Fan Fiction

Preetan FF : Truth Of Life Part 34

Luthra family wait desperately for Kritika to come back home. Kritika and Dhruv heads for Mumbai but get stuck in traffic. Both enjoys the rain moments getting wet. Kritika sees him playing with kids getting overwhelmed of his simplicity and carefree nature. He gets corn cob for her from vendor.

Dhruv : you know Preeta and I always enjoy this in rain after all thats the specialty of this weather

Kritika : I don’t eat all this things

Dhruv : madam looks like you never stepped out of your palace there is world outside,

“Thanks takes the corn from his hand and gets delicious taste bud

Dhruv : how is it?

Kritika : wow I never tasted this before my heart is feeling so contended

He drops Kritika at Luthra house when Kareena calls her to come there directly. where everybody is waiting of strike on her. Dhruv decides to go with her inside but she stops him.

Dhruv ; I will not let you go alone my duty won’t allow me to do that

Kritika : please try to understand if you will come inside then it will be problem

Dhruv : trust me I cannot let you suffer without any mistake (goes out of car)

Both walks inside the house only to see the terror in everybody’e eyes.

“Come dear Kareena walks first towards her

Kritika : sorry mom I got bit late today you planned dinner come lets eat (looks down)

Kareena ; no no dear this is your own house you can come anytime

Rishab stops Karan from going to Dhruv who is standing behind her.

“Akshay when did you come asks nervously

“Oh when did I come? when you were enjoying with somebody else says casually

Tanya clutches her fist seeing Akshay insulting his own wife in name of husband.

“Where were you till now Kareena scares her

Kritika : mom I went out for some work

“And your important work was going with this guy and not thinking about husband right Kareena shouts loud raising hand but is stopped by Rakhi

Rakhi : didi what are you doing? calm down

Kareena : no bhabhi this girl has forgot all her limits and manners

Kritika : you are doubting me mom?

“Just shut your mouth Akshay scares her with his roar but Dhruv interrupts this time preventing him to go near her

Dhruv : enough you are blaming her no reason, I took her with me without wrong intention

“First you make mistake and dare to confront us like nothing happened Karan punches him when Tanya and Rishab tries to stop him from getting angry

“Karan stop it please leave him Tanya pulls him away. He stops when Preeta comes there again to get her cell phone back

Karan ; leave me why are you taking his side and you are saying this is small thing

Tanya ; its not about taking side but you all are making big fuzz, is it so bad to befriend somebody

Kareena ; for you it might be small thing but for us this is very big thing, this is India not your London when girls can cross their limit before and after marriage by hanging with out boys

Tanya : what do you mean? that girls who go out at night don’t have decency is your family’s reputation so weak that it will go down if your daughter talk with boys I don’t believe this and don’t forget you are talking about your daughter at least respect that relation

Kareena : how dare you? this is the decency I am talking about your parents might have not taught you and Kritika is my daughter I can behave however she wants

Rishab : Kareena bua enough, you cannot insult her like this and Kritika if you wanted to go out you should have let Akshay know let alone others

Kritika : bhai I called him but he did not picked up my calls and then I thought i would return back on time

Mahesh : I think we should end this argument here I am sure Kritika would never do anything on purpose

Rishab : you are right dad Akshay I am sure she had no intention to hurt anybody. Kritika you go and change or will get cold

Akshay : okay bhai even I don’t want things to go out of hands but one request I don’t want any stranger person’s influence on my wife she is naive don’t understand people’s intention

“Now you are crossing limit, don’t take my silence as my weakness, if you want to vent out anger on me then go ahead but at least learn to respect your wife in front of people  Dhruv leaves giving piece of mind to everybody

Preeta who is tensed with Karan’s behavior takes her phone and leaves the house. Rakhi tries to stop her but Preeta makes excuse of being tired. Tanya offers to drop her back to home and goes with Preeta.

Kareena : bhabhi are this girls you want to make part of our family

Mahesh : let it be, there is no point in going to this argument come lets have dinner

Tanya tries to console Preeta in car but she is too much disturbed with Karan’s behavior.

