Hello guys this s me jenny with the 23rd episode of my ff pyaar ki intehaan…………..
Guys I am planning to end my ff as I am busy and I am not getting as much support and comments….from u guys nowadays….i don’t know wht is the reason behind it..guys u know I am not at all a gud writer so u have to give comments and support me then only I will have the strength to write…..guys pls pls support me guys pls….i am really happy to say that I have seriously got lot of friends and sisters from here due to my ff….and thank u guys…….for giving me soo much of love…
Precap
Virendra ,sharada (tanus parents)and rajesh and pratima(yuvis parents) arrive and some masti……..
Ishani smiles …..heaaring her sagayi got fixed…..
Suhani:di aren’t u happy?????
Ishani:haaan I am really happy..
Pankaj:lata ji we have to start arrangements now itself……vaise yuvi beta when is ur and tanu betas parents are coming???
Yuvi:chacha today by evening they will reach…….
Pankaj:hmm I am really waiting for them to come………….
Yuvi and tanu in chorus:me too….
Everyone laughs…..
After some time……
Suhani was sitting with the new born puppy…patting.it tanu comes near her
Tanu:wow suhani its so cute puppy…I luv this puppy soo much wht is d name kept
Suhani:still I have not kept any name
Tanu:I have a name in my mind …wht about it
Yuvi and rishi also pases by the way
Yuvi:tanu ur selection of name is bakwaaas so I will select the name
Rishi:oh hello ur selection is not just bakwaas it is bekar also…so I think my selection is best…
Suhani:hahaha ur three peoples selection is not at all good my selection is the best…
Four of them starts arguing….ishani was going through that way…she hears them arguing…
Ishani:excuse…tum chaar will always argue like this I really think that u 4 have done a course to argue with each other……….idiots wht is the problem…?
4 together in chorus:we want to name this puppy
Ishani:only this much for that u 4 are quarelling like ok I have an idea…
4 together:wht
Ishani:u 4 will write the name u wish to name d puppy…….give it to me….the name which I like I will choose it……..
4 of them agree to tis…they four write the name…ishani takes the chits…she gets shocked seeing the names
Suhani:wht???
Ishani:the names which 4 of u suggested is same
Yuvi:wht
Ishani:haan it is venus
4 of them look at each other…..shocked…
Tanu:di u r joking right??
Ishani:haan ….so the puppys name is venus…..
4 of them together:venus….
They look at each other…..
Its evening
tanshi and yuvani are playing caroms
Suhani gets a five…
Suhani:wow I got the 5 …..
Suhani gives a hifi to rishi
Rishi:yo his time we will surely win….
Yuvi:game abhi baaki hain boss………
Suddenly bell rings
Yuvi:I will open the door…….
Yuvi goes to open the door……..
Yuvi sees and screams……
Yuvi:papa ma
Tanu runs and hugs sharada and veer..
Tanu:papa ma I am so happy to see u both
Yuvi also hugs rajesh and pratima..
Pratima:beta where is suhani and rishi??
Suhani and rishi comes towards them….rajesh..sees suhani and remembers her childhood ..rajesh hugs suhani…..
Rajesh:u have changed a lot beta
Suhani:I had given a promise to a person that I will change(looking at yuvi)
Pankaj lata rano and raaj comes….they all hug each other…….
Pankaj:I cant say how much I am happy…to see my brother and sister….
Veer:vaise where is dulhan…
Ishani runs and comes
Ishani:main yahan hoon…
Ishani hugs everyone…
Veer:vaise I am really hungry..
Lata:come bhaisaab everything is ready …..
Everyone sits together and eats nachtha….like before..
Raaj:its been a very long time we have sit together and ate…
Rajesh:haan…..but don’t know why after coming here I am not at all feeling to go back
Yuvi:(whispering) me tooo
Tanu:did u tell anything yuvi????
Yuvi:no I didn’t…
Tanu:hmm
The episode freezes on yuvis face…
Precap
Yuvani and tanshi leave for shopping…..
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Hey jenny!! How to write a fan fiction?? Can u plz illustrate me?? It will be great help from ur side.. ?
ok tabu dr…first take a blog like ssel yhm matsh etc up there will be submit ur article….click that fill all d columns…..write ur story upload a pic and submit….
Tysm!!!
Ur welcome…
Hav a look my bachu… Hw much ppl love u & ur ff… U still think u shud end this ff??? My bachu can’t break these many hearts…. Think abt it sweetie….
yeah u r right i didnt even expect this…..
Happens bachu… At times v underestimate ourselves… So this is a small advice for u that never underestimate urself. & always remember do ur part of work & leave rest upto God. U will always get reward for ur good work & it can b in anyway. So always b happy my bachu. Love you baby. & hv faith in urself always. 🙂
Thank u sissy for ur great advice…
Please please don’t stop writting please i loved your ff and it is too much awesome that so i liked it you known i am in standard eight i leave my study for your ff please don’t do don’t stop writing
thank u sooooooo much akshitha for luving my ff….and dont leave ur studies for my ff….all the best for ur studies dear…
are yaar itne sare cmnts milthe ho thi kyu aise bol rahi ho.Mujhe thumara ff chahiye chahiye…chahiye.Ek baath bathao yuvani bro sis tho nahi hoona tho phir pankaj ko yuvraj chacha kyu bhulathe ho.
Ya ur right…and thank u for luving my ff this much …abot ur doubt yuvani is 2nd cousins for yuvi pankaj is life his fathers brother…so
I LOVE UR FF please dont end it plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Ok shruthi….dr…