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Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 8 (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys!
Maria here…..
Thank u so much fr cmmnting on prev prt…m so happy wid ur cmmnts…..big hug frm my side to all….. 🙂 🙂

N guys plzz wish me best of luck n do pray fr me cause my test are going to start within next days……

Well here is part 8…
Hope u lyk this also….!

Preciously: it WS revealed that shr loved sumo frm childhood……

———PART 8———-
NEXT DAY…..

—sumo cms downstairs all ready n kartik also gets ready they all leave fr Priya mansion—–

Priya welcomes them bt is surprised to c kartik there….
(Priya n sumo hug eaChOther tightly……)
S: hy mom…!! 😀
Pri: hy my sweeto…..!! Missed u very much …..
S: me tooo……….
P: cm let’s sit inside…..
—-They all chit chat fr a long tym n finally it’s dinner tym…..—–
They all sit on table……
K sees a pic of priya’s n man….he is hust keep staring at that pic n is not happy…
Priya’s cms n sees this…..
P: wo he WS my old boss…
K: ooh acha….(he is relieved)
Preeti slowly says to sumo…..: or daddy says that he don’t care…
—-both sis giggles—-
S: chup karke khana Kha…. 😀
—sumo WS abt to eat when she gets Khush call—–
She picks up….

S: hello Bol….
K in tensed voice: sumo ??!!
S concerned : wat happend Khush??
K: yr shr…..he…..
Kartik: wat happend sumo??
S: wat happened to him??
K: he fainted….!!!
—–sumo gets shock—-
Priya: sumo?
K: yr we all cm here to meet him n he suddenly fainted wat to do…we called doc….nir aunty is also nt here m very sacred…..
S: m coming…

—-sumo widout wasted a sec get up n strts to go—–
P: wat happend di ?? Where r u going….
S: shr fainted……I have to go……
K: we will cm wid u…..
S: no u guys carry on……

—she goes—-
Preeti thinks it’s a plan…..(n smiles)

Sumo reaches shr home……
S: Khush!!
A: doc came….
Meanwhile doc came out side frm room along with adi n rohit…..
S: doc how is he…?? Is he fyn??
D: he is okyy now bt he has 105 fever…..
—-all gets shocked—-
S: bt doc wat happened to him….
D: I think he take a lot od depression that’s why…..
—–sumo remembers yesterday meeting n all—–
S: will he be Oky ??
D: yes bt he needs to be careful…plz make sure he will nt take any type of depression it might be harmful fr him…..
S: don’t worry doc can I see him??
—doc nods—-
Adi: cm doc I will take u to ur car…..

They leave…..
Sumo goes to shr room….
—n others wait outside—
Ro strts to go bt ayesh stops him….

Preeti calls Khush….
K: hello…
P: wow yr….wat a plan…!! U r genius
K: wai..wait,..wait….wat plan..??
P: lying abt shr health… 😀
K: ooy it WS nt a plan shr is really ill behen…. 😮
P: wat…!!!!???? 😮
K: yes…..n u knw our plan is different I m happy that this happen ATLEAST they will get a little close bt stick to d plan…..!
P: ooohkkkk how is shr now…??
K: he is okyyy sumo is wid him….

—IN ROOM—
Sumo goes to shr…who is sleeping on bed…she checks fever n it’s high…
—she goes outside n takes a cloth n water in bowl—
She cms inside…n sits beside him on bed…..
—-she touches his forhead—
S: I knw….tumne kis cheez ki tension li hai….
(She cresses his face)
She drowns the cloth in bowl then squeeze it then when she was abt to keep d bandage z(gheeli parti) on shr forhead she remembers….d words…
“I don’t want to c ur face…..stay away frm me fr sm days”
S: I said these words to u n now…..c m here…..

—she sighs n keeps d bandage on shr forhead—–
—whole ni8 she do the same thing—

IN MORNING:
Shr wakes up his fever is low now…….
—he gets up bt is weak……….

