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Pyaarasa Rishta – Savitri Devi-epi 12 MAHA EPISODE

Good Morning Lovely Readers Am so so so excited to write mahaepi tdy finally I will reveal one suspense n then slowly other suspenses wd be revealed

A big wala thanks dear Dhruti, Riya, Amnaa, anee, ruch, khamoshi(am in love wd ur unique guesses ), sanu, niyaa(no more dimaag lago dear n enjoy maha epi now), ruhi, alia, dharani, Anonymousaa,abhilasha, sanjukta, anu, shweta, ashnita(thanks for calling me sissie ty sister love u) for ur lovely words

So I start by declaring winners name
Winners of my fun contest part 1 r-

Shweta,Amnaa, Anonymousaa, Niyaa, ashnita, riya, sanjukta

Now lets start

Recap-Anand too feels some bond with Anmol, Anmol refers Savitri as Dadi this brings about improvement in her health

Kabir had asked Sanchi y Anmol told him he has father n dadi in family when actually they r no more to this Sanchi says she taught him this way as their blessings r wd them

Jaya overhears them n is tensed
Jaya-Sanchi beta Anmol’s Dadaji called up from Australia he was asking about Anmol
Sanchi is confused
Kabir-Australia? ??
Jaya-yes beta Sanchi’s in laws r settled in Australia thats y nobody came here na
Kabir-ohhhkk ask them not to wry Anmol will be fine soon

Sanchi makes puzzled face

Sanchi n jaya r in Anmol’s ward Anmol is sleeping

Sanchi-ma what is this y r u lying to Dr Kabir again n again first u lied about Anmol’s dadi now entire family yy?

Jaya-Sanchi I lied for ur good

Sanchi-what my good ma? how can lie be good for anybody

Jaya-Sanchi am ur mother so please

Sanchi-no ma tell me how cd u say like this for veer’s mum

Jaya-Sanchi I didn’t want Kabir to feel we r alone world is bad what if he takes our advantage? ?
Sanchi-ma u r doubting Dr Kabir ma whats wrong with u? Dr Kabir will take our advantage ma he is god sent angel

Jaya-Sanchi I told u what I felt now forget it if u dnt want to believe dnt believe

Jaya leaves Sanchi is shocked

Kabir is in his cabin,
Kabir is looking at a photograph
Kabir (emotionally)-Happy birthday idiot, I hate u really but still on ur bday am forced to wish u I just cannot control thats my love real love not like urs
God knows where r u
Though feel like cursing u but cannot
After all u were my jaan

Tears drop from Kabir’s eyes

Kabir comes in Anmol’s ward
Anmol is sitting alone
Anmol seems upset

Kabir hugs him
Kabir-Good morning champ what happened y alone where is nani n mumma
Anmol-Tdy is papa’s bday they have gone to temple

Uncle y did papa leave me n go
may be I troubled him lot when I was small

I miss him

Mumma also gets sad n misses him

Kabir is pained He hugs Anmol Anmol weeps Kabir pacifies him

Kabir-bachaa dnt cry mumma will get more upset if she sees u crying no bachaa enough

Anmol(while crying)-omm gan gan pathiye namah omm Ganpathi Namah

Kabir is shocked
Kabir-what r u doing

Anmol keeps saying
Slowly he gets composed

Anmol-when I cannot stop crying I say this mantra

Kabir is puzzled A voice echos

Jab mein emotional hota hun I say this mantra om Ganpathi Namah

Anmol’s voice echos-tdy is my papa’s bday

Fb of savitri reacting to Anmol kissing, Anmol calling her dadi

Anmol playing kuch kuch hota hain
Heart popping out from Anmol’s gift

Voice echoing He is biggest prankster

All flashes before Kabir He is numbed

Kabir (manages to spk)-Anmy do u have ur papa’s pic

Anmol takes out A photo kept under his pillow n gives him

Kabir is dumbstruck to see pic

Scene Shifts

At temple Sanchi n Jaya r praying
Sanchi-I miss u veer happy birthday u made my life beautiful every single second I spent with u I I I I

She gets emotional

I just cannot forget I love u I love u
”Hamari Adhuri Kahani plays”

Sanchi n Jaya r about to leave

Sanchi holds Jaya’s hand-Ma whats worrying Ma please dnt hide now we r in temple

Jaya-Sanchi Dr Kabir is Dr Kabir Malhotra Anand Malhotra’s son our destiny has brought us to Malhotra family again
Sanchi he is our veer’s Kabir bhai

Sanchi is shellshocked

Kabir’s pov-veer?????
Anmol is veer’s son n Sanchi jii is his wife Anmy is my nephew
He is Anmol Veer Malhotra

Kabir leaves ward his eyes r red
Anmol calls him but he doesn’t listen
Kabir is shown driving car teareyed

Sanchi (weeping)-Ma savitri aunty is really Anmol’s dadi ma but Kabir thinks her condition is like this because of me they hate me ma they hate me

She breaks down in Jaya’s arms

Precap-Anmol (seems extremely ill)-Kabir uncle kabir uncle
Sanchi calls Kabir he cuts her call

Ok so kaisa laga pyaara sa rishta reveal hogaya

Ok congratulations winners
sorry other participants very sorry actually those who clearly wrote that Kabir n veer r bros I declared them as winners slowly other suspense would also be revealed n somebody guessed it right (wd reveal latter)
I love u all please dnt feel bad sorry again

Winners ur prize
u can demand any type of scene or character to be added in this ff n I will do it
pl comment

or

u can write a scene direct msg me I add in ff

Love u all

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