Hi friends …?? its me Devihaa… Thank u very much friends for ur support which u gave me for my RAGLAK CHILDHOOD LOVE OS … I really didn’t expect this much response from u all… I was jumping in happiness… Now I’m here with a new story….
Ok now enough of my talks….
Let me start now..
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A big mansion is shown. Inside the mansion a room is shown. A boy of 20yrs comes out the washroom. He is wiping his hair with the towel. Then he gets ready and goes near a boy’s photo which is garlanded….
The boy: bhai…. How r u..?? I don’t know why this happened to u…..?? That girl is only responsible for ur death bhai….. All the girls are like this only bhai…( tears r flowing down his cheeks )
A women: Laksh beta…. Come down and have ur breakfast… U r getting late…
Hearing this Laksh( the boy) wipes his tearsvand comes down …
Ap: beta.. Why ur eyes r red…??
Laksh: nothing ma….
Ap( keeping her hand on his shoulder): u r thinking about sanskar…???
Laksh remains silent
Ap: beta…u know its really difficult for me also… But u can’t remain like this forever…. U have to move on ….
Laksh: no ma… That bl**dy girl is only responsible for my bhai’s death….. (Clutching his fist)
Ap: all the girls r not same… Beta….
Laksh: no ma… All r same..
Ap: ok!! Leave it… Come and have breakfast….
Laksh nodes and had his breakfast and leaves to college…
At college
Laksh reaches the college and goes to his friend
Laksh: hey!! Rahul , how r u..??
Rahul: fine Laksh…. And principal called u….
Laksh: ok!! I’ll see it…
Laksh goes to the principal’s cabin
Laksh: sir.. Can I get in…
Principal: laksh.. Come in…
He gets inside the cabin
Principal: Laksh u r the best student in our college…. I want u to do a project for a competition…
Laksh: its my pleasure sir…
Principal: good… Along with u another person will be working…. Ragini….come in…
Ok!! Friends I tried my level best…. I’m sorry for any spelling and grammatical mistakes… Plsss do comment friends as it encourages me… Plss comment whether it is positive or negative… I’ll try to post the next part at the end of this week..
CREDIT TO: Myself and all my friends…
21 Comments
Nice
Nice
Nice but make it long
Awsm bt try to update a bit longer one plz?
Interesting start and plzzzzzzzzz continue
interetsing
nice but short
awesome
Nice start dear…
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Superb
good start
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Nice
Awesome
But make it a bit long
Waiting for the next one……………
Nice start dear….waiting for nxt one…
awesome
Write a lil bit longer
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Keep going like this
Superb
amazing. Continue