hello everyone!!!! this is sobia!!!! so like i said in the last post of na jaana dil se door that i will start posting that fan fiction from december because i feel like most of my readers will be back by then because their exams will be over and i’ll be free for about 3 weeks until my next exam so i can post in those 3 weeks but the people who missed me, well i have a surprise for you i will be posting a 3 shot story for all my raglakians…..interested? well commet below after reading so i know how many enjoyed it>>>>> now let us start and the title would be “pyaar toh kiya tha” now let us start
characters:
laksh dixit: a very bold man who can do anything…..when he wants something he will get it….he is brave and not scared of anything except for losing his love….
ragini: is an orphan and doesn’t know who her parents are….she lives by herself and wants to become someone big…she has no time for anything except the fact that she wants to become something
the story begins where laksh is going to office and ragini is travelling in an auto…
scene 1
laksh was in his car going to office where his father works….he was waiting at the stoplight when ragini’s auto stops next to laksh’s car….wind starts blowing and cute music plays….both are unaware of each other’s presence when laksh turns his head…..he sees a very beautiful lady next to him….he gets lost in her beauty….he thinks she is so pretty….who is she? he is about to put his window down but the light turns green….they start moving while laksh thinks i need to find her…..he smiles…..he reaches his office and seems very happy….
he rushes into his cabin and calls his friend omi….he says yaar listen to me….i’ll send you a pic and i want you to find everything about her like her name, where she lives, everything….you got it na? omi agrees and says yeah dude i’ll find her….he smiles and sends omi the pic he took of ragini while he was waiting at the stoplight….omi sees her and calls laksh…he says i got the pic…in a few hours i’ll let you know….laksh thanks him and says okay bye now….call me later….omi nods
it’s 7 pm and laksh is still in office….he thinks to leave and omi will call when he gets the time….laksh leaves and gets to his home….he changes and goes to bed….suddenly his phone rings….laksh gets a big smile on his face and says yes omi? found anything…..omi says yes bhai i found her details….laksh gets happy and says then tell me….omi says her name is ragini….she is an orphan and lives by herself…she lives in lane 2 house number 10…..laksh says anything else? he says no yaar…..laksh says okay no problem but thank you!
he hangs up and thinks ragini…..hmmmm very pretty name…..i have to meet her tomorrow….
scene 2
it is morning and laksh wakes up….he sees the time and says 10 am…oh no i have to get to office….he rushes and greets everyone….on the other side ragini wakes up and sees the newspaper….she sees a job offering at dixit companies…..she think wow i should go here….maybe i might find a job…she quickly gets ready and gets to dixit companies….she says hi i am ragini and i came here reading your offering about a job offering….the receptionist says oh yes please come….she takes her to laksh’s cabin and says sir a girl has come to meet you seeing the job offer we had for a secretary….laksh says hmm ask her to sit on this chair….she says yes and asks ragini to go sit inside….she nods….laksh’s back is facing ragini….he is too busy looking at ragini’s pic in his phone and ragini thinks huh look at him…he doesn’t even have time to have a meeting….what is he doing on his phone….she gets angry and says excuse me sir….i am here for my interview and you aren’t even asking me anything….
as soon as he hears her voice he thinks why does her voice make me feel i know her….he turns around and is surprised seeing the same girl he saw at the stoplight….he becomes on cloud 9….ragini snaps at him and says sir my interview….laksh says oh yes let me see….he checks her files and says okay you’re hired….ragini says thank you so much sir….he smiles and ragini leaves…..laksh stops her and says wait….where are you going? she says home….laksh says why? ragini says because i will start from tomorrow na? laksh says no i mean if you want you can start from today itself…she smiles and says really?
he says yes ragini….she says thank you sir…he smiles….a few days go by and laksh just loves ragini way too much!! ragini considers him just her friend but laksh wants to propose her…he goes home and meets omi…he says yaar i really love ragini….ever since i saw her, i have fallen in love with her…omi laughs and says yaar you met her like two days ago…laksh says no omi i saw her a month ago….omi is shocked…he says what? laksh says i was going to my office and was waiting at the stoplight and right there ragini came…i saw her and i fell for her….omi says you love her his much yaar….you should ask her….laksh says i know omi but when…omi says idea….tomorrow in office ask her if she would like to have coffee with you…take her to a coffee shop and then ask her for dinner….
