RagLak-Our Cute Love Story (Part 12)
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Ragini is peacefully sleeping in her room, ritu enters into the room and looks at ragini and smirks. She goes to washroom and brings a bucket full of water and pours on sleeping ragini with full force.
Ragini: (wakes up with jerk and shouts) what the hell!!
Ritu laughs seeing her
Ritu: (shouts) happy friendship day bestie.
Ragini: (fuming) idiot is this the way to wish ur friend… Wait i will not leave u
She takes the water jug from the table beside her bed, while ritu starts running and ragini chasing her.
Ragini: (while running) wait ritu i will not leave you wait.
Ritu: (laughing and running) first you catch me then we will see.
At that time laksh enters and sees them
Laksh: kya chal raha hain? (What’s happening?)
Ragini: (running and laughing) fogg chal raha hai jelly ??? (fogg is happening jelly ???)
Ritu also laughs but none of them stop their running and laksh smiles and shakes his head with disbelief… Ragini keeps chasing ritu while asking her to stop and ritu keeps escaping.
Ritu: bhai save me from ur wife.
Laksh holds ragini and pulls her to him holding her through her stomach while her back touching his chest.
Ragini: (moving her legs like jumping) jelly leave me you know she pour water on me to wake me idiot… I will not leave her.
Laksh pulls her towards him more and leans towards her cheeks and kisses her cheek tightly from back making ragini shocked and stand there without any movement while ritu closes her eyes with her hands.
Ritu: (closing her eyes) bhai I am still here only let me go then romance with your wife… Huh you are so shame less (while murmuring she goes from the room)
Laksh smiles and leaves ragini while she starts beating him on his chest
Ragini: (while beating laksh) you idiot how could you kiss me like that now she will tease me…(pouts)
Laksh: (pecks her lips and laughs) haha (pulls her cheeks) you are so cute my bacha… Ok leave it waise happy friendship day bacha love you forever (kisses her forehead)
Ragini: (smiles and kisses his cheek) happy friendship day to you too my hero and love you too. (Hugs him tightly)
Laksh: ok be ready in the evening we will go out ok.
Ragini: where?
Laksh: hmm we will go na then you will know… Now go fresh urself and come we will have breakfast ok.
Ragini nods and laksh once again kisses her forehead and leaves from there. And ragini goes to fresh up.
Outside priya who saw all these fumes in anger and goes from there stamping her foot. While the one who is observing her also goes from there. The person enters in a room and is revealed to be dadi who is following Priya’s every move.
@fb
When raglak and others entered house and dadi pampering ragini dadi noticed priya looking at ragini with hatred then dadi got suspicious and asked shyam(servant) to start following Priya’s actions. The next day of raglak’s arrival all the kids came to meet ragini then they even told to dadi about how priya tried to hurt ragini and dadi got confirmed about that priya is up to something and is in a mission to save ragini from priya.
@fb ends
Raglak and all are sitting in hall when suddenly they hear some voice.
Voice: (shouts in excitement) Lucky
All looks in that direction only to find Isha standing there. Isha runs and hugs laksh tightly.
Laksh: oye leave me will you kill me or what
Isha leaves him and hits on his hand. She goes to elders and takes blessings while ragini makes faces seeing her and leaves from there twisting her lips to laksh which did not go unnoticed by isha and dadi.
They both giggles and laksh looks at them and makes an irritated face and others looks at them confused. Laksh looks at ragini’s room as he hear a slamming sound and gulps. Seeing laksh’s face isha laughs loudly followed by elders who also understood behind isha’s laugh. While still the other youngsters look at them in confusion.
Laksh: shut up yaar isha and tell me how did you reach here.
Isha: dadi called me and informed about ur marriage and in the next minute i booked my tickets and landed here. (When dadi got to know about how laksh succeeded in making ragini realise her love she immediately called isha and talked to her she liked isha a lot so from then she treated isha also as her grand daughter and always kept in touch with her. And after that day till now ragini didnot meet isha again so ragini still feels jealous of isha and laksh friendship)
Laksh: huh dadi i thought u are my gf… But u only became villain in my love life by inviting her to my marriage.
