Hi guys iam Ashnita. I hope u guys remembered me. Thank you for ur lovely comments it always make me smile .As I told you guys in my other ff that I will end my all ff and maybe i wont write any other ff because I couldn’t reply u guys I feel so bad when I read ur lovely comments but couldn’t reply and I couldn’t reach ur expactation and I always bored u guys .thank you guys for loving my ff. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads
And Pliz Silent Readers Do Comment. Sayad hamara sath yahi talak tha
Episode starts
Kabir coming home as how shaurya wears. His hair style is stylish, his eyes r Kanji as he wears lense. And he starts singing tume apna banane ki kasam kayi hai kayi hai. Everyone gets shocked including sanchi to see him in other getup.
Malhotra – kabir yeh kya hahal banaye.
Kabir – oh ganje apne kaam se kaam rakho.
Savitri – Kabir wat r saying he is ur dad. I didn’t taught u this.
Kabir – bhudi tume alag se invitation de
Veer – bhai wat happened to u
Kabir – oh maharaja shut up or else I will shut u in my style.
Kabir went to his room. Sanchi came behind him
Sanchi – kabirrrr
Kabir – Oh My Mata wat u want now
Sanchi – who r u
Kabir – iam ur husband
Sanchi – no u r not my Kabir. Who r u
Kabir grabbed sanchi neck and hang her in air.
Kabir – baut bolti ho tum ,u want to know me OK iam shaurya goenka
Sanchi gets shocked
Kabir – hahaha look at ur face u r like manjulika. I was kidding
Sanchi – next time dnt take his name infront of me.
Kabir -woah my jangli bili
Sanchi pov – y Kabir reminded me of shaurya he himself told me dnt take shaurya name infront of him. Kuch toh garbad hai daya oh I mean sanchi.
Kabir as shaurya- u have to stop watching cid.
Sanchi – y i like watching cid. (Wait I was talking in my mind how do Kabir knw. U have to find it sanchi. Inspector daya banjao
Kabir – OK
In the night
Sanchi is sleeping kabir is missing. Lets see where is Kabir. Oh i got it Kabir is in sdch in store room with dead bodies.
Shaurya is out of Kabirs body .All dead bodies doesn’t have head. Head is hanging in air with blood and mouth r talking or should I say singing song to entertain shaurya.
Kabir – shaurya can I ask something
Shaurya – no
Hahaha ask shaurya said
Kabir – wat r u doing with dead bodies
Shaurya – u will get ur answer when time will come.
He looked back and saw Kabir missing. He gets angry. Kabir runs but he came same place, again he runs again he comes in same place. Everytime he runs and cuming same place. Shaurya appears and singing
Naadan paridey ghar Aja.
Shaurya – kabirrrrrrrrrrrr wat r doing u can’t escape from here. I told u not to run. Now ur veer will suffer.
Kabir – no no iam sorry pliz dnt do anything with my family.
Shaurya – ok
Winds starts all burbs again burts out some (when all burbs and glass break it again joints always thats y every time glass and burbs break )others ghosts appears shaurya gets shocked.
Ghosts – shaurya ur power will be less for 2 days.
Shaurya – yes I know but wat will I do
Ghosts- u should think before
Shaurya – shaurya goenka never loose this time to he will be winner .
Ghosts – remember shaurya u have to take Kabir .
Shaurya – yes
They Disappeared.
Shaurya – kabirrrrrrrrrrrr look my all dead bodies r bored
Kabir – wat will I do
Shaurya – tell me ur story how u guys patch up
Kabir – I’m not interested talking with dead people.
(Showing dead heads) look at this. See this shaurya he has no eyes but he gives light; like seriously. Look at this one. He is dead but he is talking on phone; look at this one he is singing main hoon na song .wow wat a creative ideas of urs.
Shaurya – hahaha nice thought ok enough tell me.
Kabir lost
In fb
Sanchi crying and shouting kabir just then she heard a voice and turned back.
Y r u shouting said Kabir
Sanchi – how dare you y u still here go i came to see u off
Kabir – my flight got delayed and iam not interested to stay here.
Sanchi -ok
Kabir – sanchi meet my new gf
Sanchi – wat
Kabir – my gf Durga
A girl with long hair, wearing a pink Kameez with matching ornaments and with a small belly. (Durga played by sanjeeda sheikh from ek hasina thi )
Kabir – hey durga
Durga – kabirrrr i love u
Kabir – i love u too
Sanchi gets jealous seeing their closeness
Sanchi – kabirrrr but u love me na
Kabir – i loved u before not now because I have my durga
Durga – hi sanchi iam durga.
Sanchi – hi durga nice to meet u.
Durga -me to
Sanchi – u r pregnant right
Durga – yes
Kabir – it’s my baby sanchi
Sanchi – i dnt believe this
Kabir – OK
Sanchi – kabirrrr i want to
Kabir – want to tell wat
Sanchi – amm … u won’t believe it
Kabir – OK bye sanchi. Have a nice life .cum durga let’s go.
They r living just then they hear sanchi voice.
Sanchi – ladies and gentlemen attention pliz
Kabir – oh god
Sanchi – kabirrrr u kissed me when u saw me then u told me that u love me.
