Kritika takes Rakhi and Mahesh at the dance floor and make them stand in center. Tanya hesitantly puts her hand on Rishab’s shoulder. Her eyes are stuck on Karan and Preeta’s dancing together lost in their own world like always. Karan gets flirty with Preeta while dancing. He pulls her towards him lovingly in the dance steps.
“Karan, you are looking me like we are meeting first time she have her hands around him
Karan ; what should I do? every time you make arrangement to kill me
Preeta : you were going to gift me something where is it
Karan takes her to the corner and tells to close eyes for few minutes. He puts some bangles on her hands very gently. She opens eyes to find very colorful glass bangles on both hands.
Preeta : this are so beautiful, I loved it, you also have good talent on selecting things
Karan ; thanks for compliment, you should be proud of your would be fianc
Preeta ; okay now lets go back before somebody sees us here
“Shorty why are you staring at me like I am creature from another planet Shrishti ask him for staring at her with weird smile
Sameer : I tell you honestly, why are you such a tall pole did somebody pulled your legs in childhood, my neck hurts when I have to look up
“What problem do you have with my height, do girls like her don’t have heart gets offended with him
“Nobody can be pure hearted than girl like you pulls her more closer from waist
Shrishti : okay you tell me what type of girl you want, if get married in picture
Sameer : please don’t even bother to find somebody for me, she will chatter box and might be another tall pole
Shrishti : just tell me, I will find the best girl
“I never thought about that, but now you asked me I will tell you, first she should be very simple, sweet like Preeta, but not a boxer like this pinky and strong like you true words come out from his mouth
Shrishti ; but you should get girl who will be bold, have her own thinking and
Kareena sent the servant to collect the packet Sherlyn sent at the venue. She smartly tells him to put the envelops carefully in the projector room.
During changing partners Karan and Tanya come together for a moment.
Karan ; you never showed me your dancing skill ever since you met, what happened
Tanya : It was past, things change with time
“Such serious words does not suit you, is everything okay Karan catches her words
Tanya : dont’ be so dramatic with me, I can be very dangerous you know that
Karan : I can’t believe what have you become, a boxer, marathon runner
Tanya ; dad sent me to defense classes and there I learnt everything (goes to Sammy on dance)
“Be careful, I am very sensitive from body Sameer requests her
Tanya : really? I will make do you all work out and get six abs what say
Sameer : no thank you I don’t like to break my bones or others
Preeta goes to Rishab happily for dance.
“Karan just told me last night about you both, I am still in shock, from when is this happening Rishab ask her
Preeta : you know how your brother is, I just could not stop myself, but everybody will accept me na? I can ask you this
Rishab : of course, is there anybody who can say no to you, and I am very happy for you both, just small request
Preeta : yea please
Rishab ; my brother is very silly sometimes, if you need anything as friend, I am always willing to help you
Preeta : thank you so much Rishabji, you are my true friend
Karan holds the mike for the big surprise of announcing his relation with Preeta.
“Attention everybody today is biggest day for our parents, from million people we got such amazing, and supporting parents, I want to thank them for my every success, today on this occasion I want to give them the best surprise, lights off please shows picture of Rakhi and Mahesh from their days and marriage. Everybody rejoices the moment when next picture turns to be extremely shocking. The photographs turns out to be Karan and Preeta’s hugging pictures like couple. Both of them remains surprised too with the happening.
Tanya found out Sherlyns’s dirty trick of insulting her relation with Karan in Lonavala itself by hiring detective behind her. She took pictures of Karan and Preeta on the trip and foiled the enemies plan.
Lights turn on back but the families decide to talk at home rather than in front of people in party. Mahesh Rakhi and Sarla have conversation alone first without children with them.
Luthra house
Karan and Preeta are sitting together on sofa like getting punished for mistake.
“Karan, dear what is all this, pictures and everything is this true Rakhi first ask him
Karan : thats right mom, we both love each other (stammers a bit), and that was my surprise for you, but
Preeta : we didn’t wanted you all to know like this, this was not our plan
Mahesh ; we will figure it out later, but before we tell our decision, we want to know are you guys serious about this
Karan : what do you mean dad?
