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RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 4 – By Ria

RiaBy RiaDecember 11, 2016Updated:May 11, 201769 Comments7 Mins Read
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Raglak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 4

A/N: Thank you for all your encouraging support. I really couldn’t have asked for anything more. About Lakshya, I’m sorry again. His character would improve soon. I hope I am able to justify all the characters by the end of the story. Also, Annapurna is in a positive shade in the story.

Here’s the link to the previous update:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-3/

HAPPY READING!

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(RAGINI)

I woke up and found myself in Lakshya’s room. I don’t know how I came here as I clearly remember I slept in maa’s room. I tried recalling what exactly had happened but, couldn’t. I tried to move my hands but, I was unable to. Lakshya entered the room with a cup of coffee and sat next to me. He forwarded the coffee mug but, after a fraction of seconds he smiled and sipped the coffee. “I’m sorry. I forgot your hands and legs are tied”, said Lakshya. I tried speaking but he had covered my mouth with a cloth. I looked away in disgust while he pressed my cheeks and made me to face him. “What?”, he asked. He removed the cloth from my mouth and I shouted, “What do you want?” He nodded his head in a no and said, “No one is here to hear you out sweetheart. Maa has gone to the doctor and she’ll be back only after two days.” “What happened to maa?”, I asked and regretted my action. Lakshya caught hold of my hair and said, “This is for the last time I’m telling you that you don’t have the rights to question me.” I blinked my eyes to clear out the blurry vision. “I’m going to the office”, said Lakshya. “I don’t care where you go. Just untie my hands and legs”, I replied. “I don’t even want you to care and, about untying you that’s not happening before 2 days”, Lakshya replied and walked out of the room. I thought about his words as tears rolled down my cheeks. I had to stay like this for the next two days and I had no option. I had decided not to cry in front of La..sorry, Mr. Maheshwari as I wanted to show him that his so-called wife isn’t weak. I stared at the ceiling and recalled everything that I had been going through for the past few days. I was awake for a long time but, around 5 in the evening I felt asleep.

I opened my eyes quickly as I felt something hot on my face. I saw Lakshya standing in front of me with a half-filled coffee mug. He smiled at me and said, “How was the waking up call?” I turned away my burning face. I could hear him filling a glass of water from the water jug beside. I knew what was coming next and as expected he splashed the water on my face. It hurted me but, I smiled at him and said, “Anymore La.. I mean Mr. Maheshwari?” He looked at me in confusion and then sipping his coffee said, “You’ve to stay like this for one more day.” I nodded my head in a yes and said, “Just a day more.” I turned my face away and blinked my eyes to clear the blurry vision and stop the tears from rolling down. I was awake till late night as I saw Mr. Maheshwari wandering around and completing his project. I saw him laying down on the bed up later and at around 2 I felt asleep.

I woke up as I felt someone tightening their grip around my wrist. I opened my eyes and saw Mr. Maheshwari tightening the grip of the ropes around my hands and legs. I looked at him in disgust while he looked up and smiled at me. “I hope now you’ll feel the pain”, said Lakshya. I smiled at him and struggled to sit up. “I’m leaving”, he said. “What should I do for that?”, I asked with attitude. He looked at me in confusion and walked out of the room. I struggled to get up from the mattress and with lots of efforts jumped up till the bed- side table. I dropped the empty glass from there making it break. I sat down on the floor and facing my back towards the side table. I picked up a glass piece from the floor. I tried to cut the rope with the help of that. I hurt myself several times but, after about half an hour I was able to free my hands. I had a lot of cuts on my hand but, ignoring that I untied the rope off my legs. I had a huge amount of blood clot on my hands and legs because of the tightened grip of the rope. I was about to get up when I saw Mr. Maheshwari entering the room. He walked up till the table and picked up a file. He looked towards the mattress and worriedly looked here and there not finding me. He looked at me and we had a short eye lock but, I looked away. He went to the cupboard and took out the first aid. He applied Dettol on the cotton and came towards me. I sat over there forwarding my hands trying to be strong enough. He cleaned the blood off my hands. I tried my best to control the tears but, couldn’t. He aided my wounds and walked out of the room taking his file. I cried for a while and at around 11 I took my clothes and went out of the room.

