Hi guys Ravya here this one is dedicated to @Keerthi and @Snowflake!
Fateh thinks about Tejo wishing how much he could tell he loves her..he remembers the past..the fun he had with Tejo
(In his mind,Fateh remembering his fun time withTejo)
He books his tickets to Mumbai and then remembers when he came to Australia…how he ventured into managment and started VIRK INDUSTRIES….and how Amrik reluctantly became his partner and started the office in Mumbai while Fateh started it in in Australia and it became the number one company on both Australia ..and was top 2 in Mumbai..Just then he got a call..from REHAN.It turns out Rehan was his best friend
Fateh was elated and picked up the call..and said how have you been its been 3 years we have spoken!
Yes said Rehan..true we were so busy we forgot about each other….even though we were best friends !
Exactly said Fateh….you are right
Well i heard about VIRK INDUSTRIES and your family shifiting to Mumbai..Mom told me you people bought the house right opposite ours !
Yes ! says Fateh
Well there is a suprise i am going back to Mumbai! I am getting married I want you to come !said Rehan
I am also going back and dont worry i will come definitely ! says Fateh
Really thats awesome ..then lets meet in a few days after 3 years and Rehan laughs ..Fateh laughs too
3 days later
Fateh reaches Mumbai Airport so does Rehan and Family
Β [Rehan outside the airport waiting for the car ( too dramatic right?lol)]
Amrik comes to pick up Fateh..when Amrik arrives Fateh hugs him and says can we begin our relation afresh and he cries ..Amrik says i have forgiven you long ago …Β ….he cries too then he tells Fateh you drive today its been long …Amrik remembers him how Simmi requested him to forgive both Fateh and Jasmin and think about present and future ..and Tejo’s soul will be happier
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Β Β (Fateh’s and Tejo’s airport look)
Just then a girl comes and hits Fateh …they turn to see each other to say sorry …but dont because Amrik calls Fateh and he goes ..the girl turns around and it is TEJO!
In Virk Mansion
Mahi and Dadi come inside and hug Gurupreet….they cry and then the hug the other members …then Jasmin sees them and says Sorry……i am the destroyer of this family….give me a chance…please Amrik has given me a chance..please now my life revolves only around Amrik ..he is my husband ….!
(Jasmine crying and asking Mahi to forgive her)
Mahi and Dadi says we will,but remember one mistake and this time you will be out..
Then Fateh comes in and sees Mahi and Dadi..Mahi runs and hugs Fateh and Amrik they cry seeing them all cry…and forgive Fateh and Jasmin.
.Jasmin sees Fateh and says hi jiju..!
Fateh says hi
Now In Kapoor Mansion
Rehan and family enter the house …his mom sees them and she hugs Ahaan and Rehan and says its been so long ..they take blessings from her
They say meet your daughter in laws
Tejo and Sonakshi enter
She says wow they are so pretty
Ahaan says this is Sonakshi my would be wife that is Tejo bhabs!
Sonakshi and Tejo take blessings from her.
Precap:Fateh and family come to Tejhan’s and Ahaankshi’s engagement ..Fateh and Tejo shocked to see each other
Hope you like it guys! I hope you liked the couple name REHAN and TEJO (TEJHAN) & SONAKSHI and AHAAN (AHAANKSHI)! and didnt find the ff to dramatic..lol
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O.M.G gurl why do u always do this lolππππ now I can’t wait for the next par… I have a question though how did u come up with the of Rehan and Fateh being best friends ? It will be interesting to see Fateh’s face when he find out Tejo is marrying his best friend…nice great job keep it upπππ
what did i do i love creating suspense ππππ
is baar totega Fateh ka kwaab
Yeah u really love suspense and making u wait πππππ…
Now it will be too difficult to wait for next part.. Please upload it asap. And this was dramatic but bahot maja aya
# us
And I just can’t get the image of Jassmean calling Fateh Jiju I was like huh π±π± Jiju? Did she just call him Jiju I really wish I could watch itπππππππ…
Wow …that’s really the best twist ….well written ….and the fateh’s reaction after he will see tejo getting married will be just awesome …nice one ….π
Tq @ravya for mentioning me… β€ tht moment i read jasmine called fateh as jiju lolππ€£π€£ i cant control my laughter we all r waiting for tht moment for a long time . Waiting for next part seriously
lovely !!! waiting for nxt part
Jiju lol
Lovely Ravya! leaving science exam for this lel
@Sukzz lel ….go study go study commerce wali student ….science padna chathi hai
shut up Ravya! we r in 10 th commerce only nxt year kal ka exam hai Science
Please post next part as very soon as possible please ravya
Nice one broski
Wa awesomeeeee
Waiting for this !lovely handsome hunk zain imam
Jassu ne bulaya jiju ..show me agle das saal keliye bhi nahi hoga..apni badi behan ko hi naam se bulathi hai…yeh kyu buleyege Fateh ko jiju
Thanks for all love..Part 6 will be out by Saturday
Wow, Ravya.. this is far better than the original script and unique too… Thank you for giving a good story… I am also confused whether the ending will be FaTejo or Tejhan because I don’t want to see Tejhan in a vein too. Totally, u nailed it.. keep going. By the way All the best for your exams
Thanks farija
LOVELYYYY this is so far the best part…don’t know what next part will be, take ur time, write as a break..
JIJU was the best thing… the hit and miss was so accurate, it always happens in serials… Im sure that b4 the actual meeting there will be more ‘almost meetings’ at the party.. way to go girl!
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The fact that u came up with the idea of Rehan being Fatehs friend is mind blowing…now he will realize wht betrayal feels like… What if he gets possessive over tejo?
Aaaaaaa cant wait!
Take care, and thx for mentioning me π
Maybe he maybe possesive like Virendra from Molki,or Abhi from KKB,or even Rudra from Yeh hai chatein
This plot is just amazing …..I have an another turn for this plot ….like virk industry and yuvraj’s industry are just the two well known industries in Australia ….both the industries try to compete with each other and being jealous of each others success….here tejo being a business minded women helps yuvraj in all the work and gets it to the no.1 industry of Australia …now here fateh is just jealous of seeing his oponent winning ….he tries to catch the strategy of the company and finds that it’s yuvraj’s wife who is helping him in the strategies …he then remembers tejo helping him in the academy work and converting the investment of the academy into profit ….on further inquiry he gets to know that tejo is only the one who is helping yuvraj and is going to be tejo yuvraj kapoor….he is left devastated thinking of it….
@ravya it’s just my thinking π€
You have dona a great job ππ
Nice idea tho but it is Rehan kapoor …lol
I loved it I will have to keep reading keep the good work upππ
Thankz !
Ravya Can u tell me that did rehaan know tejo’s past
Ull have to wait to find out all this π
no…as per the first ff it is only Sonakshi who knows it …
Awwwwweeeeeeessssssoooooommmmeee i love the twist it is just great πππjasmin like seriously jijuπ²π²π²π²and fateh seeing tejo with his best friend is his best punishment β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈawsok
Lovely