Isha: haawwww how mean u are… go don’t talk to me.
Laksh: ha here nobody is dying to talk with you
Isha: (smiles evilly) think… Think you might regret after sometime for saying this. (She winks at dadi who in turn smiles at her)
Laksh just makes a face to her and goes to ragini’s room and after five minutes he comes to isha who is sitting with youngsters and dadi and talking to them. He sits beside her and looks at her puppy face.
Isha: wow…. Just 5 minutes you started to regret for saying those words.
Laksh: (pouts and holds his ears) sorry na ishu you are my cute, sweet isha na please.
All are not understanding anything except for dadi.
Isha: (with attitude)first say sorry and say that you will give me whatever i want.
Laksh nods his head vigorously.
Isha: good boy now say what happened in the room.
@fb
Laksh entered inside ragini’s room and as soon as he entered he gets hit by a pillow. He looks at ragini who is looking at him angrily and again throws another pillow at him but he catches it on time and prevents from getting hit by it… Ragini glares him and turns her head to other side. Laksh releases a big sigh and goes to her and sits beside her and keeps his hand on her shoulder she jerks his hand and stands from bed and looks at him angrily.
Ragini: (angrily) why did you come to me go to your isha na go. (She folds her hands and turns other side)
Laksh: duckling i don’t even know that she will come here and besides that I already told na that she is just my friend and we both just acted to make you realise that you also love me…. And besides she is (interrupted)
Ragini: (loudly and without turning towards him) get out.
Laksh pouts and comes out to isha
@fb ends
All laughs listening him as now they understood why is ragini behaving like that.
Laksh: yaar stop laughing and help me na please isha
Isha: (controls her laugh) ok ok i will help you but you should give me whatever i want tomorrow as rakhi gift.
Laksh: ha i will give whatever you want. Please yaar atleast from now call me bhai otherwise dont know what will happen to my life.
Isha: noways i don’t call my bhai only as bhai and if i call you bhai na then he will also start so I will call u lucky if you have any problem say me i will go to my room.
Laksh: (joins his hands) mata ji please help me… (He murmurs) why did I agree to her idea on that day to get this torture from her huh.
Isha: (frowning) did you say something?
Laksh: no so now please yaar
Isha: ok ok I will go and speak to bhabhi dare you come there till I call you ok
Laksh nods and isha goes to ragini’s room and locks from inside while ragini looks at her with angry look and later burst out laughing giving hi-fi to Isha
Isha: awesome bhabhi you have to see his face oh god….
Ragini: but yaar why did you ask me to do so?
Isha: oh please bhabhi atleast sometimes tease him. It was fun to see him like that. It is good that we both became good friends and you know that he is like my bhai.
@fb
After ragini confessed her love and spending sometime with ragini laksh is taking rest isha calls to his phone, at that time laksh is sleeping peacefully so ragini receives the call and got to know about how isha treats laksh and they both became good friends but they both hid it from laksh.
@fb ends
Isha: Ok now go down and accept when he said sorry otherwise he will become a devdas.
Ragini nods and both go to the place where all are sitting. As soon as they come out laksh immediately runs to ragini and holds his ears and says sorry to which ragini first looks at him angrily later smiles for which laksh immediately lifts her and twirls her making her laugh.
Isha: oye we all are here stop romancing openly. Huh shameless fellow.
Laksh hits her head. And she in turn hits on his head.
Ragini: stop no more fighting
Isha: ok bhabhi you said na
Laksh: ok duckling go get ready we need to go out i told na.
Ragini nods and she leaves to get ready.
Laksh: what did you said to her?
Isha: (makes faces) just that we both are same like brother and sister huh can’t even make your girl friend cool from her anger… How useless you are!
