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Pyaar ka Afsana ~~ Qubool Hai (Episode 20)

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Episode 20

Aahil and Sanam’s first outing !

Sanam is standing infront of Aahil .

Sanam – “ Now What ?”

Aahil – “ We are going out “.

Sanam – “ Why ?”

Aahil – “ I have some shopping, you are going to come with me “.

Sanam – “ But .. “.

Aahil – “ There is no time for your but ! Just follow my orders “.

Sanam (thinks) – “Why is taking me for his shopping? I don’t get this person “.

Sanam goes behind Aahil. Aahil throws car key towards her , she catches it . Aahil gets impressed. Sanam gets into the driver’s seat. Aahil takes back seat .

Aahil- “ Make sure that you drive smoothly.. there shouldn’t be any unwanted jerks “.

Sanam – “ Okay “.

Aahil smiles seeing her irritated.

Market , Bhopal .

Seher , Haya and Afeeza has come out for grocery shopping and for shopping some embroidery threads and beads.

It’s hot outside. They comes out after purchasing threads and beads for Haya . Then they goes to grocery shop and shops everything essential . They comes out . They takes out their umbrella to save them from scorching heat of sun. They are sweating.

Seher – “ Its so hot .. let’s drink something cool “.

Afeeza – “ Yeah… nice idea “.

Haya signs – “ Okay “.

They goes to near by shop. They order for cool drinks . They waits for it .

Rehaan comes out from the shop near by . He turns his head and notices Seher ( mistakes her to be Sanam ) .

Seher , Afeeza and Haya is drinking their cool drink. Rehaan walks towards them.

Rehaan – “ Hai Sanam”.

Seher gets shocked. Haya and Afeeza gets surprised.

Rehaan – “ What happened? Why are all staring like this ?”

Seher – “ Nothing.. Re.. Rehaan ! Haya , Afeeza.. meet my colleague Rehaan .. Rehaan .. this is Haya .. my sister.. this is Afeeza .. my friend “.

Rehaan – “ Oho .. Hai  Haya  .. Hai Afeeza “.

Afeeza – “ Hai “.

Seher – “ Came for shopping? “

Rehaan – “ I came to a shop to get my camera lens clean “.

Seher – “ Oho .. you are interested in photography too “.

Rehaan – “ Nothing like that … I just click some when I feel so “.

Seher – “ Even I like to click photographs “.

Afeeza (thinks) – “ What’s happening ? He addressed her as Sanam .. but she didn’t corrected him .. she speaking to him like she knows him very well”.

Rehaan – “ You all came for Shopping? “

Seher – “ Yes.. some grocery shopping.. we are done with it . We were about to leave . Since it is hot outside we thought to have a cold drink “.

Rehaan- “ Yeah.. it’s hot today “

Haya and Afeeza looks each other being confused.

Seher – “ Okay Bye Then “.

Rehaan- “ Okay Bye “.

Rehaan turns to go but comes back. Seher gets shocked.

Rehaan- “ Iam Sorry.. I forgot to ask. Should I drop you all ? “.

Seher (thinks) – “ Does he know that Sanam has gone for work ? “

Afeeza – “No thanks .. I remember that I have to buy something else …”.

Seher – “Yeah… I have to go back for work. I took a small break in between”.

Rehaan- “ Oho .. Yeah I forgot Aahil bhai had asked you to work today also.. Then I will drop you to his house “.

Seher (thinks) – “ So he had forgot about it , why did I ? “.

Afeeza gets a message from Sanam .

Message reads as – ‘ Iam struck with his stupid shopping ‘.

Afeeza messages- ‘ Where ?’

Sanam – ‘ That Mall near that open market . Iam getting confused how to go in this parking area is too big . Are you all done with shopping?‘

Afeeza – ‘ Yes ‘

Seher (thinks) – “ I will ask him to drop me outside Aahil’s house , then I escape from there “.

Seher – “ Oka.. “.

Afeeza – “ No need of it na , Afterall you have to go to shopping mall near by .. as your boss is  there .. isn’t it Sanam ?”.

Seher looks her and Afeeza signs to do as she says . Seher nods her head .

Seher – “ Yes .. “.

Rehaan- “ Oho .. Aahil Bhai brought you for shopping?  That sounds strange “.

