Hi my lovely friends..this is darshu back with another ff…hehe!!what to do…i can’t stop posting my ideas…Mintu(Vidhu) asked for an tom and jerry ff of raglak…it’s already existing hai na friends but I don’t want to disappoint my sissy so we shared this idea..i think you all would like it…
This ff is dedicated to her and all you raglakians…hurray…
Ok ok..stop with my tape recorder blabber…let’s move on to the character sketch and don’t forget to tell me whether you liked it or not…
Character sketch
Lakshya Maheshwari-fun loving and one of the emerging entrepreneur who owns his business without lending his father’s wealth…
Durgaprasad Maheshwari-who is an leading industrialists and he is the proprietor of Maheshwari constructions…
Annapurna durgaprasad Maheshwari-wife of dp and who loves her children equally…
Adarsh and pari-son and daughter in law of dp and who were helping dp in his works..
Shekar Bharadwaj-who is an leading architect of Kolkata and close friend of dp…
Ragini Bharadwaj-only daughter of shekar and she is also an architect and she is an widower…(don’t get upset…)
This story is about Ragini and Lakshya who got married due to the force by their family and who used to fight for silly things…
Laksh even though married Ragini due to force but starts falling for her deep inside his heart…
But for Ragini it’s a tough thing to forget about the disaster happened in her life…
Let’s see their colourful story and how laksh protects her from this society…
Here we go….i will just start the story…but soon will update it and it depends on your views…so don’t forget to comment…
The story starts with the groom sitting and he is repeating the mantras which pandit asks him to say…
Everyone on the mandap were smiling…But there is no smile in his lips …yes it’s Laksh who is groom here..
Finally bride is taken towards the mandap she looks gorgeous in that attire but she is also looking like a numb…no smile no reaction no blushing everything is missing in her…yes it’s our Ragini…
Ragini was bending her head down and she sits beside laksh…
Pandit gives the thaal to Pari in which mangalsutr is wrapped around the coconut and some flower petals were placed in it(Tamil tradition) to get blessings from elders…Since shekar belongs to south India…the marriage is happening based on their culture…
Pari nods and she lifts the thaal but she bumped with uttara and thaal falls down…
People starts gossiping”see this is the sigh of bad…abshagun…what’s the need for marrying laksh to that widower…i hope nothing will happen to laksh..”
Man1:yes we hope so…she already gulped her first husband on the day of her marriage itself…now i pity on laksh’s future…
Lady no:2:I don’t know why bhaaisab took decision of marrying laksh to Ragini…it’s not our culture…her husband died in an accident on the first day of her marriage itself…in what belief he fixed laksh’s marriage..
Man2:haan didi…this abhashagun is the sigh…still there is some more time left…if they wish they can stop this marriage now itself…
Laksh hears everything and he can’t control his anymore while Ragini is almost broke down hearing their words but she composed herself f
or Shekhar’s happiness…those words were nowadays common for her so she used to digest with it…but today people’s went to extremity which makes her to broke down…
Laksh hears her sobbing and he can’t able to afford her tears gets up angrily…
Everyone gets shocked and the one’s who gossiped gets relieved thinking that laksh is gonna end this relationship…
But the reverse gets happened…
Laksh:
Pointing towards the 1st lady:
What’s wrong with you…haan…thaal falled because bhaabhi bumped with uttara it was just an unexpected incident..it’s no one fault…abhashagun and all our thinking only…if it’s someone’s fault means bhaabhi or uttara should be blamed where come Ragini in this phase??answer me buaji…
That lady bends her head down…
And you maamaji(pointing towards the man)…
What did you say…haan right…she gulped her husband na…Ragini come here…laksh lifts her up by holding her wrist and drags her to centre…
“laksh please…leave it…”Ragini pleads him…laksh glares her and sighs to be quiet…
Laksh drags her towards the man and he cups her face and analysed her face without blinking…
Laksh to maamaji:dekho she is human only not a dinosaur or crocodile to gulp her husband…
That man:but laksh…
Laksh showed his palm against him…while Ragini sees him with teary eyed…
And you chaachi…laksh points towards the lady 2…”haan you said that her husband died after marrying her hai na…what abhashagun you felt here…what’s wrong you found on Ragini??”
Laksh:First let me clear one thing…our life span have been fixed by god…he wrote our days before we entered into this world…it’s his fate that he died after marrying Ragini..where she is at fault…he may be dead even if that guy didn’t married Ragini got it…
Please try to think atleast once before cursing a girl who is not at fault…if she is your daughter means will you talk like this…why can’t you understand this simple thing…
Ragini admires him..he is the one who raised a word against the peoples who kills her with their words…
“And you chaacha..pointing towards the man 2…i won’t break my marriage with Ragini…i will accept her as my wife completely “said laksh and applied sindhoor in her maang…
Ragini was in death shock…she touches her maang and starts crying…
“well done my boy…”dp claps and hugged laksh for his decision…
Dp:thanks for coming to attend my beta’s marriage..he folds his hand…
All gave him a smirk and left from there…
Shekhar holds his hands to laksh and thanked him for accepting Ragini…while Annapurna consoles Ragini…
Pari and uttara also joined her…
Uttara cracked a joke and makes Ragini smile a little and Ragini sighs laksh”thank you”…
Laksh nods…
To be continued •••
So how was the epi??do you liked it??do comment guys because it alone drives me to Update the next part…
Take care ? and keep smiling ?
