Haiii all…
So let’s start…
EPI-18
PART-3
SCENE-1
AT BEACH..
D- So wat was ur dream…?????
She smiles looking down while he is curiou to knw…
S- ☺Jab mein choti thi mujhe koi intreset nahi tha Dr Lawyer Ye sab bane mein….mujhe toh sirf Travelling par intresting tha….
(Whn i’m in childhood i hv no int to become a Dr or Lawyer i hav only intrest in travelling…..)
D- Kya travelling…..????!!!!!
He is surprised…
S- Haa….mujhe toh moka hi nahi mila iss duniya dekhne ki…..
(Haa…i haven’t any opportunity to see this world….)
D- Aap 26 sal ke ander hi duniya dhekhna chahthi thi…..interseting…..
(U wanted to see all this world in within 26 yrs…interesting….)
Sona fold her hands..
S- Mr.Dixit……Aap normal ladke hai na…????
(Mr.Dixit r u normal boy…????)
D- Wat do u mean….
S- Agar aap normal ladke hai toh meri bath samjatha thi…..afsoos….nahi samjha paya aap….
(If u r a normal boy u cn easily undrstnd my words bt so sad….u didn’t….)
D- Dr.Sona Aap kahena kya chahthe ho…????
(Dr.Sona wat u want to tell..)
S- Yehi ki Aap bahoth boring hai…..
(That u r very boring…)
She start laughing…..?????
Dev gets irritation but seeing her smile he too joins….
D- seriously……
She nodded her head…
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SCENE-2
Dev and Sona are walking in sea shore…
The cold water touching there legs…
D- Toh…aapka dream Nutrionist nahi Toh phir aap bane kyun…????
(So u didn’t dream to become Nutrionist then y wl u become….???)
S- Mera nahi Bhai ka thaaaa……
(Not mine it is bhai’s….)
D- Wat…???
S- Yh…he want me to become a Dr….
D- I’m totally confused….
S- kyun..????
(Y..??)
D- Kyunki…aapka bhai aapko Dr banana chahtha tha…jab aap ban gayi toh aap unse joot bolthe hai…???
(Becoz…he want u to become a Dr…and whn u became u lied to him….)
Sona stopped…gets upsets…??
Dev sees her upset..ang get worried..
D- Ohh so sry…i didn’t mean to hurt u….
S- Its ok…Its a strange game of destiny…..
D- Wat do u mean…????
(Both agaun start to walking…)
S- Aapko patha hai jab mein Dr graduation complete kiya aur finally Dr bana gaya….is duniya mein sabse zyatha mera bhai khush tha…unhone sare frnds busdiness partner ko call karke kaha ki..
“Meri behan Dr hai.. ”
Unhe dekhkar mein aur bhi kush tha….lekhin meri khushi zyadha din nahi ruki…..
(do u knw whn i completed my Dr graduation and finally became Dr…my bhai is in the top of the world…he called all his frnds and partners and tell that “my sister became Dr”by seeing his happines i get more happy…but that happy doesn’t remin for long…..
Again her eyes gets tears….
Dev looks at her…
She continues…
S- Jab mein Dr padna shooru ki thab se uska importance ethics sab tha mere man mein…..dheere dheere mein isse aapna banaliya….
Aur mein chahthi thi ki mera studies bekar na bane……aur mujhe bhi ek offer aya tha ek reputed hospital mein…mein khush tha atlast meri abilities ko use karne keliye ek chance mila…
(whn i start to study Dr…i came to knw abt its importance and ethics…and only that were in my heart…slowly it becomes my dream…and i wanted that my show abilities…and ..i got a offer frm reputed hospital…i’m happy that atlast my got a chance to use my abilities…)
Dev is silent and listens her carefully…..
In between they see each other she wl continue….
Her eyes get tears but they didn’t come out side….
S- Lekhin….
(Bt…)
Dev looks at her…
S- Bhai…..unhone mana kar diya…
(Bhaii…he doesn’t allow me…)
D- Par kyun…????
(Bt y….???)
S- ab tak mujhe bhi nahi patha kyun unhe prblm hai mein kam par jane mein…????
(Till now even i don’t wat s his prblm whn i want to go to job…)
D- Strange….
S-Yh….isiliye mein bhaii se joot bolkar kam kartha hoon…
(Yh…that’s y i lied to him abt my job…)
D- Kya mein aapse ek bath pooch sakthe hai…???
(Cn i ask u 1thing…???)
S- I knw aap kya poochna chhtha haii….!!!!
Dev looks at her
S- Yehi na kaise mein aapne hi bhai se jootu bholthi hoon…????
(I knw wat u want to ask me….that how could i lied to him….???)
D- Haa…aise hi kuch…
(Haa like that…)
S- Hmmm…aapne bathaya thana us din ki “mein ne dheka aapka bhai aapse kitna pyar kartha hai. Unse aap jootu bolthe..”….sochiye agar ek din mera bhai ko dhekha kar aap mereliye unka pyar samjha gaya toh mein unke behan hoon…toh kya mein kabi bi nahi samjha nahi hoga woh pyar….?????
