Hello frnds I thought to write this one after watching yesterday epi… Raglak scenes are epic I just loved it ?? first tym writing OS fully on Raglak… if u guys felt bored I’m really sorry… apologise in advance… it may be similar to my chocolate-Swasan os, dont have idea…
Ok lets start,
The Milky Way and Dark fantasy world are rivals… they always used to fight with each other… Milky way people’s used to eat only dark chocolates to insult thm bz according to Dark fantasy people Dark chocolates are thr God … as well as Dark fantasy people’s used to eat Milky chocolates which is God to Milky way people’s…
DP-King of Milkyway…
Shekar-king of Dark fantasy…
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There was vanilla snow all around in the mountains and the sky was filled with creamy cloud yet the brightness of sun is present by gvng warmness to climate… the buds of eclairs blossoms in a nestle tree…A gush of winds, sounds of the chirping bird from the milky fountains and a fragrance of milky mud lingered in the air whilst a girl is running in wafer road, she stops when a cheesy stone hurt her legs… her deep brown chocolatey eyes only shown bz her face is covered by a veil… her eyes are enough to describe her beauty, her innocent pure soul…
Meanwhile a handsome boy is shown riding white horse in a strawberry road…his single look is enough to flat any girl… he notices the girl alone wondering near fountains… he changed his direction to the wafer road with naughty smile played in his lips… He reached the wafer road and helps the girl to remove cheesy stone from her milky foot…
Boy (smirks): it seems someone lost themselves in this Milkyway kingdom… now none can save u from me, I can do whatever I want… she turn away… he laughs evilly and touches her cheeks sensuously…
She swiftly takes her sword and points it at his heart… he is amused at her bravery, the way she was holding sword her look, he admires her in his heart… but within a second he takes his sword and twirls her and puts his sword at her neck, inhales her scent and tries to removes her veil… but she holds his hand and grab him infornt of her… he looks at her amazingly… They both get into the sword fight… she disarms him, sword fell from his hand… she turns his face using sword…
Girl (Pride and attitude): you are lost, Milky Way Prince Lakshya… she smirks…
She is about to leave but he holds her by hand and stares her eyes deeply… they both have an intense eye lock… she lost herself in his hazel orbs, its twinkle brightly… his eyes has some magic which make her loose…
Lak(attitude): now you lost, Dark Fantasy Princess Ragini…
He winks at her… She comes to her sense… she gv him stern look and moves back and about to fall but he pulls her closer by holding his arms around her waist… she shivers with his touch… he nuzzled his face on her neck and release his warm breath… she closes her eyes tight by sensing the heat of his proximity…
Lak(huskily): I lost myself long back when my eyes first tym met your beautiful big brown eyes My love…
He whispers in her ears… her cheeks turns crimson red… he pecks her lips, which is covered under veil… she frozen at the spot.. she angrily pushes him… he stumbles but stand straight… she turns and touches her lips to feel his kiss and blushes hard… he turns her towards him…
Lak: can’t u allow me to see ur blushing face …?
By hearing him she blushes more… he cant see that bz of her duvet but he can sense in her eyes… it’s just a crystal clear reflection of her emotion… he smiles at his effect on her…
Rag: You aren’t, you are late again…
(Raglak are in love they always used to meet secretly)
Lak: you knw very well as a Prince I hv so many responsibility towards my Kingdom… moreover I hv to cme without anyone knowledge…
Rags: thn what about me, I’m also princess… I’m alone in ur place… if at all anyone of ur people saw me… do u think they lemme alive… if suppose something happened to… before she could complete her sentence, he helds her shoulder tightly.. she winces in pain..
