HI, I have read many FFs and I know my is not as good as your FFs but I just want to try. They are a set of Love stories in a hatke way and the first story is taken from:
1YHM I have changed the name of ruhi to tara so please cooperate . its a love story so ther is only one villain so shagun and ashok are good and are happily married couple living with aadi . the main focus of the story is on tara.
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CHARACTERS
TARA(19): A TOMBOY . SHE IS MATURE BUT NEVER LIKE A GIRL . SHE LOVES HER MOTHER MORE THAN ANYONE IN THIS WORLD .
ARJUN(22): A LOCAL GOON WHO IS ALSO THE RIGHT HAND OF AN UNDERWORLD DON . HE IS AN ANGRY YOUNG MAN AND LOOKS A VILLINIOUS PERSON. HE HAS A TROUBLED CHILDHOOD .
ISHITA(43) : A GENTLE WOMAN WHO LOVES HER FAMILY VERY MUCH . SHE IS VERY KIND AND IS LOVED BY HER CHILDREN VERY MUCH.
ISHAN(6): TARA S YOUNGER BROTHER . HE IS CUTE ,INTELLIGENT AND A NAUGHTY BOY. HE ALSO LOVES IS FAMILY A LOT.
RAMAN(44): HE IS A TYPICAL FAMILY MAN AND LOVES HIS FAMILY.
UNDERWORLD DON BABU(27) : HE IS A BAD MAN AND KNOWS VERY WELL HOW TO MANUPULATE PEOPLE. HE STICKS TO HIS RULE.
AADI(24) : HE IS A LOVELY YOUNGSTER AND TARA S BROTHER .
SHAGUN(43): A GOOD LADY AT HEART BUT WAS DIFFERENT IN THE PAST , ISHITA CHANGED HER AND SHE S AADI S MOTHER.
ASHOK(44): A NORMAL BUISNUSSMAN.
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Nice intro…but please don’t stop it….Update it regularly…
Story is gud but I want ruhi in the story not Tara plz n want to know is Tara (ruhi)in this story is ishita daughter n pllz change tara
Cool update dr
And I think ishaan is too small
Story is good but I think its more like Ye Wada Raha of Zee TV than YHM. In that case plz consider changing the characters’ name coz; when we hear Ishita & Raman ultimately we visualize DT & KP. So it would
Story is good but honestly; when we hear Ishita & Raman we ultimately visualize KP & DT & their chemistry. I think you should reconsider about the characters name. Story based on a tomboy & all other from YHM when the name of the protagonist isn’t even Ruhi, just doesn’t mesh well. I am extremely sorry if I’ve hurt you but this is just my opinion.
Completly agreed with u dear….We automatically visualise KP DT as Ishra….
Yes ur right DT & KP will cm into our minds
Hi piya dear, nice intro, all the best for future updates. ..plzzzz continue and post the first episode soon, love you loads