Hii everyone! Anu is back with some more chatpata part of my story… Thanks to all my readers who loved my ff and gave sweet comments.. A heartiest thanks to TU who has given me many friends… In reality, I don’t have friends… It’s a long story I will tell u later… My sweet sister khamoshi aka mitali n my dearest friend niyu.. Love u both from the bottom of my heart… This part is dedicated to u and all my sweethearts…aise hi pyaar dete rehna…
OK I’m wrapping my bakwas now… Let’s move to the story…
Recap : kanchi’s closeness in a silent room.. Gayatri was heartbroken after knowing a big secret of her life.
(I must say guys, I want to kill that malhotra in sdch. I just hate him.. All bcoz of him, sanchi, kabir, veer, Jaya …everyone’s life has become a joke)
Let’s start today’s episode
Scene 1
In kk studio,
Kabir was sitting in the chair n thinking about sanchi’s simplicity, innocence etc n etc… He closes his eyes but is shocked to see sanchi… OMG what’s happening with me? How can I think about her? That girl cannot capture my brain… Even though I want to go far then why I can’t?
No kabir u can’t do this… I cannot fall weak due to a girl… Noways.. He picked up the photoframe which was on his table… Shraddha, I loved u but u didn’t respect my love… Till now I am not able to forget u why? After knowing u r a fraud.. U just loved me for my money..
He angrily throws the photo frame and it breaks into pieces.. After that, he banged the door and went out…
Scene 2
Malhotra’s guestroom
Veer is sleeping in the bed.. Ajay tried several times to wake up veer but all in vain…
Ajay murmurs : kaliyug ka kumbhkaran only knows how to sleep… Even original kumkharan will be failed compare to this nalayak…an idea striked to his mind… He quickly takes out his shocks n kept near veer’s nose..ab majaa aayega bacchu khusbudar moje ka kamaal
Veer (jumped from the bed) : yak! Yeh kya hai? He shouts Ajay I will not spare u…how dare u to keep that dirty socks near my nose?
Ajay: I m calling u from half an hour… And u r sleeping like an asur…
Veer throws the pillow at Ajay : shut up! Bcoz of u I can’t meet my sanchi..
Ajay : Ho gaya anarkali k Salim… Now please go and get ready… We have to go somewhere..
Veer pouts: but where?
Ajay: actually my phone got exchanged with pragya ji… So I have to return her.. She called me at insuria cafeteria at sharp 1 pm
Veer(excitedly) : that means my sanchi will also come… Hip hip hurray! He sings ( pehla nasha pehla khumar, naya pyaar hai, Naya intezaar)
Ajay pats veer’s head : Ho gaya tera Mr Romeo or anything else is left? I don’t wanna be late.. Get ready and come soon.. I’m waiting for you in the lawn..
Veer : ok
He quickly freshens up n wore a blue denim with yellow shirt.. I’m ready..
Scene 3
Kusum left the place where she kept savitri.. Kabir was driving his car but he was constantly thinking about sanchi.. Suddenly at traffic, when the signal was red, he saw his mother in a taxi.. He thought ” how did maa come to India? ” she didn’t inform me about this.. I must follow her..
He followed his mother and he overtake kusum’s taxi… He comes out of his car n called kusum to come out
Kabir : maa ! U here
Kusum : yes
Kabir : but why maa? Why u r in India? I wanna know
Kusum : I came to meet my friend (stealing glances)
Kabir : no maa! U r telling lie.. He confronts his mother to speak truth
Kusum panics n tells kabir the whole truth… Kabir beta ” I came here for your younger brother ”
Kabir is shocked n happy : what? I have a brother? Where is he?
Kusum: usi sach k baare mei mujhe pata lagana hai..
Scene 4
Sanchi to ishagya: where r u going?
Pragya : yaar my phone got exchanged with some chaparganju.. So I m going to get my phone
Isha: I m going to meet my prince charming
They hugged sanchi n waved her bye
Sanchi now alone in her room thought about the moments she spent with kabir… She blushes ” what’s happening to me? It never happened before… I think I m in love with him.. Yes yes I love him.. “I can’t live without him… I have to convey my feelings to him before its too late…
Scene 5
Xyz cafeteria
Ishagya were waiting for Ajay…
Isha : come let’s order something..i m feeling very hungry
Pragya : abeo bhukkad! Anytime sirf khana khana khana… Here I m upset n u r thinking about food!!
Isha pouts : OK I will not eat anything meri maa
Suddenly, Ajay and veer comes..
Isha waves her hand : hello handsome
Ajay : hello deviyon! Sorry for coming late.. This Mumbai’s traffic
Veer: hello isha ji, pragya ji.. Sanchi ji nahi aayee
Pragya : kyu be? It’s your marriage that she will come?
Veer : no nothing like that…
Ajay : pragya ji! This is your phone.. Sorry for the problem u have to face bcoz of me
Pragya : it’s OK… Hota hai kabhi kabhi
Isha : veer! U r looking cool
Veer: thanks for the compliment..
Four of them ordered something to eat.. They chit chat and laughed…
Ajay : pragya ji! Can I become your friend?
Pragya: OK itna keh rahei ho then friends..
They handshakes with each other…
Isha: tomorrow u both come to our home for lunch… In this way we will get to know more about u..
Veer n Ajay : ok
After lots of chitchat, they waved bye to each other and went In opposite directions..
