Hello ishqies..thanks for your comments and views….Well guys you all commented on my ff though it has major faults and am grateful to all of you…..And expect your comments on this part also….Please guys….
Continuation from part 7 { scene-12}
Shivaay : Om, what are you saying ?
Omkara : Shivaay I have seen this man with Mr. Oberoi….. I mean dev’s uncle @ our family function ….
Tej : Omkara…..I don’t know this man as I have never seen him before….…
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi I know what am saying as I saw him with you just before a month….
Librarian : Wow, Mr. Tej….your son’s observation is so sharp…
Tej : Shut up Rajesh….
Omkara : So Mr. Oberoi you never see him before ? But you know his name ?
Tej : I know Rajesh as he is swethlana’s driver….
Rajesh : Oh Really only that much you know about me…..Mr. Tej….
Dev : Uncle…let us leave…we are not supposed to answer oberois and chabras…..
Shivaay : Dev…. you can’t leave as my questions are not completed yet….
Dev : Shivaay bhaiya….i already told my answer….
Chabra : Dev beta please…..come back home….
Dev : Paapa….don’t try to fool me with your emotions as am not that small kid who was easily got melt with your crocodile tears and toys……
Priyanka : Dev…..
Dev : Prinku…..am sorry…..you asked me several questions….but I really don’t know how to answer it as my life is like a puzzle which is getting complicated day by day……[emotional]
Rajesh : Chabras and Oberois…we just want to tell you that because of you people our lives became miserable…..Mr. Chabra…..and Mr. Oberoi…..your days are counted…..Be alert!!!
Dev : Lets go uncle…..{they leaves and every one are shocked….prinku burst into tears}
Scene- 13 ( @ Loyola college)
{Next day morning prinku was sitting @ the canteen of the college….she recollected the previous day’s incidents and got confused…. Suddenly some one placed a cup of coffee before her and smiled @ her and it was none other than dev….Prinku stood from the chair and stared him in confusion}
Prinku : Dev…..what’s wrong with you ? why you took knife and tried to commit suicide ? and why
Dev :{interrupting words} Prinku……I will tell every thing in detail….just sit down and have your coffee…..please….{he placed his hands on her shoulders and seated her in chair…..they share an eyelock}
Prinku : Dev….what happened to you ?
Dev : Prinku…I don’t know how to share it with you as when I remember all things it will make me…..{emotional….prinku touches his hand}
Prinku : Relax dev…..be free to share as we are friends…..dev….
{dev stares prinku with teary eyes and prinku shake her head with a sign of positive energy for dev…dev smiles with wet eyes….}
That’s all for today guys….please comment guys… as tomorrow I have some work and will not be able to update next one so I am posting this part today itself…..And precap….well….you guess guys… that’s all…..and some one asked to write more pridev scenes and I have started it here and on upcoming parts you will get the feel of immortal love…bye…..guys….
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wow eagerly waiting for next ff!!
So nice renima di…loved it…waiting for the next part…
Nice episode…update not part soon..
I mean nxt part soon…so sorryyy di…autocorrect ne gadbad kr di…
Its nc renima its something different waiting foe next one tc of urself
Hey renima…waitng for d next yaar…..evn i wanna see pridev scenes…..nwaitng for his revealation to prinku
Thanks 2 all…to post next part…well i could say i will try as tmrw and day after tmrw i have some personal work…..so will try..that’s all
hey reni di it’s fantastic
nice..
Nice episode….Finally suspense on end
Waiting for pridev immortal love