Hey guys trisha here .
First of all so sorry for all this delay but what can I do project time is on ! All the way back hectic schedule ….. coachings…. tests every one two days nd ofcourse I got my foot pierced wd one of the fine edges broken glass piece ! Anyways this got quite boring but that’s real nd that’s why I wasn’t being regular in my fs ! Nd I have decided to end that because if few silly reasons !
1: less new ideas same old love story !
2: busy schedule !
3: lost interest !
Kindly pardon me for that !
And as u know it’s just 5 post to tech century !
So these five will be short OS nd 100 th will be a super long OS! I just hope you guys like it !
Thanku so much for your kind support throughout my journey !
Here is an os !
*******how to propose ?******
“Seriously ! Now don’t tell me u don’t know how to propose ” she yelled at him .
“But sweetheart I told u Na that day ” he tried calming the situation !
“Oh really ! By giving me a chit right it was stupid me who believed that ! I don’t know anything u are going to propose me ….. else…..I am going to run away from our wedding ” she remarked with a smirk !
“That’s too stupid ! Its just one week for our wedding” he tried avoiding the condition !
“No ! It’s just 6 days for u to propose me else u know what can I do ” she winked at him !
“Ofcourse” he remarked !
Kabeer-(in mind)- fasgya Kabeer beta ! Propose nd me ? Don’t even fit in a line ! Yeah I can make a presentation in next three minutes but proposing ? Not my thing ! Yet ….. so the whole short story is “do or die ” ! Let’s see !
Any guesses from what Kabeer will start !
“Internet”
He woke up two whole hours a night searching how to propose tried a 1000 times ; watched 100 videos …. prepared the cheesiet lines but result ? Let’s see !
He was on the top of SDCH during their break time to complete his “work/dare/order” !
Kanchi nd gang were there !
He sat down in his knees nd took out a rose from behind ; forwards towards her nd began to say …..
“U r rising sun
U r blooming flower of my life
I wasn’t living my life before u came ….wait a second but I was”
She gives her glares !
Kabeer- ok ok again !
“I began to live when u came in my life….
You got me changed ….
Nd ….. break time over saachi nd guys go back to work”
Saachi -(she was totally irritated at that time )- eeewwww kabeeer u know wht just ….. just marry your work ….. nd I don’t know if I would ever be able to change you a little bt U r still that khduus !
He gives her deadly glares !
Saachi- I am not afraid !
Both left towards opposite direction nd gang stood there with “we can’t do anything” face!
So one day passed !
Let’s see second option for Kabeer !
@in his cabin
Kabeer- hello mom I wanted to know …. how to…. that…. how to make pranthas !
(In mind- go to hell u idiot ! R u serious u r asking ur mom how to propose ! Think something else )
He called the prankster veer nd best friend dr krish finally for his help !
But let’s see what kind of help they did !
Veer- sir I think u were going good yesterday !
Krish- yeah Kabeer why don’t u practice that !
Kabeer- I guess I called both of you for some help !
Plan muted ***!
Day second got all wd planning !
Now let’s see what’s in day three!
Again in a fully decorated room ! She was too happy to see that nd thought Kabeer might have done that! Gang was spying on them! She entered ; rose petals fell on her…. she felt so special ….. the music began lightly…. spit light stopped on kanchi !
He forwarded a rose to her but while she was about to hold that the song changed nd this time in high volume…!
“Jumme ki raat hai…”
Kabeer angrily shouted…”veer” nd guess what ? Veer appeared asap !
Kabeer- I told u to handle songs nd see what’s this !
Saachi- rose petals were better !
Kabeer- nd yeah thanks for rose petals !
Saachi- means it was Veer’s idea right !
Day three flop !
Finally a new idea came…veer had to hold large name plates on which lines were written in bold letters nd this way a whole long pharagrph which Kabeer could never remember; so again !
Kabeer- (he was looking at the corner while proposing where veer was standing wd chart turn by turn)- i love u Saachi ….u r my life….. I can live wdout you….nd
(He wasn’t noticing the meaning just reading what he sees)
And…. that cup of coffee blossomed ….. I called u fat first time !
She left !
Kabeer stood up nd read the charts while giving deadly glares to veer on the other hand veer making faces like a little puppy who can be even beaten for his deed !
Kabeer- who wrote this ? When did cat became fat ? When did cant became can ? I asked who !
Veer signed towards outside nd muttered “krish” while krish was vanished after all who would dare to meet the angry khduus !
She was stepping angrily in the corridor nd finally in cafeteria. !
Kabeer called someone …*muted* nd too went behind her …!
Kabeer- I wanna talk to u !
Saachi- but I don’t !
Kabeer- pls !
Saachi- ok !
She stood up when lights went off !
He rubbed his hand against her waist nd jerked towards himself …it was late evening so there was too dark… he whispered to her ears !
Kabeer “I love u miss Sachi Mishra ; be my wife”
He softly placed his lips upon hers nd both were soon involved in a passionate kiss when they parted… the lights came back after Kabeer called someone !
The end
Authors note: I really don’t know how was this indeed I guess it wasn’t that good but pls bear wd me nd drop a comment if you guys like it !
Pic courtesy; myself
Regards
Trisha
47 Comments
It was shoooo cute , honey. … I was literally doing”Awwww” while reading it …. Keep writing like this? loads of luv❤
Thankyou so much maisarah; I am so happy u liked it
Luv uh too dear
Super se bhi uper tha ye os ???
Aww thanku
ONG this was sooo hilarious.
