Welcome back guys ..I am sorry for last time .. submitted the FF half way …
2 years later..in Canada
A man is doing workout…in his gym…a tall , handsome,fair and with abs man. He gets a call about someone asking whether she accepted your proposal yet..he says no she didn’t I can’t force her yaar….and he cuts the call..
He again gets a call its from his mom she says putr it is been 2years I want you to come back to Mumbai…this time I am getting you married no matter what…he says nahi I don’t want to get married …is mother says then either you get married or you see my dead body
He says fine and cuts the call and throws the phone on the floor
He goes for his breakfast after and hour staff says goodmorning Rehan sir …he says goodmorning …he asks where has “she” gone..
The staff reply mamm has gone to office ..he says fine and leaves to office.
In the office which is named REHAN INDUSTRIES a girl is the MD’s room wearing a jumpsuit , a choker ..has straightened her hair and is wearing high heels an other girl tells her why are you refusing him forget the past and accept his proposal ….yaar you say you have forgetten the past ..but I don’t think so you still think of that Fateh..Tejo’s face is shown
Sonakshi says Tejo it isn’t like that
You shut up she says he was so nice to not ask anything about your past..do you remember when your car fell of the cliff …you didn’t fall with the car you went and fell in a river due to the force the truck hit the car and you were severely injured he was the one who saved you …why don’t you give life a second chance…
Tejo says your right …he must come to office by now I will talk to him ..and she leaves and she goes to the CEO’s room she says …she sees Rehan…and says hi I need to talk to you….
Rehan says ha tell me .m.she says I accept the proposal I thought about it..I am ready to marry you he hugs her and she hugs him back
Precap: Gurpreet’s calls Mahi, Dadi and Fateh back
42 Comments
nice one waiting for next part
thnx kaviya
I really love the name u gave the new guy (Rehan)…nice waiting for the next part..
thnx!
My pleasure πππ..
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Please upload next part very very soon please
sure by tuesday will be done i am having exams too tommorrow is maths lol
lovely ff
awesome one yr ravya
Mind blowing dear….π
thnx dear
thnx for all the love guys
lovely ff~
nice one..waiting for next part
good one bro..waiting for nxt part
Nice ff ….udaariyaan directors should take suggestion from people like you who use your creativity..i feel bad for Anki,Pari,Isha n Abhi and other cast they r putting so much of efforts but the story is just disgusting
thnxx for the compliments!
thnxx for the compliments! so nice of you
I am loving the response from you guys !!!thanks a lot~
Nice storyline lovely!
nice one keep it up ..liked tejo in the modern avatar..imagine her in that kind of dress in udaariyaan it would suit her character….but she looks good in all outfits in udaariyaan thats a fact..but they should give her better ones….they dump all the good ones on Chameli !lol
Also good luck for your exams dear
Tru
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Wish cld see pics
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@Snowflake
Lovely ff ..dont stop writing ff’s …i love reading all the ff’s you all post its 100 times better…and ..good luck for your exams
Lovely character introduced…
Just a small suggestion if u don’t mind..ur taking the story too fast..like add more dialogues between the characters and scenes..and pls make it long alsoπ we get bored reading the written update as jasfa is there..
So what will be the joint name of Rehan and tejo? Retejo or Tejhan? Tejhan sounds better and new….
Do show what happened to Chameli n Amrik also
Overall lovely episode…ππ
Ya I am writing fast because this is like a stressbuster for me …i like writing it doesn’t keep me stressed during exams and I will tell in next episode what happened to Jasrik
And also #TEJHAN sounds cute π
#Tejhanπ
Don’t do this fast fast bcoz we r saying.. if u write slower n give it good thought, u can improve the quality and the length ππ
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Hope in the show they bring someone like Rehan… before Tejhan bcom popular lol
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Aaram se likho…btw when is the next part coming out?
I will add more dialogues as said …thanks for your feedback…dear will do better nxt time ..and I always like getting suggestions from people on how to improve on my writing skills or anything else!so you need not mind
Anytime ππ€π€
Maybe Tuesday
Hey yaar ravya its so nice who is rehan there is no pic of him waiting to see him… Nice one as @snowflake mentioned made this ff slow and give more dialogues to character
i probably will put..i am thinking who is best suited for the role..give me some ideas..!!i am outta of them
waiting for nxt part ..!!!
Nice. Eagerly waiting for the next party. Please post soon. βΊοΈ
Superb one dear but please make it little long
sure
@ravya the new lead can be as parth samdhaan or zain imam they both will be good
thnx ! now i can add some photos of them to make it intresting