Seher – “ He is a strange man , obviously his acts will strange too “.

Rehaan smile .

Rehaan-  “Okay .. so you both ?“.

Afeeza- “We will go by auto. Bye! “.

Rehaan – “ Okay Bye “.

Haya nods her head too. She smiles but looks Afeeza with confused face .

Rehaan leaves . Seher relaxes. Afeeza and Haya looks her suspiciously. Seher smiles.

Seher tells them whole story . Afeeza and Haya looks her.

Haya signs – “ I can’t imagine what will happen if Sanam gets to know about all this !”

Afeeza – “ Seher , have you lost your mind ?”

Seher – “ It just happened … I hope Sanam  doesn’t get to know about this “.

At shopping mall ,

Finally, Sanam reaches the place where Aahil is waiting for her.

Aahil – “ What were you doing ? Did you a new parking lot before parking? “.

Sanam – “ I got confused with way , afterall this is so huge … every shop looks similar “.

Aahil – “ Are you coming to a mall for first time ?”

Sanam – “ Yes. To such a huge mall. I have visited a mall in Punjab that too with my sister . Just a single time , it’s so costly. But that wasn’t huge like this “.

Aahil – “ Malls in small town are mostly lesser in size . Now let’s go “.

Sanam walks with him . She is looking around as it is very much new to her. Aahil stops and looks her . Sanam remember him saying (yesterday )to keep one arm distance from him . She steps back and keeps the distance.

Sanam – “ Is it okay ?”

Aahil (thinks) – “ I totally forgot about it , she is remembering it still “.

Aahil walks towards escalator. As he is about to step in , he turns back . Sanam looks confused and seems to be doubtful about the escalator.

     

She looks him . Aahil waits there.

Sanam comes to him.

Sanam – “ You go in this , I will take stairs or lift “.

Aahil – “ Why ?”

Sanam – “ That’s better “.

Aahil – “ You are not used to escalator, right ?”

Sanam nods .

Aahil – “ Its Okay, Come now . It’s not tough, I will instruct you how to use this “.

Sanam – “ Why waste your energy? It’s okay , I will take .. “.

Aahil (interrupts) – “ Oho really.. so that you can get lost here again ? Now stop giving excuses and do as I say . Hold the handle and step into the step coming “.

Sanam reluctantly does it but she withdraws her hand and steps back in fear . Aahil look her . Sanam looks him with a puppy face. He feels her emotion .

Aahil – “ Sanam , Listen to me ,there is nothing to worry “.

Sanam – “ What if I slips from this ?”

Aahil – “ Iam there with you , I won’t let that happen, trust me “.

Sanam – “ How can I trust after that morning incident? “.

Aahil remembers catching her when she slipped from the ladder and putting her down all of a sudden. Sanam is looking the escalator with fear.

Aahil shows his hand towards her.

( Junoon Tere Ishq ka song played )

She looks him. He signs her to keep her on his hand. But she stands being confused. Aahil hold her hand .

He instruct her to step in along with him while keeping her other hand over the handlebars . She does the same . As they steps in , she closes her eyes and holds his hand tightly. Aahil looks her . Then she opens her eyes slowly. She looks around and she relaxes as she safe. As they reach next floor , Aahil instruct her to step out . She does it fastly but she slips . But he hold her hand firmly and protects her from falling. They exchange a look. 

Sanam stands properly. She relaxes .

Sanam – “ Finally !”

Aahil – “ Are you now okay ?”

Sanam – “ Yes…. this one is nice “.

Aahil – “ So now will you leave my hand ?”

Sanam looks at her hand holding his hand. She takes her hand immediately. She feels embarrassed. Aahil walks and she follows him.

He goes to a shop and she goes with him. He takes many shirts and gives to Sanam  hold them . Sanam’s both hands are filled with shirts . She finds it difficult to hold many . But still manages.

Sanam – “ Why 2 shirts of same kind ?”.

Aahil- “ Shirts of 2 different size , just to find out which suits perfect. Now come , I have to trail them “.

Sanam goes behind him . On the way to trail room she checks his shirts. As he opens trail room , she stops. She gives him few of a particular size .

Sanam – “ I think this will be perfect fit “.

Aahil – “ How do you know ?”

