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Tum Mere Ho <3
By #vini
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Part-28β
Laksh: (crying in pain) Ra..ragini.. Please.. Meri..meri l…last wish samajh ke.. Bol do ki tum…
Ragini: laksh aap..
Laksh: (cried in pain) aahhh.. Ragini please..
Ragini: (in a rage) Karte hain.. Hum aapse pyaar karte hain laksh..
Laksh: (got up and held ragini's face) Kya kaha tumne..? Phir se kaho..
Ragini: (crying) Hum aapse pyaar karte hain.. Hum aapse pyaar..
She saw that laksh has got up and was sitting normally.. Her expressions changed in confusion and shock… Laksh smiled in excitement and hugged her..
Laksh: I knew it.. Mujhe pata tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho..
Ragini broke the hug..
Ragini: (still scared..looking at his wound) Laksh… Aa…aapki chot..
Laksh: (cupping her face) Arey koi chot vot nahi hai meri jaan.. Ye sab to maine isliye kiya taaki tum maan lo ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.. And see.. Maan hi gayi na tum..?
Ragini: (removing his hands from her face and crying) Bohot bure hain aap… Bohot bure hain.. Sabse bure hain..
And she cried more putting her hands on her face…and laksh smiled seeing her concern for himself..
Laksh: (pulling her in a hug) Awww..mera baccha…(he hugged her and she was crying hiding her face in his chest..and clutching his kurta in her fists on his chest.. he was smiling) Bass..bass.. Mara nahi hu zinda hu.. (Ragini looked at his face angrily..he looked at her with a smile) itna pyaar…han?
Ragini: (pushed him back being irritated) Nahi karte hum aapse pyaar.. Aur ab to kabhi karenge bhi nahi.. Jaante hain kitna darr gaye the hum..? Ab kabhi baat nahi karenge hum aapse..
Laksh: (again touching her face) arey meri ragini…
Ragini: (removed his hands and got up wiping her face) Hume ghar jaana hai..abhi issi waqt..
Laksh: (got up) Haan chalte hain..lekin pehle meri baat to suno..
Ragini: (moving to his car) Hume koi baat nahi sunni aapki.. Hume ghar jaana hai bass..
She sat in the car.. laksh smiled..came to the car..and sat in.. Then he drove to the maheshwari mansion..They reached home.. They both entered in and anpurna saw blood marks on laksh and ragini's hands and clothes she got worried.. And came running to them..
Ap: (touching his face) Laksh ye kya hua tumhe.. ? Ye sab kaise? Batao laksh…
Laksh: Maa..maa..maa… Main bilkul theek hu.. Dekho ekdum theek thaak khada hu aapke saamne..
Sujata: Na tu theek hai to je itta saara khoon..
Laksh: Chaachi ye khoon nahi hai.. Ye to colour hai.. Khoon to.. (Touching his lips where it was bleeding) Bass..ye hai..itna sa..
Ap: Lekin laksh.. Ye kaise laga? (Looking at ragini's down face) han?
Laksh looked at ragini.. She also looked at him angrily but then removed her eyes..
laksh: Wo maa..main ragini ko april fool bana raha tha so…
Ap: April fool? Hey bhagwaan.. Ye ladka bhi na.. kyu tang karte rehte ho tum ragini ko..?
Laksh: Maa main aise nahi karta to mujhe pata hi nahi chalta ki ye mujse kitna pyaar karti hai..
Sujata: na to itna sab kuch karne ki ke jarurat thi.. Baise hi puch leta ragini se..
Ap: (laughed) Laksh.. Tum humari samajh ke baahar ho.. (Lookin at ragini) Ragini beta..iske mazzak ka bura mat manna..
Ragini: Maa hum thakk gaye hain.. Good night..
Ap: Haan beta jaao..ab tum dono change karke araam karo.. Good night..
Ragini went upstairs..
Laksh: (smiled) Good night maa..good night chaachi..