I was about to go down when my gaze again fell on that isolated room. I thought about Mr. Maheshwari’s words of no one being at home. I walked towards the room and peeped inside. I found the room completely empty. I decided to take my shower first and then go inside the room. I quickly went down and came back.

I went inside the room and found the walls covered with enormous pictures of a girl, the one who consoled me that morning. I went through all the pictures. I think the pictures were pretty old. She looked very cheerful and happy. I wondered who it could be when my gaze was locked with one picture. I saw bhai in one of the pictures. I rubbed my eyes to see whether I was seeing correct. I went close to the picture and had a close look at it. I saw bhai, Sameer bhaiya (Sanskaar’s batch mate) and that girl. Bhai was in the middle while the girl and Sameer bhaiya on both his sides. I found everything very weird but walked ahead. I went through the other pictures and there were many pictures of the girl with my bhai. I stood in front of a wall which had the girl’s pictures with all her friends. I smiled looking at the pictures and recalled how I used to be with my friends. I suddenly looked at a picture and couldn’t take my eyes off it. I wasn’t able to believe my eyes. I was about to take the picture off from the wall when someone held my hand and dragged me out of the room. I kept looking at the picture until the person closed the door and pushed me down on the floor making my forehead hit the floor.

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A/N: Suggestions for the publishing days?

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    69 Comments

    1. Pinky on December 11, 2016 7:10 am

      Super sissy.wat is in that picture…whether that girl and ragoo bhai’s marriage photo …..laksh he is one side torturing her another side aiding her.. He is really a puzzle.update soon. I am waiting. Ria can u please update sangini which is one of my fav ff,pleaseeee………

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:23 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, about the picture, it’ll be revealed in the next update. Sangini? I don’t write that FF.

        Regards,
        Ria

    2. Sindhura on December 11, 2016 7:12 am

      Awesome and suspence post today too

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:24 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The secrets shall be disclosed soon. Yeah. I’ll update today too?

        Regards,
        Ria

    3. lovely on December 11, 2016 7:28 am

      Nice

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:25 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    4. Rasha on December 11, 2016 7:51 am

      nthng want to say for now, I need a another update for the words.. awesome work..

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:26 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next part shall soon be updated.

        Regards,
        Ria

    5. nikky on December 11, 2016 7:52 am

      plzz lakshya should fall for rag Ang plzz give next part soon I can’t wait for next part plzz do something

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:28 pm

        Hey, Lakshya will soon fall for Ragini. Do stay tuned. The next part shall soon be updated. Stay tuned for that too?

        Regards,
        Ria

    6. Maria on December 11, 2016 7:55 am

      It was amazing again! Waiting for the Ragini to find out the truth!

      With Love

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:34 pm

        Hey Maria,
        Thank you so much! I’m glad that you liked the update. Shhshh.. don’t disclose the secrets?

        Love you back?

    7. Anju on December 11, 2016 8:34 am

      Awesome

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:35 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    8. sanchami on December 11, 2016 8:51 am

      Awesome

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:36 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    9. Sreevijayan on December 11, 2016 9:15 am

      He is gonna regret it..seriously… awesome my dear..publishing days? Everydayyyy

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:37 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. He will surely regret his deeds. Just a bit of patience and hope you find his regret justified.

        Sure. The next update shall be there tomorrow?

        Regards,
        Ria

    10. Astra on December 11, 2016 9:18 am

      Laksh has a strong reason to torture Ragini like this. But, I’m feeling bad for her. Anyways, lots of suspense to get unlock…now, it’s going more interesting……

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:40 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you found the update interesting. Well, even I feel bad Ragini. Just hoping that the way I’ve planned out their justification will be okay with you all too. Lakshya’s motives will be revealed soon.

