RagLak-Our Cute Love Story (Part 9)
Hey guys I am back after a long time. How are u all? Hope all are doing well. Thank u for all those who commented, voted and silent readers as well.
Previous part
Part 8
*******************
Night around 11.30
Ragini is in her room studying something seriously suddenly she takes her phone and dials a number.
Scene shifts to lakh’s room who is sleeping peacefully gets disturbed by the ring of his phone. He wakes up and smiles seeing the caller ID and picks the call.
Laksh: (smiles) ha duckling ask me ur doubt.
While on the other side ragini smiles widely and asks her doubt and he clarifies her doubt all the time smiling.
Ragini: (sighs) uff finally revision is over.
Laksh: (smiles) so now go to bed.
Ragini: (pouts) but I am not getting sleep jelly
Laksh: (imagines her pout) u look too cute while u pout jaan…ok tell me what u will do now
Ragini: u come here na
Laksh: with pleasure my cutie pie (he cuts the call and proceeds to his room’s balcony)
He comes down from his room through the pipeline to the garden side. He finds sanskar sitting on the chair in the garden and tries to go slowly without getting noticed but to his bad luck sanskar noticed him.
Sanskar: (teasingly) u don’t let her to sleep na
Laksh stops his steps and turns towards him by closing his eyes
Sanskar: (comes near to him) why don’t u let her sleep?
Laksh: she only asked me to come and for ur kind information she is not sleeping yet she is studying.
Sanskar: (worried) what she is studying still
Laksh: ha tomorrow is last exam of this semester na and she has some doubts so she is studying and now she asked me to come there as she is not getting sleep so if my bro gives me permission to meet my fiance can I go and meet her?
Sanskar: (with attitude) what if I say no?
Laksh: (making a puppy face) please bhai don’t tease na
Sanskar: (smiles) go now she must be waiting.
Laksh immediately smiles widely and runs from there and reaches near to ragini’s room and stands down in the garden and makes a call to her while ragini who is waiting for him looks at his call confused and picks the call.
Ragini: (angrily) don’t tell me u aren’t coming
Laksh: arey my jaan asked me something will I say no to it… So u just come to ur balcony
Ragini: I am already in balcony
Laksh: then come near railing and look down (ragini goes to railing with a confused face and looks down only to find laksh waving to her)
Ragini:(angrily in phone) jelly I asked u to come up but u are standing down and waving to me huh
Laksh: arey duckling wait a minute (he brings a ladder and places there) now u come down through this (ragini is about to ask him why but he interrupts) don’t ask why it is a secret.
Ragini nods and gets down through the ladder while she is on the second last step she slips and about to fall but laksh holds her before she falls down and kisses her forehead very lovingly and makes her stand properly.
Laksh: u would have fell down na
Ragini: I know u will never let me fell down
Laksh looks at her lovingly and they share a cute eyelock and comes out of it after few minutes. Laksh holds her hand
Laksh: chalo let us go
Ragini nods and they both go through the gate silently and reaches to the end of the street where there is a small bench and an ice cream vendor’s cart ragini seeing this starts jumping
Ragini: (starts jumping) mid night ice cream (kisses laksh on his cheek and hugs laksh) love u so much jelly
Laksh: (smiles) love u too my duckling
They both go near ice cream vendor and take their fav ice cream and gets seated on the bench, ragini keeps eating her ice cream forgetting all the world and laksh keeps staring his beautiful lovely duckling. He tucks the hair strands behind her ear which are disturbing his view to watch his cute fiance still staring her while ragini is just busy in her ice cream. After completing her ice cream ragini looks at him and finds him staring at her and their both eyes meet and share a beautiful eyelock but it gets disturbed by the dog’s bark and they both come to senses.
Laksh: (smiles) tho chale
Ragini nods negatively and comes close to him and hugs him and he hugs her back with a smile on his face.
Ragini: (hugs him tightly) if we go now only u will go to mm leaving me so we will be here for some more time please (asks childishly)
Laksh: (pulls her cheeks) aww mera bacha looking choo cute ok we will be here but only 10 minutes
Ragini: (pouts) only 10 minutes
Laksh: ha bacha tomorrow we have exam and we need to sleep well then only we can give our best in exam na
Ragini nods ok sadly and again hugs him. They sit like that hugging each other feeling each other’s love in that hug and listening to each other’s heart beats which are beating only for the others.
