Raglak ts I AM MARRIED TO A STRANGER
Hi guys im shilpa back with an Ts.
I have already posted this here. But I think al of u might have forgotten it so im posting once again n..
Anyways last time when I wrote the c rest part of this ya on tellyupdates I was very disappointed with one of the responses..
I hope you guys have read ny other stories too.. I do take ideas from movies and all .. But I dont copy them completely I change the story into my style of writing..
I had taken the idea from a short film.. Yea and there were similarities in my shot and the short film but guys have patience to read the story and then judge .. The second part was meant to be completely different..
Im so sorry if i hurt anyone’s feelings ..
I hope you guys like it.. pls do comment and support..
A boy is shown trying the nuptial chain( mangal sutr ) around the brides neck.
He fills her hairline with kumkum..
They exchange garlands ..
They take the seven phere ..
And at last the pandith declares . Vivah sampurn hua..
And they both take blessings from the elder
The couple is revealed to be Ragini and Laksh
And their families gifted them a well furnished flat so they can live together without family interference..
Later at that night..
Ragini is sitting on the bed of the new flat waiting for laksh.. .
All the guest had left and it was only Raglak in that flat . She is wearing the same lahanga she wore in the wedding but without a ghunghat .
Ragini’s point of view :.
Ohh god.. Im feeling scared .. i mean I have not even talked to him properly before marriage. What if he wants a physical relation now itself… How do I tell him that im not ready .. How can I give myself to him without even knowing him properly. ..
Wil he feel angry at me if i openly talk to him.
“Hey krishna ji … mujhe help kar dena… kaash Laksh ji ek samajhdar insaan hoga ..” She prays .. ( hey lord krishna.. pls help me.. I wish if Laksh ji is an understanding person.. )
end of pov
And she hears the creaking sound of the door opening..
Here enters our hero Laksh..
He is looking dashing in a cream sherwani.
Ragini slowly raised her head and looked at him..
” hi Ragini.. u can go and change.. and … Ill be sleeping in th other room.. u can feel free and comfortable.. “he said..
Suddenly Ragini remembers her mother telling her “laado.. if your husband doesn’t wanted sleep with you that means you have failed as a wife.. ”
She thinks.. ” why did he say that he wil sleep in the other room.. ??”
” Ragini.. Ragini.. where are you lost..
And dont feel because Im sleeping in the other room.. I can u understand your feeling when you sleep with a stranger. And i will tell you one thing. I fell in love with you while I saw your photo itself . .. But i know that you do not have any feelings for me.. So i dont wanna get into a physical relation without both of us falling for each other. You will take time to adjust.. till then can we be friends. ? .”
He asks her forwarding his hands for a handshake ..
Ragini was dumbstruck at first . But then she was relieved and happy to know how understanding Laksh was..
She too forwarded hand and they had a handshake which marked the beginning of a new life for both of them..
” so Ragini.. have a good night and sleep well.. Im leaving to the other room.. “laksh says..
” good night Laksh ji.. ” Ragini says..
” arre yaar .. now we are friends.. So what is the need of ji in my name.. call me Laksh.. that sounds better. .. ” says Laksh…
” ok Laksh ji. Oops . Sorry Laksh. ” says Ragini..
” k then. Call me if you need something .. Im in the other room.. ” says Laksh and leaves to the other room.
As soon as Laksh leaves the room Ragini goes and changes into a simple salwar
She takes her diary and writes
” I am married to a stranger .. ” with a black pen..
She sits and thinks about her parents and all for too long..
And then she doses off to sleep too late…..
The next morning..
Ragini i wakes up and looks at the clock…
” hey bhagwan.. Its 9 o clock.. how did even sleep for too much time… what will Laksh think of me.. first day of marriage itself I slept for so long.. ” she thought and rushed into the toilet..
After some time she came out wearing a beautiful red sari..
She hurriedly put the sindoor and mangalsutr and ran to the kitchen
She was abt step in the kitchen when she saw Laksh making a cup of coffee for himself..
After seeing Laksh there she suddenly remembers her mother words
” ladoo… . If your husband works I. The kitchen that means you have failed as a wife. ”
She got tensed thinking abt this .
” good morning Ragini… “said laksh bringing her out of her trance. .
” uhnm. Good morning laksh. Why did you enter the kitchen… You could have woken me up right. ” said Ragini
” arrey Ragini . Chill its ok …. We are not in the eighteenth century that i get angry on you for waking up late or for making me enter the kitchen…… common I can understand how tired you were after yesterday’s functions.. ”
Said laksh..
” but lak..”Ragini started to be interrupted by laksh..
” so wanna try a coffee made by your handSome husband ??? ” asked laksh with a cute smile on his lips and forwarding her a cup of coffee…
” hmm sure mr husband.. ” she said and took the cup in her hand..
She was very tensed about her married life.. But Laksh was making it really easy for her..
He made her feel home…
She was skipping her coffee.. while he was busy staring her with love..
Little did she know that Even though he was a stranger to her she was never a stranger to him…
Pls do comment if interested..
Less comments = no part two ?
31 Comments
Plzzz post nxt part…eagerly waiting love uuuu dear….
Awesome episode
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was it an os??? I m felling like I read it before… but its really awesome….?????????????
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I think I have raed it before!! Jo v hai!! It’s outstanding!!!loved it to d core??? in love wid laksh..litterely!!!! Uff!! ???? Waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blessed sweety????
Hi its really awesome. There are many readers who don’t know this story from any short film because they have not seen that film or whatever it is.i am 1 of them I never seen such kind of film. Whoever have seen that particular film then they will ignore it.you should write this story n please update soon dear waiting for the story specially wuth our beloved RAGLAK.
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