Hi guys iam Ashnita.Actually iam kanchi fan as well as varun kapoor aka veer. I always write kanchi ff. I thought to write a os for my veer. Pliz sanveer fans read this and do comment. If you guys like this than I will write many os for sanveer. . Iam first time writing sanveer os
If any mistake sorry and u guys can throw anything I will catch it.
Let’s start
Two small kids playing together just then there their parents took away from eachother.They r crying and shouting but their parents didn’t leave them. They some how managed to come out from their grip.
They quickly hugged each other. Boy to girl I wait for u to my last breath. Pyar ho jab pyar ho haar baar ho tum se. Girl – i will also wait for u to my last breath. Girl gave her anket to him and said this will always remained of me after that boy gave his watch he said same words as girl said .They hugged eachother. Their parents once again took them forever.
Boy at home crying his dad came and slapped him.
Father – i told u before dnt make relation with that girl.
Boy – her name is sanchi my sanchi
Mal – baut ziddi ho tum pack ur bags we r leaving this city right now.
At sanchi house
Jaya slapped sanchi and said I told you never meet that how Malhotra son
Sanchi – his name is veer my veer
After sometime Malhotra and his family left city. Sanveer r crying remembering eachother.
After 10 yrs
Many boys r playing basket ball. All girls r cheering same name Veer.
A boy is shown won the match. He came out. He drinks water after that he pours water on his hair. His eyes r shown his lips and his face. He is veer with naughty smile
Girls – veer we love you
Veer gave them a attitude look.
IN SDCH
Veer – where r u Sanchi I’m waiting for u .pliz cum back to me. I can’t wait to see u.
Just then his eyes went to a girl with curly hair simple ear ring wearing kameez. .it’s sanchi
Sanchi came towards veer.
Sanchi – hi iam sanchi agarwal
Veer – iam Veer.
They shake hands and sanchi left
Veer – is this my sanchi?
No she is sanchi agarwal not my sanchi. She was sanchi mishra.
*Quick note *
(Veer doesn’t know sanchi is mishra, sanchi doesn’t know veer as he doesn’t use his surname )
Without knowing their identity they became best friend and after that fell in love with eachother but couldn’t confess due to the promise with eachother In childhood.
Fine day
Sanchi was in veer cabin she was looking for something .She fell down with a old box. She stood up opened the box and gets shocked to see their childhood pics with her anket.
Sanchi- kya yahi mera veer hai. I love u Veer.
Sanchi rushes to veer but veer was not in the hospital.
Let’s see where is veer. I got it veer is in same place where he so sanchi last time.
Veer – wat happened to me. How can I love sanchi agarwal. I always loved sanchi but y iam attached to this sanchi. Mene tume kaha ta pyar ho jab pyar ho sirf meri sanchi se ho. For Q mujhe sanchi agarwal se pyar hogaya.
Just then he gets a tapped on his shoulder he turned back and saw his watch lying. He gets shocked he quickly picked up.
Veer – that’s means my sanchi is here i can feel her. Sanchi pliz come out.
Sanchi came and turned back veer couldn’t see her.
Veer – sanchi iam sorry I know i promised to u that I will wait for u .aaj hum itni saal baad mile lekin mein khush nhi hu.
Sanchi – y
Veer – sanchi i love sanchi agarwal. Dnt know when where I was controlling myself but I fell in luv with her.
Sanchi – so wat about me. I came here for u.
Veer -iam sorry sayad hamara kismat me nhi hai ek dusre ka sath.
Just then sanchi turned around and burts out laughing. Veer gets shocked to see sanchi.
Veer – it means u
Sanchi – yes Veer iam ur sanchi mishra.
Veer was speeehless he quickly hugged her. He bend on his knees.
Veer – iam sorry sanchi actually when propose time boy wears ring I dnt have a ring but I have ur anket. So Miss Sanchi will u marry me.
Sanchi – no
Veer teary eyed sanchi saw that
Sanchi – offcourse I will marry u.