(Hmmm…u told me that day that “i see ur bhaii’s love for u…and u lied to him..”think u only see him and his love for me only one time and u undrstnd that…so wat i nvr undrstnd his love for me….????)
Dev feel guilty….bcoz he didn’t think in that way ….
She continues..
S- Toh kya itna bhi stupid hoom……????
Nahi mein har ek din har ek pal jab unse jootu bola andher hi andher tootu raha tha…mera har ek jootu mujhe safe ki..lekhin mera takleef ko zyadha ki….
(If i’m that much stupid…???? No…in each day in each sec whn i lied to him i broking frm heart…my each and every lie safe me…bt i got more pain….)
Mr.Dixit kya aap ko lektha hai jootu bolna ithna aasan hai nahi…woh bhi un lokhom se jin ko hum pyar karte hai aur woh hame bhi…..its very very difficult….
(Mr.Dixit do u think its easy to lie….no…its not like easy…and moreover whn lied to those whom we love and love us too…)
Dev now totally undrstand her sitution and feelings….
S- Haa mein ne jootu bola…cheat kiya…i’m so sry….
(haa i lied….i’m so sry…)
Again her tears comes out of her eyes…
She again cries badly ..and this time her each and every tear is her pain….
By seeing his tears he too got tears in his eyes but he controlled it…..
He didn’t distrub her….again let her cry…
He put his hand around her shoulder….
She cries being in his chest…..
Dev’POV
again she break down…this time her tears is for Him…her bhai….very mysterious bhai….i think this time too she hug me while crying to lessen her pain…but she didn’t….but i can’t see her that state…i didn’t think of anything and put me hands around her shoulder…she cries in my chest….again my heart feel her pain….and get wet due to her tears……
Don’t why by seeing her tears i also got tears…???? i feel like its my duty to wipes it…..i feel like something is happening in me….i feel like apart frm 3 ladies of my life some other one is there and she needs me….who could be that girl….????”
Sona’s POV
Again i didn’t control these tears…these are coming like a falls……whnevr i speak abt this i feel very weak and loose my control….last time i hugged him…tightly ….i didn’t think anything whn he told that i rushed to him…i feel like i only wait for that words…..and he didn’t move me away may be seeing my tears he also melted…. i saw some tears in his eyes too and he controlled….y should he got…???? And
now i didn’t rushed to his arms…bt by shocking me he put his hands over my shoulder….i didn’t expect this frm him…i knw these are common between all frnds…bt i feel like more safe and secure in his arms….y i don’t knw…before it i only experience this feel whn my Bhaii side hugged me….and now by he i experience that same feel…wat connection is this…y i’m feeling like that…?????”
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SCENE-2
AT THE CAR
Both Sona and Dev atlast left frm there aftr a while….
And again there is a hell silence is spread…
D- How strange….!!!!!!
Sona gets confused…
S- Wat…????
D- I mean saare ladkiyam kahthe hai ki hum strong hai hum bear kar sakthe hai sara pain lekhin…thodi si sensitively bath kare toh falls ki tarah unka tears aa jatha hai….
(I mean all girls are telling that we are strong we can bear any pain…bt of someone start talking sensitively your tears are coming like a falls….)
{Sry to all…..i didn’t mean to hurt any1…and i can’t too tolerate this type dialogues. Against girls..but i use it only for the purpose of showing howmuch Dev hiddenly loves her…hope u undrstand…}
She got irritation…
S- Mr.Dixit toh aap kah rahe ki hum girl pain bear nahi kar sakte hai…????
(Mr.Dixit so u mean we girls can’t bear any pain…????)
Dev got nervous
D- Mein aise kab kaha…
(Whn i told like that…???)
S- Toh aapka mathlab kya hai…????
(So wat u mean..???)
D-I only mean girls ko sensitive bathom par jaldi ro the hai…))
(I only mean that girls got tears immediately….on sensitive mattes…)
S- Ohhh really….
He nodded his head S…
S- toh aap bhi ek girl hai…
(So u too a girl…)
Dev is shocked…
D- Kya wat nonsense…????
S- Nonsense nahi…Aap ne hi kahatha na sensitive batbom par hum jaldi rothe hai…
(Not nonsense..u onlt told na we got tears in sensitive matters….)
D- Haa…
(S…)
S- Toh jab mein ne rothe rothe aapko dhekha aap bhi aapka asoon poch rahthe…
(So while crying i noticed u too wipe ur tears…)
Dev is shocked and feel embarrased….
D- Nahi woh..ankhon mein…
(No woh i got…)
Sona brust into laughing…..
??????????
He still fee embarssed….
S- I knw u can’t lie to anyone….
Dev is feeling do embarassed….gets irritated….
D- Ok..sry
She didn’t stop laughing…
D- i said sry now stop this laughing….