Sanam – “ I feel so seeing your normal shirts “.

Aahil – “ Don’t pretend like you know everything “.

Sanam – “ Why don’t you try first before taunting me ? My observations don’t go wrong and saying it by observing you “.

Aahil – “ You observe me ?”

Sanam – “ I mean when you said about size …, mmm.. since I iron your shirt … that’s it “.

Aahil looks her but she gets embarrassed and she turn to other side . He takes the set she asked him to take. He goes inside. Sanam touches her head thinking about her blunder.

Sanam (thinks) – “ Will he take me in a wrong sense ? Oho .. me and my blunders. What happened to me ? As I started working with this man , Iam doing blunders “.

Aahil tried them and gets surprised seeing them all perfect on him.

Aahil (thinks) – “ Not bad ! Nice observation and judgement… So fast ! Impressive!”.

He comes out and ask her to give shirts of other size . He pretends like the one she gave him wasn’t perfect. She gives him . He closes the door but he doesn’t try them . He smiles naughtily. She waits for him. He comes out . He keeps the last one there in a basket .

Aahil- “ Lets go , Come with the first ones“.

Sanam smiles as her judgement turned out right. But he doesn’t tell her anything more . They move towards the billing counter. Sanam is standing behind him. Aahil then notices a lady in formals and then looks Sanam . Then he turn back and think . Sanam doesn’t mind him much.

Aahil then calls a salesman and ask Sanam to handover his shirts to him . She does it .

He comes out of the line .

Aahil ( to salesman ) – “ Just keep it aside now , I will be back “.

Aahil ( to Sanam ) – “ Come with me !”.

Sanam follows him. He reaches bears ladies section. She gets confused.

Sanam (thinks) – “ Maybe for his Sisters “.

He walks towards ladies formals section .

Sanam – “ Nazia and Shazia doesn’t wear formals … them for whom? Maybe for his girlfriends .. that’s possible “.

Aahil checks few and then turn towards her.

Aahil ( casually)  – “ What is your size ?”

Sanam gets shocked. Her mouth opens and her eyes widens.

Aahil- “ What happened? “

Sanam – “ What did you ask ?”

Aahil – “ Your size ?”

Sanam looks him suspiciously.

Aahil – “ Don’t you yours ? “

Sanam feels shy and angry.

Aahil (whispers) – “ I don’t think she will open her mouth now . I will see it myself “.

Sanam is completely clueless. Aahil looks some and takes out 3 formal dresses.

He gives it to her. Sanam gets shocked.

Aahil – “ Just go and try them “.

Sanam – “ Why ?”

Aahil – “ To know whether it is perfect or not “.

Sanam stands there in a confused state without any expression. Aahil finds her weird. He see another one and gives it too. She looks it.

Aahil – “ Its Okay , go try it in your home then. I think it will be fit perfect . Just stand properly and keep it over you “.

Sanam does it as he ask her to do . He looks her.

Aahil- “ Looks good upon you”.

Sanam- “ Me … actually it is for whom ?”

Aahil – “ For you … “.

Sanam – “ What ? For me ? But why ?”

Aahil – “ You will wear this to office for official meetings, there is some dress code “.

Sanam gets surprised.  She then checks the price tag and gets shocked seeing it’s price.

Sanam- “ Ya Allah.. it’s too costly. I will get something like this for any other shop . I don’t want this , I don’t want waste my money “.

Aahil – “ Iam not asking your opinion, it’s my order . Don’t worry about the price , it will be reduced from your salary “.

Sanam – “ But Why to waste my money like this ? “.

Aahil- “ It won’t make much change . By the way , I don’t have much time to argue . I have other shopping too . Come now “.

Sanam goes reluctantly behind him and feels bad thinking about the money. Aahil ask them to pack it in different bags. He pays them. He then hand over the shopping bags to Sanam . She isn’t much happy. He walks into a shoe shop. He checks for his shoes. Sanam stands there being sad about the money. Aahil selects his shoe and pays for it . He gives her next shopping bag. She looks him being irritated. He then goes towards a ladies shoe shop. Before he enter , Sanam stops him.

Sanam – “ I have nice shoe matching these type of dresses… “.

Aahil looks her .

Aahil- “ Don’t worry, Iam not going to shop  anything for you. I have to get a shoe Shazia had given for exchange“.

