I know yaar you are all angry with me friends…… because I don’t post my ff(god makes pair)…….. that’s reason I am really very very sorry friends….. actually I am busy with my college and tution exam that reason I didn’t write the ff or thinking about the ff………after my exam i will definitely Post soon friends…….so dost lok app mujko maff kar do ………or give me some suggestion about the ff……….today I came with a os yaar…..it will be post with few part……
..I hope you are all like it…………so enough of my talking now start story yaar…………
The story is started with current track on such but something different or change from current track…………so the story start when kabir talk lied about sanchi and his relation in court then savitri devi also lied and sanchi loss the case and the hospital goes to dr. Malhrota and gayatri’s hand………
Outside the court same thing as shown in the such veer hold kabir collar,sanchi says kabir the same word as she told in the serial.there also present pragya and isha.
Pragya:i know you are the puppet of dr.annad.though I think you support the truth.but i am wrong sir.you are also a culprit like dr.annad.
Isha:sir I think you love sanchi whole heartedly.so i wanted to united you and sanchi……but I am wrong sir pragya is right…….veer love sanchi really……..
Then jaya give him a tight slap and said
Jaya:how could you do that kabir.i think you are a very kind and truthful person.sunil always told about you and honesty.how could you do this with your teacher’s justice.sunil think you as his own son(so jaya know kabir from early as a best intern and best student of kabir,here sunil died 5years ago but his dead news is truth ya wrong that clear later)
Kabir standing like a statue like the serial(but the reason behind his lied is changed.here his father is alive.his father name is rishi kapoor.he is lawyer.he is a very honest person and he is the lawyer of sanchi and jaya’s case.he is highly disappointed with his younger son (kabir) behavior.his and kabir relation is not like norm father-son like relation.their relation also like veer-annand relation.mr.kapoor loved his elder son karan very much.and he is a police officer)
Veer is very angry with him so he hold his collect….then karan,kabir’s dad and adrsh came their and calm down veer.kabir goes from their.then mr.kapoor and karan say sorry to jaya for what kabir did.then they are all go from the court.
At kapoor mansion
Karan,isha(actually isha is karan wife.they married one month ago) and mr.kapoor reached their house told hold thing which happened in court to kusum.hearing all thing kusum is also angry on kabir.she is also disappointed with his son behaviour.they are all don’t talked with kabir and ignore him.
At the front of mishra house
When sanchi,jaya,dadi,veer,sunny a d pragya went to the house.every people taunt sanchi and told her as a characterless girl.veer didn’t tolerate this.so he hold sanch’s hand and told everyone that he love sanchi and sanchi only love him.they went marry tomorrow.e goes from there.hearing the veer word pragya,jaya,sunny,dadi feels happy.sanchi standing there with tears and hugged veer.
Sanchi:thanks veer……for supporting me and my family.
At malhrota mansion
Anand and gayatri drinked their room.
On the other side savitri crying in front of maharani idol
Savitri: maa app mujko maff kar do ……me nanti hu ma me bhot galat kiya jaya ke sath……maa app to janti ho me ektu ada kiya……me majboor thi maa…….mere pass jhut bolen ke Siva or kohi rasta nahi thi……… please maa forgive mi
Then veer’s dadi came and console savitri
Dadi:i know bahu why you habe told lie……
A fb shown *gayatri blackmail savitri.if she don’t lied .she will sent his goon and kill veer.so savitri agree for saying against jaya and sanchi*
Now present
Savitri: maa veer is miss understood me……
Dadi:don’t cry beta…..I think all well be get perfect soon ……..
Suddenly they heard some noice from downstairs……so they quickly rushed to downstairs…….there they see veer……savitri quickly go to veer and caressing his face and says
Savitri: beta tu agae
Veer:maa me yaha rehaene ke liye nahi aaya…..mae yaha app logo ko ak baat bata ne ke liye aaya……kal me or sanchi sadhi kar rahi hu agar app logo mere khushi me samil hona chati har to kal subhra maharani ki mondir me aya jana
Saying this veer goes from there.annad
Fuming in anger hearing his word.savitri and dadi getting happy know about veer and sanchi’s marriage.a band angrily goes from there.he goes to his room and shut the door.and then talking with someone in phone which is muted……..
At mishra mansion
Everyone looking busy for preparing marriage.
In the room sanchi looked very upset that she can’t fulfilled her mother’s dream.s he thinking about kabir word and said
Sanchi:why sir why you do this with me……I respect you so much yaar……how could you do this sir ………you told you love me……..this is your love for me…………
At kapoor mansion
Isha told everyone one about sanveer marriage.kabir hearing that and he feels very bad.
So today I end here.
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So the next part i will be trying to post soon yaar.forgive me yaar for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.i will also try to post my another ff soon please give me some extra time after my exam i will definitely write that ff.so friend s puts your valuable comment for this story.love you lots friends.lots of kisses and hugs for all of my friends………
10 Comments
awesome beautiful refreshing
wanna know the reason of kabir
lots of love dear nice os
Superb… Post the next soon part… Take care… All the best….
Awsmm dear…
it was awesome, waiting for your next part
Anu dear, finally you posted…missed u a lot dear…os was simply amazing…I really enjoyed reading this…& all the best for ur exams?luv u a lot sweetie ??
Amazing……. And all the best for ur exams
awesome story………..post next one asap………tc……..all the best for exam……….
Aww you stopped on the best part ???!!! It was awesome any ???. Very excited to know what’ll happen on Sanveer wedding!!!
We are hoping for the best dear. The real CVS dimag gayi tel line. What could have been a good workplace romcom has turned out to be worser than a saas bahu serial. Hope you’ll keep us entertained with a far much better track than the original one?
Awsome one yaar sorry anu dear actually i don’t know how i skipped two article i just see nd read now???.. Forgive me yaar… This one is amaz outstanding with full suspense.. Far better then the show?.. Post nxt one when u free.. All the best for ur exam.. Lovv u a lot???