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Preetan FF : Truth Of Life Part 52

Preeta wakes up with heavy head and blurry vision. She looks around the room strangely

Roshni : how are you feeling now?

Preeta : who are you ? what am I doing here (starts panicking)

Roshni : calm down you are safe here dont’ worry whats your name dear

Preeta starts getting panic attacks to see the strangers around.

Roshni : don’t be scared

“Look we are not your enemies just relax take  a deep breath and tell us your name Sahil ask her calmly

Preeta gets flashes of previous incidences but not able to see the faces.

Sahil : are you okay?

“My name is Preeta, how did I come here” starts questioning to them

Roshni : we found you near the river there was nobody with you, where do you live

Preeta : I live in Nasik with my sister Shrishti, our dad passed away, I can’t remember anything more (gets dizzy)

Sahil : okay okay don’t worry you take rest nobody will disturb you, mom (signals her)

Both lets Preeta rest in the room and goes out to talk

Sahil : mom I have strong feeling she have some sort of memory loss

Roshni : we should check with doctor first and till then lets find about her but how

Sahil : until she don’t tell us we can’t find anything about her

Preeta is not able to sleep properly reminiscing the pasts and shouts out loud.

Roshni ; what happened dear?

Preeta gets afraid with the situation

“Its okay dear I am here Roshni consoles her

Sahil takes her to hospital immediately seeing the worsening condition.

Doctor : see regarding to whatever you told me about her and all the test we did it seems she is suffering from regtrograde amnesia

Roshni : what is that?

Doctor : sometime due to some an injury or trauma people lose access to memory from long time

Sahil : but doctor we don’t even know, from where she came

Doctor : well my suggestion is don’t try too hard on her just ask her calmly at least her name and where she used to stay

Sahil : thank you doctor for how long she can stay here today

Doctor : you can take her in evening after all her test results come

Roshni : yea sure

Sahil sees Preeta through the window blinds

Nurse : excuse me are you her family member, we need sign for the consent

Roshni : we don’t know about her family

Sahil : she is like my sister I will sign for her (signs the consent form) thank you

Roshni : Sahil you

Sahil : mom years ago you remember how my chutki died, I don’t know why but I see a reflection in her

Roshni : I hope so dear, just she gets fine quickly I wonder about her family poor them

After 2 months 

Mumbai 

Luthra and Arora house silence after catastrophe says everything. The light has blown in both families sending into darkness.

Rakhi sits in temple praying for her family’s well being and children

“Wahi guru keep your hand on us like always Rakhi fold her hands

Dadi : go and give this to Rishab, Karan maybe they will feel better

Rakhi goes to Rishab’s room who is standing near the window silent than before. He came back to square one from where he was. Only time has changed but not his fate.

Rakhi : dear take this aarti

Will this bring back our happiness mom asks his mom

Rakhi : it will just try once from heart, your every dream and desire will be fulfilled

Rishab takes the aarti and offering to keep respect of his mom. He goes to Karan’s room who is still in hangover from last night. From last two months Karan had drowned himself in sorrow of pain and loneliness. The name he created with hard work remained for sake and no meaning behind his success. After losing several matches, he has lost the privilege of staying in BPL team. Currently he is at risk of being out of the whole cricket league.

“I wish you never had to see this day Karan Rishab caress his hair

Karan wakes up from his sleep seeing his brother teary eyes.

“Bhai you don’t cry see I am not sad Karan wipes his tears

Rishab : seeing you like will that help you or me, for this day I raised you ?

Karan : I am sorry bhai but you know how much I love Preeta, I can’t stay without her

“And you are my world I already lost one part of heart if I lose you then there is no reason for me to live right try to understand Rishab’s eyes have flood of tears

Karan : bhai why did we lost our love we never did wrong to anybody

Rishab : there is always a right time for everything maybe that day we were not destined to get married

Karan : I guess you are right because of us mom dad, dadi have to see us in this state what they must be going through

Rishab : thats why I am saying if we become weak then mom dad will have to face everything alone its our problem we can deal by our way

The brothers share their emotions and pain by the emotional hug as promise to stand each other like pillar to solve any problem

Sameer : in this brother hug I am the youngest one call me too

Karan : come crying baby

Sameer : love you bhai

A receives arrives letter in mail for Rishab

Rishab : for me?

Postman : yes sir, can you sign please

Rishab signs the paper : thank you

Mahesh : whose letter is this?

“I don’t know dad, the name is not written Rishab opens the letter

Rishab starts reading the letter when ground starts slipping from his feet till the end.

Rakhi : what happened? say something

Mahesh get shocked reading it

Dadi : can somebody tell me what is going on?

“Its Tanya’s letter she said she can’t marry Rishab and will not come back Mahesh tells them

Rakhi : what? (takes letter from him) this is not possible how can she do this

Sameer : this is all lie I am sure somebody might have played a prank

Rishab tears the letter from their hands and tells them not to mention Tanya’s name again

Mahesh : what are you saying?

Rishab : I am right dad please, right now Karan needs me the most and hearing about Tanya I don’t want to become weak

Rakhi : you will forget her so easily?