Lak (angrily): nothing will happened to you until this heart (pointing his heart)stops its beat… none have dare to touch my love my princess… if at all something happened to u thn it means ur Lakshya is de…
She closes his mouth using her palm and nods in no… her eyes turned in to glassy bz of her tears… he realized he is hurting her… he loosen his grip… she blinked her glassy eyes, tears fell into her cheeks… it’s not bz of pain it’s bz of his love… he quickly wipes her tears, kisses her forehead and embrace her in his arms…
Lak(wishpers):I’m sorry my love…
He forwards her favourite chocolate bouquet which has eclairs flowers Cadbury shot buds with candy leaves… her eyes gt twinkle after seeing that… a cute adorable smile crept on her face… he felt her happiness in her eyes…
Lak:don’t you allow me to remove this obstacle…? (With cute pout face by Pointing her veil)
She smiles at his antics and nods to unveil her face.. his hand reaches her face to unveil her face… her heart started to beat faster than ever… first he removes her duvet which covered in her head… her silky hair flows upto her hip like ocean of waves… thn he slowly remove her veil which covered her face… her milky delicate skin, her cute sharp button nose with brown stone nose stud, cherry like rosy lips with sweet smile everything take his breath away… it’s not first time he is seeing her but everytime she is giving this effect to him… he is dumbstruck… feeling his gaze she lower her eyes with shy… he lifts her chin to make eye contact with her…
Lak: You’re not only princess and also angel of these fantasy world… you’re the beautiful women ever…
Coloured raised n hrt cheeks… he kisses her eyes nose cheeks chin thn stares her lips… she bury her face in his chest with shy…
Rags: I Love You… he cups her face touches his forehead with hers…
Lak (wishpers): I Love you too…
They walks holding eachother hand by entangling thr fingers and seats near the Milky falls by dipping thr legs in the river which is fell from the dark cadburies mountains matching thr heart beats… she rest her head on his shoulder… a piece of silent without any disturbance rather than thr heart beats… the best moment in thr life, they wish to be like this forever…
he pluck the dark cadbury nuts from tree and ate… she gt angry…
Rags:Huh, u monkey you’re insulting my God…
Lak: lol its just Cadbury fruit… he laughs…
She angrily takes vanilla milkshake from her bag and drunk in one go… laksh wides his eye…
Lak: huh you’re insulting my God…
Rag (mockingly): lol.. it’s just a milkshake…
Lak: Huh after marriage u hv to worship milky flavors remember that…
Rag: U Male chauvinist… why should always girls change thr living habits after marriage… I won’t, better u change ur god and start to worship my dark cadburies… she frowns…
Lak: arre I’m not male chauvinist but it’s u who are female chauvinist… he made a face…
She tks dark cadbury silk river in her hand and splash in his face… he splashes Milky falls on her face… both plays with water and burst into laughter… he gt mesmerised… her hair strands waives in hair which disturb his view… he slowly tucks her strand behind her ear… his finger touches her cheeks, she stops laughing and looks at his eyes… he slowly cups her face and ask permission from her staring her lips… she closes her eyes to gv him positive sign… no time he tasted her juicy lips… she kissed him back… both lost themselves in the ecstasy of kiss… thr essence of love spreads all over the kingdom through winds…
After spending some quality of love time… laksh tks her in horse rides and leaves her in the entrance of dark fantasy kingdom… she had a tears in her eyes… she don’t have any idea did she ll gt chance to meet him again… what if parents comes to knw about thr love… he assures her everything will be fine… thy will live happily… she gv a tight kisd on both cheeks… he smiles blushingly… she leaves from thr he watches her until she hides from his sight…
Days passes like this… one day Both the king’s comes to knw about thr love… they confronts them…
Raglak in thr respective kingdoms answering thr respective parent ,
Raglak: haan I love Prince Lakshya/ Princess Ragini…
Kings: I won’t accept ur love…
Raglak: You always used to say my happiness to important you nw what happened..?
Kings: yeah ur happiness is first preference to me…
Raglak: then get me married to Lakshya/Ragini… he/she is my happiness my life my everything…
Kings: I can do anything for u… I dont have even if u are in luv with our maid but I can’t accept this proposal…
Raglak: Why..? Kings: bz thy are our rivals… thy are not belongs to our people… thy used to insult our God…
Raglak: we are fantasy people’s from where these community beliefs re cme…
Kings(sternly): my decision is final… Raglak (teary eyes): thn listened my decision also, I cant imagine my life without him/her… it’s better I would love to die… by saying this Rags runs out from her palace… laksh angrily leaves with his horse…
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Ragini is standing on the edge of milky way cliff and laksh is in dark cadbury ocean which is near to cliff… both Closes thr eyes and reminiscences thr happiest Lovey Dovey moment… a lone tear escape from thr eyes…
Rags: I Love You Lakshya… you are the only one can be my prince.. youre my chocolaty Prince…
Laks: I Love You Ragini… you are the only one can be my princess .. youre my milkyway Princess… by saying this both jumps…
Kings Soldiers people’s are gt shocked who all cms behind thm to stop but all in vain they already jumped…
Kings cried thr heart out… what will thy do nw… thr only heirs left thm all alone for whom happiness thy lived all those years… did thr rivals Pride beliefs community region will gt thr children’s back ‘No’…
Love is eternal it doesnt knw anything rsther thn love… when we alive we should live with peace and love by treating everyone as equal… we shouldn’t bother about our differences… they realized thr mistake… they’re repenting now but what’s the use… Both Kings notices eachother… they hugs and cried… thy ask sorry to eachother behaviour… When we truly repented for behaviour we should deserve happiness…
Angel of Fantasy world comes infront of them and mk Raglak alive again and blesses them… but laksh bcm a chocolaty prince and Ragini as milkyway Princess… who will care about that.. thr children’s are alive that’s enough to them… Both Kings agreed for thr marriage… finally Raglak get married…
“After that They live thr life happily with thr twin babies” Laksh closes his book… he said this story to his cute lil princessess whom lying on bed beside him… his twin babies “Abhi and Abhisha”
(Dont wry he edited thr romance ?)