Tanya ; I know what you are thinking? you know how Karan is when it comes to his family

Preeta : but he should have not raised hand on Dhruv, he is at fault too for taking Kritika out like this but why did they have to create big drama

Tanya : I don’t know why I feel something is fishy here it was not seriously needed

Preeta : you know what I will explain Dhruv to stay away from Kritika, I don’t want him to face any insult from that Kareena aunty like we have been facing today

Tanya ; you take care and don’t stress with anything okay good night

Preeta ; good night (goes inside her house)

Kritika and Akshay goes back to their house after dinner with family. She could not forget the pain and insult Dhruv had to face due to her family.

Akshay : okay listen I actually had surprise for you but since you were not here

Kritika : please tell me what is that?

Akshay ; I got promotion from company for the post of CEO

Kritika : that is fantastic I am so proud of you, if you had told me before I can get gift

Akshay : thats completely fine and for today I don’t know who was at fault but my only request is from you stay away from that guy I don’t want you to go astray due to anything

Kritika : trust me you are my everything, nobody can break our bonding

Akshay ; I hope you remain true on your words anyway I am very tired lets go to bed

Rishab takes Tanya to hill side after yesterday day’s horrible incidence.

Tanya : thank you for yesterday, once I find those two you see what I make them (gets in her self mode again)

Rishab is not influenced by her antics this time and had enough of her hiding things.

Tanya : why are you worrying? I am not going to use any of my karate chops on you, after all you are my bestie come lets go

“Will you marry me Tanyar stops her with only few words

Tanya freezes due to his demand. She would have not expected that from him.

“Ever since I met you I asked a question to myself what so special in you that every moment becomes so memorable goes close to her while talking

Tanya : I don’t know what are you saying?

Rishab : everyday when I meet you that day becomes be

“With so much effort you hide things why would you not after all a lawyer but remember I am not from those people who can easily influence by fake smile lifts her chin up

Tanya ; honestly I never thought about anything like that and marriage is the last thing I can have in life

Rishab : now you are running away from life and relations, when you know Karan have no love for you

Tanya : thats not my reason you don’t know anything about me, my past present (moves back to the edge)

“I don’t care what was your past I only want to see future with you, hide you from this cruel world bring back that dignity, self respect you lost years ago his emotion does not stop

Tanya keeps walking backwards and is about to lose balance from edge when his strong hands holds back.

“And will embrace every danger that targets on you pulls rapidly towards him

Tanya : I am not ready to take this relation on another level can I ask for some time before giving any answer

Rishab : from today all your time is mine, I can wait whole life by just seeing your face but please don’t lose that precious smile due to anybody

Tanya gives her million dollar smile

Rishab ; you know thats only quality in you I fell

Tanya : what do you mean?  am I so bad?

“Actually I tell you I never wished to marry wrestler who would beat goon outside the ring makes fun of her

Tanya : thats not fair you are making fun of me

Rishab : do I have guts to do that no way, I don’t want to be the victim

Tanya : this skills are applied to very special people but you are the best best thing in my life

Karan goes to meet Preeta but finds out she left for her work in hospital.

Shrishti : she was upset for yesterday, don’t worry she will be fine

Karan : I know I should have not talked with her like that but

Shrishti : sir let her stay alone for a while till evening her anger will calm down and one more thing just like how pinky is important to you Dhruv  stood with us in every bad situation

Dhruv sees Preeta stamping the files in cabin. He goes to cheer her

Dhruv : god those poor files what has the patients done to you

Preeta ; yea right, I will become patient one day if you don’t change your habits

Dhruv : you are still on yesterday? grow up let bygone things it happens

Preeta : I fought my Karan for you and you are showing me attitude like nothing happened

Dhruv : did I tell you to fight? you could have told me I would have helped you both

“You are such a useless creature, I don’t know which girl will be ready to bear your tantrum gets irritated with him

Dhruv : listen you don’t have to fight with anybody for me, I can fight by my own if something goes wrong in your life I cannot forgive myself, and about Kritika you know I respect girls feelings because of me her dignity will never get tarnished

Preeta : thats why I trust you so much because you can never break that

Dhruv : and please don’t drag me into your fight, tell your fiancee his hands are too hard my jaws are still paining

Preeta : aww your poor jaws are too delicate let me cure that right now

Dhruv : wait wait no (tries to stop her from pulling his cheeks)

Karan notices their happiness with each other

“Was I being too rude or jealous maybe I was wrong Preeta is so happy with him gets happy to see her smile

“Karan wait sees him outside the door

Preeta : where are you going come inside

Karan : I am sorry did I disturb you both

Dhruv : not at all thank go you are here, you are my life savior this chilly messed my whole face

Karan : I thought you are handling her from years

Dhruv ; no actually you know she is so spicy that even chilly brand will hire her

Preeta : shut up both of you or else I will show you what this spicy chilly can do and you both will not even get water

Karan : how did you handle her from years?

