Hello friends! How r u all? I m here with more surprises and romance… Without wasting time
Let’s start the story
Scene 1
Party was over n all the guests already made exit from the mansion including our trio… They all went near by the road n waited for taxi… Suddenly, veer comes in front of them…
Veer(came by running) : hello beautiful ladies
Isha excitedly : hello!!!
Veer : hello sanchi ji
Sanchi : namaste! I didn’t recognized u… Who r u?
Veer: aapne mujhe nahi pehchana… Just now only we met in the party … We danced together..i must say u dance really well…
Pragya : kyun be? Why should she remember u?? . Tum kya Trump ke bete ho jise woh yaad rakhegi….
Sanchi : sorry…she is like this only.. By the way u didn’t tell your name?
Veer ( patting his head) : sorry!! My name is Veer Singh..i came from noida to Mumbai only to fulfill my dreams…
Isha : Wow!! Which dream?? I only have one dream ie to marry with a handsome guy like u…
Pragya : abeo dhakkan chup kar!! Jab bhi dekho iska shaadi ka drama chalu ho jaata hai…
Veer : sanchi ji! U sings so well Like a cuckoo… If u don’t mind can I ask u something??
Sanchi : yes
Veer: will you be my friend?? (forwarding his hands towards sanchi)
Sanchi : look veer!! I don’t make friends with strangers…
Veer : we talked already since half an hour.u know my name and me too… Then what’s the problem??
Isha : please sanchi!! Dosti hi toh maang raha hai…Bank balance thodhi na maang raha hai..
Sanchi (hesitantly) : OK
Veer: friends ( again forwarding his hands)
Both sanchi n veer handshaked… Ishagya too handshaked with veer…
(Sanveer’s closeness made kabir jealous…. It’s enough I can’t see sanchi with anyone… From his heart ” She is mine”… He quickly rushed by car towards sanchi… )
Kabir (in weird voice ) : sanchi, ishaga.. Come I will drop you home.. .u know girls are not safe outside especially at this time. Come sit in the car
Sanchi : sir, thanks for asking but we will go by taxi..
Kabir : sanchi u didn’t hear me properly … Come fast n sit in the car
Veer : OK sanchiji, pragyaji , isha ji… Bye bye n take care..
. We will meet soon…
Trio waved bye to veer n sat in the car…
Ishagya on the backseat n sanchi with kabir in the front seat…
(bechara kabir in full jealousy avatar.. Questions sanchi.. )
Kabir : sanchi!!! Who was that boy? How do you know him? U were dancing with him only in the party ? Is he someone special for u? Tell me sanchi
Isha : OMG too many questions… Give her atleast a chance to speak.. U r going like bullet train…. How will she answer??
Kabir : sorry
Sanchi : shut up isha!! Nothing like that kabir… I just met him today itself… N ya, I don’t have any special person in my life…
Kabir : sorry!! (but in his mind “ladoo fut rahe the “)
(suddenly due to fog, kabir was not able to drive properly.. .And the car got stucked in a big pothole… )
Pragya :satyanash.. Now how we will reach home.
Isha : hmm… I need beauty sleep otherwise who will marry me..
Pragya patted isha’s head n whispered : look what’s happening??? Wow they r looking so cute…
( kanchi were lost in each others eyes… They had an intense eye lock…. )
Kabir (in his mind) : kaash yeh waqt yahi tham Jaycee..
Sanchi (in her mind) : he is so caring especially when he sees someone else with me… He becomes more cute
Bg song plays
Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane
Sajda ..
Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
sajda tera sajda,
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda,
(karun mein tera sajda)
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
(karun mein tera sajda)
Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon
Ranjhna… naino ke teer chal gaye
Sajna… saanson se dil sil gaye
Palkon mein chupa loon, oh tera sajda karoon
Seenay mein samaa loon, oh din reain karoon
Palkon mein chupa loon, seenay mein samaa loon
Tere ang ang rang mera bole
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda,
(karun mein tera sajda)
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
(karun mein tera sajda)
Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon
Veliya kya hua jo dil kho gaya
Mahiya ishq mein khuda mil gaya
Zara aakh se pila de, oh tera sajda karoon
Zara khwaab sajaa de, oh din reain karoon
Zara aakh se pila de, zara khwaab sajaa de
Mere hontoon pe mann tera bole
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda,
(karun mein tera sajda)
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
(karun mein tera sajda)
Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon
Ohhh… Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda,
Din reain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Rak vaar karoon meri jaan lut doon…
The song ends
By seeing their intense eyelock, pragya n isha giggled… They sang ” hum tum ek car mein bandh ho aur raasta bhool jaye)
Kanchi came to their senses by hearing ishagya’s song..
Both became embarrassed… They try to steal glances… After some time, kabir successfully took out his car from the pothole n drove…
Scene 2
Anand : ha ha! (yes! Yes!) ..he shouted… I have done this… I didn’t want a girl to be born… I ended a son for handling my business empire …
Note : gayatri gave birth to a dead child which Jaya is unaware..
Jaya : shame on u Mr malhotra… u r disgusting… how could u do this? Now, why u want your daughter? U want to kill her just like her mother…
Anand : no… please Jaya… How can I do this… I don’t know where is savitri? I request you to please give me my daughter… She is my blood…he bent down on his knees n cried..