Sujata: haan..good night..
Anpurna: (smiling) good night beta..
Then laksh also came upstairs to his room.. He came in and closed the door.. Ragini was upset from him.. Laksh looked at her smiling..but she didn't look at him.. She took out her clothes and went in washroom to change..laksh also started opening his kurta's buttons.. And he took it out..now he was in a plain blue kurta..he placed the heavy one on the bed.. And started opnening his watch..then..Ragini came out wearing a yellowish saari with floral blouse.. But didn't look at laksh..
Laksh: (smirked) Baby kab tak aise hi gusse me rahogi?
She came towards him to pick up his kurta just then he held her hand..
Laksh: Accha baba sorry.. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum sach me itna pyaar karne lagi ho mujhse..
Ragini: (pulled her hands back looking at him in anger) Hum nahi karte aapse pyaar..
Laksh: (smirked) I know you do..
Ragini was looking at him angrily and he winked smirking.. Then she went from there to her bed.. Laksh took out his clothes from the cupboard and came out from washroom after changing.. Ragini was sitting on the bed..was still thinking about the whole incidence and her eyes again got teary.. Laksh came to her and sat beside her.. He held her face and made her look at him..she looked at him..
Laksh: Ab mere zakhmo ko to bhar do.. (Looked at her lips) You know with a kiss…
He brought his face closer to hers to kiss her just then she pushed him away..she got up and took out the first aid box.. Laksh smirked.. Then she sat beside him.. She took out the cotton held his face from the other hand and cleaned the blood from the side of his lips.. Laksh was just staring her..his eyes were showing his happiness..
Laksh: Ragini..aaj main bohot khush hu.. Aaj agar sach me main marr bhi jaata to koi gham nahi hota..
Ragini: (shocked) Laksh..!!
She looked at him with her big teary eyes.. Laksh also looked at her.. She removed her eyes and got up.. Laksh smirked a little..
Ragini: ye ho gaya.. Ab jaake so jaaiye..
Laksh: (got up) Haan.. Waise bhi.. Aaj to chain ki neend aayegi… Arey ragini jo mujhse pyaar karne lagi hai..
Ragini: Nahi.. Hum nahi karte aapse pyaar..
Laksh: (moving to his side) Karti ho… Tumne khud kaha tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho..
Ragini: jhooth kaha tha humne..
Laksh: (looked at ragini) Tum to kabhi jhooth bolti hi nahi.. Lekin ab bol rahi ho.. (He lied on his side) But mujhe koi fark nahi padta coz now I know that you love me..
Ragini: Nahi…nahi..hum nahi karte aapse pyaar..
Laksh: (closed eyes smiling.. holding pillow) I love you too baby.. Good night..
Ragini got irritated.. She angrily sat on her side..
Ragini: ajeeb zabardasti hai.. Jab hum pyaar karte hi nahi to…huhhh…! (She lied down..then she turned and looked at laksh who was peacefully lying with closed eyes and a slight smile and she thought) Lekin aaj agar aapko sach me kuchh ho jaata to… To hum…
Her tears were ready to roll down..she turned back..controlled herself.. Then she closed her eyes and slept…
Next day..
The haldi rasm was about to start..
Ragini (goldenish red lehenga.. The same she wore in that kite flying scene with laksh..in the show) and parineeta were getting swara ready.. All were looking happy.. Just then Anpurna came to them..
Ap: Ragini beta.. Laksh kamre me hai?
Ragini: Nahi badi maa.. Baahar hi the..bhai aur sabke saath..
Ap: Nahi to.. Humne dekha.. Baahar to kahi bhi nahi hai.. Upar humne dekha nahi.. Tum jaake dekh aao.. Aur bula laao usey.. Mehmaan aane wale hain wo bhi hoga swaagat ke liye to theek rahega na.. Hmm?
Ragini: (nervously) Ji maa..