Laksh: now chalo let us go home we will come some other day any way we have holidays na after exams. Ragini nods and again they walk back to home hand in hand and laksh makes sure whether ragini reached her room safely and finally gives a flying kiss and mouths an I love u to her and leaves to mm slowly.
Here ragini enters her room and gets shocked to see jeevika there
Ragini: (shocked) bhabhi aap
Jeevika: (frowning her eyes) where are u coming from?
Ragini: (stammering) bha…bhi… Woh ha terrace…. from terrace bhabhi
Jeevika: (still frowning) but u are coming from balcony
Ragini: (closes her eyes tightly) bhabhi jelly took me to mid night ice cream and dropped me again here and went back to mm and I am coming from there only
she said everything in one breathe still closing her eyes but opens it when she hears a laughing sound and looks at jeevika who is laughing in a confusing manner. Jeevika saw her confused face and controlled her laughing and hits ragini’s head slightly
Jeevika: (hitting ragini’s head slightly) buddu in tension u forgot that u can go to terrace through ur balcony as well
Ragini: (bites her tongue and pouts) bhabi u are teasing me na
Jeevika: (pulls ragini’s cheeks) oh my ragu u are choo cute (hugs her) sorry
Ragini: (smiles) ok bhabhi u tell why did u come to my room any work
Jeevika: nothing just going to bring some water saw ur room’s lights are still on and thought to ask u do u need anything as u r studying but u tho enjoying
Ragini: bhabhi (she says childishly)
Jeevika: (laughs) ok now go to sleep good night dream about ur jelly
Ragini: (blushes) good night bhabhi
Jeevika leaves and our queen went to sleep with a bright smile on her face.
*************************
Next day their exam got over and from next day they have holidays all the gang are sitting in canteen
Ragini: bhai jiju why don’t we plan a small picnic
Aakash: wah what an idea after all u are my sister na (he raises his collar while laksh makes faces)
Sanskar: oye don’t make those faces u are looking like a donkey (all laughs while he pouts)
Ragini: aww jelly leave na u say shall we go na
Laksh: (smiles) to ur favorite place what say
Ragini: (happily) love u
Swara: arey but where? And when?
Laksh: where is it I will not tell now but when we will decide after talking to papa and dad is it ok for u aakash and ritu
Ritu: for me no problem papa will allow as this idiot is there now a days he believes him more than me huh
Aakash: we both are confirmed lucky
Swara: this time even priya will come
Priya: (overacting) but shona…
Swara: (interrupts her) no buts and ifs u are coming and that is final
Priya nods head acting like she nodded unwillingly while all others smiled seeing her.
Laksh: so final I will inform u guys when shall we go because papa told there is some work after that we shall go
Aakash: ok guys it’s time to leave chalo ritu papa must be waiting for us
Ritu: (hugs ragini) will miss u ragu love u
Ragini: miss u too ritu love u
They all bid bye and leave to respective homes. After reaching home they found that ap, dp, janaki and shekhar are discussing some thing seriously. While ragini after reaching home immediately goes and hugs dp as always.
Dp: oh sweet heart u are back. How is ur exam?
Ragini: Aweaome dad
Shekhar: swara sanskar we need to talk something important.
Swasan: ha papa
Dp: beta we are thinking to do ur engagement ragini is younger than swara and she is engaged so we are thinking to do ur both engagement also do u have any problem
Sanskar: ur wish dad I don’t have any problem
Shekhar: swara?
Swara just nods her head with smile.
Ragini: (jumping) yippee di and juju’s engagement and lots of fun and shopping
Viren: (horrified) papa please don’t tell me to accompany them for shopping I want to live for some more time
All laugh while swaragini pouts
Ragini: (pouts) u are so mean bhayyu
Viren: (holding his ears) sorry my princess
Ragini smiles and they enjoy some family time together
**************
It is the day of swasan engagement and the happiest person is ragini. Of course she would be happy after all it is her di’s engagement with her lovable jiju. Ragini makes swara ready with the help of jeevika and goes to her room to get ready herself. Soon the time for engagement is arrived.
Laksh and viren helped sanskar to get ready and now are looking after the arrangements whereas dp and shekhar are busy in receiving guests. Sanskar is made sit in the chair on the stage and is waiting for swara. On the other hand laksh is seeing towards the stairs to have just a glance of his love whom he did not see from the morning. At last his wait is over his angel came out along with swara wearing a pink lehenga with a gold border wearing a simple chain in her neck and a pair of long ear rings and leaving her hair open with the curls at the end and making a few strands of her hair fall front from the right shoulder and having a small stone bindi placed in between her eyebrows with a beautiful smile all looking gorgeous becoming center of attraction of the whole function making her jelly to stare her without blinking his eyes. Jeevika and ragini made swara sit beside sanskar later ragini went near laksh and stood beside him while he keeps on staring her.
