Hey guys.. this vini.. I’m glad that you’re really liking my FF ‘Tum Mere Ho’ 😀 So till now it was the just the starting.. the real story is going to be started now.. So ready? Lets go on reading.. 😀
<3 Tum Mere Ho <3
By #Vini
Recap- Laksh came to lucknow with his friends where he saw ragini..ragini slapped jeet and laksh promised him to take revenge from her.. he came to get her but sanskaar took her back to kolkata when laksh got to know that she was sanskaar's sister..he asked sanskaar to tell him about ragini when she was gone to her badi maa's house.. sanskaar denied..laksh blackmails him showing his and swara's candid photos but sanskaar denied to tell about ragini.. he alerted and instructed ragini to not to come back at him.. ragini stayed at badimaa's house when sanskaar got disappeared.. laksh was waiting for her to come..2 months passed and now ragini decided to come back and check..!!
★Part-4★
Laksh (dark blue ditted shirt.. Greyish jeans and brown blazer) was sitting in a resturaunt with disturbed and disappointed face.. Amar was also sitting with him..
Amar: Bhai 2 maheene hone wale hain uss baat ko.. Bhool jaa naa.. Aisa kya hai..?
Laksh: are you mad? aisa kabhi nahi hua ki mujhe koi cheez pasand to aayi par wo haath me nahi aa paayi.. Laksh maheshwari ko jo cheez pasand aati hai..wo usey paa kar hi rehta hai..
Amar: Lekin yaar wo ragini to nahi aa paayi naa teri haath me? Tujhe to ye bhi nahi pata ki wo duniya ke kis kone me hai.. Bhai tu bhool jaa usey.. Aur bhi bohot si ladkiya aayengi..
Laksh: Tu chup reh.. Mera dimaag kharaab mat kar.. Ek to waise hi uska kuchh pata nahi chal paa raha upar se tu..
Amar: To lucky jaane de naa.. Usey aana hota to aa chuki hoti ab tak.. Tu bhool jaa usko..
Laksh: Just shut up…
He then got up and went out of the resturaunt while amar looked on and shook his head in disbelief.. Laksh sat down in his car and thought..
Laksh: Maybe amar theek keh raha hai.. Usko aana hota to aa chuki hoti.. (Grinded teeth in anger) Aisa kaise kar sakti ho tum ragini..? Mujhe to laga tha ki tum acchi behen ki trah apne bhai ko dekhne aa jaogi.. Par tum..
He then hitted his hand on the stearing wheel a bit.. And then he started his car and drove from there..
On the other hand…
A taxi stopped out of MM..and ragini (orangish red anarkali..fish braid) Came out of it with a bag in her hand.. She looked at MM.. She was nervous but moreover she was determined and then she got in opening the main door..she then moved in the house and stood at the center of the stairs and she looked around.. The house was extremly beautiful like a palace.. She didn't know where to go so she kept standing there..and then anpurna came out from the kitchen..
Ap: Haan sujata.. Pata nahi kaha reh gayi…
Just then her eyes fell on ragini..and she got a bit confused coming forward..ragini also got determination and she came downstairs to her..
Ragini: Ji wo hum…
Ap: Aa gayi? Chandan ki jagah aayi ho naa?
Ragini: ji?
Ap: Haan.. Chandan ne bheja hai naa tumhe apni jagah yaha kaam karne ke liye.. Chalo aa jaao…
Ragini was confused.. Then she realised that she should stay quiet and tell a lie to them as they won't tell her about sanskaar easily..and she will have to find out about him by hiding her real identity…
Ragini: J..ji…
Ap: Hum tumhe saara kaam samjha denge.. Theek hai..?
Sujata: (came out with a tray of two cups) Ke hua jijji? Kaun hai je?
Ap: ye….uh….
Ragini: ji…ragini..
Ap: Haan ragini..Chandan ne bheja hai isey apni jagah..
Sujata: accha…
Ap: Aao ragini.. Hum tumhe kaam samjha dete hain..
Ragini: ji..
Sujata: Haan jijji.. Jaldi se aa jaao phir naa garma garam chaaye peeyenge baith ke..
Ap then took her with herself in kitchen and sujata then sat down on sofas.. And then laksh entered in the house and was going towards his room..
Laksh: Maa..meri coffee.. (He looked at the main hall and saw sujata sitting alone..and he got cofused..coming to her) chaachi.. Maa kaha hai..?