“Don’t ask me I had to lose my bones to save her from problems Dhruv behaves damsel in distress. Karan enjoys his conversation

Preeta : god Karan are you here to listen complaints against me

Karan : no poor guy is praising you so much and will I not appreciate somebody who is fond of my would be wife

Preeta : that same guy who you punched yesterday right

Karan : actually I came here to

Dhruv : wait wait, please don’t say sorry it does not suit your personality and if you are saying that for this small injury then forget it, this is not first time (looks at Preeta)

Preeta ; I am getting fed up now both of you get out right now of my cabin (loses her cool)

Karan ; Kareli listen to me

“Get out and don’t come back again or else I will beat you both black and blue pushes both of them out of her cabin and closes door

Karan : what was the need to trouble? she kicked me out the Karan Luthra

Dhruv : chill she is like that

Karan : now you look for the solution tell me

“She loves candles, if you ever saw her room it was full of those scents whispers to him

Karan : what? thats so boring I mean I cannot handle such smells

Dhruv : I am sorry buddy but you have to get used to her tantrums ask me

Karan ; okay thanks and sorry for that

Dhruv : I didn’t mind, you know why because you are brother and I know how to be in limit

Karan ; actually seeing Kritika like that my fuze blowed out

Dhruv : everything will be fine listen I have to attend urgent case see you later buddy

Karan : bye, god candle shop really

Tanya and Karan goes at the shop to buy gift for their respective fiancee but unaware of each other’s presence. In the candles side both chooses the same vanilla aroma candle.

“Leave that right now, my eyes first fell on that Karan holds on one side

Tanya : and I have my hands first leave it loser or else I will tell your brother who scared me in library other day

Karan ; you are lying and my brother will believe me first and you have no proof

Tanya : thats my left hand game in a minute I will show him that how you and Sammy got that injury

Karan : whatever you say but this is mine, I want to buy for my Preeta and nothing can stop me today

Tanya : and its for my Rishab you go somewhere else I will give him this, you are useless brother

Karan : and you are good for nothing friend, buzz off today I will get that and its final, I am the Karan Luthra okay

Tanya : just because you got some fame, you consider yourself some hero, I have get rid of so many losers like you

Both of them keep fighting when manager says it was the last one in stock. Karan throws her purse on other side tricking into getting the candle and runs quickly after paying.

Manager : ma’am we have some more other variety if you want to check

Tanya : no thank you, I will take that candle only now Karan Luthra just wait and watch now

Luthra family

Karan puts the candle in his room and goes to take shower before meeting Preeta. Tanya sneaks in his room seeing the clothes on bed. She replaces the t shirt with another bigger size with some old fashion design.

“Hi Karan talks outside his washroom

Karan : who is it?

Tanya ; its your pinky, guess what I am taking your candle now do whatever you want

Karan comes out in towel quickly when she starts laughing at him. Without looking he wears the t shirt Tanya changed he put.

“Wait you brat what are you doing goes down wearing t shirt and wrapped in towel.

Tanya ; loser luthra told you don’t mess with me or else you will pay badly (holds the candle tightly in her hands)

Karan : brat today I will show you result of insulting me now that candle is mine only

Rishab and Preeta who are coming inside sees what their respective are upto

“Karan what are you doing at least look at yourself before leaving room scolds him for coming in towel

Karan ; bhai first tell her to give me my candle back or else

Tanya : else what

Sameer : bhai wait wait I have perfect solution for your problem (stops them)

Karan : before you say anything if this turns out in her favor then watch out Sammy

Sammy : no bhai

Tanya : oye don’t you dare do anything against me or remember that (reminds him of library)

Sameer : one second (takes candle from her hands) now this will be mine (starts running)

Karan : Sammy you cunning fox wait

Sammy ; now this is my mine, thank you bhai and my dear sister, save me tall pole (goes around her)

In the trio holding the candle it breaks dropping on floor hardly. Karan and Tanya look at each other with wild eyes and start scratching their hair