“Who said I have forgotten her, she is in my memory nobody can take her place in my life Rishab makes mind to support his family but at the same look for Tanya on any cost.

Rishab devastated walks into dargah lifelessly losing everything.

Tere Darbaar Mein

Dil Thaam Ke Woh Aata Hai

Jisko Tu Chaahe

Hey Nabi Tu Bhulata Hai

Tere Dar Pe Sar Jhukaaye

Main Bhi Aaya Hoon

Jiski Bigdi Haye

Nabi Chaahe Tu Banata Hai

Bhar Do Jholi Meri Ya Mohammad

Lautkar Main Naa Jaunga Khaali.. (4x)

Band Deedon Mein Bhar Daale Aansu

Sil Diye Maine Dardo Ko Dil Mein (X2)

Jab Talak Tu Bana De Na Tu Bigdi

Dar Se Tere Na Jaaye Sawali

Bhar Do Jholi Meri Ya Mohammad

Lautkar Main Naa Jaunga Khaali

Bhar Do Jholi Meri Ya Mohammad

Lautkar Main Naa Jaunga Khaali

“Please bring my Tanya back, let her be safe wherever she is I cannot live without her, my heart says whatever in that letter was not truth she is in big trouble. bring Preetaji back for my Karan just like Tanya is everything to me she is my brother’s world Rishab puts his hand forward asking to give a clue of her He ties the thread in the corner with pure heart.

One of the fakir blesses him of his wish coming true soon. While walking outside a scarf blows on him covering his face. He doubts it to be Tanya’s but is not able to find there.

Karan goes to temple before his practice match knowing how hard it has been for him. He walks upstairs with every hope to get his prayer come true not for him but for his family.

“You must be thinking why I came here today suddenly, mom always say whatever you do is for good, I know you might have kept my Preeta somewhere safe please bring her back quickly  my heart know she is alive Karan closes his eyes while praying

Natkhat bansi wale gokul ke raja
Meri ankhiyaan taras gayi
Ab toh aaja aaja..
Natkhat bansi wale gokul ke raja
Meri ankhiyaan taras gayi
Ab toh aaja aaja…

Arora house 

Shrishti tells Sarla about her new job in goa as event management on the resort.

Sarla : goa? but there are good places her

“Mom please this place reminds me of Sameer and di, I know I won’t be able to live peacefully

Sarla : after so many years I got my daughters back and now you are again going

Dadi ; let her go if she will go out only then she will understand this world go dear

Shrishti : I won’t go till mom give me permission

“When your dadi had declared I am nobody to stop you go ahead, take care of yourself okay I will pack some food for you Sarla tells her

Shrishti : thank you mom don’t worry I will try to come back soon

Sarla : you stop taking tension over her your mom is still strong to handle herself

Shrishti starts packing her luggage for the trip to Goa taking the picture of her loving sister.

Shrishti : di today I am taking all your memories with me wherever you are just be with me, you are my lucky charm

Sarla : here take this box with you and take care of yourself

Shrishti : you worry so much about me

Luthra house

Karan suggests Sameer to go for break to Goa from everything

Sameer : bhai please I don’t want to go anywhere

Karan : please I asked permission from Rishab he also said you need break from office

Sameer : you both also come with me what will I do alone

Karan : when will you do things by yourself and I have practice match

Sameer : bhai but they suspended you right?

Karan : they did but if anybody in this world make things possible for me is my Rishab, I want to play for him and Preeta

Sameer : bhai everything seems so dull without Preeta and Tanya they were soul of this house

Karan : are you trying hide your pain by saying or mine

Sameer ; you are talking about that girl who did not trust me, and that guilt in me for not supporting her in bad times she took that right from me bhai

Karan : come on Sammy, whatever happened was just circumstances

Sameer : I don’t want to talk about this, I will go to Goa  tomorrow itself

Karan : no you are going tonight here are your tickets by flight

Somewhere in Pune 

Preeta has been not able to recover properly in last two months. Sahil and his mother took her to Pune for treatment. Preeta sits gloomy in the room trying hard to recall things.

Sahil : how are you feeling now?

Preeta : I don’t know but I can’t recall anything properly those flashes, did you find about my sister in Nasik

Sahil : no I went to that house in Nasik but she is not there too you think she could somewhere else, you said you both were going to Mumbai

Preeta : yes I remember we both boarded on train but why can I not recall anything

Sahil : don’t stress out we will find your sister, doctor said we will go to Mumbai once you recover

Preeta : thank you so much for saving my life

Sahil : tell me something more about you, what do you do your family

Preeta : me and my sister stayed with our dad in Nasik, I am a physiotherapist

Roshni : you are that doctor of bones right thats great profession

Preeta : yea

Sahil : I don’t know if you are aware but I am a singer i mean was (gets tensed and leaves)

Preeta : why was? did I ask anything wrong

Roshni : no dear, after losing his love Kaya in accident last year he has stopped singing on stage, Kaya was his inspiration, he has lost people close to him, his sister, love, his parents

Preeta :Oh sorry, but I must say he is very strong in such cases people lose hope of living

Roshni : I am just his caretaker, their parents gave his responsibility to me

Preeta : why don’t you find a good girl and get him married

Roshni : I wish dear that was so easy, people getting defeated in love once have hard time to put faith on love

Preeta : you see he will believe in love again, god help good people

Sahil : mom why are you both talking seriously, today Preeta have recovered what can we do for you to cheer up

Preeta : will you do what I say?