Sujata: Naa bo chandan ne apni jagah dusri chhori ko bheja hai..usey hi kaam bata rahi hai rasoi me..
Laksh: Accha unse kehna ki meri coffee room me hi bhijwa dein… (Was about to move..then he stopped) aur haan.. Unse kahiyega ki khud naa dene aaye balki uss nayi servant jo bhi naam hai uska usey bhej de..
Sujata: naa theek hai bol dungi ki khud naa dene jaaye coffee aur bo..bo ke naam hai uska..haan ragini.. (Laksh looked at her..stunned) ragini ko bhejde thaare kamre me coffee le kar..
Laksh: Ragini?
Sujata: Haan.. Bo nayi serbant.. Uska naam hai ragini..
Laksh was shocked.. He decided to go in and check..
Laksh: kitchen me hai?
Sujata: Haan..
Laksh: Main khud hi jaa ke bol deta hu..
He smiled at her.. Then moved to the kitchen and saw ap with a girl wearing orangish red anarkali.. Laksh's eyes got sparkles seeing her.. And then she turned back with ap and laksh saw her beautiful face again.. Laksh's face got a smile of relief..and then..Ragini looked at him while ap was busy in explaining her the work.. Laksh was just looking at her and they both were sharing an eye contact.. Then she felt strange and she removed her eyes listening to ap.. Laksh smirked a bit removing his eyes too.. He moved in..took a glass.. poured water from a bottle looking at her.. She also looked up at him but removed her eyes again.. And then he drank water from it still looking at her.. Ap then moved from there..
Ap: Aao ragini tumhe ghar bhi dikha dete hain..
She then walked out of the kitchen..ragini also moved to go and looked at laksh..he put down the glass and came to her smirking a bit while she stopped..
Laksh: To tumhe chandan ne bheja hai apni jagah?
Ragini: J….j..Ji..
Laksh: (offered her a hand) Hi.. Laksh Mahrshewari.. Iss ghar ka sabse bada beta.. Or you can say iss ghar ka only hier.. And tumhara new boss.. (He chuckled)
Ragini: (joined her hands removing eyes) Ragini…
Laksh noticed her.. He smirked while taking his hand back..
Laksh: That's quite interesting.. It's gonna be amazing with you..
Ragini looked at him a bit shocked and confused.. he was smirking mesmerised.. Then ap called her from outside.. "Ragini"
Ragini: Ji aaye…
She moved to go but laksh came in her way..she moved to other side and laksh came infront of her again.. She looked at him..shocked and angrily too.. He was just smirking..then she removed her eyes a bit angrily..moved from the otherside and walked out.. While laksh looked on her chuckling…he then moved back his hair with a hand and came out too… While ap was telling her about the house..
Ap: theek hai naa ragini? Aur..upar..Yaha se right hand side par last wala room humari beti swara ka..aur left hand side par last wala room humare bete laksh kaa..hmm?
Ragini: ji…
Sujata: Naa jijji… Ab aa jaao phata phatt se chaaye thandi ho rahi hai thaari..
Ap: (moved to her) Ohho.. Aa gaye sujata…
Ragini stood there..laksh then came to her smirking..
Laksh: Kisi aur ka room yaad rahe na rahe.. (Ragini turned her head a bit to listen him) mera room zaroor yaad rakhna.. (Ragini looked at him shocked and angrily) got that?
He smirked.. Then he moved from there removing his eyes.. He stopped near ap taking up a piece of tea snacks from plate..
Laksh: maa mere room me coffee bhijwa dena.. Aur khud mat lana.. Wo nayi servant aayi hai naa..usey kehna laane ke liye..
Ap: hmm theek hai..
He then looked at ragini eating the snack piece ragini was looking at him a bit angrily..he then stepped back looking at her and turned going up to his room.. Ragini removed her eyes being disturbed…
Ap: Ragini..
Ragini: (looked at ap) ji..
Ap: Beta.. Jaao coffee bana do.. Aur phir laksh ke room me de aana..hmm?
Ragini: ji..
Ragini then got back and walked in the kitchen..
Ragini: (thought to herself) Ye.. Ye sab kya karna pad raha hai hume..? Bhai sahi kehte the.. Anpurna ji bohot acchi hain.. Par.. Par wo laksh.. Kitne ajeeb hain wo.. Aankho me jaise sirf ghamand bhara hua hai.. Aur humse iss trah se baat kyu kar rahe hain wo..? Jaane kya samajhte hain khud ko.. Par jo bhi ho.. Hume inhe bhi bardaasht karna padega.. Hume bass apne bhai ko dhundhna hai..aur uske liye hume sab karna padega to hum karenge..
