Ammu…why sorry 4 the friend’s request.I am happy 2 get u as my friend.Piyali..I have pmed u my ff index link.Plz check IF box.Which forum should I check to see if u have updated Fanah?
Pyar to hona hi tha2 Part 11
Kusum tried to search for a glass from the kitchen.Shyam who came that way saw it.
Shy:Why is she behaving like a blind girl?
Shyam observed Kusum.
Shy:Is she really blind?
Shyam came in front of her.Still Kusum’s eyes did not move.He was shocked.
He thought:I can’t believe that she is really blind.Anyways it’s not an issue for me.
Seeing Kusum Suddenly she heard a voice.
“No need of struggling hard to take glass.Here is water”.
It was Shyam who gave her a glass of water.
Kus:Shyamji?
Shy:Yes.Drink water Kusum.
Kus:Thanks a lot.
Kusum drank water.
Shy:I did’nt know that you do not have eye sight.Your eyes are so beautiful.
She became upset:What is the use of having beautiful eyes if they don’t eye sight?
Shy:Don’t say like that Kusum.You did not apply kaajal on your eyes?
Kus:My eyes have no eye sight.Then why should i?
Shy:Don’t bother about that.You should always apply kaajal.
Kus:Sometimes Kumud didi used to apply kaajal.I can’t do that by myself.Once I tried that.But it went inside and my eyes started iching.
Shy:Still try again.You will look more beautiful.
She blushed.
Kusum tried to put kaajal by herself.Shyam stood at the door way and watched it.
He smirked:Poor girl.
Little bit of kaajal went inside her eye and she cried.Shyam went there and blew out air.
Shy:Now are you ok?
Kusum realized that Shyam was standing close to her.She became shy.
Kus:Yes.
Shy:Don’t take any risk.I will put kaajal for you.
Kus:But…
Shyam put kaajal on her eyes.
Shy:Now you look so pretty.
She blushed.
Kabir saw bangles in the market.He smiled imagining Kusum in those bangles.He bought those bangles and went near Kusum.She was thinking of her moments with Shyam and blushing.
Kab:Kusum!
Kusum did’nt hear at all as she was dreaming of Shyam.
Kab:Kusum!
She woke up from her dream:Kabir?
Kab:What are you thinking of?
Kus:Nothing.
Kab:I saw some beautiful bangles in the shop.Since you like bangles I bought them.
Kus:Thank you Kabir.
Kab:Can i put them on your hand?
Aaa… ahaa…….
Aaa….
Kus:Why do you need my permission for that?You are my best friend.
Lafzo se jo tha bare
Khali ban ko jo bare
He smiled.He put the bangles on her hand romantically.
Kuch toh tha
Tere mere
Darmiyaan..
Rishte ko
Kya mod doon
Na tha yeh ab tod doon
Ya phir yun hi chod doon
Darmiyaan..
Kabir said in his mind:Now you look so beautiful Kusum.
He kept looking at her.
Darmiyaan..
Darmiyaan
Darmiyaan..
Darmiyaan
Kuch toh tha
Tere.. mere darmiyaan..(Jodi Breakers)
Kumud was feeding Shiv and narrating a story to him.Rudra was smiling while watching them.Suddenly Kumud saw him:Why are you looking at like this?
Rudra:Just looking at the mother son bonding.I realized that my decision of marrying you was not wrong,infact it was the best decision ever.Shiv cannot get a better mother.
Kumud smiled.
The principal of Drama school announced:The drama fest is postponed.It’s only after 3 months.
Khushi:Wow…it’s so nice.Now we have more time to rehearse.
Arnav had a naughty smile on his face:Why are you so happy Khushi?Is it because you can have more enjoyment having enacting romantic scenes with me?
K:Stop it Arnav.I meant…you were very slack in rehearsing for a long time.Now only you just started concentrating on your rehearsal.So my hopes for winning in the drama fest was low.So since we have time now you can rehearse more and we can make our drama the best.
He pulled her closer to him.
Arn:Why are you lying Khushi?Why don’t you admit that you love doing romantic scenes with me?
K:What rubbish!
Arn:Only when we are doing romantic dramas you can do romance with me.
What if in the next drama you are going to act as my mother?Then there will be no romance.
K:Me as your mother?You are mad.I am younger than you.
A:So what?In films younger ladies are acting as the mother of superstars.And your face has started wrinkling.So you will made as my mother in the next drama.
Khushi opened her mouth in ‘o’ shape and touched her face:Wrinkles?
Arnav smirked.
Khushi went to the beauty parlour and did facial.Then she looked at the mirror.
K:Now that Arnav can’t say that there are wrinkles on my face.
She bought anti wrinkles face cream and applied it on her face.Then she went to Arnav.
K:Mr.Arnav..you said my face is full of wrinkles.Right?Now look at my face and see if there are wrinkles.
He touched her face naughtily.
K:What are you doing?
A:You only told me to check if there are wrinkles.Only by touching I can check.
He touched her face passionately.Her heart beat fast.She lost herself in his touch and closed her eyes.
A:Khushi…
Slowly she opened her eyes.They were lot in each other.
She could feel his breath as he was standing very close to her.
A:I was lying that your face had wrinkles.
K:What?
Khushi pushed him.
K:You were teasing me?
Arnav chuckled.
K:Don’t laugh.Because of you,I wasted so much of money in facial and face cream.
