Hey Guys. Welcome here, I am Trisha. From today I am going to post ffs of my favorite show, Udaariyaan.
I am starting after Tejo learns the truth o JasFa’ s relation….In my story I am not going to add the part of divorce Bcoz I will not be able to write such a emotional and breakdown scene for Tejo. So here FaTejo is already divorced, and JasFa is married. Tejo has gone to foriegn for further studies of business management after divorce, as while living with Fateh she used to see the financial accounts of the boxing academy. And after about 1 year she got married to a rich businessman of Canada.
Four years later,
A private aeroplane land in the private Beas Airport of Punjab. A beautiful lady in red saree comes out with a young, tall and handsome man in red three piece suit came out of it.
Their look were like this.
The young man then politely gave his arm to the lady and asked, ” Are you ready to go, Mrs. Tejo Yuvraj Ahluwalia?”
Yes the young lady was Tejo and the young, tall and handsome man was her husband, Mr. Yuvraj Ahluwalia. ( Guys I will post another part where I will give the intro and nature of these characters, but for your information Yuvraj is a Punjabi just like Tejo but he grew in Canada.)
Tejo comfortably and firmly giving her hand in his arm said “Yes!” with a cute face.
While in Virk mansion,
JasFa were already married but they were not in a healthy relation. The first year of their marrige was blissful their family had accepted them. But after 1 year, Jasmine’s wish of going to Canada came in their relation. Due to the pertering behaviour of Jassu, Fateh started giving interviews, but did not got any job. Thus the relation became more worser. They went apart though living together. Jasmine used to think of Tejo, as she was the only person whom Jassu used to share her problems. Fateh too started missing Tejo as she was the best partner for him, but this realization took much time. So he could not do anything now.
Scene changes to TeRaj
Soon they reached a beautiful mansion by their car. ( As usaul while coming Tejo picked up the smell of the Punjabi soil which she left four years ago)
The look of the mansion:
Tejo, while putting her bag down on the side table of their room, ” Finally we reached home, it was such a long journey. But everything has changed.”
And starts telling the progress she saw while coming to Yuvraj. Yuvraj kept listening to his wife’s words with interest, Punjab was something that had actually connected them. He still remembered how he had first seen Tejo during one of her award functions in her university and he had been chief guest of the function. Her skills about business management had througly impressed him. Her confidence and her attitude throughout the functions had already mesmerized him completely. Then he had heard someone sitting behind him mentioning that she was hailing from Punjab. Learning that his interest in her grew more as he was brought up in USA by his Punjabi parents. Yuvraj had never been to India and especially to his parent’s birthplace. He had only heard stories from his parent’s about the beauty of Punjab and seen its pictures. His father was mostly busy setting up his business in USA to make time for them to visit punjab and by the time the Ahluwalia industries had fully got established, his parents had passed away by car accident leaving him and his younger sister and brother all alone. He had completed only his MBA by then and he was left alone to handle the Ahluwalia industries. He had completely drowned himself in work and rarely had time to think about Punjab or anything, he had not even bothered to think about his family’s ancestral property which was still here in Punjab but seeing Tejo and knowing that she is hailing from Punjab he felt good for some unknown reason. He had approached her soon after her award function but she was so disinterested for associating with him for anything as she was still in trauma of her ex-husband’s betrayal. It was that time Yuvraj realized that with Tejo he had to treat with patience and lots of softness and that’s exactly what he did. He gave up on his idea of business association with her. Rather gave her a job offer which she accepted as she needed money. Yuvraj used to try having conversations with her whenever possible but not constantly so that she doesn’t feel uncomfortable. Though tejo had resisted and looked suspicious at first but she acknowledged him as a boss and started to speak with him only answering to his questions but never asking and started to speak with him only answering to his questions but never asking anything about him but she tried very hard to never go personal with him. It took him six months to gain her friendship and little bit of her trust.
It actually took her like one and half year to confide him about her past and he finally understood why Tejo was reluctant to open up and trust anyone easily. He felt rage and anger pelting within him for the people who were so insensitive towards her feelings. It was beyond his understanding that how someone could let Tejo go away from their life. That person should be seriously blind or mad right to do such thing?! He had only known her for like for two years and he had deeply fallen in love with her character, her thoughts and her beauty. She was so different from the girls he had known and she was genuine with everything. His brother and sister kept pestering him for months to propose her for the marriage but he kept declining it because till Tejo fully opens up to him he could not move ahead and spoil all the progress they had made.
( Yuvraj told his brother, Ishaan and sister, Ishaani about Tejo)
It finally took him another six months to ask her to marry him and she had agreed without hesitating much to his happiness. Ishaan had being the happiest one and had hosted a grant wedding and shoved them off to Maldives for honeymoon as soon as their reception got over.