Sarla : marriage is not a kids play, thats a big commitment for whole life, will you both be able to fulfill together
Both remains silent for a while thinking about the point their parents made. They came into relationship eventually but never went deep about marriage.
Dadi : see there is no rush, take more time and then give your answer
Rakhi : this concerns both of your life, fine you both were going around from so many days, there is difference in both relation before and after marriage
“Mom, you always taught that marriage is vow for seven birth, and I made fun of that but when I met Preeta, I realized there is nothing more important than love Karan’s words gives shock to every single person including Preeta and Rishab
“Aunty, till today everybody thought me as kid who will never understand the importance of love and commitment, I wanted to fly high alone but there is no fun going alone, I want to this world through Preeta’s eyes, I promise I will always hold her hands with me, never let her get lost Karan holds Sarla’s hand asking for her daughter
Sarla does not need any kind of proof that her daughter is going to bound with a gem who is more priceless than a diamond. She puts Preeta’s hand on his together.
“Dear, I am very happy today, at least now I will get somebody from my side Mahesh is extremely overwhelmed with Preeta and Karan’s relationship.
“Preeta, this are our ancestral bangles, I have for my three daughter in laws, one is yours, that means now I am giving you my son, the honor of this family Rakhi makes her wear the bangles.
The families have double celebration with Karan and Preeta’s relationship. Rakhi is extremely happy with Preeta changing her immature son into loving person who believes in commitment.
“I am so happy today, you don’t know what you have given me, when I saw you first that day itself I considered you my daughter in law Rakhi’s happiness have no bounds
Mahesh ; we are so proud that you will become official part of our family
“I only want your blessing, so I give you no chance to complain Preeta touches their feet kneeling down
Sarla asks Karan to give her daughter all happiness she could not.
“Aunty, i wil love her till my last breath, give whole world’s happiness Karan’s words come directly from his heart
Rishab shows happiness for his brother and friend though it was very unexpected from his side that both can ever be couple. Being an elder brother all he prayed was his Karan’s happiness and well being. The only person who in the whole happy environment is not able to take the burden is Tanya after losing her ability. She runs away from there for not been able to control her tears and cannot show her pain to anybody. Sameer senses her absence quickly as well as Rishab and runs behind.
Karan and Preeta goes out on drive with finally things coming at its place. They stop at the same lake previously after Kritika’s Mehndi ceremony. He wants to shout out from the top of his lungs that he became worlds’ most luckiest guy.
“I can’t tell you how happy i today, all my dreams came true Karan puts her both hand on his chest but stops seeing her nervous expression
“Karan, there is old saying, nothing excessive is good, not even so much happiness at the same time Preeta’s voice sounds more like fear of losing everything
Karan ; what are you talking about
Preeta : I am just sharing my heart with you, even I don’t want any problem now
“When our love is unique then our relation will also be different from everybody, it wills set an example his eyes speaks lot
“Do you remember our first meeting, in this same car, when you were with you those two stupid girls Preeta gets in teasing mode again
Karan ; what do you mean? I don’t do anything, girls come by their own, I cannot help it though
Preeta : really? but remember one thing, after marriage I will not let anyone of them to roam around you (clutches his collar)
“Wow, Dr Preeta is too dangerous, but save that for later baby doll pulls her more closer holding her waist
Preeta : you better learn to be scared from or this doctor knows how to scare people
“Oh yea leans to kiss her but she stops him this time
Preeta : from now till marriage, no more surprise okay
Karan : thats not fair
“Everything is fair in love and romance sweetheart pulls his cheeks and hugs very lovingly
Both sits down for a while under the shining starts near the water holding their hands.
