heyyyy guys this is sanskriti back with another update I’m telling it first this update is really short…..plz maaf kardo I’m sorry ………….guys if u don’t like my ff please do inform me I will stop it here
and guys sorry as my English is really bad lets move towards update now
avoid grammatical and typo errors
SOUMYA:
Walking down the hospital I remember how Aai used to take care of me whenever I used to feel sick she herself became a doctor for me but what did I do I just can’t even take care of her . I know I was crying which my Aai doesnot like but she left me too …No No..she can’t leave me like that. Moving away from that creepy hospital which didn’t save my Aai I heard someone calling me …..who might be that……
Ya she is my Aai she is calling me…… the sweetness in her tone when she call my name is just precious for me. But the thought that I can’t hear her voice again made me feel worse than ever. Moving down the streets of Mumbai I realized this stupid pollution Ahh…!! This is one of the reason my Aai left me …At last I reached my place….in Mumbai which my Aai secretly builted for me without my knowledge. She want me to have a place in Mumbai of my name after her death. I went inside controlling my stupid tears which are not even stopping. Once entered my house thats it….tears of mine took control over me. I was crying …….
Sorry Aai I was crying which you didn’t like……..I broke my promise which I made u when papa passed away that I would never cry in any situation……But u were the one who broke the promise by leaving me ……… Now in this stupid world I’m single no one is their whom I can tell mine……..All my family members left me alone in this creepy world and they went away to have a peaceful life in paradise(heaven)……..Suddenly my eyes when on fruit basket which one of my stupid relatives brought for Aai when she was in hospital……..Now its of no use for me ….All my frustation came on that basket I just threw that basket on floor ………Then their I saw something useful for me at this moment……..KNIFE…….Yes!!!! it is really useful for me now …………Now I can’t really tolerate my sucking life………
I took the knife in my hand and their I saw my Aai ,papa,bhaiyaa near the door I thought they were waiting for me ………..Yes bhaiyaa ,Aai, papa I’m coming ……….saying this I CUT my wrist ……..I didn’t feel pain……..but I’m happy that I’m gonna meet my Dad and brother after a long time ……….Then I heard someone calling me again “SOUMYA…” who is this guy I thought ……..Then I got it’s my bhaiyaa who is calling me to come near him……Yes bhaiyaa I’m coming….. with that thought I closed my eyes
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PRECAP: soumya: bhaiyaa..!!
voice: yes soumya
What do you think did soumya die????
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okay guys I know this is really a short update and if u like it please drop ur comments……….And I’m writing POV for the first time so really wanna know did it come good…And I promise to give any shivika and gaurika scene in next epi… please comment guys I really want ur suggestions for my ff
13 Comments
Amazing
I bet she is hallucinating
VERY INTERSTING.you are a GOOD FF WRITTER Sanskrit.DON’T STOP WRITTING FF.I LIKE YOUR FF.
PLEASE POST NEXT EPISODE FAST.
Awesome . Waiting for next. But emotional too .
Waiting for the nxt update
Good one dear waiting for the next update.. To know about soumya..
Nyc
Don’t stop dear it’s awesome
Superrrrrrrrrrr….. Pls continue dr…. Don’t stopt it…. Waiting for next episode…..
Nyc
Nyc
Loved itv
Emotional.. Hope Shunya is alright…