She went upstairs from there.. She came to her room.. Searching for laksh..
Ragini: Laksh..?? (He was nowhere..checking in bathroom) Laksh maa neeche bula…(He was not in the washroom as well) Kaha chale gaye..?
Then she searched in different rooms..she was going to some room.. Just then chandan called her..
Chandan: Ragini bhabhi?
Ragini: (turned back) Ji..?
Chandan: laksh bhaiya ko dhundh rahi hain?
Ragini: Haan.. Pata nahi kaha chale gaye..
Chandan: unhe maine purane kamre ki taraf jaate hue dekha tha..
Ragini: purane kamre ki taraf?
Chandan: ji..
Ragini: Shukriya batane.. Hum bula laate hain unhe..
Then ragini went towards the purana kamra.. And chandan smirked looking on at her.. She came in and looked around.. All the furniture of that room was covered in white clothes.. She searched for laksh..
Ragini: Laksh? Laksh aap yaha hai?
No answer.. She turned back to go just then laksh (goldenish kurta with maroon payjaami.. The same he wore in the show in that kite flying scene with ragini) came infront of her and covered her mouth with his hand.. Her eyes got bigger seeing him.. He smirked and took off his hand from her mouth..
Ragini: Laksh ye kya hai.. ? maa aapko kabse dhundh rahi hain chaliye..
Laksh: (held her tightly in his arms) Main bhi to kabse ye mauka dhundh raha tha..
Ragini: (pushing him back) Kya mauka? Neeche function chal raha hai aur aap..
Laksh: (Irritated) Yaar ragini mujhse pyaar karti ho to jatana bhi to seekh lo..
Ragini: Hum nahi karte aapse pyaar.. (Removing his hands) chhodiye ab hume..
Laksh: jhooth mat bolo ab.. Tumne khud kaha tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho..kaha tha na?
Ragini: Haan..wo to isliye kyunki.. Hume laga ki aap..
Laksh: ki main marne wala hu?
Ragini: (irritated… in a bit anger) Laksh..!! Hume baat nahi karni aapse.. Chhodiye hume..
Laksh: Ragini.. Ragini.. Be smart.. Aise mauke baar baar nahi milte pyaar karne walo ko.. (Bringing his face to hers) Come on..
Ragini: (pushing him back) Laksh.. Hatt jaiye..
Laksh: Main to nahi hatunga.. Pehle jhooth bolna band karo.. Aur kaho ki tum sachme mujhse pyaar karti ho..
Ragini: Hum aapse pyaar nahi karte…nahi karte.. Nahi karte..
Laksh: Tum karti ho..karti ho..karti ho…
Ragini: nahi..bilkul nahi..
Laksh: Accha.. Tum pyaar nahi karti..?
Ragini: Kitni baar bole? Nahi karte..
Laksh held her more closer to himself.. And her entire body got merged against his body..she was looking into his eyes with her big eyes..
Laksh: Ye bhi keh do ki jab mere itne kareeb hoti ho to tumhari dhadkane tezz nahi hoti.. ?
Ragini: (shocked) Laksh…
Her heartbeats increased..and she ztarted breathing faster and deeper.. Laksh touched her face and lips..she closed her eyes softly..
Laksh: Kaho ki jab main tumhe chhuta hu to tumhe kuch ehsaas nahi hota..
She couldn't say anything..she looked down.. And he lifted his face up with his hand.. Her eyes became watery…
Laksh: keh do ki kal jab ek pal ki liye tumhe laga ki main marr jaunga to tum bechain nahi hui…
She was just looking into his eyes..while her eyes were completely filled with tears.. But was blank..
Laksh: Jab ye sab jhooth nahi bol sakti..to phir ye jhooth kyu bolti ho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti..? tum pyaar karti ho.. Aur pyaar karti ho to karo aur mujhe bhi karne do…
Ragini didn't say anything.. She was just quiet and her heartbeats were fast.. The laksh brought his face near hers.. He brought his lips closer to hers..he could feel her warm breath on his lips.. just then she pushed him away… And screamed seeing a lizard.. And stood up on a sofa covered with white cloth.. laksh also saw the lizard..