“Karan, look at those stars, they look so much bright today just like our life Preeta is laying on his chest
“Why do I see that illuminating stars when the beauty of that moon is in front of me, real moon Karan touches her chin
“In few days, my palms will have your name, you know every ritual has its own meaning, you wanted to know what I want from you Preeta gets up facing him
Karan : yes
“Remember I told you, on marriage we will have our own vows, I will give you three, you give me three forwards her hand
Karan : but there are seven
Preeta : the last one we will take together, something we both want, think about, we still have some time
“I want to this face every morning in front of me nothing else Karan runs his hand on her hair while getting naughty
Preeta turns red in blushing
Karan : tell me something, I heard after marriage wives get very typical like shouting at husband for every single thing, their tantrums will you
Preeta ; I have full rights on you, and yes I will beat you with hockey stick , but don’t worry we both have complete trust on each other so nothing can go wrong
Karan : one more request, please before marriage lose weight, I cannot break my back at our blissful night
“You think I am fat, thats so mean, from which angle you feel that starts hitting him her hands and legs
Karan : hey stop, you have become so violent this days, I know its the influence of that wrestler, god knows what will happen to me after marriage
Preeta : now you are getting afraid, in front of families you were getting high, I will take care of her, always keep happy (mimics in his attitude)
Karan : you are such a terrible actor, you are better off as doctor please don’t become something else
Preeta : you forgot one promise we made together
Karan : that bhai and I will marry on same day, I am not that cruel to forget something related to my brother
Preeta : things are not in our favor, once all our ceremonies start we will not be able to anything you want your bhai and pinky to get married right, and I don’t know whats going on with Shrishti Sameer
Karan : I feel we should open marriage bureau, like this has become part of our life, I can understand for Rishab but this two seriously
Preeta : come they are younger ones, Shrishti loves her shorty a lot, we have to help her, she will not say anything
Karan ; okay fine, lets split our work, why don’t you handle Sameer Shrishit’s love story and take help from Tanya, I will make Rishab confess for pinky but there is one major problem
Preeta : of course what is it
Karan ; she has changed in all this years, I know this love and everything she won’t accept this easily, first we have to make her realize importance of love
Preeta : I have an idea, holi is coming next week, who knows this time we will get what we want
Karan : holi next week, this will be like first holi with pinky after so many years, and of course you kareli with me
Preeta : but one condition, we will not play the water one
Karan : why not? don’t be grumpy again
Preeta : no way, somebody might falls sick
Karan : okay done no water holi no bhaang (smirks inside of making her play with water ballon)
Preeta : hello, where are you lost, I am getting late, almost midnight we only got permission, dates are not fixed yet
Karan does not want to end their beautiful conversation but have no choice left. He drops her at home in a while.
Tanya wants to run away as far as she can with all her energy within her. She does not want to stop again and become victim of destiny’s cruel game. She opens the door at her house with all emptiness like her life has been since she was born. In the room, she takes out a thing which was buried under her dreams. The anklet whose noise brings out the passion hiding in the corner. There was a time when dance was running in her blood and became obsession with the time. Now was the time to bring that same passion to kill her recent feelings.
She wears the anklet in her feet as today is the time when she needs to embrace her obsession and forget everything. She starts with small steps twirling around but ends up making to break all the energy and cool down the heat ignited due to the fire. All her flashbacks involves her relation with Prithvi, losing her guide philosopher father, dignity stripped in front of whole world and now final nail in coffin of losing the thread of love. Her feet gets swollen but body is not willing to stop until she becomes a body who has no emotion, feel any kind of pain.
Rishab feels something strange hearing her music coming from inside the house. What he see leaves him speechless. the girl in front of her is not Tanya, no Pinky but a tormented soul whose patience is broken of living a happy go lucky life. She finally falls on ground sweating heavily and threw out all negative vibes out of window. Her eyes fall on the shadow of guy standing in front like the ray of light has come to whisk away from the darkness.
Both sits on different ends facing each other on the hill near the car. Rishab is putting medicine on her swollen feet.
“My dad was everything to me, guide, friend he always taught me to live with self respect, those burns are old but wound are still fresh Tanya speaks without emotion
Rishab : I always felt there is very big pain hidden inside you, today I saw that with my own eyes, only one broken heart can heal another wound
“I lived in London with my parents, before 7 years when I first met Prithvi, he worked in my dad’s company, we both were engaged everything was going well there is always price for every happiness in life, he only loved me for money she looks at him while talking her past
Rishab does not say anything but only want to listen her.
