The scene opens up with a b’ful morning, sun shining brightly with clear sky, on roads cars r just moving, the camera then shifts to tall and well-built buildings then a b’ful sea is shown where people are sitting n njoying and then finally camera shifts to clear blue sky where a helicopter is shown and big BMW in which at the back seat of car a handsome man is shown in a black suit quite formally dressed up and setting his hair. He looks in the direction of the chopper and is waiting for the chopper to come down, in between he sees some dust on car and immediately cleans and checks the time and then again luk towards the helicopter which has started to land, the man in the car wears his shades, checks the knot of his tie and comes out of the car, till that time the chopper has also landed and by the time the man opens up the door of the helicopter a very handsome and hot man comes out in a three piece blue suit he is 6 feet tall stubble luk lean and masculine body eyes covered with black aviators, his hands setting his coat and then the camera just shows his face he is our hottie Kunj (looking handsome as always) and walk towards the other man who was in car, the man in car welcomes him with a big smile on his face.
Karan– Welcome Kunj Sir!!
Kunj – Let’s drop the “sir” & tell me how’s it going??
Karan- Same as u left …sits in car, the door is already by Karan
Karan- to company or home (while adustng him in driver’s seat)
Kunj- home
Karan – Which one
Kunj- Ours
Karan- I guessed so
Kunj- Why u asked then
Karan while smiling- This is life one can never be sure, I thot u may choose different one today
Kunj got busy on his iPad and told him that u know I don’t lyk changes and said Now let’s go they r expecting for b’fast and car leaves.
Screen Shifts to a normal apartment of the Mumbai in a simple flat is shown and then a kitchen in shown where a tea is kept to on stove and a pan where paratha is being made in full punjabi style a lady’s back is shown in the kitchen and the camera moves towards a room where a girl is sleeping and in sleep a girl the great Twinkle on a bed while sleeping starts sniffing and calls the other girl
Twinkle- Chinki
Chinki while sleepng on other bed- Hmm
Twinkle – Im having a dream of realistic aloo ka parantha smell (v all know our twinkle ? ? )
Chinki- No it’s not a dream, I can smell that too
Twinkle- Lagta hai Mahi hame kuch surprise dene ka plan kar rahi hai
(Remember both gals r still in sleeping mode)
Chinki- opens her eyes n says Pagal mat ban twinkle wo to hospital me hogi
Twinkle- then who is making aloo parantha , bilkul waise hi jaise Maa banati hai
Lady- Bfast is ready, wake up
Chinki opens her eyes in surprise and our twinkle in sleep only – Ye to sach me Maa ki awaaz lag rahi hai and then opens her eyes widely in shock and the lady enters- “Get up u lazy girls”
Twinkle whos on bed falls down and asks- Maa What r u doing here and when u came fully in shock mode ad what r u doing with my things
Leela- I came in morning and keeping ur things in suitcase
Chinki- But kyu aunty
Leela- coz her papa said that it’s enough already and Twinkle stands up still in shock mode and Leela continues that whatever her father says its done already, her father told her if she can’t get a job she will come back to her home so now she has to go back while keeping her clothes in suitcase
Twinkle who’s standing next to her takes her clothes from her hands and looks at her whie Leela says that now she has to stay with her.
Leela- I dint said anything ur father said
Twinkle- But I was talking to him yesterday only he dnt said anything to me
Leela smiles sarcastically- U know twinkle ur father ofcourse he won’t say anything to u but he has eaten my life.
Chinki – Welcome aunty…Bye Bye Twinkle and sleeps again ? Twinkle standing there in full irritated mode while her mother throwing clothes in suitcase and she cant do anything just stomps her foot in irritation.
Screen again shifts to our Handsome Kunj who is sitting in car while another car comes just next to his car and looks at Kunj and Karan in anger Both look toward him as well and kunj gives a “nothing can be done look ” and rolls his eyes and Karan who is driving the car just sees and gives a small smile. The person in another car takes his car back of Kunj’s car and starst driving rashly and both the car stops simultaneously at a big gate. Both Karan and the other guy gives each other a look and Kunj puts his windshield down, all three of them looking at each other
Karan- Our move, u want aggressive or constructive approach? Shud v attack now. Or retreat & then attack from behind?
