Hlo gyss!! this is mars( part 2) back with a new shot of my story…. thank u thank u thank u alll very much for liking my work… firstly i am a new mars…and secondly i am not a great writer as mars ( part1) …. so pls forgive me for making any kinda confusion…. after finishing this story… i would disappear so that no more confusion would be there
shot 2
sanskaar comes to palace angrily…. and his anger was noticed by her granny…
his granny comes to him and says"you are looking worried and angry… did anything happened "
san: granny pls tell me… pls tell me every thing about this valley… pls..
gran: why you are asking this.. pls don't ask this…its an bad dreammm…
sanskaar tells her the whole incident
gran: i think the right time is here to tell you ….
my dear… the story you are asking is your own story….
Nearly 100 years back….
this Devgarh was ruled by Durga prasad… he was ur great grandfather 's dad….
once sanskaar travelled to kerela…
there he found princess of the particular town where he was staying….. sanskaar been to kerela to make her tie as she killed their commander in cheif for misbehaving with her…
but sanskaar falled in love with the princess the princess to falled in love with him…
and he decided to marry her…
but you know every love story doesnt completes so easily…..
when sanskaar asked for marriage …. Durga prasad didnt agreed for their marriage and locked swara in a dark prison…..
seeing swara in prison…
sanskaar got angry and stabbed durga prasad but durga prasad didnt died….
soon swara and sanskaar wedded and swara became pregnant…… she was 8 month pregnant when dp given her a poison….
swara's child was saved…. she given a birth to baby boy named laksh maheshwari your grand pa sanskaar… but swara was still in danger … she just had 2 days left…. swara would only be saved when she cant get a perfect medical treatment…..
sanskaar asked his royal doctors to save her life but they denied by saying " she is not from our caste" ….. then sanskaar decided to travel to kerela and get a doctor from her caste… but ……. unfortunately sanskaar and doctor were late and swara died just after a min when sanskaar n doctor arrived….
sanskaar broke into pieces….
seeing sanskaar's condition doctor given an offer to sanskaar…..
doc: king…. i can save your swara' s soul but not her….
san: what…. i am what you are trying to say…
doc: i can place your princess's soul in any animal …. but..
san: but what….
doc: but i dont know how to normal her….
( sanskaar gets sad)
doc: we dont have much time….king… pls tell me which animal can hold her soul …
Sanskaar remebers that swara loves swans… so he decided that she would ve the princess swan…
san: swan….
and the decision was approved….
swara became the princess swan….
everyday sanskaar visited the lake to meet swara…. but one day he also died….. he death is always been mystery for us….
san: granny… how sanskaar died… and it really feels that something is missing…
granny: no one knows how sanskaar died …. and you are right dear the story is still complete and the rest is only know by one personnn….
san: who….
granny: sanskaar himself… and you are the reincarnation of your great grand father then you must be knowing….
san: grannyy… if i would be knowing then why would i had asked you…
just then the old woman comes…
she: sanskaar…. you have just tommorow…or you will loose your swara forever … because tommorow the 100 years would complete… sanskaar i know that you know the way to free swara… pls go and rescue her…
san: again you…i dont know how to free swara….
she : nooo… i know that… just think…think about that…
epi ends…
howzz the epi guys… hope you dont throw tomotoes and slippers on me after reading this….
well
love you all
bye
gn
tc
51 Comments
Awesome dear….loved it
thanks.. dear?
Awesome… A new concept
…..
thankss?
Awesome dear .i opened it when i saw the mars. But u are our second one.
And we both are neighbours since i am keralite. Waiting for next one
thanks.. dear?… ohhh..so u both are neighbours ☺☺☺☺
Super
ty?
Awesome dear
ty?
Mars dii.. i know its you only… dont play hide n seek with us… how can very thing could same…
vaise coming to the story… its an new n different plot to write about………. continue n update soon…
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Its not me trust me? she is really new and many things are same its coincidence only. ???
noo dear… i am the second one….
tysm for liking my work ???
Awesome dr!!! Ur words are fishy!!! That u will disappear makes me to think u r the same mars….?
Againnn doubt on me? I m notttttttt this mars seriously…..i m innocent ??.
thanks dear?…yrrr pls believe me?????
Awesome..
and Plz don’t disappear from TU ????
Tc..
thanks?? okkzzz
Nooo I don’t want to lose my twin sister so soon if we have. Same name we will be like mars 1 2 but plzz don’t quit yarrrrr its request.?
Epi is awesome vala loved it.
Continue soon
Take care.
Don’t disappear plz write more.
❤❤❤❤
dear…nice to see that you care for me..
thanks alot dear…??
Wow awesome and even I am from kerala
thanks…?? … hehe…???? what a coincidence….
Wonderful
thanks????
Nice, I hope Sanskaar would Save his SWARA. This durgaparsad????????? I don’t like him.
thanks…..? let the story unfold and see
Awsm Dr…
thanks
Please update next soon
okzz
Amazing dear
thanks??
Awesome dear
thanks??
nice
thanks??
superb
thanks?
awesome
thanks ??
Awesome ?? y ru vanishing mars????
thankss????
amazing
tysm????
Awesome dear……your first para reminded me of my school days…we were two Archana n we were named as archana1 n archana2….ha ha ha….. seriously I started reading it thinking it of Mars but u both have same real name also…twin sisters……
tysm dear????❤ all are saying samething??
Awesome dear.. U r from kerala?? Me too ?
thanks….??? no dear i am from bengaluru
Ok
Amazing dear…. But plz don’t diaappear from TU!
tysm…..❤❤