Ragini: (Panicked) Laksh chhipkali..hatt jaaiye waha se.. Wo..wo chhipkali..
Laksh looked at her face and laughed… Ragini looked at him shocked..
Ragini: Aap hass rahe hain? Wo chhipkali kaat legi to.. ?
Laksh: Ragini.. Wo chhipkali kab ki chali gayi..
Ragini looked down..and it was actually gone.. And she came down still being scared..laksh was still laughing..
Ragini: (irritated) Ab hasna band kijiye..?
Haan..darte hain hum chhipkali se to.. ?
Laksh: Seriously ragini.. Tum itni badi ho kar itni si chhipkali se darti ho..
Ragini: (in anger) Haan.. Chhipkali ko dekh kar aapki yaad aa gayi.. Isliye darr gaye the..
Ragini came out from the room..
Laksh: (stopped laughing..coming after ragini) Meri yaad? Chhipkali ko dekh kar meri yaad kyu aa gayi tumhe?
Ragini: (irritated) Aapki behen lagti hai wo..isliye..
Laksh: (got his eyes bigger) kya? Chhipkali tumhe meri behen lagti hai?
Ragini: (ragini while walkin ahead) Haan..
Laksh: (came infront of her and she stopped) You mean swara chhipkali?
Ragini: (Shocked) Nahi hum swara ki baat nahi…
Laksh: Ab to swara ko batana oadega ki uski pyaari bhabhi usko chhipkali bolti hai.. (Ragini nodded in no in shock..and he turned back smirking) swara…….
Ragini: Nahi laksh.. Humara wo matlab nahi tha..
Laksh rushed to swara's room and ragini came after him… Pareenita was also there..
Laksh: Swara… (Swara turned back) swara dekh ragini tujhe kya keh rahi hai..
Ragini: (defending herself) Nahi swara hum tumhe kuch nahi..
Laksh: Kaha..isne tujhe hi kaha..
Ragini: (grinding teeth looking at laksh) Nahi..humne nahi kaha..
Swara: Ek minute…. Koi mujhe btayega ki baat kya hai..?
Laksh: Swara.. Ye jo ragini hai na… Ye keh rahi thi ki tu chhipkali hai..
Ragini: (shocked) Na..nahi swara.. Humare kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha.. Hum to inhe keh rahe the ki chhipkali inki behen hai.. H…hum..tumhe chhipakli nahi bol rahe the…
Swara: (a bit angrily) Ragini… Laksh bhai ki behen main hu to iska matlab to ye hi hu na ki main chhipkali hu..
Ragini: (nervous) Na..nahi swara.. Humara wo matlab nahi tha.. Tum..tum hume galat…
And swara's expression changed into laughter.. Laksh also laughed..and so does pareenita.. Ragini got shocked seeing her..
Ragini: (irritated) Swara tum bhi..?
She looked at laksh angrily and came out of the room.. She came angrily.. But then her expreasions got changed thinking something and she smiled..and she slapped her forehead a bit..The she went from there and laksh saw her smiling and he also smiled..
Then the haldi rasm was going on.. Ragini was in kitchen..Laksh came there.. He looked around.. There was nobody in kitchen except ragini.. She was arranging sweets in plate.. Laksh came to her.. She turned back with plate of sweets.. And saw laksh holding his hands on his back..
Ragini: Aap kitchen me kyu aaye.. ?
Laksh: (smirked) Tumse milne..
She got irritated and moved ahead to go.. Just then laksh came in her way..
Ragini: (irritated) Laksh..kya hai ye? hattiye..bohot kaam hai hume.. (Moved aside to go)
Laksh: (came in her way again) Ek to main tumse milne aaya hu aur tum jaa rahi ho..