Sanam – “ Okay “.

She relaxes and gets embarrassed. He goes inside and gets it . She takes it from him. Aahil goes to other shops . Sanam gets bored of his shopping . Sanam starts to feel hungry as she hasn’t eat anything since afternoon, now it’s going to be 4pm . Aahil starts to feel hungry too.

Aahil (thinks) – “ She came home early and she will be super hungry now . Oho , I forgot “.

Aahil then walks towards a restaurant in the food court area . Sanam follows him. He goes into family seating section. He sits while Sanam stands there. He is checking his phone then he notices that Sanam is standing with all his shopping bags . She struggling with them. Aahil looks her sternly .

Aahil – “ Why are you standing? Sit”.

Sanam sits and Aahil signs her keep the shopping bags aside .

Aahil – “ What will you have ? “

Sanam – “ I don’t want anything “.

Aahil – “ Oho.. now stop this ! Iam hungry and don’t irritate me my 1 hour of arguement . Just tell me after checking the menu “.

He gives her the menu card . Sanam takes it and checks . She then find the prices of each food .

Sanam (thinks) – “ What is this ? How costly is the food ? In my Dhabba, I use to give my food items in 1/3 of this price “.

Aahil see her expression and understands her.

Aahil – “ Now stop staring at the price , just order what  would you like to eat “.

Sanam looks him and then looks back to the menu. She gets confused seeing the price . Aahil then takes the menu card from her . Sanam gets shocked.

Sanam (thinks) – “ How rude ? Who takes it like this ? He could have asked me , but this is not fair “.

Aahil (thinks) – “ She would have taken a year to decide a dish after calculating the price .. by the time I would have died due to hunger “.

As the waiter comes , Aahil orders some dishes for both of them. Sanam sits there silently.

Then waiter brings it . They start to have . While eating food price tags of the food items flashes in her mind.

Sanam (thinks) – “ If I got this money instead , I would have prepared them for a big family . It’s so costly, when I start a restaurant.. food quantity and cost will be proportional. So that a family with low income can also have good food at affordable price “.

While they are eating Elina pass by their cabin , she comes back and get to see them.

    

Elina (thinks) – “ She is the same one who told me about Aahil’s flaws , both of them has come together. Now this scene seems to be different. I should watch them”.

She leaves .

After they finish their food . Aahil pays for the food . Sanam feels awkward.

Sanam – “ I will give … “.

Aahil (interrupts) – “ It comes under your job package … now please don’t start again . By the way , Iam not so cheap to let my employees starve while working “.

Sanam stands silently. Aahil goes to some other shops too. It becomes evening . He finishes his shopping. They goes to parking lot . She gets confused with the place where she parked the car .

Aahil- “ Where is the car ?”

Sanam – “ Everything looks so similar, Iam confused “.

Aahil – “ What ? Oh my god ! I brought  a fool along with me “.

Sanam – “ How dare you call me fool?”

Aahil – “ Then What else should I call you ?”.

Sanam  – “ Did I ask you to bring me here ? By the way , I came here for the first time. My home is not inside this mall , that I will know nook and corner of this mall “.

Aahil – “ Okay .. do you remember any number or alphabet on the pillar , where you parked ?”.

Sanam thinks . She then looks him. Aahil waits for her reply .

Sanam- “ I think .. E 7 or Was it 8 ?”

Aahil – “ Are you sure ?”

Sanam- “ I hope so “.

They walks . They finally reaches near the car. Aahil looks her and Sanam looks him back .

Sanam – “ Do I have any more work ? “

Aahil – “ Why ?”

Sanam – “ If I don’t have any then can leave now ? It’s already 7.30 now “.

Aahil – “Oho .. Yeah that’s fine “.

Sanam – “ Thank you “.

Aahil – “ I will drop you home get in “.

Sanam – “ No thanks.. I will take an auto “.

Aahil  – “ Just get in , Sanam . I will drive “.

Sanam gets confused where to get in . Aahil see her looking at door .

Aahil – “ Iam not your driver so get into the front side seat “.

Sanam gets in . Aahil drives off . Before they reach her home , she something.

Sanam – “ Drop me here “.

Aahil- “ Here ?”

Sanam – “ Yes , I have to buy something from shop . It’s near to my home “.