take her there and propose her….laksh thinks wow omi i love the idea…okay then i’ll see her tomorrow…thanks yaar….omi says no problem bro and leaves….laksh smiles thinking about ragini and falls asleep….the next morning he goes to office….he sees ragini working and says ragini if you don’t mind can we go get some coffee together? ragini thinks my sir is telling me to do something then how can i say no…sir will feel bad so i’ll just say yes….she nods and they leave for coffee….he just stares at her the whole time while ragini feels his gaze on him and feels weird….after their coffee laksh says um ragini if you don’t mind can we go have dinner together please….she agrees and quickly leaves….
at night ragini comes to the restaurant wearing a red gown looking very pretty…laksh is shaken seeing her….he thinks today i will propose to ragini….she comes and sees laksh…laksh takes her and they both sit and order food….laksh says ragini i want to say something…she says yes sir tell me….he takes out a rose and goes on his knees…she is shocked….laksh says ragini ever since i saw you i feel for you….i was lost in your innocence, beauty, and your honestly….i really love you ragini and i would like for you to become my other half and marry me…..she is shocked and angry….she gets up and slaps him….laksh is shocked and teary eyed….ragini says how dare you? i came here thinking that you invited me since we were good friends but instead you are proposing to me…..
i can’t believe that you can propose me….and how did you think that i will marry you…i don’t love you…..we are just good friends….she shows him the finger and says do you get that? and she leaves….laksh is angry, heartbroken and what not….he can’t believe that ragini said so much to him….he leaves the restaurant and goes home….he is boiling in anger and is heartbroken while ragini is mad that how can laksh propose to her….we met like 5 days ago….how can he fall in love with me in these 5 days? laksh in his room is crying when his doorbell rings….he opens the door and finds omi….he hugs him and says yaar how did ragini slap me? she should have listened to me….omi calms laksh down and says it’s okay yaar….laksh says no! it is not okay! i love ragini and i want her by any means….omi says no yaar you are thinking wrong…don’t do anything which will ruin everything….laksh says he has made up his mind….i am laksh dixit and i get what i want….
i will get ragini no matter what happens….he angrily rushes out his house and drives to ragini’s house….omi thinks no yaar if you do this than it will ruin even your friendship….he goes after him…laksh gets to ragini’s house and is very angry…he rings the doorbell…ragini thinks who might have come….she opens the door and is shocked seeing laksh…more than that she is shocked seeing his angry and boiling eyes…..laksh says come with me….she says no….he gets mad and says ragini i said come with me….she says no who do you think you are and how can you take me wherever you want forcefully….
laksh says i am laksh dixit and what i want i always get…i love you ragini and i will get you no matter what happens…laksh says come with me now! she angrily says no and is about to shut the door when laksh rushes inside…he gets super mad and says you won’t listen….he grabs her hand and starts pulling her with him…she says leave me laksh….he is mad and hearing nothing….he puts her in the car and starts driving….she shouts laksh leave me or i will call the police….laksh is not listening and driving rashly….laksh where are you taking me?
he reaches the place and gets down…ragini shouts laksh! what behavior is this…you can’t force me to take me anywhere….he shouts i love you ragini…he grabs her hand and takes her up the stairs…she sees the place and says temple? laksh why are we here? he doesn’t answer….he drags her with him and sees an pandit….he goes and says pandit ji we want to marry…ragini is shocked…she says no laksh i will not marry you…he says be quiet….i love you and you know when i say i am laksh dixit and i get what i want then i get what i want…he asks the pandit to start mantras….ragini shouts you can’t do this laksh…he doesn’t listen and holds her hand and forcefully takes the 7 vows…..he fills her head with vermilion and puts the manglasutra….
she is shocked that her wedding has taken place and is now laksh’s wife…..he smiles and says now you are mrs. ragini laksh dixit…..he thanks the pandit and leaves when he spots omi….laksh says omi i married ragini…i got what i wanted….i have my ragini with me now….ragini is shocked with all the happenings that happened just in 5 minutes….laksh takes her home and says so mrs.dixit how do you feel after marrying me? you know ragini i really love you….he touches her shoulders to make her look into his eyes but she is super mad right now….