Rishab and Preeta stops them and separate from each other

Mahesh : wow dear (tells Tanya) I am so proud of you thats like my daughter

Tsnya : thank you uncle (fixes her hair)

Karan : mom you see what dad to me, you will not make his favorite tea

“You spoiled brat trying to instigate my wife twists his ear

Rakhi : leave my Karan’s ear he is right you cannot do this to him

Tanya : aunty sorry to say but this son of yours deserved this, he threw my purse in store and ran away with that candle

Rishab ; god if you both are done can you tell me what is happening

Karan : I will tell you bhai, we both went to candle shop and I selected that first and then this boxer came there claiming its hers she wanted to buy for her mother, I told her I will find another one

Tanya : he is lying, I wanted to buy that for you, cheater and he was taking it away

Rishab : Karan from when you got habit of getting candles?

Karan ; actually I wanted to get that for Preeta she was upset with me

Preeta : who told you that I love candle?

“Dhruv he said your room is always full of candles aromas reveals to her

Preeta could not resist her laughing seeing his childishness and naive.

Karan ; why are you laughing?

Preeta : oh my god Karan you are so innocent he pulled your leg did you ever see my room had any single candle (pulls his cheek)

Tanya : loser because of you my small gift broke (pouts like child) wait (grabs his bat from corner)

Karan : hey put that bat down right now

Tanya : you broke my candle now see what will I do with this bat, come lets play cricket today

Karan ; its not joke keep that down

Rishab : quiet both of you, Tanya you come with me I have talk something about legal issues and you change clothes, go back to practice

Things calm down after another ruckus created by Karan and Tanya that started in store.

Preeta : seriously Karan you got fooled by that Dhruv, be aware of his pranksters, he will give you tough competition

Karan : I swear that guy will pay for this, he fooled me so easily

“Oh my future husband you are so innocent like child this is what I love about you wraps her arms around him

“You know I was feeling so bad yesterday I didn’t mean anything to say like that but when it comes to Kritika or anybody in family I lose my cool makes her sit down on bed

Preeta : I know you were only concerned about your sister but just like you trust your pinky, Dhruv is also important to me he is very liberal never listens to other but he is not bad at heart

Karan ; I am trusting your words even if tomorrow something happens I will not blame you but I don’t want Kritika to face any problem like you

Preeta : trust me nothing like that will happen, and in few weeks our engagement ceremonies will start I don’t want any third person between us

Karan : that reminds me in your hand I will buy the best ring but when you will wear that its beauty will increase more

Preeta : you know today I got something for you (looks in her purse)

Karan ; wow sports watch, how did you know I needed this

Preeta : now this keep the track of your all workouts how much you ran, everything and yes it has alarm clock see one more thing it has a beeper inside whenever you need me just press this small button

“You know this is so precious for me I will practice hard everyday and by doing that I want Rishab to live his life everyday he has to wake up early so I can go for practice feels guilty for not sharing responsibility with his brother

Preeta : your job is to only make your country proud get little bit disciplined that will be biggest achievement for your family and Rishabji

Karan ; this is beautiful gift for me from tomorrow I will not wake up late

Preeta : well lets hope so and after marriage I will not wake you up so please get used to this

Karan : what do you mean you won’t ?

Preeta : don’t tell me like typical husband that its wife duty to do everything

Karan : yes I forgot you are not from those, you are the most unique one (shouts in her ear)

Preeta : not that different you will make me deaf (rubs her ears properly)

Rakhi comes there interrupting their conversation

Karan : hi mom come inside

Rakhi : I hope I didn’t disturb your couple conversation

Preeta : what are you saying aunty?

Rakhi : Karan if you don’t mind can I steal your bride for sometime and what are you still doing here Rishab told you to go at practice field

Karan : i was leaving this Preeta stopped me in between and her non stop chattering

Rakhi : oye hoye stop blaming her i know both of you very well now go, i want to talk with her alone

Karan : sure love you both (gives his flying kiss to to both of them)

Rakhi : he is grown up but still small kid crazy boy (tells her)

Preeta : yea he should always remain like this, by the way aunty what did you want to talk

“Oh god I forgot about that, I came here to give you this ancestral bangles that means I am handing you the dignity, honor of this family now and my Karan’s life puts the bangle on her hand