Ragini: (blushing) jelly stop staring at me.
Laksh: how can u so be beautiful jaan I love u
Ragini: (smiles) i know
Laksh: u can say love u too na (pouts)
RaginiĆ· (pulls his cheeks) I love u too my jelly
Laksh smiles and they start the ceremony soon swasan exchanged their rings while all claps
Laksh: ok ladies and gentlemen as the function is becoming boring why don’t we go for a dance. (All claps and the music starts)
Dhoop se nikal ke
Chhaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya
(Laksh holds ragini through waist and moves according to the beat)
Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya
Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Rang de tu mohe Gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua
(Ragini goes far from him while laksh holds her hand and pulls her towards him and back hugs her)
Ho tumse se shuru.. tumpe fanaa
Hai Sufiyana yeh dastaan
Main kaarwaan manzil ho tum
Jaata jahaan ko har raasta
Tumse juda jo
Dil zara sambhal ke
Dard ka wo saara
Kohra chhan gaya
Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho.. Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
O.. veeraan tha, dil ka jahaan
Jis din se tu daakhil huaa
Ik jism se.. ik jaan ka..
Darza mujhe haasil huaa
Haan.. pheeke hain saare
Naate jahaan ke
Tere saath rishta gehra ban gaya
Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua
(Laksh hold ragini through waist she bends backward and the song ends in ragini standing bending backwards while laksh holding her waist with one hand and other hand is holding ragini’s one hand and both are staring each other lovingly while they get disturbed by the clapping sound and smiles at every one while priya who also came for the function along with ritu and aakash fumes seeing them)
Soon the function gets over and all go to bed being tired.
************
All the gang is all set to go to the picnic and got all the necessary things loaded into the mini van which is arranged by laksh so that all can go in the same vehicle and enjoy together and started their journey bidding bye to their elders. Soon they reached the spot which is ragini’s favorite and are mesmerised by the beauty of the place.
It is a beautiful place near the forest area with a lake full of white Lillis and beautiful view of sun. The sun set can be seen very clearly from there and the climate there is so calm and pleasant. Ragini after getting down from the van stretches her hands wide and feels the breeze by closing her eyes and inhales the air with a wide smile.
Ragini: awesome my favorite place I am back to u after a long time.
She runs near the lake and enjoys the cholness of the water
Laksh: (comes to her) duckling chalo we need to set tents
Ragini: coming jelly
She goes to them.
Swara: (mesmerized seeing the place) ragu it is an awesome place
Ragini: hain na di I really love this place
Sanskar: (smiles) arey ur choice is always the best ragu now chalo we need to arrange all the things before it becomes dark
They get into the work and arrange all the things according to their plan soon it is night and all got ready to go to bed all the girls decided to be in one tent while the boys in the other. All went to bed after planing what to do next day as they are very tired today due to journey and all. All are sleeping peacefully while ragini comes out as she is not getting sleep and stands near the lake and enjoying the breeze suddenly she saw a firefly a little far from her and runs that way when she is running laksh who just came out as he also not getting sleep finds her running and goes behind her before they could realise they reached into the forest. Ragini missed the fire fly and turns arround pouting and gets shocked seeing her location immediately gets tensed but soon her tensed face turns into a smily one seeing her Jelly there and hugs him
Laksh: U mad girl why don’t u think before you do some thing
Ragini: (puppy face) sorry
Laksh: (melts) now chalo
Ragini nods and they starts going but not getting the way
Laksh: (Huff’s) uff we missed the way jaan and as it is dark it is difficult to go now and even there is no signal in the mobile
Ragini: (excitedly) it means we need to spend the whole night in this forest
Laksh nods his head and ragini jumps in excitement
Ragini: wow whole night in forest it will be thrilling na
Laksh sees her amused
Laksh: aren’t u afraid
Ragini: (hugs him)when I am with u I don’t need to get afraid
Laksh: (hugs her tightly) u trust me that much
Ragini: (looks at him) more than my self I love u laksh
Laksh: i will never let u loose trust on me love u too my jaan
They stay like that hugging feeling each other. Their moment got disturbed by the drop of rain that fell on ragini making her to break the hug and look above and in the next second it started to rain heavily making ragini to spread her hands wide and twirl around herself keeping her face upwards closing her eyes and enjoying the rain making laksh mesmerized seeing her all wet. He slowly goes towards her and pulls her towards him through waist and caresses her cheek with other hand and looking at her lips while ragini feeling his gaze on her lips closes her eyes and in the next second she feels his rough lips on her soft and rosey lips and they both kiss each other passionately. They break the kiss when they feel difficult to breath and join their foreheads panting heavily while laksh looks at her intensely.
Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe
(Ragini gets shy and turns back to go while laksh holds her hand and pulls her towards him and back hugs her)
Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda
Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani (x2)
(He starts kissing her shoulder making her to breathe heavily clutching his hands which are on her belly tightly)
Dekho na kaisi ijaazat mili hai
Ek doosre mein hifaazat mili hai
Jeene ki saari zaroorat mili hai
Ye jaam hi hai jaisa hai
Yunhi hamesha hamesha rahe jis tarah
Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda
Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani (x2)
(He makes her turn towards him and kisses her forehead lovingly whole ragini closes her eyes feeling his love in that kiss)
Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe
Hum se ye jo bhi harqat hui hai
Mohabbat mohabbat mohabbat hui hai
Kuch itne hain hum tum
Kami kuch nahi hai
Jitna bhi jeena hai
Tujhko hi jeena hai
Jeete rahein jis tarah
Shaam-o-subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda
(Ragini start shivering due to the cold and wet dress and laksh looks around and finds a small hut and holds ragini’s hand and takes her there and finds there some branches and lites the fire and they both sit like laksh back hugging ragini and ragini sitting in the middle of his legs leaning to his chest closing her eyes)
Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Ban ke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani (x2 ) (thank u so much yashu for suggesting this beautiful song)
(Laksh finds ragini asleep and makes her lay on the heep of hay and lays beside her taking her into his embrace)
Screen freezes on the sleeping faces of our evergreen couple who has a beautiful smile on their faces.
***************
Uff finally able to complete the episode. Really sorry for the late guys. Stuck with some work. Now tell me how did u feel today episode is? And thank u to all those who supported till now. And silent readers as well. Don’t forget to shine the star guys. Meet u all in the next episode. Till then keep smiling and Love u all.
54 Comments
Awesome
Thank u sindhu
super episode dharu…loved it…next part soon
Thank u jayu
Awesome
Thank u pearly
Amazing…….. Awesome……….. Marvelous update
Thank u akankshanna
Awwww..such a lovely update my dear…….
Thank u Sreevijayan
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Thank u arjuna
Awesome
Thank u aleeza
yayy!! dharu di you r back!! so happy to see you back!! didu i am all fine and hope you are fine too??
loved the episode totallly!!
the starting raglak scene was cute
and sanlak convo was nice and funny!
and thier ice cream romance was soo cute!! but i laughed at the point when the dog had to break the duo’s eye lock!! he he
loved jeevika and ragu convo jeevika is choo sweet and my is toh cutee only
their group talk and family talk was nice!! but this chudai priya will also go to the picnic..huh!!
their romance and dance at the engagement was wonderful!!!
god!! didu their forest rain romance was hte best loved it tooo much!!!
didu you literally rocked this episode
it was the best one till date <3 <3
waiting eagerly for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing
love you too much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! Iqu it is the biggest comment I have ever got…. Thank u so much iqu….. I am very happy that u are fine and I am also completely fit and fine dear…. Love u too…????
Awesome dharu really a cute story
Thank u folly
Awesome
Thank u avika
Wonderful part and lovely raglak
Thank u laashya
Awesome episode
Thank u anju
After a long time. I really miss you and this ff dear. It’s Outstanding episode dear ???? Raglak scenes are really really really beautiful ????? Loved Raglak a lot ???. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ????????? love you dear and take care ???
Thank u so much Ammu…. I missed u too.. love u too… Take care
Awesome dear
Thank u rehna
Awesome dear
Thank u sherin
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Thank u malu
Awesome
Thank u thahseem
Awesome superb amazing
Thank u Ashly
Awesome episode
Thank u vennila
superrrr duperrrrrrrrr
Thank u monisha
Awesome
Thank u vini
Interesting episode
Thank u monu
Simply superb di…Cute raglak…post next soon
Thank u soumya
Awesome episode….loved it
Thank u jiyani
Superb
Thank u Aamy
Awesome
Thank u Elizabeyhlovely
Nice
Thank u Hemalattha