Then she got determined and started preparing the coffee..
On the other hand..
Laksh came to his room.. He then removed his brown coat smiling widely and he threw it on his bed.. Then he moved his hair back with a hand and closed his eyes to control his happiness.. Then he opened his eyes and called some one..
A man: hello..ji sir?
Laksh: sanskaar hosh me hai?
Man: ji..thoda thoda..
Laksh: Hmm..phone ko speaker phone par rakh zara..
Man: ji.. Haan boliye sir..
Laksh: Hello sanskaar.. Kaisa hai? Well.. Tujhe ek good news de deta hu.. Guess what.. Arey guess naa.. Chal.. Main hi batata hu.. Dhyaan se sunn.. Mujhe ragini mil gayi.. (Sanskaar's eyes got bigger) arey main kabse dhundh raha tha usey aur aaj wo khud chal ke aayi hai mere paas.. Aur ab.. Ab main pichle mahino ke ek ek din ka hisaab lunga ussey.. (Sanskaar got panicked but his hands and legs were tied and a tape was stuck on his mouth) araam se.. araam se sanskaar.. Ab tu bass araam kar.. Ab teri behen ki baari hai.. (He smirked) chal wo aati hi hogi..rakh raha hu.. Bye.
And he ended the call smirking.. And his door knocked.. Laksh looked at it..and got a smirk seeing ragini with a cup of coffee for him.. Ragini removed her eyes..
Ragini: wo..aapki coffee..
Laksh: Hmm.. Laao do..
Ragini then got in and was about to place it on his night stand..
Laksh: Waha kyu rakh rahi ho..? (She stopped looking at him) mujhe do..
Ragini removed her eyes being a bit frustrated and she came to him..she offered him the cup without looking at him..but he was staring her..then he looked at the cup and held it by touching her hand..ragini got shocked looking at him and she took her hand back immediately as she found his touch really uncomfortable.. While he smirked looking at her.. Then she removed her eyes being disturbed and turned to go..
Laksh: ek minute..(She stopped a bit nervously and angrily) kaha jaa rahi ho?
Ragini then turned back looking at him..
Ragini: (removed her eyes) wo hum..
Laksh: Maine kaha jaane ko? Nahi naa.. ?
Ragini found his behaviour very bad..and she was looking at him a bit angrily and disturbed.. He then sipped the coffee while she kept standing there and laksh smirked taking down the cup..
Laksh: Umm.. (Ragini looked at him and he smirked) Lagta hai apne haatho ka saara taste daal diya tumne iss coffee me.. Aaj se mere liye coffee sirf tum bana kar laaogi.. Got that?
Ragini: (removed her eyes being a bit angry) Ji..
Laksh: (looking at her mesmerised) Bohot khubsoorat ho..
Ragini looked at him a bit shocked and angrily too.. While he was smiling mesmerised looking at her..Then she removed her eyes being irritated..
Ragini: Ab hum jaa sakte hain..?
Laksh: Waise to mann nahi kar raha but.. (She looked at him like that again) ok.. Jaao…
Ragini then removed her eyes being irritated and walked out of his room a bit angrily.. While laksh smirked widely..
In late evening..
All the family members were sitting down to have dinner.. Swara also came there with a down face and sat down.. Ragini came out with some big bowl and swara looked at her.. Ragini looked at swara…
Swara: badi maa ye kaun hai?
Ap: (smiling) Ye.. Ye ragini hai..
Swara: Ragini?
Ragini smiled a bit and joined her hands.. Swara was looking at her.. Then she removed her eyes and went in the kitchen..
Ap: chandan ne apni jagah bheja hai.. Bohot pyaari hai…
She sat down taking the food.. And ragini came back with a bowl..
Sujata: Accha hua ab maahre ghar me koi aadmi naukar naa hai..barna chhori ka to koi imaan dharam hi naa raha tha..
Swara got her eyes teary..ragini looked at her and got confused..
Ap: (scolding her a bit) Sujata.. Bolne se pehle soch liya karo.. (Swara wiped her tears a bit.. Faking a smile) accha ye sab chhodo aur ye bataiye ki khaana kaisa bana hai.. Ragini ne banaya hai.. Waise laksh kaha reh gaya.. ?