Kunj- Let him go first.
Karan – who gives a surprise wala luk to Kunj- R u sure, theres no going back
Kunj- Yes v r sure and karan gives him a signal to move forward & takes his car back and both the cars move inside the gate and other guy comes and then kunj and karan.
Kunj- when r u going to grow up? Hmm? U still play arnd wid me, so much time has passed only the size of car has increased.
The other guy – Our Big brother is enuf fr a household n m happy wd my situation. Welcome back big Bro!! ? and they hug each other. Kunj- m happy to be back
Karan – By the way right way was ours, Yuvi Sir!!
UV- This is how merciless life is dear Karan, our attack can change the entire balance. Now luking at Kunj- So how was the meeting big bro, did this deal helped u in increasing the strengh of Sarna’s
Kunj- Something lyk that ofcourse, u tell me where r u coming from at this hour? U know v hav a meeting today.
UV- U know I dnt want to go into the details but it was a tiring night (winks and smiles), even it was nowhere near ur performance in ur deal, resting his back on car, n he cont- I had a small lantern extinguising operation, so I guess ill sleel the whole day today.
Kunj who is smiling after listening to what hes trying to say- Dear Bro, discussion is closd u hav 30 min, get ready we’ll leave together.
Uv- I m truly persecuated in my house and kunj is standing behind him smiling only listening to his words and both proceeds in house
They r welcome by the servants who opens the door fr them, UV who starts going upstairs (u can imagine TEI sarna’s house only). While UV is going upstairs Kunj stops him n tells him that u hav half n hr only and in return he tells him that half an hour won’t be euf as bebe wnt leave u within 30 min ony as her questioning will not b over till that time. Bth Kunj and UV smiles and leaves. Kunj leaves to me Bebe and UV upstairs.
Ill end up here, I know ul find this quite boring as I haven’t shown much of it here just a lil bit of Kunj who is quite serious abt his work not very much jovial u can say a workaholic and he is introvert kind of a person, very serious about his life. UV is his step brother but both brothers love each other a lot and Karan is his only real frnd who is with him every time, ull find with Kunj mostly driving his cars and giving him suggestions In case U have any confusion u can ask me, I’ll definitley reply. U all r very gr writers whch I am not, there r many loopholes which u can find, also just let me know in few episodes which ill b uploading whether u r finding it gud or not, if not u can tell me ill stop it immediately dnt want to bore u all.
Thanks a lot…:)
27 Comments
Awesome…as I like Haya Murat but I don’t know about their show so it’s new for me
Thank u soo much…hope u lyk it 🙂
Nice post soon
Thanks dear 🙂
superb..?
Thanks dear 🙂
Its really amazing………
I hadnt seen the show even though my frnds did……so this is a new story for me
Thanks dear :)…
i hope ull lyk what ill write 🙂
Realy good
Thanks dear 🙂
Awesome
Loved it
Thanks dear 🙂
Amazing
Thanks dear 🙂
Nice
Thanks dear 🙂
Amazing episode…
Totally loved it dear??
It’s unique story…
Do post soon…
Love u
Thanks dear…sure ill try posting it soon 🙂
amazing
post next soon
people r busy in exams so may be they r less visiting tu so don’t get demotivated
u r writing superb
go for it
keep writing
Than u soo much Yashika for ur motivation…m aware u all hav xams…for me all of ur support is necessary….i m seriusly happy that u all r lykng it, any point u find that m boring u all, any1 of u can let me know 🙂
I just loved this ???
Superb it is ???
Twinkles character is same bubbly n cute ??
Kunj ❤️
I’m very very excited to read this
Post soon??
Waiting ??
Thanks alot dear ?
Nice
i feel the storyline is same as that of hayat and murat . Anyways this one was great . keep going dear
Great start dear awesome
Great going Sakshi
Woah!! Big shout out to the hero’s entry!! This is so adorable…. You have no idea how much I’m liking this!!! Bebe’s character is so lovely… Everything feels so homely in your story… I’m in love with it already!! Great job!! Have a great journey in tu!!!
Awesome amazing mindblowing episode dear
sry for late cmt. dear
vo me bimar hu na?
plzzz post soon dear
luvvvv u