He laughed:Really?Why do you want to look young?To be my romantic heroine in all the dramas?Why did you bother about your wrinkles?Just because you did’nt want to act as my mother?
Khushi was silent.
A:Khushi…not only in dramas, in real life also you can be my heroine if you are ready.If you become my real life heroine you don’t have to worry about your wrinkles.Even if you have wrinkles you will be my lovely heroine only.
He came and blew in her ears.She closed her eyes feeling passion.
He whispered in her ears:So think about it again.
K:No way.
She walked away.
After 2 1/2 months….
Indra went to Kumud:It’s been more than 3-4 months.Still no good news from you?
Kumud:Good news?
Ind:Why are you becoming pregnant?
Kumud became silent.
Ind:Are you sterile?
Kumud suppressed her pain caused by her insult.Rudra came hearing this.
R:Maa,what are you asking Kumud?Can you please stop it.
Ind:Why should I stop?Can you deny that she is not becoming pregnant due to her physical problem?
R:If you think that non pregnancy is happening due to physical problem,then the problem is with me.
Kumud stared at him.
Ind:Very funny.If the problem was with you then how is Shiv your son?Is he Shilpa’s illegimate son?
Rudra screamed:Maa….if you say anything more i will forget that you are my mother.
Indra was shocked.
R:Maa,don’t you know that 2 years back I met with an accident?Due to that accident only I lost my ability to produce children.
Indra and Kumud were shocked.
R:And don’t dare to hurt Kumud by putting this matter.
Rudra and Kumud left.
Kum:Ridraji,what you told now….It is to save my reputation.Right?So that no will call me sterile.
Rudra was silent.
Kum:You are so nice Rudraji.
R:Kumud…don’t say anything.If I had’nt said so Maa would have tried to find out the truth of our married life ie we are 2 strangers on the same bed.
He walked away.
Indra thought:Its Kumud who made Rudra against me.When Shilpa was here he has’nt talked to me so rudely.
Kumud,you are going to suffer now.She poured oil on the floor.Shiv saw it with a shock.Kumud was walking towards the stairs.Shiv screams:Mumma…don’t go there.Dadi has poured oil there to make you fall.
Kumud was shocked.Indra was embarrassed.
Ind:Why are you lying Shiv?Lying is not good for kids.
Shiv:I am not lying.You are the liar.If you hurt my mumma I will hurt you.I won’t let you do anything to my mumma.
Kumud became emotionally happy.
Indra got angry:You will hurt me for her?
Shiv:Yes.No doubt.
Ind:Then listen Shiv.This lady whom you call mumma is not real mother.She is your father’s second wife.Means your step mother.
Shiv was shattered:No.You are lying.
He looked at Kumud:Mumma,tell that dadi is lying.
Kumud became upset.She kept quiet.
Ind:She won’t tell the truth.
Indra brought Shilpa’s photograph and gave it to Shiv:This is your mother.Ask your father.He will tell you the truth.
Shiv ran towards Rudra who was reading newspaper at the veranda.
Kumud cried bitterly.
Kum:Why this is happening to me God?If Shiv hates me I will have no reason to live.
Suddenly she saw Saras in the bedroom.
Saras wiped her tears.
Kum:Saras…Go away.Why did you come here?
S:Hear Kumud…I won’t let anyone make you weak.I won’t allow Indra Devi to make you weak.
Kumud…don’t be weak.Be strong.Face the situation.Your love for Shiv is true.Shiv also knows that.He will understand that.So don’t waste time by crying Kumud.
Kumud got courage from his words:Yes Saras. I won’t be weak.
I am sure that my love for Shiv will make me win.
Suddenly Saras vanished.She realized that it was just his illusion.
Kum:Saras….you came in my dreams to give me strength.Thanks a lot Saras.
5 Comments
amazing………………………….kushi -arnav scenes and arnav’s words were marvellous……………i loved kabir and kusum’s scenes a lot………………..hope kusum doesn’t fall for that shyam…………………………………………………………rudra-shiv-kumud scenes……………….no words dear and saras coming in kumuds dreams was amazing………………but no scenes of saras…………i didn’t miss him as he was in kumud’s dream yet please add some scenes of him…………………………………………….by the way , why to worry……………….i’ll always give you links of fanaah with each of my comments here:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=FANAAH+tere+ishq+mein
sorry dear , exams approaching so won’t be able to open india forum , and ya i’ll be even taking a small break so don’t think that i am not reading, i’ll read all the parts after my exams and will also read your other ffs………………………really dear…………still thinking about kusum -kabir scenes………..darmiyan was perfect…………………. sorry from 8th i’ll not be able to comment…………………………………….but i am gonna read for sure……by the way while checking your messages i couldn’t understand the second message and also dear , i guess you are confused that my swaragini ff is a swasan-raglak one…………..actually it is a ragsan-swarlak ff…………………………………just to inform you………………love you dear……………….be happy…………
I’m glad that u loved the update.But sad that u won’t be able to comment bcz of ur exams.I thought u r writing on Swasan.Swasan ffs have demand on IF.That’s why
SO SORRY DEAR , BY the way i have written a swasan os on india forum………….just posted it to chck something…………….by the way , a question are you a swasan-raglak fan or a ragsan -swarlak fan…………….so do tell dear………..love you………..be happy……………..
well…i have not watched the show.have seen only gerua episode of swasan n their pics.since i like Varun in SC as Danny i’m a Swasan liker.i’vent seen ragsan or swarlak at all.i
Superb episode Jasmine rahul..