Hii this is mars… presenting four shots…
lets start
his pov
i am going yaa finally going to my home … my india … my granny' s place … my native place…
i am really happy to meet my family after a long period of time …. but as i belong to the royal family …. all people of town and even my family members think that i am the reincarnation of my great grandfather…..
though i want that they come out of this false tale…
… oh .. my haveli is here….
pov ends
a big royal palace was shown… it reminds of the times of great emperors….
the boy enters the big gateway of the palace and the flowers were thrown over him to mark his welcome…..
the crowed started screaming"sanskaar sanskaar sanskaar"( yep the boy is sanskaar)…
soon sanskaar meets each and every people of the town and provide them with clothes and sweets…
his pov
aahhh… such a great day! i dont know why but people were happy seeing me…but yaa…. i am very very very much tired now….
ohhh god… i forgotten to meet my granny… how can i forgot about her…
pov ends..
he runs all way to the royal palace but didnt finds his granny…just then he gets a gentle patt on his right shoulder…
he turns back and says" grannyy… where you were…and by the way how are you" and hugs her…
granny: sanskaar beta …. i am absolutely fine…
but did you took blessings from your great grand father….
san: oopppss!! i totally forgotten… wait a min…no no … you also come with me ….
they moves and comes in front of a big door…
sanskaar opens it..
there was a large portrait …
granny: take the blessings of your great grandfather" Sanskaar Maheshwari"
sansakaar joins his hand and takes the blessings….
san: granny .. why i have given his name
granny: it is not his name…it is your name only…you are the reincarnation of your great grand father…..
san: grannyyy… dont start again…how many times i should say that i am not a reincarnation…
granny: sanskaar only time will tell..
san: granny can i go for some outing…
granny: okk take some servants with u..
san: i want to go alone
granny: but sanskaar…
san: pls dadi… pls.. plss
granny : accha okk goo..
sanskaar leaves…
sanskaar visits various temple and places…
lastly he beens to a temple which was situated on the banks of an isolated lake…
it was the temple of goddess lakshmi…
as soon as he steps in…
an old woman gets happy
she: god…. finally he came… yaa he came… the air is containing happiness and the direction of air is also changed…today her wait is over…her wait is over…. and he came to complete his promise which he given to her love…
sanskaar takes the blessings of goddess and he goes at back side of temple where there was lake…
he was just taking the pleasure of the nature when a swam came near her…
he simply patted her and the swan started dancing…. just then the swan holdes his hand and drags him to move with it…
san: i think he is pretending that i should follow him…
sanskaar follows the swan… the swan takes him to the another side of the lake
there was a herd of swans standing in circular path..
as soon as sanskaar came… they all vanished… sanskaar shocked…
but there left a beautiful swan…who was the princess of the swans…
the swan came near him and said: you came… sanskaar.. you came …. i was waiting for you since100 years…. sanskaar pls… take me away… free me from this swan body… pls sanskaar….
this shocks sanskaar even more… and starts to step back….
san: who are u…. i dont know you…are you playing pranks or what…… or i am mad… just go.. from here…
just then the old women comes
she: sanskaar it is not a prank …it is love…she is waiting for you since ages… she loves you since your past birth….
san: again this rebirth past birth story…. now i think you all have changed the plot or what….
i am saying last time..that i am not the reincarnation of my great grandfather……
is that clear…
he leaves angrily…..
the old woman: you accept it or not your are only the reincarnation of our great king Sanskaar maheshwari… also you are the love and wait of our queen Swara……
Epi ends..
howwzzz the story guys… i know it is boring but what can i do its my first work…let me introduce my self…
i am ripen…from Bangalore and i am a christian cum hindu…
can you anyone be my frnd….
accha coming to the point… i think i will not get any response from readers as it is an bad idea…may be a funny one…like me…
bye
gm
love u all
tc..
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80 Comments
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Another mars wowww but the most shocking thing is your name is also ripen in real mine also. U r also hellyholic me toooo soooo many similarities I m surprised yarrrrre.
Welcome to swasan family dear and u r my twin sister I think hihi kidding.
Coming to story its superb and damm interesting.
Continue soon…..
Thanks
Take care.
Still can’t believe we have similar real and id name what a coincidence.
I will love to me your friend dear
I thought it’s u ???????????
Hihihi depuu tujhe pta jab mane title read kiya then I thought yeh story mane kab likhi fir jab post dheka fir pta chala.
Mere pas etni stories hai ki confuse ho jati hu.
Meri vali b jaldi post hogi.
