keep you all entertained with new ones. One thing I am sure is you all might have enjoyed this journey filled with roller coaster ride at every track. Can I expect a long ending feedback from all readers?

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