Laksh: useless is you not me gave a bekar idea to make her realise and now you are saying I am useless you are only useless.
Isha was about to speak something but stopped seeing dadi signaling her something without anybody’s knowledge and she nods ok and dadi leaves from there.
After few minutes isha excuses herself and goes to dadi’s room.
Isha: dadi
Dadi: come in beta
Isha: ok dadi tell me what is the important work you told about.
Dadi: i want your help for happening of this marriage without any disturbances.
Isha: (confused) But dadi why are you feeling like that?
Dadi tells her everything about priya.
Isha: From the time I met laksh i felt like my own brother and this time I am going to tie rakhi as well. I will save my brother’s marriage at any cost dadi it is not only his responsibility to save me from all the odds even it is my duty to save him from all the odds. You don’t worry. I have a plan but I need another person who can help us.
Voice: can i help you?
They both get shocked listening to the voice.
Ritu: don’t worry dadi even i have doubt on that priya but did not have any proofs against her so till now I did not talk but now I can help you right. After all she is back of my bestie which I can’t tolerate.
Isha and dadi smiles and forwards their hands and ritu places her hand on their hands. Later isha tells a plan to them and they all discuss about it.
Ritu: dadi ma make sure that neither ragu nor shona di get to know about it.
Dadi: don’t worry beta i will take care of it.
Isha: so Mission P is on from now.
She winks at dadi and ritu with a smrik on her face.
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Raglak are going somewhere on the bike. Laksh is driving and ragini is hugging him tightly from back. After sometime they both reach a place where they can see beautiful sunset. They both sat down beside each other while ragini kept head on his chest and laksh wrapped his hand around her.
Ragini: jelly why did we come here?
Laksh: just i want to spend sometime with you alone so we came here, you like this place na.
Ragini nods her head and they both watch sunset.
On the other side priya is walking in the streets of village, she is frustrated as raglak went outside and started walking in the streets of village, she stopped on her track when she heard two women talking to each other.
W1: arey do you know that bhoot in our village killed a guy yesterday.
W2: ha even i heard it… Don’t know whom will it kill next.
W1: ha we told to parvathi ma ji she told she will keep puja to make that bhoot away from our village. Hope we get rid of that bhoot soon…. Don’t know who is that bhoot’s next target.
Priya listening this gets frightened, she looks around her, she is sweating and just runs back to the house. While ritu and isha who are seeing all this burst out laughing.
Isha: thank you so much aunty for helping us.
W1: arey beta ragini and laksh are just like our children and they always treat us like their family beta and ma ji is always helpful for us in all our needs. How can we allow someone to harm them?
Isha and ritu smiles and leaves from there.
@ RagLak
Raglak are still sitting and watching sunset. After sometime cool air starts to breeze. They both are happily enjoying the breeze.
Laksh: hmm duckling (forwards a box to her) this is for you happy friendship day.
Ragini takes it and opens it. She finds a beautiful bracelet on which raglak is inscripted at the middle, she smiles looking at it and kisses it. Laksh takes it from her hand and makes her wear on her right hand and kisses her hand. Ragini hugs him and kisses his cheek.
Ragini: jelly let us go to swing na.
Laksh nods and gets up and gives his hand to her for which she happily accepts and gets up and they both go to swing. Ragini sits on the swing while laksh starts pushing the swing from back. Whenever the swing comes back ragini’s hair touches his face making him to smell her fragrance. After pushing few times he gets a naughty idea and smiles naughtily while ragini is happily blabbering something and enjoying the swing. When she came backside he kisses her cheek tightly and pushes her and again when she comes back the same happens ragini is completely shocked of this sudden move.