        Regards,
        Ria

    11. athena on December 11, 2016 9:27 am

      please post today alsoooo

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:42 pm

        Hey, thank you for reading and commenting! The next update shall be presented tomorrow.

        Regards,
        Ria

    12. jazzy on December 11, 2016 9:36 am

      i think that is the girk and her bro marriage pic and this story is very interesting

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:43 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you’re finding the story interesting. Well, the mysteries shall be disclosed soon. Stay tuned.

        Regards,
        Ria

    13. abi on December 11, 2016 10:01 am

      Awesome
      It’s amazing
      Post next part soon

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:45 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next segment shall be presented by tomorrow.

        Regards,
        Ria

    14. Vk on December 11, 2016 11:46 am

      e

      • Vk on December 11, 2016 11:47 am

        Awesome

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:46 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    15. dharani on December 11, 2016 12:05 pm

      awesome

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:47 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    16. sanchami on December 11, 2016 12:34 pm

      As always awesome episode

    17. IQRA222 on December 11, 2016 1:25 pm

      awesome

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:47 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:50 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    18. Devihaa on December 11, 2016 1:56 pm

      Hello ria dr…..
      The chappy was amazing yrrr…..I’m feeling sad for my ragu….??……but laksh….. He is caring also but at the same time he is torturingtorturing her…he is really a mystery ……what pic it must be……..,.hmmm…. Thinking…….
      And can u post the next part today itself……
      Kk dr bye…..

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 4:52 pm

        Hey Devihaa,
        Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, Laksh is aiding to her wound only because when you apply Dettol to a newly cut wound, it hurts a lot. About the picture, it shall be disclosed soon. The next update will be submitted tonight. Hopefully you’ll get to read it by the morning.

        Regards,
        Ria

    19. Akshata on December 11, 2016 9:18 pm

      awesome update, you literally made my vision blur, god she is suffering so much. even she doesnt know her fault too.

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 10:49 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Aww..I’m sorry for making you cry. Things will be set right soon. I’m really sorry about it.

        Regards,
        Ria

    20. Ragz_teju on December 11, 2016 10:50 pm

      superb loved it so much

      • Ria on December 11, 2016 10:59 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    21. asra on December 11, 2016 11:16 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous dear…..omg seriously superbbb dear….omg my poor ragini….ragini want to be strong infront of laksh….but her bad luck or her love make her weak….u end with suspense…not fair dear….plz reveal the suspense asap…waiting for nxt one..tkcr dear…

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:09 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. Well, Ragini surely wants to stay strong in front of him, but the way Lakshya is torturing her, it seems to be impossible for her? Well, haha.. keep thinking about things. I’ll be back soon.

        Regards,
        Ria

    22. Asw on December 11, 2016 11:17 pm

      Nice Ragini’s brother committed the mistake so she should suffer ? Keep going

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:11 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, it’s really sad how she suffers even though she’s completely innocent? Things will be set right soon.

        Regards,
        Ria

    23. Sushmita on December 12, 2016 2:02 am

      Today I had the good fortune of reading this ff…it is good written and contains a different story..in fact I have already read it from starting….ur story…just mesmerised me…now this became my favourite ff till now…ur ff is unique…
      THANK YOU and keep these good ffs coming…

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:12 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the story. Favorite? Seriously? Thank you so so much! I couldn’t asked for more. Indeed it was my good fortune that you read the story.

        Regards,
        Ria

    24. A.xx on December 12, 2016 2:33 am

      fab i think that sanky didnt rape her but his friend did and sanky saved her but swara misunderstood…..lakshya is really a puzzle and cant wait for next part.xx

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:14 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the segment. Well, let’s see what had actually happened. I’ll try updating the next part.