Break time over 🙂
Jumme ki raat hai 🙂 🙂
Now the second last try one.I can live without u n I called u fat ??? These pranksters did great job. :’) :’) :’)
I am having stomachache laughing so much.
Your ideas are evergreen my dear. Everytime u come up with awesome ideas. I don’t know how u manage to do this but I salute you. (°∆°)^√
And how dare that glass pierce ur foot !!
Hope u r now feeling better dea !!!
AWwwwww thanku so my bbu ear for this beautiful comment ! You made my day sweetie ! Nd yeah I a. Fine now !
Luv uh loads dear
Luv uh too a lot dea !!!
Hey u called me bbu. I don’t think I had disclosed my real name here. But I am surprised actually coz people call me bbu with love. I don’t know whether that was just typo error or u really meant it. Actually my real name is quite long for people so they call me bbu in short.
Thanks a lot Trishu. I got to feel something so familiar here.
Awww I am so happy u found me familiar seeing ur love I don’t know if I should say truth
As it was a typing error but I would call u babu from now ?
Sure Trishu. I would be much more than glad. I would dance with joy.
My bestie gave me the name ‘Babu’ and now we study in different colleges so I do miss her a lot.
Your calling me babu would I am
sure remind me of her. I am going to see her reflection in u Trisha I suppose and I am glad for that.
Awesome Trisha dear it’s amazing as usual.
Thanku dear
Wowww fan trishu …..really amazing dear …loved it!!
Thanku abhilasha
omg Trisha dear……..koi aise kaise propose kar sakta hai???…..it was soooooooooo hilarious yaar, just enjoyed each part of it………….luv u cutie pie & dear plz take care of urself(ur leg)…..
Thanku so much riya I am so glad You liked it ! Luv uh too chocopie nd sure
amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely and beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything iam speechless sweetie waiting for next part And lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads
Thanku so much Ashnita
Luv uh too dear
wowww amazing trishu….really enjoyable
Thanku anee
it was superb and don’t stop writing i understand your situation because my situation is also same like yours my entrance exam will be in next month and regular exam is also there and how i manage all these………………….it only i knows…………. i’m sorry mene kuch jyada hi bol diya sorry (holding one ear) sis samaj k maaf kar do………
so it’s ok when ever you free then write ff/os
i hope you write something next time……..bye……..
take care i hope now you feel little better
Sure
NO no that’s absolutely ok dear u really don’t need to be sorry infact I agree wd U
Bye
Its nice nd vrrry cute…
Thanku
Hey trisha kahaan se dundh kar laati ho amaz idea … basic chote chote nok jhok jisse hum ignore kar dete h u did very well nd wrote a os on it… Bechara kabir presentation k badle purpose karna pad raha h awsome bas isse dekh kar ek hi khyaal aaya awwww…. Lovvv u sweetie our cutie pie take care nd m waitting for ur 100 updates hehe..post nxt one os or fs..
Awwwww thanku so much niyu your words meant a lot u made my day dear
Luv uh loads
Trisha .. it was so cute OS.. i am feeling pity on Kabir.. Sanchi too bad yaar..bichare ko kitna pareshan kiya..
My Favourite part was
Kabeer- ok ok again !
“I began to live when u came in my life….
You got me changed ….
Nd ….. break time over saachi nd guys go back to work”
Saachi -(she was totally irritated at that time )- eeewwww kabeeer u know wht just ….. just marry your work ….. nd I don’t know if I would ever be able to change you a little bt U r still that khduus !
He gives her deadly glares !
Saachi- I am not afraid !
Hahaha..it was hilarious
Awwwww that was so sweet of you mitali! Luv uh loads dear
Its was very cute and amazing
Thanku
Wow soo cute dear
Thanku divya
Awwwww shoo cuteeee ??????? loved it… Ossm.. Jhakaass.. Amazing one… My OS queen you just nailed it
Awwww thanku so much jessica
Oh god Trisha ??? that was totally fab dear ???
Thanku so much ruwani
This is amazing yaar…….. Happy Navarati
Thankyou anu and some to you !
Fabulous story Yrr. Kabeer proposing Sanchi was amazing . He don’t know how to propose and trying to learn some cheesy line. I wish to some propose me like like kabeer propose in end..
Ohhhhhh God it was amazing
Thanku Alia hope so u get what I like ! Nd honestly I don’t believe in love in real life just reel !
O God I feel very lucky that I got a chance to comment on your story.. U r fabulous Trisha… Mere liye ish story se badhkar kuch nahi ho sakta…. Kaash rashmi mam ki jagah tum hoti toh serial ka manjar hi kuch aur hota… A standing ovation n salute to you… Lots of ? ? ? ? ? dear…
Oh my god I am on the ninth cloud now I can’t believe my eyes thanku so so much Anuradha for such a heart touching cmmnt dear
It was a really really suberb os yaar!!
Dil ki khwaisho ko koi kaise roke….
Hamare aasoon oo ko kaun soke….
Hamari tamanna toh aapka likha padne ki hai…. Par aapki aarzoo hume alvida kehne ki hai…. Aapki iss khata ko agar khata maan le toh kudh hi khata kar bethenge… Iss liye aaj se hum apko nahi rokenge!!! But always be in touch dear…. Just do this one favour on ur sis….. And the episode was really speechless thats why I m ur big fan….. Love u loads dear…..
Omg fab u made my day sweetie thanku so much nd s teddy hug for such love
It was a very sweet os. lovely
Thanku