Tanya : life is so strange, when we get courage to dream big, and in another moment that dream breaks like glass
Rishab : sometimes its better for those dreams to break, reality strikes hard but that is the only light showing us way
Tanya : dad paid the price of my mistake with his death, for whole world it was an accident but for me it was a murder, I was just coping with my life when you all came
Rishab ; you always said that I surrounded myself with all responsibilities, but you made the wall of guilt around
“But never thought somebody will break that, after meeting you, Karan, Sameer I realized what life is all, family, friends, love that which was never destined she blames the fate for taking away the love
“Do you love Karan same way I used to love Preetaji asks her directly
Tanya nods shaking her head
Rishab :love is worship, who are we of deciding about heart, I know you alway say never compromise with two things self respect and heart, but here you are uniting two hearts (holds her hand and reduces some distance between them)
Tanya ; how do you find so much strength in bigger problem in life?
Rishab ; you know why? long time ago somebody held my hand and told me to use those to fulfill your dream
Tanya sobs in his arms making his shirt fully wet with her tears. He wants to erase all the bad memories flooding in her mind and give the warmth she badly need.
Rishab ; its okay, come I will drop you home (makes her stand up carefully)
She invites him to come inside the house which he does hesitantly. While coming in her home, Chaaya is standing nervously.
Tanya : whats wrong? (moves her eyes to a woman sitting on sofa)
She pinches herself to make sure its her mom or somebody else.
“Mom, you are here in india Tanya runs quickly to her mother’s solace
Rishab gets surprise to see her mom’s sudden visit.
Tanya : when did you come and why couldn’t you tell me?
Nandini : my darling daughter, you are showering questions on me, I was missing you so much that I could not resist (looks at Rishab standing on door)
Tanya :mom, thats Rishab, you know I told about before
Nandini ; yea I met him once in conference but that was only causal now I see him as my daughter’s friend, and because of you Mr, she forgot about me
Tanya ; stop it mom, don’t blame him
Rishab : hello aunty, nice to see you again,
Nandini : where did you both go at midnight together
Rishab ; actually it was my parents’ anniversary party and we got bit late
Nandini : thats perfectly fine, thank you for dropping her
“Its getting late, I will take leave now, bye aunty, and Tanya take care good night leaves wishing them
Tanya waves him going outside near door
“Nice guy na, he is same as you told me before, so caring Nandini praises him with only one meeting but Tanya goes in her room for rest
Sherlyn goes back to her house after meeting with Prithvi. Angry and frustrated she does not notice the house was open. She throws purse on sofa when feels somebody sitting behind her. The girl who became her victim has become venom to her enemies.
“You Sherlyn gets shocked
Tanya : why? are you not happy to see your beloved sister or sad that I survived from your havoc
Sherlyn : what are you trying to say? I don’t understand
“Oh I forgot you are so naive that you don’t know anything, so sweet her voice changes from soft to wrathful putting the knife on Sherlyn’s neck
“What are you doing, put that down she resists but Tanya’s grip is way too tight for her to leave
Tanya ; don’t you trust your sister? what did you think, sending spy after Preeta, insulting my relation with Karan in front of whole world and I will stay back
Sherlyn : but I did everything for you, so Karan can be yours
“How? by killing me, creating problems between Karan and Preeta, sorry sweetheart, but this dreams of your will always remain like that, nobody knows you better than me pushes the knife on neck
Sherlyn : you have gone crazy, leave me
“You know I don’t like to repeat things, so listen to me carefully, I love Karan more than anybody no matter if somebody else rules on his heart but I know how to keep my place secure. Tanya brings her up and twists both sides of hands again puts knife on her neck.
Sherlyn tries hard to get out of grip
Tanya : if you try to come in between his happiness or harm any of my loved one, next time this knife will have your blood on it (leaves her coughing)
Sherlyn’s voice does not come for few minutes when Tanya gives her water.