Ragini: stop jelly
Laksh stops pushing and ragini gets down from the swing and looks at laksh while he looks at her innocently, she nods her head in disbelief, starts walking and goes and stands under a tree. Laksh follows her by running back of her and starts to move forward looking at her intensely and ragini keeps moving back till her back touches the trunk of the tree… Laksh blocks her way and keeps his hands on either side and looks at her intensely and starts moving close to her face. Ragini closes her eyes tightly and opens her eyes when she feels something falling on her. Laksh is shaking a branch of the tree making the flowers to fall as flower rain on his beautiful wife. Ragini spreads her hands and smiles broadly making laksh to smile broadly. She hugs him tight muttering a I Love You. They both break the hug and laksh takes her to the bench near by and makes her sit and lays on the bench keeping his head in her lap. Ragini smiles and keeps brushing his hair with her one hand and watching the moon while laksh is playing with her other hand and lost in deep thoughts. Ragini looks at him and finds him lost.
Ragini: (softly) jelly
But laksh doesn’t respond so ragini jerks him and comes to senses.
Laksh: ha ragu what happened?
Ragini: (cups his face) what is bothering you?
Laksh: (smiles) nothing bacha
Ragini makes him get up from her lap and makes him sit and hugs him tightly while her head placed on his chest listening to his heart beat and laksh wraps his hands around her.
Ragini: tell me laksh what is bothering you please you look so tensed. What happened?
Laksh: (tightens his grip around her) nothing bacha just tensed about how i will take my responsibility of you after our marriage. I planned for our marriage after your studies so that my studies would be over and I will help papa and dad and will also be settled as there is one year time after my studies but all these happened suddenly. I even asked mom and dadi they told every thing will be fine… But don’t know why I am still not able to convince myself that I can do it. (He says all these and sighs)
Ragini looks at him and blinks her eyes two times then cups his face.
Ragini: (cupping his face) for this small thing you are getting tensed and is thinking all these days. Uff I thought something really big. You know what laksh my jelly is always strong I know he will be strong in future also. And I have a solution to your this problem. You are thinking you are not settled still right (laksh nods) then do one thing join office now only we have college till afternoon right, after coming from college go to hotel and help dad and papa…. When you have college work be at home simple.
Laksh looks at her lovingly and kisses her hand which is on his cheek.
Laksh: thank you bacha will speak to dad and papa and join in office after we return home.
Ragini: so now please smile i am missing my handsome because of this sad face.
Laksh smiles and hugs her tight.
Laksh: love you so much bacha.
Ragini: love you too. Now shall we go home I am very hungry.
Laksh: chalo
They both go home.
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Sorry sorry sorry….. Sssssssoooooooorrrrrrryyyyy for this much late. Please don’t kill me. If you kill me who will give next part for you. I am really sorry again for the late update. I am stuck in some personal stuff and not getting time to write. So please forgive this innocent soul hehe.
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25 Comments
dharu di !!!!!! you are back !! so so happy for it !! anyways i really missed you!!!
coming to the part it is awesome totally awesome
ragritu part was soo funny and this lucky never leaves a chance to romance with our princess!! he he
ragisha part was funny too!! waise these two were teasing my innocent boy haww!!
dadi is soo sweet !! and i am really excited for the missionP
didu the way they frightened that bhootni priiya was amazing
but raglak moments were totally awwwwww i loved them all!!
anyways waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing
love you!!
Awesome
Cutest love story…….. Toooo cute cute mmnts………… Raglak are superb………. Ragu turned to mature…………. Wooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww
Fantastic mind blowing awesome
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Fabulous dear be regular plz
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Wonderful episode di and lovely raglak and can’t wait for next episode and don’t be late next time
Awesome episode
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Simply superb di…..post next part soon
Welcome back dear and After a long time. I really really really missed you and your ff dear. As usual outstanding episode and loved it a lot. Raglak scenes are really beautiful. Happy to know that finally dadi, ritu and isha find out priya’s truth. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Oh my god cutiepies laksh and Ragini
Good one, keep going
Lovely episode with cute raglak
Superb part
I’m a silent reader and Awesome post
Mind blowing ff