Hey guys….. Thank u sooo much for ur amazing response… M glad u ppl liked my ff sooo much… And hopefully u will like d upcoming episodes too …Thanks a lot for supporting me…n commenting… Luv u all…?
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So the episode starts wid Avni being Nervous… she has been asked to kiss d cutest boy in d bus as a part of her dare… She knows she’ll lose now…Then she closes her eyes..n prays to God… Hits upon something…n walks towards Neil…. Neil is bewildered… Unable to understand wat Avni is upto… Ali too is furious about who dat guy gonna be…??
Avni goes past Neil… and goes to d front seat…where Miss Malini’s son Aryan… (6 years) was enjoying his icecream…. Avni bents a bit…n gives a soft peck on his cheek…n he pecks her back….. Everyone is shocked… and starts clapping…and Avni’s presence of mind was immensely praised….!!!Neil was impressed too…but had lost the game to Avni’s team…It was Avni who won…??
Neil-Whoa!! WTH!! She is sooo smaaaaartt… ???Sara maza kirkira krdia… huh!!
Daksh-Thank God… atlst u accepted she z smart…n luks at Neil curtly..
Avni looks at Neil n Daksh…n mockingly says…. I hope d Losers r clear now, As to Who’s d WINNER!!!????
Neil-Well,Just a matter of gud luck…?
Avni (laughs n says)-Oh plz… Be a sport,Neil… ??
And starts dancing wid joy..
(Neil inspite of losing d game was still not upset…rather he was pretty lost admiring Avni’s innocence n cuteness…n ofcourse her crazy dance moves…He could not take his eyes off her….)
Neil felt his heart rate increase at a faster rate…n is tensed lest Avni might know of his feelings….
Avni unaware of this…goes n hugs Ali saying… We won… Thank you so much .. dis was not possible widout u…
Neil was extremely hurt seeing dis… he felt like punching Ali in d face fr touching Avni…n breaking his head too…but obviously had no idea as to y was he feeling dis jealous!!!)
Neil- (to himself)What m I thinking!! Ugh… Neil, U need a break…n gulps down a red bull…
Finally d bus reaches it’s destination….Rashigarh… Everyone gets down…Neil was still feeling upset recalling about Ali’s confession n Avni hugging Ali ….
Soo… dats all fr today ….. Sorry guys I Kno it was a bit short… but I promise d next update will b a long one….
Precap-Avni doubts Neil to be d father of Luci’s child… Avni shattered totally… She cries a lot….
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Very nice episode…keep update..
Nice one.please update soon
Thanks Guna….n Ananya…Keep reading n commenting.. ??
like seriously WOW! it was amazing…..u know i cant stop now, i just want to read the nxt chp right now as u right too awesome and as mentioned earlier that ur story truly connects to the youth and this time i say that it connects the whole generations…..i really want someone to turn it into a movie or at least a daily soap…..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK…..:) 🙂 😀 :*
Please dear in the next episode make avni realize also along with the precap that he is not the father of luci’s child
OMG!! That’s a huge compliment Variga… Thank u sooo much!! ??
THANKS Sweetgirl7… Actually…I have planned something different… So.. u gotta wait a bit… And dis misunderstanding will bring Dem close…. Soo… Relax n stay updated… ?
Wowww…u write soo awesome… Smart Avni…. i luv her character… n I too want to punch Ali… i want only Avneil ? .
continue soon… cnt wait to see more dhamakas
Thanks Kash…. I m glad u enjoyed?
Ali ko jaldi out kar????
Hehhhe… Ohk Suchi ?
Superb re..??
Waiting for the next update..
Thanks Ankita??
Great work buddy. Keep writing. U r superb.
Thanks Saswat ….?