Precap: kanchi’s private moments… A girl in western attire lands on Mumbai…
Who’s that girl? Any guesses
OK friends! I can’t write now.. My fingers are tired… If u liked it then please please please drop your comments as well as suggestions… All are welcomed… Take care my sweet friends n enjoy the seventh day of navratri
” Happy mahasaptami”
With love
Anu
31 Comments
Happy mahasaptami to you and this ff was super duper but update next one soon(long update if u have time then only)…
Thanks dhruti dear… Today is maha ashtami…sorry sweetheart that my update was short but promise next time I will make it longer… Anything for you all… Love u a lot
Awsome episode anu nd mera bas chale to sabse pehle is seriel k maker and especially writter ka dimag ka dahi karke uska bhurta bana dun usne seriel me hi nahi hum audience ka bhi jina haram kar rakha h…per kar nahi sakti…hehehe…chaparganju hahaha…sahi pakde hain …mindblowing jhakkass fadoo chapi nd i think shradha is that girl may be…just a tukka..post nxt asap..happy navratri jai mata di maa bless u take care
Thanks Niyaa for the compliment… U r right this hopeless producers making the serial totally waste…. Kaash hum sab wahaa hote toh saare script change karwakar kanchi ko ek kar dete…
I suppose that is Shraddha.
It was nice epi though I am confused about Kabir’s feelings for Sanchi.
Nyway plz post next epi ASAP.
Don’t worry sweetie…. Kabir ko jald hi realise hoga ki woh bhi sanchi ko love karta hai…. Thanks a lot for the lovely comments
Same 2 u sis.
It was awesome episode. Nd I think the girl is shraddha. Pls unite kaanchi soon .nd if u don’t mind then pls make ff a little bit long (if u have tym otherwise it’s ur wish) ??
Thanks priyanshi for your sweet comments… Don’t worry kanchi will unite but with some twists….
Happy Durgashtami dear(bcz its already 28th Sept.)………..haye!!!!………behna tu kya likhti hai??? ek dum khidkitod episode tha…………….too good yaar………..& I just hope kaanchi ki prem kahani mein koi kabaab main haddi na bane………….btw dear, u saw bhootu today???? kya tashan hai Suchi aur Kinshuk ke beech……..& bhootu ne aaj jo kaand kiya…wow….has haske lotpot ho rahi thi main……….too good yaar……….
Thanks riya dear… Same to u too. Tere se hi sikha hai yaar.. Tu ich aapun ki inspiration hai… Bhootu k karname se bechari suchi fas gayee… Love u a lot
matlab, kuch bhi………..ye credit sirf aur sirf tumhara hai dear………u r a great writer, dekhna bahut jald tum ek badi famous writer ban ne waali ho……mark my words………..& as far as Bhootu is concerned, Gopal hai na……..woh kuch bura nahi hone denge Suchi ke saath……hehe……… luv u Shona……….
Nahi yaar sach mein.. U r my inspiration… Before I was just a silent reader but after seeing your beautiful stories… I learned many things from it…. Main aur writer, tum bhi na yaar… Kaha Main aur kaha hamare sabhi doston aur behno k writings… They are amazing in every thing… Mujhe toh abhi bhi bohut kuch sikhna baaki hai….
Yaa gopal will surely help suchi… Bhootu bhi toh hai na uska saath dene k liye…
Amazing
Thanks amnaa… Love u dear
Outstnding…#
thanks tumpamoni…. I’m very happy that u liked the story
Superbbbbb
Thanks a lot alia dear..
Amazing episode Anu… thanks to u dear for loving us..u don’t have to say thanks to me bcoz i am being selfish….itni achhi sister mile to kaun selfish naa ho..jiski sister itni talented ho uske liye itna to banta hai ?.
Btw guess hi karna hai to..shayad woh ladki SHRADHHA ho sakhti hai. (Feeling like ab jealousy dekhne main maza aayega).
Aur Kanchi strike of love…scenes were outstanding..lots of love to my little siso
Thanks a lot dear… Itni acchi comment padhne k baad mera din rocking ho gaya..
Hey anu this was super se bhi awesome as usual ! U rocked it nailed totally
I am madly in love wdbur writings dear !
Luv uh
Keep going !
Thanks Trisha dear… Getting a compliment from you is like a dream… Someone pinch me… I can’t believe that u loved my ff…tumhari Baat sunkar mera dil garden garden Ho gaya..
Thanks for such amazing episode…. i loved every line of it and veer ajay scene was so funny and pragyas dialouges are superb as usual… and please unite kanchi soon….
Thanks yaashi a lot for loving it.. Your comments made my day… Have patience sweetheart I will surely unite kanchi
Hey anu dear Sorrrryyy for late but dear………..it was realllly reallly Outstanding updates dear…………You rocked it…………kisi se kam nahi ho tum…………Mindblowing…keep writing….luv you Anu dear.
Anee dear thank you very much… Please no need to say sorry dear… I’m glad that u loved it… I promise I’ll write it more nicely….
Omg super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode here veer loving saanchi there saanchi and kabir is loving each other it’s awesome super fabulous fantastic yaar please update soon can’t wait
thanks divya dear…. u just stolen my heart with your sweet sweet sweet comments….
I will try to update faster… Lots of love sweetie….
Oye hoye …..veer air ajay ka kumbhkaran scene was hilarious and loved it !!! Think that its shraddha!!
Yaar abhilasha tumhe hi main miss kar rahi thi… I’m very happy that u liked it dear… I’m missing your ff yaar…. Thanks for your lovely comments sweetie.. Love u a lot
Awesome… Amazing .. Fabulous one dear… Socks wala part was super funny… It was truly brilliant