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i too thought it’s you mars.shocked
Hahaha really even I myself was confused for a min reetu dear
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Seeing the title I thought its u only but was really shocked reading about the similarities between u two
Ohhh even I was also shocked dear
kyaaaa….. oh my mata!!!…lagta hai tum meri khumbh meh bichdi hui twin sis ho…..
thanks for loving my storyyyy…???
Hahahaa mujhe b yehi lagta hai
Hayeee ram aaj tho Mars Mars ho gaya…
Awesome plz continue it I really love SwaSan rebirth stories and this is something very interesting to read I just love it
thank you very much dear for your support
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Is that u Mars… ?????? nice story… Waiting for more, how SWARA became Swan
sorry… tosay dear…but i am a new one…by the way thanks …. the upcoming parts will definitely tell you..??
Okie…???????
Nice plot but how come queen swara waiting since ages. And if sanskar was this sanskar’s great grandfather then swara should be his great grandmother or he got married to someone else. Its complicated….. Waiting for next parts……And one thing more….I love all ur stories….U r an amazing writer.
thanks dear…. u are right dear … i know its complicated …. but dear i am not the mars you are thinking…. i am a new one… its my first work on swasan☺
Very good… Loved it…. Continue
thanks..?
nyc
thanks?
nice story dear
thanks?
awesome dear
thanks?
Another mars????
Welcome to TU and swasan family..
I really liked the story..continue soon..tc..
thanks for the warm welcome…thanks ?
waaaa.. another Mars ??? *fainting
So, this is kinda Hamari Adhuri Kahani ?
Hahaha mica dear don’t faint yarrr otherwise I will come to take u to hospital hihi
huh! i want to see you both 😀
yaa the other one… dont faint dear…. May be kinda ?
2 2 mars! Bhai where is earth ??! Ek din wsa na aaya ki earth gayab hojaye! Mars hi mars dikhai de ??
Hahaha lol
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Mars i think u r playing prank with us right????? i know it’s u!!! Even the writing style is same!!! U just changed ur location right??? ??
Okie coming to the story!!! It’s awesome and i loved it
Nooooooo di trust me its not me.
Even I m surprised to see so many similarities.
I request the writer of this story plzz show your presence other wise I m gone hihihi
dear shan…. i am a new one…. i dont know whether the writing skills are same or not but i am really a new comer…
by the way.. thanks for liking my stiry????
I am not going to believe….??
Awsm Dr…. Update soon
thanks☺
nyc dear
thanks
Awesome dear….welcome to swasan family
Post soon
thank u so much??
Interesting dear
thankaa??
loved it
thanksss?
Haha everyone are confused by both mars… even mee tooo… guys dnt play prank…
Story line was different and superb??
?? dear dear dear Dont go in confusion…..
by the way thanks ?????…. well I’m not playing Pranks
Scooby dear its not any prank I m innocent hihi she is really a newcomer.
All this is coincidence
yaa.. dear
Omg……yek mars hi hamare sir pe chadi hai ek or ka ham kya kare…(sry mars kiddin hehe)…. Awesome dear loved it….. mars1 congrats for getting a twin sis hehe
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thanks for liking my work ❤
Amazing dear
ty❤
two two mars…..that too same real name…. dal main kuch Kala hy…… anyways awsome start mars2 ….
ty❤….
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N welcome to swasan family….love to read further….n please disturb us with lots of swasan stories….
thanks for warm welcome…. no i will not??
No no…… I want u to disturb us with lots of stories….coz now a days swasan stories are decreasing…so we won’t mind if u disturb us lots of love dear….
One difference is mars1 use accha as asha….but u use accha as accha….I can only find this difference…otherwise both r twins
thank god…. you are genius dear??
hey dear welcome to SWASAN family,,, glad to meet another crazy hellyhollic even am a crazy hellyhollic.. well are you a swasan fan too??
the concept and storyline i really interesting am looking forward to it..do continue soon dear
hiii…. thanks for the warm welcome…. yaaa… i am carzzyyy hellyh. give me a hi5…
thanks for liking my work ❤❤
Hey awesome plsss update I love rebirth stories
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awesome ??
ty
awesome update next part loving it
ty
nice story
its hard to believe that both of u r different Mars…hmm dekhte hain
thanks dear???…. know what can i do??
Yar it’s really confusing… Bt the concept is really different n cool types… Loved it…
N guys plz change name like part 1 part 2 types… Hihi…
Update soon dear.. Waiting ❤❤❤❤
hehhehe???….thanks for liking my work ❤❤❤❤
Awesome even I also got confused between two mars welcome to the swasan family dear and ya iam also crazy hellyholics this is your 1st work I wish it become many more dear