Hey am too excited for 25th chapter.thanku everyone for ur cmmnts
Recap: haldi ceremony of raglak nd swasan
Romance of both couple.
@ aftrnoon
Utts: ma can me swaragini, pari bhabhi nd 3 bros can go for shopping
Ap nd sumi: yaoff course dr
All get ready nd goes for shopping.
Adi: aj tho hum mar jaya bhiyom
Sanky: kyoum
Adi: they r going to take hrs for shopping nd they will eat our head also.they brought us hold their shopping bags
Laksh $ sanky: no way
Adi: u have no opinion my dr little bros
Pari: adi plz guysss cm fast
They enter a shop
@ ladies section everyone is busy with shopping
Pari gives a sari to rags: try it dr .it’s ur hubby’s favorite colour
@ jents section
Laksh: bhai one min I will be aftr few min. Am going to try this.
Both raglak walk toward dressing room.but finds all closed.they c one in the corner.head towards d same.rags gets in but laksh didn’t c her his wallet fell down .he gend to take it.he also get in d same dressing room .
Rags tries d dresss.she c laksh who is changing his shirt
Rags screems nd he looks back.rags in her suit nd laksh only have his jean.
He cm closer nd pins her against wall.she closes her eyes.he is memorized to c her cute face
Laksh: beautiful
Rags looks on
Laksh kissess on forehead lips bare belly .she turns back towards d mieror .he hugs her frm back nd place his chin on her sholder.nd aings beutiful through mirror
Rag smikes nd turns hugs him .her fingers r mocing here bd there in his bare back.
Rags : romance khatham hui tho hum chale
Laksh: ya
he wear his shirt nd she changed too
Both cm out nd shocked to c every one in front of door
Utts: if u r done with ur romance can we move
Ecery one laughs screenes freezes on laughing faces of every one
To be continued
18 Comments
Ha ha ha oh god so nice buddy
Soo nice
Sooooo Romantic yaar…grt wrk ..bt tdy its vry short even then soo sweet
Aaaaaaaa too short
but good one
nice. .
pls can u make it lengthy
funny and nice episode
ha ha ha funny
guyys there is another one epi .today I was busy with sm work.so I wrote a small one.
then when I got sm free tym I wrote another one epi nd uploded it.i promise I will make it lengthy here onwards. do u think that am draging d story .If u feel like that plz tell me.r u cooked up with romatic scenes??? plz tell me frankly yar. nd big thanks u for all regular readers.thank u so much.i was upset with low no of cmnent nd decided to end ff soon.but I realized that I have sm regular readers for my ff.there is no boundaries for my hapoiness .nd decided to continue.i know am not a gud writer nd d plot is that much good.but am happy with ur cmments .plz guyss cmment on my ff.its just like an energy drink for me
nice
Hahaha epic…?
It’s nice you show very gud romance but plz thoda swasan k liye dikha do I know they r in supporting rolesin your ff but plz or write another ff for swasan because u r very gud writer
Great
ya anu.i will include mr swasan scene in d ff.but u have to suppoet me by cmmndng my ff
nice
Nce bt it’s 2 shrt nd I wnt sm swasan scns also plzzz
nice.. 🙂 🙂
Sweet part 🙂
It’s really very romantic & funny too.. we r enjoying it so u just go on continue it & I dnt feel that Ur not much dragging coz by every part Ur adding a romance by that we r forgotten its been dragging r wat..it track is going on right path..