she slaps laksh and says how dare you? how dare you to marry me without my wish? i don’t even love you….he smiles and says so what? if you don’t love me now then you will love me after our marriage and see now we are married….ragini says this is your illusion…i will never love a guy like you…i thought you were a very humble man but you turned out to be a devil….loving you will be my biggest mistake….laksh shouts ragini! she says don’t yell at me….just because you married me doesn’t mean that i will do everything you say…..
she leaves the room while laksh is angry as hell….he thinks no ragini you will love me….he angrily goes to the restroom and changes his clothes…..he falls asleep and wakes up the next morning….he sees chai next to his table and says see ragini i knew you wouldn’t be angry for long…..he walks out the door to find ragini but sees her sleeping in the guestroom….he thinks ragini is sleeping? then who put tea on my desk….his mom comes and says i did laksh….laksh says maa…..he hugs her and says maa when did you come? she says in the morning….where is papa??? he is sleeping laksh….he says i missed you both so much….ap says me too beta….he goes to guestroom and wakes up ragini….she says you? what are you doing here? laksh says maa came so wake up….she says so? it’s your mom why do i need to come? he gets angry and holds her hands tightly and says maa wants to see you….ragini says why? he says what do you mean by why? we are married so she wants to see my wife….
she says hold on…married? who says we are married? i consider this marriage meaningless….laksh says but for maa it is true so shut up and quietly get ready….she says you can’t tell me what to do….he says i will now go get ready and come down quickly….he leaves the room and ragini cries…she thinks he has ruined my life….why did i even meet laksh….she silently goes to freshen up…..after sometime she comes out and greets ap and dp….they bless her and give her some shagun….she smiles and laksh comes down….as soon as ragini sees him her smiles vanishes….
he says good morning maa….good morning papa….good morning ragini….she feels disgusted but just smiles for ap and dp and forcefully says good morning laksh…..ap says to ragini beta go and make something sweet for your first rasoi….she nods and leaves…..she thinks what to make sweet…she gets an idea and says kheer….yes i will make that….she gets things prepared for the kheer….as she makes it laksh comes inside the kitchen….he goes behind ragini and slides his hands towards her belly…she is shocked….she turns around and sees laksh…she gets mad and yells how dare you touch me? laksh says arrey i’m your husband i have that much rights….she says husband my foot…this marriage is baseless….i don’t believe in it….he smiles and says no problem but eventually i know you will take me as your husband….she says never…saying so she leaves with the kheer….
all come and sit on the table….she goes to sit next to ap but she says arrey ragini beta go sit next to laksh…after all he is your husband na…..she just nods and says yes maa….she goes and sits down…they eat when laksh holds ragini’s hands under the table….she is stunned…she looks at him and whispers to leave her….he continues eating…ap says ragini beta can you please pass me the dal….she thinks how to pick it with my left arm…..she tries and the dal is about to fall when laksh quickly holds it….he says careful ragini and passes the dal to his mom….she says maa i’m done eating i’ll be back….ap nods and ragini rushes to her room….she cries and thinks laksh i will never forget what you did to me…..
after eating laksh says maa i’m going to office so i’ll be back by 7….she nods….laksh leaves and gets to office….ragini at home starts cleaning the floor….it’s 8 pm and laksh still isn’t home….ragini kind of gets tensed that where he would be…why he isn’t home yet? she gets worried and thinks to wait for him….its 11 pm and laksh still isn’t home….she thinks to find him at office and is about to leave but sees laksh coming….he sees ragini still awake and says ragini? he walks to her and says you still didn’t sleep? ragini says i was sleeping but i came to get water….laksh says then why were you waiting at the front door? the kitchen is the other way….she is at loss of words….laksh smiles and holds her shoulders and says ragini i know you were waiting for me….you got scared seeing me not home right? you were worried ragini…..