Ragini: (irritated) Laksh..please… Hatt jaaiye..
Laksh: arey aise kaise..? Baahar haldi ki rasm chal rahi hai..to phir haldi lagana to banta hai na…
He lifted his hands filled with haldi and applied that on ragini's face.. Ragini got shocked.. She put the plate on shelf.. And started cleaning her face with her pallu..
Ragini: (angrily..cleaning her face) laksh… Ye kya bachpana hai..?
Laksh held her from her waist and pulled her… She looked at him shocked and he smirked..
Laksh: isey pyaar kehte hain meri jaan..
They both looked into eachother's eyes..her eyes were shocked.. His eyes wee mesmerised.. Both were standing lost in eachother's eyes..just then pareenita's voice came as she was coming in.. "Ragini..wo mithaiya'n.." Ragini pushed laksh away.. And picked up the plate.. She entered..
Parineeta: ragini mithaiya'n le aao.. (Looked laksh) devar ji.. Aap kya kar rahe hain yaha..?
Laksh: Bhabhi..wo main.. Main ye mithaiyo'n ke liye hi kehne aaya tha ragini ko..
Parineeta saw haldi on ragini's cheek and laksh's hand..
Parineeta: (coming forward) Hmmm.. Ye haldi to kuch aur hi keh rahi hai..
Laksh looked at her..and ragini got embarassed.. Parineeta smirked..and took the plate from ragini's hand..
Parineeta: Laao ye hum le jaate hain.. Devar ji aap tab tak ragini ke face par jo haldi lagayi hai..wo saaf kar do..
She laughed.. And laksh smiled blushing.. Ragini got embarassed.. And pareenita went from there.. Ragini looked at laksh angrily.. He also looked at her smirking..
Laksh: (coming closer to her) Bhabhi ne tumhara face saaf karne ko kaha hai..
She pushed him away..and ran out cleaning her face..
Laksh: Arey.. Ragini..
Then he smirked…and went out of there too..
Next day also got spent with some mischivious acts of laksh..and in their cute fights.. It was mehendi day.. And each and every lady's hands were covered with mehendi.. Ladies were sitting together and were talking..
Parineeta: Swara.. Bohot khubsoorat lagi hai tumhari mehendi..
Swara: Sachme bhabhi…
Ragini: Khubsoorat to lagegi hi.. Humare bhai ke naam ki mehendi jo hai..
Swara: Ragini.. Uss hisaab se to tumhari mehendi bhi bohot khubsoorat hai.. Mere bhai thodi na kisi se kam hai..
Everybody laughed..
Ragini: (thinking to herself) Haan.. Wo kisi kam kyu honge..
Swara: (to anpurna) Badi maa.. Ye mehendi me apne pati ka naam kyu likhte hain.. ?
Sujata: Haan jijji.. Je baat to maahre ko bhi na pata chali aaj tak..
Ap: Mehendi me apne pati ka naam likhne ka matlab hai apne haath ki har lakeer me pati ko shaamil karna.. Unhe apni qismat bana lena..
Parineeta: Haan..ab sanskaar tumhari qismat banne jaa rahe hain.. Jaise aadarsh ji humari..aur laksh ragini ki qismat bann gaye hain..
Ragini looked at her hands and saw laksh's name written on her hands with mehendi.. She thought for a while seeing this.. Her eyes got filled with tears.. Then she looked up ad saw laksh coming from upstairs with aadarsh..sanskaar and aditya… And was talking and laughing..
Anpurna: Lo..ye log bhi aa gaye.. Chandan.. Jaao sabka khaana laga do..
Laksh and all reached there.. He looked at ragini..and saw her hands covered with mehendi..
Anpurna: Arey aa gaye tum log..chalo ab chalke khaana khaa lo.. (Looking at adi) Aditya jaao..jaa kar apne papa aur bade papa ko bhi bula laao..