Aahil stops . Sanam get down . Aahil gives her baggage. She takes it .

Aahil – “ Should I wait ?”

Sanam – “ No need , my home is in the next turn . Thank you “.

Aahil – “ Okay . Tomorrow come home on the normal time . I hope now you won’t repeat your mistake. Good night. “.

Sanam – “ Same too you . Good night “.

Sanam walks away with a naughty smile. Aahil gets confused.

Aahil – “ What ? Meaning I shouldn’t repeat the mistake!!! This girl “.

He drives off . Sanam buys some bakery items . She reaches home . She rings the bell . Afeeza opens the door.

Afeeza – “ So you came back ? How was the shopping session with your boss ?”

Sanam – “ Oho .. don’t ask me ! It was boring and Iam tired “.

Seher comes to her .

Seher – “ What is in your hand ? “

Sanam – “ Its some clothes and bakery items “.

Seher – “ What bakery items ?”

Sanam – “ I just brought it because Iam tired and I can’t make them today “.

Seher takes the bags from her. Sanam goes to get fresh.Seher takes out dresses from the shopping bag . She shows it to Dilshad , Haya and Afeeza .

Sanam comes there .

Seher – “ Sanam , you brought such branded clothes ?”.

Sanam – “ It was because of him, he told me to wear such formal clothes for official meetings “.

Seher – “ What ? “

Dilshad- “ These clothes will look good on you , Iam happy “.

Afeeza – “ Yeah , it’s really nice “.

Then they have dinner together. After that upon Seher’s say , Sanam tries them all .

Seher – “ WOW ! What a perfect fitting ? “.

Haya signs – “Perfect !”

Afeeza – “ You selected it “.

Sanam – “ No ., he … “.

Sanam pauses . Afeeza , Haya and Seher gets surprised.

Afeeza – “ Don’t tell us that he chooses it for you “.

Seher – “ Allah Miya , What am I hearing ?”.

Sanam – “ Its not like that .. “.

Seher – “ So that’s reason , so he brought it for you “.

Afeeza- “ Your Sister is gone … fights turned into someone else ..  Laa laa “.

Seher – “laa la la ..  Mmmm “.

Sanam (angrily) – “ Its nothing like that just stop. It’s simple ,he just selected them . It will be cut from my salary, he just want me to follow the dress code of his office . You all are just waiting for getting something so that you can tease me “.

Sanam puts it all in the shopping bag . But she fold them all well. Seher hugs from behind and Afeeza stands infront of her.

Seher – “ Have you seen anyone like this ? Sanam won’t leave her discipline even when she angry “.

Afeeza – “ Take it easy! It’s just a joke “.

Seher kisses on Sanam’s cheek . Sanam smiles. She melts . Sanam goes to keep it inside the cupboard. She sits near Dilshad .

Seher becomes emotional.

Afeeza notices her.

Afeeza – “ What happened?”

Seher – “ Afeeza, I haven’t seen her ever buying anything better for her till date . She haven’t ever compromised for buying anything for us . Instead she will compromise with her things to make sure that we get what we want . Today Iam thankful to her Boss for this . Iam sure she had no other choice than buying this , but I am very happy “.

Afeeza – “ Even Iam happy “.

Aahil’s home .

He sitting in his couch . He remembers Sanam falling into his arms and their eyelock ; how tightly she hold his hands when they were on the escalator ; how she reacted when he gave those dresses; how she reacted in restaurant and other shops . A smile comes on his face .

( Junoon Tere Ishq Ka played )

Aahil – “It seems like she is a child … is she someone else inside ?”

Parallel scene ,

Sanam thinks about him. She remembers everything. The way he guide her to use escalator, he brought dresses for her , he took her restaurant, he dropped her .

Sanam – “ He was different today .. yes he did things to trouble me but …. today I saw another shade of his character. Did I made a mistake by judging him ?”.

Scene freezes on Sanam and Aahil’s face .

Precap:- Sanam goes to his home wearing one of the dress purchased . Aahil gets surprised seeing her that dress . Everyone at office looks her and gets impressed.

Adhu

Passionate towards Story telling . Every story teller lives different life in the same lifetime , I feel blessed Iam one among. Every opportunity brings out best in you.❤️???

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