Two cuties slept hearing thr bed tym stories and imagining the Prince and princess as thr papa and ma…
Ragini comes with milk… Rags: nowadays Prince doesn’t have tym to his Princess… She Complaints him to thr sleeping lil princessess and forwards glass of milk to him…
Laksh held her hand and makes her sit on his lap… Lak(naughty): ur Prince is having plenty of time he is just waiting for his princess signal… he kisses her nape… Ragini shivers…
Lak(huskily): what about our lil prince… Rags: I’m ready… she blushes by closing her face…
within no time he lifts her to thr room which is adjacent to kids room… he place her n bed n comes over her… he kisses her forehead thn captured her lips… she responds him…
Lak: I Love You My Milkyway Princess…
Rags: I Love You Too My Chocolaty Prince…
Light goes off…
END…
I knw its quite boring… once again I’m sorry… n Thank You all for giving urs precious time☺☺ Good night ?? have a chocolaty dreams..??
57 Comments
Awesome, it was so dramtic, lovely, funny. You are a humorous writer
Humorous writer.. he he he.. thank you so much dear.. ☺ I’m glad..??
Nice
Thank you☺☺
Its really different and interesting. I liked it. Its awesome.
Thanks a lot ☺☺
omg..it’s really a fantacy….loved it so much…
Thank you..☺☺
oh my god that was so tasty and cute and awesome
Thank you so much dr☺☺
Awesome
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yaar the story was tooo goooddd awwesoomeee superrrrbbbbb loved it to core
but angry yaar u said about all my favorite chocalates my mouth was watering hearing about themm seriously the fantascy was awesome
Ha ha ha.. see I’m giving u chocos ?? let taste it dr…? Thank you so much ??
amazing yaar… such a lovely and cute one..
Thanks a lot ☺☺
Wow super amazing
Thank you dr…☺☺
awesome, beautiful and chocolaty story……. with lovely moral.
Thank you☺☺
It is just fabulous
Loved it
Nd enjoyed through out the OS
Please do write more in raglak
Aww… will try to write more… Thank you… ☺☺
Amazing
Thank you..☺☺
Fabulous OS. I loved RagLak’s fairytale love story. It was so cute ?. Thank you for writing this OS. I had a nice time reading it.
Thanks a lot fats… I’m glad U luvd dis☺☺
awwww chocolaty world i too want to go their hehehehhe and loved it a lot
He he he… chocolaty thanks to u jazzy☺☺
Awesome
Thank you ☺☺
Outstanding os dear. It’s different concept and loved it a lot
Thnx lot dear..☺☺
Awesome
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awesome n interesting
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Superb dr
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its sooooooooooo cute…………………..
Thanks dr..☺☺
Aww…that was a cute os dr
Thank you..☺☺
Nive no its smiliar too that os. May b chocolates bt its enitirely different.. loved it so much umahh..
nowadays choco is giving me so much choco os.. now i nedd choco wr wud i go.. im gonna eat u choco.. wink bite u.. hmm raglak too good. Each para ws awesome i drowned into choco world. I love dark fansaty..
Apdingura? I felt fantasy world and choco is similar to our ‘Chocolate OS’ ?
Oh thala after noticed ur name I melted… ipo na liquid… so u can’t bite me till I gt freeze… ?? I too love dark fantasy… hmm yummy chocolatey ? thank you thala..???
Aww apudiyea sapduven.. i love and prefect melted chocolates than solid one… so hifi for loving dark fantasy… haha no thnks all choco.. seri love beyond ages engaiyo odi pochu nenaikuren … heheheg
no way both are not same..
Ama thala melted chocos mmm yummy… nanum apdiya sapduvean?
He he he…pidichudalam, no worries… actually I’m confused.. ? tonight ila tomo morning post pannidurean…
Superb
Thank you☺☺
Niveeeeeeeeeeee !!!*faint
Sprinkling water… kakali opened her eyes… Omg She is in Neptune… kaku someone parceled and sent u frm ur favourite pluto…?
Plzzz Nive dun tease me.. !!! PLUTO is my fav planet now a days since it’s going to b my next permanent residence after 12th exam… !!?*make over
Oh kaku.. sorry… c nive holding ears… dnt wry I’ll help u to gt a makeover.. 😀
fabulous akka…akka thz s not fair….nenga enaku chocolate’a neyapaga paduthidenga….sweet os akka…i loved it…tkcr akka…
he he he… na ena panradhu thangachi… I love chocos.. adha Ipdi.. Thank you..☺☺
mindblowing.the way you wrote this os amazing.your thoughts are really fabulous dear.give more os and ff like this.continue dear.
aww… thanx alot dr… I’m feeling glad… I’ll try to write more…☺☺
Choco baby…. Wow raglak OS