Yes Neha, you are very right. It’s true actually i showed Ragini’s character too weak there. I just wanted to show how Laksh’s revenge turned to love later. I didn’t support Laksh in start though. I just wanted to show how he was furious on Ragini for ruining his career. Even I won’t support his work. I’m taking responsibility of writing such disgusting concept. As a girl I’m not supposed to write like that. But, i wrote what idea i got. I’m sorry I won’t repeat such stories again.
I’m very sorry girls, I can’t continue that ff, because the concept itself is very cheap. Thanks for enlightening my mind Neha. I never show again woman weak in my works. And don’t stop pointing out negatively, then only authors like me will change. Thanks again neha.
Shraddha, thanks for understanding my pov and actual concept if that story. And thanks all others who gave me strength.
As a compensation for stopping that ff, I’m writing an OS here.. hope all will like it.
RagLak a Story of Love.
Raglak the newly married couple are going in a car to a new city. Ragini looks at Laksh who is sleeping happily. She was driving the car. From the start of journey Laksh was sleeping like that without talking to her.
“Does anyone do like this with newly married wife? A cute sweet wife is beside and he is sleeping??”
Ragini annoys and keeps driving. Then she remembers his mother’s words.
“He is too shy beta. You have to start anything. He don’t even talk to girls. Maybe you are the first girl in his life.”
Ragini sighs and looks at Laksh. She stops the car. “Laksh” she calls. He opens his eyes and looks her. She moves closer to him. Laksh moves far, “do you want cool drink, i will bring right now.”
Laksh goes to shop without paying attention to her words. Laksh brings a soda to her. Ragini looks at him in upset. Laksh gives back that bottle to vendor.
“You asked cool drink..”
“Oh, did I???” Ragini questions back in upset. Laksh sits silently. He can’t understand what Ragini is thinking.
They reach their house. Laksh takes his suitcase and he goes inside. Ragini takes her own suitcase out from trunk. “How unromantic he is. He don’t know how to treat a wife”
Ragini struggles to pull her suitcase inside. She drags it and comes into room where Laksh has come. Then Laksh looks at her.
“Why didn’t you tell me to bring suitcase? I would have helped you” he says. Ragini gets annoyed but keeps her calm?
“That is your room” Laksh says pointing other room. Ragini look him confused.
“Wife and husband stays in same room Laksh” she says. “Whta.. but I don’t know this.” Laksh says.. Ragini drags her suitcase back to other room in extream annoyance.
Laksh soon calls to his mom and gets confirmed that both have to share same room. His mom beats her head thinking how ragini is handling innocent laksh. Laksh goes to other room and sees Ragini who is arranging everything in upset.
“So sorry Ragini. Come to that room.”
“No”
“Then, I will come..”
Ragini comes and closes door on his face. Laksh goes back.
Ragini gets a little cool down with the words his mom said. Next morning, Ragini comes to Laksh’s room he is getting ready.
“I will also come along with you Laksh. Let’s go together to office.”
“Ok..ok”
“Don’t forget to call me before you go.”
“Sure sure”
Ragini comes back to her room with smile. Laksh gets a phone call. “What.. is it. I’m coming right now.” Laksh says and goes to car.
Ragini shocks to listen a car sound she goes out, but Laksh leaves. Ragini gets teary eyes.
“Why did he marry me if he is ignoring me like this.” Ragini goes herself in catching a bus with much difficulty. She reaches her office late. She and Laksh work i. Same office. Laksh is boss and she is his PA.
Laksh was shouting on some workers. “Where is this PA? Why didn’t she come yet? The meeting time is over.”
Ragini just enters his cabin.
“What is this Ragini? Can’t you be punctual?” He flames.
Ragini “Sir, I’m not supposed to say my personal problems here but i have to now. My husband said that he will drop me in office but he simply ignored me. I took lot of time to catch a bus and walk all over from bus stop till office. So I was late by 5 minutes. I’m extremely sorry.”
Ragini goes back to her cabin. Laksh understands his mistake. At that time he has forgot completely about her. Ragini sits in her cabin and calls to someone. Laksh calls to his mom. His mom is ultimate god for him. His mom says a idea to him to make Ragini happy.
Evening time,
Ragini was packing her suitcase. Laksh comes and hides a flower bouquet at his back. His fingers are vibrating in nervousness. “Ra..” he calls.. she turns to him and gives him bunch of papers.
“What is this?”
“Our divorce papers”
Laksh shocks, “but why”
“I can’t live with a man who has no feelings and who don’t care his wife”
She gets busy in packing. Laksh looks at papers says “ok” and goes to his room.
Ragini gets hurt with his words. She imagines that he might request her. But, he simply ignored her again. She furiously starts packing her bags. Laksh goes to his room and cries. “Pleas Ragini. Don’t leave me.”
Ragini comes out of room with her suitcase, Laksh goes ti her to help but she stops him. They are stopped by Annapurna Laksh’s mom. She comes just then.
Annapurna “what is this Ragini ?”
Ragini “aunty why i have to adjust always? Your son don’t have interest on me. Then there is no meaning in this relation. Thats why im leaving.”
Ragini goes away without even looking at Laksh once. Laksh looks at her in r
Tears. Annapurna consoles him.
Ragini’s parents are taunting her for doing this. “Then what to do? I thought Laksh will change and come into a route after seeing divorce note. But, he simple said ok. That means, he don’t like me. Why to stay with such man then?” Ragini cries and her mom hugs her.
Laksh was saying.. “maaa i got angry when ragini showed me divorce note. What wrong did i do? I don’t know how to talk to girls. Ragini is 1st girl in my life. How wjll she understand that i love her.”
Annapurna feels sad. Both of their parents thinks to do something on this issue.
Ragini for name sake she gave divorce but her heart was with Laksh only. Then next day, she gets a phone call that Laksh met with an accident. Ragini shocks and runs to his house. She goes to his room. There she finds a dairy of Laksh where he is written everything for Ragini.. he writes how he love her but how he was nervous and shy to say that out. He buys her many gifts but how he stopped himself from giving.
Ragini feel emotion with it. Laksh comes frow wash room and takes dairy from her hands. “Don’t read my personal dairy” he says. Ragini hugs him, im sorry laksh i didnt understand you. Forgive me.”
Laksh smiles and hugs her back. They both bury each other in their embrace.
The end.
Hope all liked this story?? I didn’t degrade anyone’s character here. I will try to write such stories in future. ? I’m sorry again for writing a bad concept.. guys, plz don’t and ask me to continue that ff.