Preeta ; aunty you are crying

Rakhi : this is my happiness, I never thought I had to see this day that my Karan will be getting married when he use to say he will never love or commit I got scared how will he live his whole life without anybody, then you came my both sons made you important part of our life

Preeta : don’t embarras me more I have done nothing, and for Karan even I am still in shock that I am getting married to him, first I use to think my life partner would be like Rishabji calm, gentle, respectful something that I thought Karan never had in him but see the game of fate

Rakhi : my Karan is very naive he will never play with anybody’s feeling, he has our upbringing my Rishab’s discipline is inside him, just he is youngest one in family

Preeta : I feel very lucky to any girl would to get married in this house, from childhood I craved for mothers love, now when I got that I will leave her soon and come here you will make me your daughter na like Kritika and Ru (gets emotional)

Rakhi : you are my daughter from the day you entered in this house and from that time my dream was to see become bride of this family now my karan has made that come true (hugs her and promise to become her mother)

Preeta : then you will have two another one coming soon so I have to share that with them

Rakhi : who?

Preeta ; did you forget you have two other sons? and their wives will also come, both have even found but they are crazy won’t confess easily Shrishti and Tanya

Rakhi : I know but they are influenced with Karan’s old behavior now both are always busy in their work I will be more than happy to see Shrishti and Tanya becoming my daughter in law, after she came my Rishab has completely changed he is not the same one who always ignored my requests of getting married

Preeta ; you see aunty with time even they will realize they are made for each other

Sherlyn who came to meet Kareena overhears their conversation

“No Preeta Arora this dream will never come to reality and you my mother in laws you are destined to be under my fingers not that Tanya, you see how I kick her out of your all lives and I already executed that   Sherlyn thinks how she got Tanya’s car break failed and leaves

Shrishti goes to the first day of her work at the Blue diamond hotel.

Manager : welcome Ms Arora, this is Anu she will assist you today and let you know what we have coming up next

Anu : shall we go? I will give you tour to the hotel first and then list of the all events

Shrishti gets extremely excited for her new workplace. Anu informs her about foreign clients are coming to their hotel and attending some fashion shows from Paris.

Anu : they are coming next week , you have to make sure their rooms are properly maintained, there should no lack in their hospitality

Shrishti : don’t worry I will give no chance for complain and also can I suggest some events while they are here

Anu : sure as long as they are not offended with anything go ahead good luck I am usually down in lobby if you need anything, I showed you the cabin go through this file

Shrishti : thank you so much

Anu hands her the list go guest coming next week and all events need to be done.

Sameer meets Shrishti at her workplace seeing her little nervous.

Sameer : what happened tall pole? why are you so quite today you didn’t like the place

Shrishti : no I am just nervous I hope nothing goes wrong this time

Sameer : I know you more than yourself alright come on cheer up, lets go somewhere

His car does not start when he sees Tanya outside Rishab’s office that is close to hotel.

Tanya : you both here?

Shrishti : actually I got job in that hotel as event manager so he came to pick me

“Thats great and did he became your driver not bad keep it up my brother teases him

Sameer : stop it give me your car keys

Tanya : what?

Sameer ; do you hear less ? your car keys my car is not working driver uncle will take that to garage for repair

Tanya : say please give me keys

“God drama queen, madam please give me car keys takes from her hands

Tanya ; now how will I go? barefoot

Sameer : very good idea at least you will feel the soil of this country

Tanya : shut up or I will take those keys back

Shrishti : why don’t you go with Rishabji, we will drop your car back at home

Tanya : okay you guys enjoy bye have fun (leaves inside the office)

Shrishti : why do you and Karan sir always fight with her she is nice

Sameer : please she is not cute, she is gone case tall pole

Both gets inside the car unaware of the brakes failed. The informer tells Sherlyn about it.

Sherlyn : damn it every time I try to get rid of this girl she is always saved but I will not give up Tanya Oberoi, you will not get married to Rishab at any cost

On mid way Sameer realizes the car had break failed and tells Shrishti to jump out of car. She refuses to leave him but is pushed out by him. The car is crashed on tree  badly leaving Sameer and Shrishti both unconscious at different place.

Precap : Kareena tries to insult Preeta during engagement but Tanya gives her piece of mind. Sherlyn and Prithvi hires some dacoits in form of caterers to spoil the engagement ceremony and warns them to take revenge on Karan, Preeta, Tanya and RIshab at most.

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