Aditya: Ji maa..
Laksh: Maa.. Aap log khana kaise khaoge? I mean.. Aapke haath me to ye mehendi..
He looked at ragini..she also looked at him..
Parineeta: Haan devar ji koi baat nahi.. Jab hum logo ki mehendi sookh jaayegi tab khaa lennge.. Tab tak aap khaa lo..
Laksh: Bhabhi aise kaise.. Hum khaana khaayenge aur aap nahi khaoge to hume accha nahi lagega.. Haina aadarsh bhaiya?
Aadarsh: haan..exactly..
Ap came with DP and ram prasad..
Laksh: So main keh raha hu ki…..Ek kaam karte hain.. Aaj hum saare pati apni apni patniyo'n ko khaana khilate hain..apne haath se.. Phir uske baad hum khaayenge..(looking at dp) kyu papa?
Dp: (smiled) hume lagta hai laksh sahi keh raha hai.. Aap log baithiye..humlog khilate hain aapko..
Ap: Arey lekin..
Dp: Anpurna.. Hum keh rahe hain na.. Baithiye..
Anpurna smiled and sat down.. And sujata also sat down immediately..
Ram prasad: Lo..je sujata sabse pehle baithegi khaane ki baat par to..
Sujata: na maahre ko bhook lag rahi hai to..
Everybody laughed..
Aadarsh: (to parineeta) parineeta..chalo aao..
Parineeta nodded in yes.. And sat down.. Then laksh came behind ragini and pushed her a bit with his shoulder..she looked at him angrily.. Then he smiled and made an expression from his eyes to instruct her to sit.. She removed her eyes.. And sat down.. Swara also sat down..and every male started feeding their wives.. Aditya sat himself.. Amd started eating..
Ram prasad: aditya.. Tu le le mazze jab tak thaari saadi naa hoti.. Saadi ke baad je hi haalat honi hai thaari bhi..
Sujata hitted him a bit with her elbow a bit angrily..
Ram prasad: Ahh.. Na tu maaregi to saara khaana main khaa jaunga dekhle..
Sujata: Accha..sarry..sarry..
Everybody laughed.. And had dinner.. Laksh was sitting beside ragini..All of the others were talking..while laksh was feeding her.. Both were sitting facing eachother.. Laksh had a slight smile on his face.. Ragini was also looking up at him time to time.. And then laksh noticed some gravy on her lower lip.. He smiled.. She looked at him being confused.. He took his hand towards her face and wiped her lip with his finger.. She looked at him while he was looking at her lips.. Then he took it to his mouth and licked his finger and looked up at her being mesmerised with a smile..Ragini felt this really different.. She removed her eyes being embarrassed and looked at all to check if anybody else saw this.. But nobody did.. She again looked at him and he smiled..
Laksh: (in a lower voice so that only ragini could her him) I love you..
She got her eyes teary..He brought another chunk to her.. And she ate that… Both were looking into eachothers eyes….and then they all had dinner..
Precap- SwaSan's wedding.. naughty laksh.. RagLak's closeness..
13 Comments
Wow this is awesome loved raglaks scenes they were literally too gud so relieved to knw it was all lakshs plan want to read more
Can’t wait till till the next part
Till then
Take care
Keep smiling ?
Nice dr
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Wonderful chapter ! Your raglak are so cute!! Actually I just found this story yesterday night and finding a new chapter this morning made me so happy ?
it was really a diwali treat. .. I am totally in love with this ff….. the way Laksh expresses his love towards ragini is awesome…
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Awesome, an amazgin episode im a silent reader of your ff always liked it… but i only ready the english writing but still understand abit (its because i dont know hindi) π :p
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Awesome! Lovely! I really love rakglak’s nok-jokes and laksh’s naughtiness. Waiting for the next episode. ??????????????????
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Plz nxt part jldi updt karoooo
Loved it
Type in english plzz