        Regards,
        Ria

    25. Fats on December 12, 2016 4:29 am

      Great update. Despite the constant pain Ragini receives, I love how she still tries to be strong. Her willpower is truly so immense. And wow, you left it at a really intriguing cliffhanger. I wonder what was on the photo. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:16 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the part. Well, Ragini’s will power surely is immense. Also, cliffhangers are fascinating, aren’t they? Haha.. don’t worry. Things shall be revealed soon. I’ll try updating the next part at the earliest.

        Regards,
        Ria

    26. SPP on December 12, 2016 7:26 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous
      Sorry Dear for not commenting on the last part as I today only read the parts together due to network problem here
      Feeling really sorry for Ragini
      Loved Laksh Care
      It is really interesting
      Excited for the upcoming
      Waiting for the next one………………..

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:18 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Please don’t be sorry. It’s completely alright and I do understand your part.

        Well, there seems to be a confusion regarding Lakshya’s aiding. Lakshya cleans her wound with Dettol which really hurts a lot when you try cleaning a newly cut wound.

        The next segment shall be updated soon.

        Regards,
        Ria

      • SPP on December 14, 2016 6:54 am

        Ohhh no
        I thought he cared for her
        But no problem let’s see what twist u r going to give
        U r always welcome dear

    27. Samanta on December 12, 2016 11:25 am

      Omg it’s marvellous update
      Poor ragini
      Feeling bad for her

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:19 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    28. Aasthu on December 12, 2016 12:02 pm

      Isn’t this marital rape??? Sad for Ragini….but happy that she won’t cry in front of that beast……so swasan was in a relationship……I’m sure there must have been a misunderstanding about Swara’s case…..which is why that Laksh is torturing Ragini……..plzz update soon dear…..I want to see that Laksh repenting all that he had done…..will Ap ever see Laksh torturing Ragini????? Why does Swara always prefer being inside the walls???????

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:21 pm

        Hey, well erm. Let’s see what happens.. Haha.. I’ll try updating at the earliest and try not to keep you guys waiting.

        Regards,
        Ria

    29. Ammu on December 12, 2016 2:00 pm

      Very interesting dear and I think Laksh should have an emotional past, that why he torturing Ragini. Eagerly waiting for knowing his past

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:22 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you found the update interesting. Well, the reasons for the torture shall be revealed soon. I’ll try updating the next segment at the earliest.

        Regards,
        Ria

    30. Raglakholic on December 12, 2016 3:27 pm

      It’s just outstanding update
      Poor ragini
      But who is that Atlast
      Totally loved it
      Eagerly waiting to read more
      Please do continue soon

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 4:23 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, mysteries shall be resolved soon. I’ll try updating at the earliest.

        Regards,
        Ria

    31. Shambhavi on December 12, 2016 4:32 pm

      Wow Ria! Thanks for this update. It served as a major hint to unfold the dramatic reason behind Lakshya’s behaviour. It was very intriguing. Now I’m hooked!?
      A lot of possibilities are taking form in my head after I read this! So I’m really looking forward to what actually happened to your characters! You never fail to come up with super cool ideas.❤?

      All my love,
      Sham. <3

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 5:28 pm

        Hey Sham,
        Thank you so much sweetheart! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, a lot has surely happened in the past which led to a major change in all the characters. Everything would be disclosed soon. Plus, I am really glad that you commented. It makes me feel so good that I could make a silent reader comment. Haha.. Just joking.

        Love you back sweetheart?

    32. Malu on December 12, 2016 8:45 pm

      Superb part

      • Ria on December 12, 2016 9:03 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.

        Regards,
        Ria

    33. hemalattha on December 15, 2016 2:36 pm

      awesome. laksh behaving like a mad witth ragini.sad for ragini.

      • Ria on December 15, 2016 4:08 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Lakshya is indeed behaving inhuman with Ragini.

        Regards,
        Ria.

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