she says no sternly and removes his hands from her shoulders and says why would i wait for a devil like you? i would not want to even see your face but my unlucky destiny has made me meet you….laksh smiles and says i know you will love me ragini…..i think you have started to…she says my foot and leaves….laksh smiles and goes to his room….he sees ragini not there and thinks if maa sees her in another room she will doubt us….he goes to ragini and says you will have to sleep with me in my room…she says no…i don’t even want to share a room with you….he says it’s about my mom…please come…..she agrees just for ap….she takes her stuff and goes with laksh to his room…..she makes her bed on the floor….laksh sees her and asks her what she is doing? she says can’t you see? i’m making a bed for myself…laksh says but why on the floor….my bed is big….we can share a bed…..she says no….i will not share a bed with you….we don’t even have a husband-wife relationship then there is no meaning in sharing a bed….he gets mad but controls it and says okay whatever…..they both fall asleep…
the next morning the same routine takes place…laksh getting ready to go to office while ragini cooking in the kitchen….few days pass….few weeks pass…..few months pass….it’s already been 5 months…..ragini is seen cooking food in the kitchen when ap comes to her….she says ragini beta….ragini says yes maa any issue? ap says beta i am getting old now and before i die i want something…will you get it for me? ragini says yes maa of course….at the same time laksh comes in the kitchen…ap sees him and says arrey laksh beta its good you came…please come inside….he comes in and as soon a ragini sees him her smile vanishes and looks at him angrily….ap takes laksh’s hands and ragini’s hands and puts them on one another…..
ap says listen both of you…i am getting old and i don’t know when i might die but before i do please do one thing for me….laksh says yes maa tell us we will do anything for you…ragini also says yes maa tell us…ap says ragini beta please give me a cute grandson/granddaughter……raglak are shocked….ragini says maa….she says i know beta it’s weird but please before my last breath i want to see my grandson/granddaughter….please…..laksh says yes maa we will give you one…..ragini looks at laksh shocked…..he smiles at her….ap thanks them and hugs them both
she leaves and laksh says ragini when should we start planning for babies…..she says nothing and leaves silently…..laksh thinks i guess she was shy…it’s okay i’ll ask some other time…..ragini goes to her room and thinks about ap’s words….she thinks maa the thing you asked me for how can i give it to you? how do i tell you maa that i never wanted to get married….how do i tell you that laksh forcefully married me…how do i tell you that i don’t love laksh….how do i tell you maa that we don’t share a husband-wife relationship to give you a heir….she cries and thinks how can i love laksh? he is a devil…..
laksh is driving to his office and he meets his new secretary….he says hi miss shanaya so you are my new secretary….she says yes sir…he says okay so for now i need you to get me the malhotra files…she nods and leaves….laksh in his cabin relaxes while shanaya outside thinks wow! sir is so handsome….i wish he wasn’t married then i would have married him….she smiles and leaves….it’s 7 pm and laksh starts leaving….ragini thinks why do i always wait for laksh for him to come back from office? why am i always so worried for him? she is waiting for laksh…it’s 1 am and he still hasn’t returned….suddenly she gets a call….she picks it up and says hello? she is shocked hearing what the person said and her phone drops out her hand….she screams lakshhhhh!!!!!!
precap: raglak get into a huge fight….ragini slowly starts to fall for him….he feels he did wrong and feels guilty….shanaya is the new mess between raglak….kya hoga jab raglak ke beech dooriyan pari gi??? kya ragini ko kabhi ehsaas hoga ki woh laksh se kitna pyaar karti hain??? kya ragini ko pata chale ga ki laksh usko bohot pehle se pyaar karta hai aur na ki ek do din se…..kya mod layga raglak ki kahani ka????
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Interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next part
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Are wahhh!!bht bht bht acha h yaaar!!i jst loved it!!its soooo amaznggg!!!i jst pray ke laksh ko jald ehsaas hojaye uske galti ka n rags usse pyyaaar krne lge yaar:) 🙂 ahh!!ye shanaya kya krege ab..bt jo v ho mujhe ye bht bht pasand aaya..thnku soooo very nuch for dis story dr keep rockng n stay blessed sweety 😉 😉 😉
Thank you so much dear!! Haha keep reading to know what shanaya will do:)
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Great start. Despite Ragini’s anger at Laksh, it’s sweet she still waits for him. Can’t wait to read more, it will be nice to see Laksh realising his mistake and love blossoming between RagLak ?
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awesome dear….interesting dear…plz update soon…tkcr dear….
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HEY…….its nyc…….Laksh….hmmm….so forceful……..Sobia can you plzz translate the precap to english ?????
I am so sorry dear….yes the precap says what will happen when there will be a rift between raglak?? will ragini e realize how much she loves laksh???will ragini ever find out that laksh loves her for a while now and not for soe days??what new way will be raglak’s life:)
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ohhhhhh………now I’m eagerly waiting for the next update…….plzz do update soon…….raglak will unite won’t they???? what rift?????
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amazing yaar…. loved it
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Awesome one dear..loved it soo much ……..
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