However, their marriage had not been a walk of cake either. They had their fights, problems and insecurities to deal with. They were in love but Tejo had brought her own insecurities from her previous marriage. She had her suspicious gaze on him whenever a woman is so close to him, she tries so hard not to but still her mind keeps reminding her of the past betrayal. He, then took Tejo couple counseling together. It took time but slowly with his help and proper treatment of her mental health she had became alright. She no longer looks at him with suspicious eyes, rather than love and respect for him here was nothing else for him either in her eyes nor in her heart. She had gotten into a stage that she held nothing else for her ex husband and her sister. Then after 1 year three months they decided to go back to Punjab. Ishaan and Ishaani was with the same idea and Tejo decided she had enough of running away from the past agreed with her husband and brother in law. It took three months to wrap up the business here, Tejo had gotten into contact with one of her friend to enquire about ahluwalia’s ancestral property in Punjab and mailed her friend the copy of the property papers. Tejo’s friend had replied back with the locations and description of the properties. To his suprise it seemed his parents had a huge property in Punjab and they included a very big mansion and few factories which was taken care of the caretaker for years. He had immediately gotten into contact with the caretaker who was more than happy to help him out with everything. So he finally made a plan that Ishaan and Ishaani would deal with the remaining business handling and he and Tejo would leave to Punjab and see the conditions of the property and handle everything. So finally, he and Tejo had landed directly to Punjab.
The snapping sound of Tejo’s finger before his eyes broke him out of his past memories. He looked at Tejo who was glaring at him realizing that he had not listened none of her talks and was lost in his own world. He smiled sheepishly at her but she gave him an annoyed look before going to get refreshed, he sighs and does the same thinking of ideas to melt his wife’s anger something which he is good at anyway.
23 Comments
nice ff waiting for the nxt part
how is it nice if it is copied??
@Neha ik but i didnt want to comement anything bad…thats all its not wrong in saying nice….i dint think at that time sorry!!!!!!
oh cool sorry too
@Angelic Queen hey ! you copied the story of ” i needed to lose you to love me by stina ” who too writes fanfiction’s for udariyaan ! if you can’t write something on your own atleast don’t copy someone elses ‘s and become a plagiarist
You literally copied another persons story from the same website your posting your copied one on. I mean even the names are same. You said you can’t write the emotional scene, you can’t write at all, you legit just copied someone else. This is why they say even cheating requires basic sense, lol I don’t know whether I should laugh at you or be mad that you copied someone else.
Was this some other plot of same udaariyaan dd I have read this before itself everything ditto
yes I NEEDED YOU TO LOVE ME TO LOSE ME BY STINA”
Yeah now I remember I read in Wattpad but even stina writes ff here too right ?
yes varshini
I don’t think it’s copied… I just saw the post by Stima. But I think none has read both of their FFS properly. There are many differences between them. Yeah maybe their thinking is same. And she did right by not writing the divorce part otherwise it would had become boring.😶😐 There in Stina’s post it was Yuvraj Sarna with Lutra industries and they meet at her presentation show off. But in her ff, there is Yuvraj Ahluwalia with Ahluwalia industries and they meet at her award function… So, how can they be same? 🤔🤔
ya thats why i said nice ff !lol
@ ravya 😂😂😂
It’s the same base story. A little bit more of detailing and minute changes but otherwise its the same thing. I can understand similar ideas but this is too much yaar.. The one who is writing this should have some moral responsibility to admit that this is copying someone else’s imagination. And Ravya please don’t encourage it even you write ffs. How would you feel if somebody copied and posted it in their name.
Nothing …seriously big deal and when Stina hasnt said anything ..why are others making a faltu ka bakera … and i dint encourage it is becos she said “Beautiful” to my ff i said the same thing to hers thats all! and i am sorry
i would feel nothing ..i dont take these seriously
@Krish I agree, minute changes still mean this was plagiarized. Just because someone wrote on your ff good job doesn’t mean you should also post on theirs even if they are cheating and copying someone else’s work. The person writing this and the people reading this have the moral responsibility to point out the plagiarism, in no way do I find this a bakera. Now I know whose ff I need to give my time to, not going to waste my time on ff that copy or to those who find it fine to do so and not a big deal. Not reading them anymore.
I AM SORRY SORRY AND SORRY,IF ANYONE FELT I PROMOTED PLAGARISM HERE SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY
My apologies to Krish,Trisha ,Riya ,Varshini,TJa,Aarti,Rani and everyone
sorry
I AM SORRY SORRY AND SORRY,IF ANYONE FELT I PROMOTED PLAGARISM HERE SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY
My apologies to Krish,Trisha ,Riya ,Varshini,TJa,Aarti,Rani and everyone
sorry really sorry
That is Right that she plagiarised the ff,May be she want to continue this ff,from where stina stopped. SO she copied it.lets wait for the next parts then we can decide
I think, I have read the same story in Wattpad..
first i thought there is a new writer too but then you just put all the writers down man how can you just copy paste someone else idea , as she had done so much and you just did this
feel shame one you plz write on your own
Except for a few details even the wordings are exactly the same. Please don’t copy yaar. Write your own idea. This is clearly not a matter of just a similar idea but complete plagiarism because similar ideas can be written differently since writing styles differ, but even the wordings and sentences here are exactly the same.