Veer – thank you god and sanchi i told u pyar ho jab pyar ho haar baar ho tum se.
Sanchi – yes Veer
They hugged eachother Bg plays Mile ho tum humko
Just then they hear gun shot They turned back and saw malhotra holding gun.
Malhotra – i kill this girl
Veer – wats ur problem dad
Malhotra – my problem is she is Christian
Veer – so cut my blood and her I think color will be same. I love sanchi and I will marry her.
Jaya – sanchi chalo I sent you here As sanchi agarwal to take revenge but u silly girl fell in love with this Hindu boy
Sanchi – so wat mom i got my veer back.
Veer – sanchi do u trust me do u love me
Sanchi – yes Veer
He cuts his finger and filed sanchi hair line with his blood. Malhotra and Jaya gets shocked.
Veer – now no one will take my wife. Dad i luv u too. Pliz accept sanchi. Wat is differnce between Christian and Hindu. They all r same. If you dnt want to accept sanchi. It’s ok pliz dnt take my life. If u ever loved me. For my sake let us go.
Jaya was about to slap sanchi just then Malhotra holding her
Malhotra – Jaya they both r right. Their r no difference between Christian and Hindu we all r same.First we should clear our dirty minds for judging with religion . Let’s make our new start with our children.
Jaya was not agreeing but after sometime she thought and agreed.
Sanveer double marriage. Firstly in Christian and secondly in Hindu with all rituals.
5 years later
Women is going to her room .she gets shocked seeing 2 people still sleeping. She wakes them up. They r still sleeping.
Women – veer aur adi wake up its late
Adi – pliz mumma first wake up dad and then me
Women – veer gets up
Veer -sanchi first wake up ur son than me
Sanchi -oh god iam saying last time getup
Adveer – sanchi take a chill pill
Sanchi – chill pill
She brought some water and threw at them.
Sanchi – take ur chill pill
Adveer -noooooooooooooooooo
Sanchi – dekha veer pyar ho jab pyar ho haar baar ho tum se.
Screen pauses on their smiling face
The End
I hope u guys like it
Sorry for mistakes
Regards
Ashnita
12 Comments
sorry ashnita for not commenting on your other ff.. I was busy yaar… superb os… Amazing… Childhood love story is so nicely expressed in your os that ek baar ko laga jaise Main saamne hi baith kar veer aur sanchi k love story ko witness kar rahi hu…. Loved it… Fatafati story….
wow …… short and sweet ….. plz come up with more sanveer ff…. i love veer …. or sanky ??? … bye tc
awwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooo cute os I love sanveer keep writing dear loved it sanveer chemistry was amazing come back soon with sanveer ff
Too good Ashu dear……..hamari Ashu kuch likhe aur woh kamaal ki na ho, aisa kabhi nahi hosakta……….. a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot Ashu dear….
Nice story
Ashi though I rarely read sanveer stories but this one was remarkable…. Means the story and social cause u take…….everything was perfect….loved it!!! Love uh!!
Hey ashi u r great writter dear nd koi farq nahi padta ki tumne kanchi ya sanveer per ff yaa os likha h i like veer but not sanveer… Btw i lovvv os dear post nxt but our kanchi os …hehehe bas itna hi bardasat ho raha h mujhse m jealous or tumhe jalne ki badboo bhi aa rahi hoge…just kidding post ur ff sweetie
Amazing sweetie ?
Wow ashnita… such a good story..
Kanchi ke alawa kuch achha nahi sivai tumhari stories ke..?? Sanveer rocks for this series only.. Love for u and kanchi will be unfinite??
Ashnita ur a amazing writer
I read all of yours kanchi ff’s nd I’m a San veer fan but I love ur ff’s
This os is a lot amazing ??
Sorry for the late reply dear very very sorry dear I was busy with my exam but os is amazing and sweet
Ashuu.. It was fabulous… Amazing.. Although i am Kanchi fan.. But i loved this OS… Or was brilliant.. Ossmm.. Love you..