Tanya : I still respect you like my sister, because you only tried to hurt me but you will lose that if you come in between my friend’s happiness, take care
Sherlyn : there is one more weakness of yours, that only I know, your mom
Tanya’s feet stops with her words
Sherlyn : what do you think I did all this for you? no way, my enmity is with Luthra and Aroras, you are coming in between
Tanya : because I am Rishab and Karan’s pinky, their shield, your every arrow will go through me
Sherlyn : fine then I also wan to see for how long you will save them and how far you can survive my moves
Tanya ; only time will tell who will be survives in this war, I don’t care who wins but at the end of the day I will make you lose everything, this is not Tanya’s promise but Pinky’s challenge (leaves)
On road Dhruv is going to hospital when in traffic his eyes finds somebody of his own. He sees Preeta flying ballon on air to cheer up the kids. Her only one glance was enough to bring smile on his face. Before he loses her track again, he gets off the car and walks behind her. Preeta feels somebody behind unaware of Dhruv is the one, she takes out pepper spray and splashes on him. She realizes her blunder
quickly when she saw Dhruv.
“I am so sorry, I will bring water Preeta fetches water for him
Preeta ; better?
“What is wrong with you, are you not spicy enough that you need this pepper spray with you, is this new habit Dhruv starts scolding her
Preeta ; and you are that donkey’s tail that is always the same
Dhruv : you called me donkey’s tail? wait
Both have water fight in middle of road reminiscing their old days. They continue their chattering walking near the building of Karan’s field.
Preeta : I seriously cannot believe I am meeting you after 5 years
Dhruv : I went to Nasik but somebody told me you sold everything and went somewhere, I looked for you everywhere
Preeta : actually, dad told us to stay here with our mom and sister, so Shrishti and I came here
Dhruv : I heard about uncle, sorry for that, where is that tall pole
Preeta ; she is absolutely fine, and I have great news for you
Dhruv : that you got kicked out of hospital
“Shut up will you, I am getting married Preeta reveals her happiness
Dhruv ; oh my god somebody pinch me, I will pray for that poor guy, does he know that he is going for lifetime imprisonment with you
Preeta : yes he does, and he is ready to bear that punishment
“I am so happy, finally lifts her up and twirls around in excitement
They remain unaware of a presence who is fuming in jealousy. Karan sees them happily talking with each other like meeting after so many years. He could not see them anymore and interrupts them.
“Karan, you here Preeta gets happy to see him
“Name of devil and devil appears not bad Dhruv stands up too from his seat
Karan ; correction not devil, hero of Mumbai
“Dhruv, he is my would be fianc Karan, I am sure you might know, after all you are another crazy fan of cricket Preeta introduces them
“And Karan, this is my bestie, Dhruv, I told you about my partner in crime Preeta holds his hand
Dhruv : pleasure to meet you buddy, so you are the one who is going to suffer
Karan : I would rather suffer such beautiful punishment (pulls Preeta away from him)
Precap : Holi celebration in Luthra house. Tanya feels suspicious about Akshay but does not share it with anybody. The girls get drunk creating chaos in house
5 Comments
yaar u are gr8!! It was a lovely episode!! keep on writing??
Nice story plz make rishab nd tanya jodi nd one more new jodi dhruv nd kritika jodi plz ??
Amazing.
It was awesome
Loved preetan scenes
Plz start rishnya’s love story soon
It is a humble request to plz end this game of sherlyn, kareena and prithvi asap without causing problem in any of the lives
Plz make sameer confess his problem to shirishti and start their love story
Excited for next
Post soon
Loads of love
I was a silent reader but not for any longer . Now I will be the most inspiring audience. I love all your work and this one is my favourite . I always wait for it . You are such an amazing writer . I have visited a lot of places for preeran and have read a lot on them . And from that I can conclude that you are the best writer on preeran . Continue giving us regular updates . Loved it . By the way congratulations you have completed 30 chapters .