Kabir- yes Sanchi
Kabir gets leaving just then sanchi runs to him. Kabir gets shocked to see sanchi crying and her hand bleeding he saw it was written I LOVE U.
Sanchi – kabirrrr i love u will u marry me
Kabir – iam sorry sanchi but now I cant because I already committed to a girl and to her mother
Sanchi – ok Kabir
Kabir – sanchi
Sanchi -haa
Kabir – i will marry u but on 1 condition
Sanchi – wat
Kabir – nthing u go bye
Sanchi – tell me na I can do anything for u
Kabir – go and break that mirror
Sanchi – ok
Sanchi went the mirror and she gets shocked to see written I LOVE U Sanchiiiiiii
I WILL MARRY U with their pics all around. She quickly hugged Kabir.
Sanchi – u scared me
Kabir – actually when I board flight Iwas about to switch off my phone just then I saw a message from Jaya aunty.
Sanchi – message
Kabir – yes it was written sanchi is cuming to stop u
Sanchi – that means u lied to me I was hurt
Kabir – yeah that was ur punishment is suffered a lot i thought to play a prank
Sanchi – not fair btw itni jaldi eh sab kese
Kabir – credit goes to durga she managed everything with help of her friends.
Sanchi – who is durga
Kabir – durga is my childhood friend. I was in Paris when she married.
Durga recieved a call from her husband. She went to talk to him and sanchi followed her to thank her
End of fb
Shaurya become sad his eyes was tears but instead of tears his blood was flowing. Kabir gets shocked
Kabir – shaurya wat happened to u
Shaurya – durga she was my wife got damn it.
Kabir gets shocked
Kabir – wat
Shaurya – yes
Shaurya again entered Kabir body and takeover his body.
Tomorrow I will not have my power that means I can’t enter Kabir body tomorrow. I can’t imagine have to do something.
Precap : shaurya as Kabir kills miss Fernandez and landed in jail
Regards
Ashnita
13 Comments
Amazing… Awesome… Update soon
Please ashu tum story likna continue rakho…….we are all miss u so much ……hum logo ka reply nahi chahiae…..tumara story par kar hum log reply pa jati hu……please yaar continue ff…….????
super as usual but what next if will sanchi knows the truth of saurya that he was in the kabir’s body
finger crossed what happen next i can’t wait more update soon………bye bye
Nhi sis tum Hume aise bich me chod kar nhi jaa sakti.
I’m addicted to ur ffs why don’t you understand.
I will not let u leave.
Luv u so much sis
First of all today’s epi is as awesome as always Ashu ??? and secondly if you don’t have time to reply our comments it’s all right. But please don’t stop writing we love all your stories ???
Oh god it was soon much thrilling… Yr mazaa agya or an thik ho na ….jb se ek hi rat lagaye hui hui ho …kasam she yr hum tumhari ff se beintehhaa mohabbat krte h…..plzz dont do like that yr ab to pragya style me bi bol dia manjao na!!
Wow ashnita.. Thrilling episode…. OMG kabir will do a murder… Wonderful ashnita, fabulous…. I have a request please don’t stop writing ff…agar tum comment na kar payee toh koi baat nahi… Maine yaha ff ke madhyam se kitne sweet friends banaye… Now u want to leave us n go…. Please please please 1000 times please don’t stop writing… If I did any mistake then please forgive…
Ashnitaaaaaa… amzaing episode dear.. gave me goosebumps. Too good yaar.
Btw . I thibk one serial is copying ur story plot…haha ..i saw SONY CHANNEL’S NEW SHOW TEASER TODAY… Ek Deewana Tha.. looks just like ur story..
Superb one dear.. precap is so thrilling.. waiting for next.. and plz dont stop writing.. it will be ok if u dont get time to reply..but we want u to give time to ur ff dear.. plz dont do this
hey Ashu dear, how dare u say its boring……….don’t u dare to say like this to one of my fav writers…………u r a writer for whom I always fall short of words to describe the incredible writing skill…….. so dear,ye saara fitoor apne dimaag se nikaalo & never think of stopping to write…………ur episodes bring a big smile on my face & kya tum mujhse ye khushi chhin na chahti ho??????if not then keep writing….luv u a lot dear……….
Amazing
Hey ashi sorry for late commnting dear actually i got fever thats why and thik hote hi tumne itna bada shock de diya really yaar plzzzzz ff continue karo itni jaldi nahi ek tum hi to ho jo thriller suspense horror comedy everything perfectly enjoy karvati ho seriously i missed ur ff dialogue comedy scene and best jab tum apne ff me apna naam use karti ho so sweet lovvvv u sweetie and agar reply nahi kar pati koi baat nahi 3 ff ko sath lekar chalna kitna time lagta h type karne me samaj skte h so don’t worry about that just chill ashu…post nxt asap
1awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait
Ashu dear plz don’t end your ff.. It was full of suspence, comedy, love, thriller and it’s extremely interesting… I love your ff a lot… And who told you it’s boring… It’s very interesting and amazing… And this episode was super duper jhakkaxx.. Plz plz plz continue your ff… And post next part of this ff soon.. Love you