He goes outside n finds everyone sleeping….he smiles…….
Adi is sleeping on couch, Khush is sleeping on head on adi shoulder….
Rohit is sleeping half on couch half on carpet….
Ayesh is laying on couch sleeping……
Shr pulls blankets on them……..
Shr: sumo……… Wo nai aai…….(he gets sad)

He goes to kitchen….
N finds a cup cover with plate….he removed d plate n finds Kaarha in it…
N also a chit wid that…
“Drink it”
He quickly remembers that it must be sumo who did this…

FLASHBACK:
Shr has low fever n flu…..
S cms wid Kaarha: ye le Kaarha peee le…
Shr: yr how many tyms I told u not to bring this sada hoa Kaarha (he makes faces)
N u never listen…..
S: hahhah n how many tyms I told u not to argue wid me on this n u also never listen…..anyways shut up n drink it….
Shr: no………
S: drink….(she forcefully makes him drink)
Shr: bhindi…!!!
S: hawww u call me bhindi…now c today u will only eat bhindi…
Shr: no..nooo I mean gulab jamun ras gulla…!!!
S: chup..!
(They both laughs)

PRESENT:
—-shr remembers this n smiles—–
Shr: u didn’t stay with me bt glad to knw that u still care abt me…..
(He drinks it)
Then he goes to garden n sits on d chair….
It’s 7:05 am……
He enjoys d weather…..
N reminisces his n sumo’s moments…..

Sumo is on d way back home…..
S: I think I should inform at home…..they must be worried….
—she checks her mob in bag bt can’t find it…..—-
S: ooohoooo where is it….
—she again checks bt can’t find it—
S: ufffff kahan cha…………….
(She suddenly remembers that she forget it in shr room)
—-she stops d car—-
S: OMG…..!!! How can I be so careless….aahhhh
(She sees d tym it’s 7:10)
S: no…no he must be awaken….wat to do……..
(she thinks fr a moment n sighs)

Scene shifted to shr house…..
Sumo gets out her car n enters in d house….
S: plz…plzzz shr na Utha ho…..
(She goes n sees everyone’s sleeping)
S: ufff ye yahan shr ko dekhne aaye hain ya sone??…….anyways…….
(She goes to shr room n finds him missing…….)
(She wonders where is he..??)
—-then she sees hr mob…..picks it up…n strts to go….bt stops near kitchen—–

She goes in kitchen n finds that Karhaaa WS nt there…..she understands…..
SCENE SHIFTS….
—-sumo WS looking at shr….(who is in thoughts) behind d door…..—–
S: he is awaken…….how is he now..?? (She thinks)
—she sees weather it’s dark—-
S: …it will be raining soon……bt wat is this duffer doing here..?? In garden abhi abhi Utha hai itne TEZZ bhukkar se……sakoon se baith nai Sakta kya…???
—-then she luks at the group—-
S: n these….ufffff ye log sone ke liay hi aain hain kya??
(S goes near Khush)
—n tries to wake her up—-

S: Khush…..wake up,…..(slowly)
K: shut up adi…. Sone de…..
S: hain adi….???? Ahhh…..
—–she gets irritated——
She agin luks at shr……
S: or ab is duffer ko kaise samjhaon Mai…….uff….jane do jab ye rest nai kar raha …….is ko fikar nai hai……toh Mai kyun fikar Karun….
—she leaves—-

Shr feels sumo’s presence he luks back bt there WS no one…..he wonders…
Shr: how is it possible….did sumo came….??
—-he goes to check inside—-
Suddenly it’s strts raining………
Shr luks outside: ooh god thank god I came inside warna toh Mai phir se Beemer parh jata……
—he wakes everyone up—–
Shr: oooohhhh bheeeee wake up u all it’s 7:45 want to sleep more…???
K: kya hai yr…….kabhi tu kabhi adi….
Adi while yawning : ooohooooo wat me…?? I WS sleeping yr….hmmm wat a sleep…
Ayesh n rohit also wakes up…….
A: wow it’s raining outside!! 😀
R: Han toh???
A: shut up….!
—they all then ask shr abt his health—-
Shr: m okyyy now….toh breakfast Karen???

All sit on breakfast table……
Adi is non-stop eating…..
K: ufff adi u r such a bhukkar…..
Shr smiles: sumo Bhi yahi keh……………..(he stops)
—-ayesha notices this—–
Rohit pats on shr shoulder…..
Chill bro……nothing will happen……
Shr: yes yr….infact m happy that (he remembers kaadha scene)…ATLEAST she care a little bit……
——Khush stops eating n luks at shr——
K: little bit..????? ……..A lot…!!!!!! 😀
—shr looks on—-

——SCREEN FREEZES ON SHR FACE——-

Precap: stuck at farm house….shr gets closer to sumo n tell her that he don’t love her anymore…..he wants his FRND back not his love…..

So guys how WS d ep…??
WS it good or I just bored u ??

Sorry if so……..
Well thank u so much fr read it…

Ques: wat u think shr is saying truth?? Will sumo believe him?? Forgive him??

Plz cmmnt guys I really need it……n silent readers (don’t stay silent)

Till then…by by…!!!!
Love u all…!

Marie

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