Jaya fumed: OK u will get your daughter in one condition…first bring my son n give to me… I m giving you only two days time…
Jaya went n anand became tensed…..
Scene 3
A small cottage is shown where savitri is still lying unconscious…
Anonymous : mam u here?
Kusum : yes, I want to know when she will regain conscious..
Doctor : medicines r not working properly… If this continues, then there will be no chance of her survival…
Kusum: no doctor… She can’t die without giving my answers…she only can solve the mystery about my lost son…. Save her at any cost doctor… Please
Precap : sanchi comes to recording studio…. Isha sings ‘I m in love ‘ ‘I m in love ‘.thinking about veer…
OK guys! If u liked it then please comment… Once again, Thanks for reading my story ….if I commit any mistakes then pardon me…
With love
Anu
32 Comments
Anuradha dear …what scenes u have created . Jealously part was superb.
Jaya and Malhotra back story is also interesting..overall a fab episode.. waiting for the precap part..post soon
Thank you very much khamoshi dear for your lovely comments… I like kabir in jealous avatar…
Me too ??
Beautiful story
Thank u anu…
Hey anu m also like kabir in jealously nd also in confused avataar he lok more cute nd handsome..hehe btw epi is mindblowing awsome as ususal…i think so rahul is jaya’s son nd veer kabir r bro nd kusum’s sons hehee just a tukka nothing else post nxt asap dear
Yes!! U r absolutely right… I will try to focus only kanchi… Kaash serial mein bhi yeh pair hota toh main khushi k maare dance Karne lagti….
Aww , it’s so cute & lovely epidode. Amazing, khidkitod, awesome update & jealousy part is superb. So sorry for late comment as u know i am busy with my exams . Waiting for next one. Do update soon. Lots of love & a big hug to u.
thank u dear.. After reading your comments I feel very very very happy… Arey yaar no need to say sorry… Exams r very important than ff…. Love u a lot…
Awww amazing dear I loved it to the core ur plot suspense going on plans as it has many little mysteries that are yet to be solved ! Saachis mom I guess is wd kabeers mom ; more drama amazing ! Superb ! Keep going dear !
Luv uh loads !
thank u Trisha for loving it n giving me intense support… I m very glad to know that u liked my story… thank you once again dear…. love u too dear… Take care n enjoy the puja
Awesome epi as always Anu ??? now this story is a bit complecated with all these parents and their children. So my guesses are like this. Since Rahul is Jaya’s son and Kabir’s Kusum’s son, Veer might be Kabir’s brother and Kusum’s lost son ??? if so both brothers will fall for one girl and that will be a smashing twist ??? good in dramas and ffs and all, but scary in real life ??? anyway don’t know what you have waiting for us but eargerly waiting to read the next part ???
thank u ruwani for loving my ff…. ya u r right, but kanchi is the lead pair of my ff… Veer ka dil main tootne nahi dungi… Uska partner bhi ready hai… Usko bhi dulha bana hi dungi…. Hehehe
I loved Kabir getting jealous
So Veer n Isha will be paired but I think there would be love rectangle?.
Plz post next epi ASAP
Thank u dear… It will be parallelogram (hehe just kidding)…. I will try to post soon…
Wowwww superbbb episode Anu and really loved kanchi scenes and kabir’s jealousy ….really excited for new twist and I guess kabir and veer are bros anyways ek dum dhakad episode!!
Thanks abhilasha for your sweet comments… U always inspire me with your writings…. Keep supporting dear… Love u yaar
Amazing
Thanks amnaa for your love dear…
Amazing
thanks Alia …keep commenting…
Anu dear, kya yaar……..u just left me speechless…….mere paas koi alfaaz hi nahi bacha tumhaare tareef karne ke liye………..amazing, khidkitod, faadoo, historic,epic……….too good yaar, specially Kabir’s jealousy was just osm………luv u a lot sweetiee………
o riya thank u very much… Itni tarif mat Karo pagal ho jaungi yaar… Lots of love
It was really amazing…waiting for sanchis reaction when she will know about malhotra being her father…best part of story is everyones child is exchanged(kidding)…but i just want to break malhotras face right now,such a low mentality..
Thanks yaashi for your lovey dovey comments… If u want to break malhotra’s face then u will need a ? dear (hahaha just joking)… In the serial, I just don’t want to see his saddu face….. Thanks once again for loving the story…
anu it was mind blowing ff and specially kabir was jealous when sanchi talked with veer it was so cute scene update next one soon dear…
So sweet of u dhruti that u loved my ff… It’s like I m wearing a big medal…. Thanks alot for commenting sweetie! May God bless u n give all the happiness n erase all your sorrow
thank you anu
Wow Anu dear you again left me speechless with your fabulous epi…it was great epi …loved it totally…love you loads and post ASAP….❤❤❤
Thank u sooooooooooooooooo much…. Lots of love to u too…. Wish u a happy durga puja….
Wowww Anu… Amazing dear… Love triangle… Ossm.. Fabulous .. Brilliant concept.. Keep going.. Love you❤
Thanks Jess… I was missing you yaar… Love uyaar