Guys i just got 3 comments on my previous episode!!! Looks like this will be my last episode! I will decide to post the next part only on the basis of comments! Anyways today’s episode:
After some time Sona wakes up to see Dev sleeping peacefully. She kisses his cheek and goes to get ready. She comes out and sees Dev still sleeping. She goes and wakes him up.
Sona-Dev? Dev utho,
Dev wakes up.
Dev-what happened jaan? All good na.
Sona-yes, all good. It’s 3 o’clock.
Dev-what..it’s 3.
Sona-yes go and get ready everyone would be waiting for us.
Dev goes and gets ready and Devakshi come down holding hands and staring into each others eyes very much in love. Ria & Nikki see them and sneeze to get them out of their world. Devakshi come back to reality and leave their hands.
Nikki-sorry bhabhi voh cheek(sneeze) came by mistake.
Sona-you are not sick na Nikki?
Nikki-haan bhabhi
Sona goes in the kitchen to get something to eat and Dev follows her. He hugs her from behind.
Sona-Dev leave me.. someone will see.
Dev-let them see how much I love my wife.
Saying that he makes Sona turn and they are facing each other. Their foreheads touch and just as they are about to touch their lips Sona moves back and widens her eyes. Dev pulls her closer.
Sona-Dev maa is watching us.
Dev-let her *thinking that she is saying that so he will leave her*
Sona-Riya and Nikki too
Dev-it’s fine
Sona-mamaji is also there
Dev-let it be
Sona-Dev..
Dev(sensuously)-Sona paas aa na
Mama-Dev
Dev realizes that Sona was telling the truth and leaves Sona. He turns red and leaves the kitchen but mamaji stops him.
Mamaji-Jo kaam karne aaya tha voh karke jaa. *to everyone else* let us sit outside.
Everyone goes out. Dev and Sona come closer and have a liplock.
Dev-from now wherever we meet, we will kiss each other.
Sona-even in front of everyone?
Dev-no, only when its us two.. jaise tab jab main office jaa raha hoon.
Sona-theek hai.*gives Dev another kiss* let’s go outside.
Devakshi come out of the kitchen. Bose family is also there. Devakshi take elders blessings. Sona cuts the cake and feeds it to Dev, Ishwari, Mamaji, Asha, Bijoy, Dadi, Sorav, Elena, Ria and last main Nikki.
Nikki-kya bhabhi mujhe last main kyon diya.
Sona-sabse chote ko sabse last main.
Precap-only on the basis of comments. If i get good comments precap will be commented
15 Comments
Its really good. Keep writing. All the best.
Good one plz continue
this episode was awesome…plz dont stop posting ur ff plz….i like ur ff bcoz it make me happy after reading…plz post next episode tomorrow dont stop posting plz..ok dats all i want to say u..
Amazing. I’m so sorry I was about to comment but my sister was call me to go home. So sorry. I really love it.
It’s really awesome yaar, don’t end it…
Awesome episode pllllllzzzz write the ff and do update soon….
Nice , continue writing
Loved It! Meri ff pe bhi kuchh khaas comment ni aaye .. please comment if u don’t mind .. Kya Ma Manengi ? …… A Devakshi FF (Episode 11)
Yoo that was romantic.
AWESOME,AMAZING AND PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ DO CONTINUE
It was really awesome 🙂
Offo yar ap itna acha likhty ho plz dont stop writing do post next epi and this one was also nice dev ka reaction dekhny wala tha jb sari family kitchen ma a gai
Epi was amazing please don’t stop
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Nice episode…. Don’t end it
Nice epi….