Still Sona is laughing….
Suddenly Dev stops the car and hold her hand pulled her to him….
She got much shocked and her laugh stopped suddenly…
Her heart increased….
They both are too close to each other….
And lock their eyes to each other …
(KUCH RANG PYAR KE AISE BHI….)
Sona’s POV
I was laughing…..bt suddenly he pulled me close to him…very closed to him….i’m hell shocked….wat happened to me…my heart beat is increasing…..i can’t take my eyes frm his eyes….his eyes are shining likd a stars….for the first time i sees him this much close….i feel like something to me….i feel like some butterflies in my stomach….i feel likr i’m seeing a most happiness in my life….Y..wat happened to me…????
I forget all things…i forget my surrondings…
Bt suddenly hearing horn sound of a car i came back to sense…but i see still Dev is lost in thoghts. He is still stare at me……he is not in his sense…..i shaked him…
Dev’s POV
I tell that dialogue to change her mood.
.i ‘m sure that whn i talk like that she wl correct my mistake…she can’t tolerate that type of words or dialogue and she wl forget all and stand to confront me.
.like alwsys does but this time she didn’t confront me instead she catched me.
Catched my tears whn i tried to control it i’m shocked she noticed that…evn idon’t knw y i got that…if she ask reasons for that wat should i rply her….but she didn’t demand reason but she tease me on that…She was laughing By seei g her laughing i too got happy but aftr sometime i sense that she laughing on me. She is making fun of me…..i didn’t have patience to control me….sudeenly loosing all my contol i hold her hand grabbed pulled near to me…don’t knw y i did that bt that sec i even think of anything…i pulled her this close that i can only see her eyes…..i didn’t take my eyes frm her…..
Whn i see her this much close for the frst time i feel like something happening in me….i feel some restless happiness a weird feeling wat was that…??? Y i’m feeling like that…???? I knw she is beautiful but this much beauty of her i didn’t evr noticed….
I lost in thoughts…. in her…i forget all things near to me…evn i can’t hear a falling down needle’s sound…only i can hear her heart beat…and mine…..
Bt suddenly she shaked me…i come back to sense….
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S- Mera ghar aa gaya…
(My house reached…)
D- woh….jana zarori hai kya..???
(Woh is it need to go…????)
S- Wat…???
D- I mean…..jane ki permission lena zarori hai kya…????
( i mean is it need to seek permission to go…?)
S- Oh…So bye..
D- Bye…
S- See u tommarrow…
D- Hmmm..
Sona start to leave but suddenly she turned to him..
S- Tanx alot…
D- For wat…???
S- Hmm….for all…
D- Hmmm….sry..
S- For wat…???
D- To hurt u…
Sona looks down and smiles…
S- Aap jithna hurt kiya usse kayi zyadha khushi diya aaj aapne….
(How much u hurt me u give me more than happiness than that…)
Dev is toched by her words…
And both give a smile to each other…
Suddenly both hug each other….
And by breaking the hug she didn’t stay tonsay anything and ran away…
Dev is smiling seeing her going and left….
So guys this epi ends here..
This is the Devakshi spl….i guess u all knw get clear that they start to love each other…but they till now didn’t aware of that feeling for each other…..
So guys have patience…..till their confirmation….to each other….
And Arshi fans i also planned a intersting epi…for Arshi…so have patience till then..soon u wl get that…..
And so sry if anyone get hurt by my words…
And one more thing…
Frm today ican’t post it regularly due to my college and studies….
So my nxt epi wl b posted on 15/16 if before that i got time i wl defientely post nxt epi…..
Hope u all like this ..if anyone feel bored of my senti dialogues so sry…..
I tried my level best to give a nice one…
And as always i’m eagerly waiting for ur comnentz….plzzzz as always all reader do comnents……
Feel free to give new ideas/suggestions
THANK YOU
SAGAA
22 Comments
Wow wow wow
Tanq AYUSHI
What a epi…..amazing epi……….
Tanq laxmi
Wow wow wow awesome ???
Tanq sumaiya sumi
Ausm post loved it……
Tanq shruti sagar
Wow no words to say
Tanq madhuri
No words to say….interesting episode….
Tanq Jo
Nice , devakshi❤
Tanq y.balamirra
Wow..I regular silent reader of ur ff but this devakshi epi was just awesome. .full of hidden love…just loved it
Tanq apps…keep give comments…
Superb, lovely simply great…. Still the suspense is not out….anyways post soon n ya waiting for arshi SPL….
BTW nice cover pic
Tanq tani
Nice update… in fact a good story base to please both Arshi & Devakshi fans…for a first time writer this is amazing… looking forward to read more updates from yr end happy story telling SAGAA
Tanq meenu
so sorry sagaa for i was not able to comment erlier
cos i dint find time to read cos now a days i have a lot of work in my office so really sorry but the epi was awesome. update asap
hey can anyone give me the link of epi 19 pl.