Sujata: Aa gaya jijji…
Ragini looked up and saw laksh (grey jacket with similar lower) who was coming to the table smirking looking at her only.. She removed her eyes.. he came and sat down..
Ap: Kaha reh gaye the laksh..?
Laksh: (looked at ragini) Kisi ke khyaalo me…
Ragini was finding his behaviour very bad.. And was getting irritated by his eyes which were staring her time to time..
Ap: (confused) Kya?
Laksh: (looked at her) Maa.. Kal meeting hai na..uski hi preparations kar raha tha..
Ap: Accha..chalo khaana khaa lo..
Laksh passed a smile.. And she removed her eyes.. Then he looked at ragini..smirked..and ate the food removing his eyes..
Laksh: (feeling the taste) Umm.. Oh my god maa.. (Ragini looked at him) Kya khaana bana hai.. Mann to karta hai banane wale ke haath choom lu..
He looked at ragini then.. She got shocked for a moment and angry too..he smirked a bit removing his eyes..and ap felt a bit embarassed..
Ap: Laksh..! Ragini ne banaya hai beta ye khana..
Laksh: Oh..b.. Mujhe pata nahi tha.. (Looked at ragini) Sorry.. Bura to nahi laga naa..? (He smirked)
Ap: Beta usey pata nahi tha.. Bura mat manna..
Ragini: (faked a smile at her) Ji nahi.. Koi baat nahi..
Ap smiled removing her eyes and ragini looked at laksh who was staring her smirking..she then removed her eyes being irritated and went in the kitchen..
In night..
Ragini (white kurta pinkish salwaar..open hair with side parting) came to the kitchen with a jug..and she started filling the water in it.. Then ap came in to her..
Ap: Ragini beta..room dekh liya naa apna..?
Ragini: ji..
Ap: Chalo..theek hai phir.. Araam se sona.. Kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to humse zaroor keh dena…Hmm? Good night..
Ragini: (smiled a bit) ji..good night..
Ap smiled and went from there.. Ragini was filling her jug.. Then it got filled.. There was a very dim light in MM as it was night.. And she came out Then she put the jug on the dinning table and moved to the kitchen to close the door and latch it.. She did it and turned back.. And saw laksh (grey-blue jacket with similar lower) standing near the table putting his hands in his pockets and resting his back to a pillar.. Looking at her smiling..
Ragini: (removed her disturbed eyes) k..kuchh chahiye tha aapko.. ?
Laksh: (smirked looking at her) maangunga to de dogi?
Ragini was shocked, confused and angry looking at him and he laughed.. Then..
Laksh: Waise… Akele sone me darr to nahi lagta naa? Agar lagta hai to bata do I will…
Ragini: Ji…?
Laksh: (laughed) Nothing.. Mujhe laga tum..
Ragini: (a bit irritated) Hume akele rehne ki aadat hai.. Aap chinta mat kijiye..
Laksh: Uff.. Ye haseena to kaat-ti bhi hai…
Ragini: (removed her eyes..being irritated) Hume lagta hai ki raat bohot ho gayi hai.. To hum jaate hain.. Good night..
Laksh was looking at her smirking and she took up her jug from the dining table..and went to her room…while laksh looked on at her..ragini came in her room.. She put the jug on the night stand..came back to door and shutted latching it.. And she turned back getting merged to the door..
Ragini: Bhai sahi kehte the inke baare me.. Kisi se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai.. Ye bhi nahi jaante ki ladki se kaise aur kis trah ki baat ki jaati hai.. Bass jo mann aaya bol diya.. Khair..hume inse kya lena dena.. Hume bass apne bhai ko dhundhna hai.. (She got her eyes teary but determined) Aur hum aapko dhundh kar hi yaha se jayenge bhai..
Precap– Wait until next part :p
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13 Comments
Hi vini…Im a regular reader & fan of ur ff…I have nvr commentd in fb…sorry 4 tht. u r fab dear & readng once agn ws awesm..
interesting ..just read all the parts loving it
Oh GOD…sanskaar is kidnapped? Dis laksh..awesome dear
Amazing
That was fine, a bit tragic, feeling bad for sanskaar and swara. Chapter’s nice…
Super dear it’s ok I understand ur situation love u dear
awesome.loved it
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Stupendously interesting