~Darshu
48 Comments
Nice
Tq avika dear ? glad that you liked it…
nice
Tq so much dear for liking it…keep supporting ?
Amazing yar
Tq dear lovely ? for liking it…glad that you liked it…
Nice
Tq dear Sindhu? glad that you liked it…
It’s soooooo beautiful… No words to describe d love of laksh for ragini… Loved ittt…plsss update dearrrr
Thnk u dear akshi…aww am glad that you liked them..sry dear u have to wait for nxt update till Monday bcz my cousin is bck aftr lng dyz nd v have planned for outing…sry da…
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Awesome one yaar. I am feeling proud of Laksh’s answer. Waiting for the next
Thnks da gayu…aww laksh u impressed my frnd…keep it up?…hehe!!will post soon da…
Akka sema episode
Tq da sissy…am glad that you liked it…all d BST for ur xams da…
Tell me one thing r u a human being …how can u get so much time and so many thoughts to write these many ff’s..maate aapko mera pranam
Hehe!!bcz my xams were ovr dear..i just post it off whatevr strikes in my mind…aww…u mde me blush dr…it’s grt to hear from u who is alrdy a bst writer…thnx for liking it shri…and Congo for ur 20th chappy of born for u…
Thank u akka I am not at all near u in writing u r the best
Awesome
Darshini neenga padikirigala..If so wat class r u studying??
Hi Vk…i completed my mba exactly 15 dyz bfre…and abt u??adaan kedaikra ideas lam alli vidren…hehe!!? thnx for liking it dr?
Awwwww!!!!!it’s so so sooooo amaznggggg?????omggg such a superb concept n d way u have written it….jst fabulous dr…loved it to d core??????proud of laksh…???hayy!!!he rocks???n mera baccha rags don’t cry sweetheart ,now laksh is dere for u???waitng eagerly for nxt episode dr…plz post sooon????thnx a ton for such wonderful story..keep rockng n stay blessed..loads of love????
Aww tq so much dear fairy????? and yes laksh will b d pillar of support bt some tom n jerry will hpn soon..thnx da for liking it…??
Amazingg
Tq jazzy dear ? glad that you liked it..
awesome i really loved the way laksh spoke to those people who pointed on ragini
Tq dharu dear ? s dear laksh is understanding…glad that you liked it..
Nice
Tq aleeza dear ? glad that you liked it…
Amazing sisy…!!!! Enaku already concept therinjalum ipo read pandra apo new ah iruku da…laksh ragini ah protect panadhu suprb dear..!!! Athuvum marriage pandrathuku munadi..wow..I love laksh character da..!!!?? it’s outstanding dear… Seekram post panunga next part.. Can’t wait sisy..!!! Take care dear
Aww thnks da sis? hehe!!I told u abt his character alrdy na dear…
U will experience lil sorrows in further updates…tc dear..will post it soon da..
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it..
awesome darshu dear…..Ohhh laksh ovoru dialogue semma….andha lady and man ku nalla nosecut….thevaya Idhu avungaluku….vandhengala marriage pathidu sapdu poga vendiyathu thana….Idhu thevaya….correct thana darshu dear….Ipa avungaluku sapadum illama pochu….
waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
Tq da asra…hehe!!aama nalla nosecit…vaaya clse pannitu irunthuruntha nalla irunthurkum…vada poche?
U r always right da bcz u r my sis na..hehe!!
Tc too dear..will post it soon..
Interesting story and plz continue. I think it’s a different story
Thnks a lot da sissy? aww…will post it soon dear…tc da
awesome sweetheart….. loved it….. felt bad for ragini but proud of laksh….
Tq sweetie ?…aww u liked it..s am also feeling bad for Ragu…bt laksh will protect her dnt worry…
Awesome
Tq dear malu? glad that you liked it ..
nice xx
Tq so much dear sissy ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome epispde darahu di
Di you know di from many days i wanted some one to write ff on this topic and you fulfilled my wish
I really loved the way lucky supported ragu
Tq dear sissy ? yupp our brain wrks similarly..no doubt after all sister’s hai na iqu…am angry on u if u hav dis idea na den y u didn’t shared wid ur sisy r y u didn’t penned it…ok ok my anger wil nt persists mre time…am leaving u bcz u r my choti sisy? take care dear iqu?
It is nice.
Tq dear selena? glad that you liked it..
Awesome dear