Sahil : just ask once

Preeta : sing for me

Sahil is taken aback with her demand

Preeta : my sister always said music is art and devotion, it runs in people’s vein you should not waste that talent

Sahil grabs the guitar after long time trying hard to get hold of tune.

Zindagi Ki Yehi Reet Hai

Haar Ke Baad Hi Jeet Hai

Zindagi Ki Yehi Reet Hai

Haar Ke Baad Hi Jeet Hai

Thode Aansu Hai, Thodi Hasi

Aaj Gham Hai To Kal Hai Khushi

Zindagi Ki Yehi Reet Hai

Haar Ke Baad Hi Jeet Hai

Thode Aansu Hai, Thodi Hasi

Aaj Gham Hai To Kal Hai Khushi

Zindagi Ki Yehi Reet Hai

Haar Ke Baad Hi Jeet Hai

Preeta have blurry flashes with have a connection with the song. She recalls the song in the flashback

Sahil : what happened?

Preeta : nothing I just thought I have some old connection with this song

Sahil : okay dont panic drink water (pats her shoulder)

Preeta : thank you, you sing so great why don’t you have your own album

Roshni ; he got great opportunity in Mumbai for music album

Preeta : you should go there don’t waste your talent like this

Sahil : okay I will but on one condition if you come with me to Mumbai

Preeta : me? what will I do there

Roshni : why ? we both are with you and I have some good contacts there to get you a good job as physio in a team or hospital

Preeta : sure let me know when we can go

Sahil : i will talk to manager today and we can start heading tomorrow

Preeta starts having strange feeling with the thought of going to Mumbai.

Mumbai 

Sameer goes to airport for his flight to Goa. Luthra family goes to drop them. Shrishti arrives at the bus station for Goa. She bids goodbye to her mother and dadi to start new life. Sameer boards in the flight for Goa.

Luthra and Arora family meets together after both their children departure.

Rakhi : I hope this trip would be successful for both our children

Flashback

Luthra and Arora family meets together in Shrishti and Sameer’s absence to bring an end to their misunderstanding.

Rakhi ; we lost the smile of our two sons, now if that happens to Sameer and Shrishti what worse could be than this

Rishab : mom even if they agree lets say for our sake but their relation won’t change

Karan ; bhai is right, its only both of them who clear the misunderstanding

Dadi : Shrishti has got some offer in Goa as event management job

Karan : perfect then its my job to convince Sammy to go there, leave everything to me

Flashback ends

Rishab ; I hope things does not go wrong between them

Karan : nothing like that will happen you see when they return there will another glow on their faces trust me

Sarla : ever since Preeta has left I feel the soul of this house went away and my Shrishti have become like corpse

“Aunty we share same grief of losing Preeta but I know god will bring her back to us you see and very soon, for Shrishti I trust my brother he will regain that faith in her of love Karan assures Sarla sitting on knees

Dadi : I don’t know whose casted evil eyes on our happiness, did you find anything about Tanya yet

Rishab : no commissioner uncle have his contacts everywhere but still no news of her

Kritika and Akshay’s  house

Time passes but some memories never leave from your heart. Kritika have tried her best to become a good wife and fulfill every duty so did Akshay. Behind their perfect relationship something has been lacking which is guilt. Kritika deep down have memories of Dhruv but suppress under her duty as wife. Akshay has given her immense love and freedom to chase her dream as RJ. Somewhere he started feeling Kritika’s sadness in their marriage.

A mail arrives at their doorstep.

Kritika ; Akshay who is it?

Akshay : there is letter for you from your office

Kritika ; what letter?

“It says they are promoting you to Canada, there is some Indian community and they need somebody from our country to be on live, and also to join RJ on some university Akshay reads the letter

Kritika gets hesitant after knowing its in Canada.

Akshay ; what are you thinking?

“Nothing, just remembered somebody who gave me hope to live my dreams high Kritika talks about Dhruv

Akshay : accept this offer

Kritika : what are you saying? you know I cannot leave you here

Akshay : listen to me, you have to do this for yourself and I know Dhruv is in Canada

Kritika : I don’t have anything to do with him or his presence in my life

Akshay : are you trying to convince me or yourself with this?

Kritika gets nervous with his words

Akshay ; I can see everything, you are trying hard to be good wife with me but love is such thing you cannot hide

“Akshay even if I want to go back to him he will not accept me Kritika criticizes him

Akshay : love have its own time that was not yours but now life has given you opportunity don’t let this go

Kritika : but how can I go like this? what will everybody say

Akshay : if you think about others time will run out for yourself, this is your life

Kritika gets encouraged with his words and starts packing to go to Canada.

 

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