Hi friends this is darshu with RagLak OS…sorry haven’t proof read…
\*NOTE ?:Emotionally sensitive peoples please control your tears and don’t bash me…sorry for making you guys sad…*\
Let’s move on to the plot…
The characters are same as that of swaragini serial…so no need for intro I think…
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A grand hall is shown which is decorated with full of pink with white colour flowers and some Saturn clothes are hanged is shown…
The scene then shifts to an mandap in which bride and groom is shown…
Pandit ji asks the elders to touch the mangalsutra(for blessing before giving it to groom’s hand…it’s been followed in Tamil culture)…
Groom was about to take it…
“laksh…don’t urge… you have to wait for some more time…”said ap and she grinned…
Laksh gave’till when’expression…
“you can’t keep quiet for a single minute uh…naughty…”bride whispers in his ears…
“you fall for that only na…”laksh slightly lifts his veil and winks…
All watches their nok jhoks…
Ap and sumi says “no one evil shouldn’t fall on our kids”and the tear drop escapes from their eyes…
On the other side people who came for the wedding gossips”it seems like an love marriage…but these Maheshwari’s are hiding that from us saying we have found a best girl..haaha(evil laugh)”
“haan…didi…seems like that only…laksh doesn’t have any manners I think…before getting elder’s blessings itself he tooks the mangalsutra…abhashagun…”another lady badmouths…
Pandit ji handovers the mangalsutra to laksh and asks him to make her wear…
panditji finished mantra’s
“now you’re married officially…”pandit asks them to take elders blessings…
RagLak takes everyone’s blessings…
Dp takes everyone towards the dining hall…leaving RagLak alone…
“So now we are official…i have full rights on you…in these 6 days I haven’t seen you properly because of these rituals…You don’t know how much i suffer without seeing your face…noone can prevent me from today…”said laksh and lifts her gunghat…
“areyy laksh…stop it…”Sujatha comes and hold his hands…
“what now chachi…”laksh makes a pout…
“you have to wait…for some more time…”Sujatha chuckles and asks Ragini to come with her…
“upto how much time chachi…this is not fair na…”laksh hits his forehead with his palm…
Ragini turns back and lifts her gunghat slightly without letting other’s watch her and winks at Laksh…
He glares her…
Few months later…
“good morning my lucky charm…”Ragini comes with a coffee tray and wakes him up…
“happy morning my pyaari laadoo…”said he and pulled her towards him…
“leave me…”Ragini frees her from his grip and she feels dizzy and was about to fall…
“Ragini…Ragini”laksh holds her and he calls his mom…
Ap in kitchen heard his scream and rushed upstairs…
Laksh makes her sleep on bed and sprinkles water over her face…
Ragini opened her eyes…
“you ok…”laksh asked her choking voice…
Ragini nods and laksh hugged her tight…
“I got tensed you know…you haven’t had anything right…that’s why you felt dizzy…don’t worry I will bring something…”said laksh without breaking the hug…
Ap coughs…they broke the hug and get back to their original position…
“laksh…go to kitchen and bring nashtha for Ragini…i will take care of her till then…”ap sends him out desperately…
“no maa…am ok…come na let’s do puja…lots of works are left out…”Ragini was about to get up…
Ap makes her sit and says”can’t you hear me…go and get something for my daughter”ap glares laksh…
Laksh went down and takes the plate and get her daal with rice and some veggies because of her illness…
He reached and see them(Ragini and ap) hugging each other…
“hello…what’s going on…”laksh keeps the plate aside and gives a blank expression…
“Laksh congratulations…you are going to become a father…me daadi…wait I will tell everyone”ap got excited…
Laksh freezes for a moment and his eyes got filled with tears…
Laksh sighs Ragini…she nods in yes…
“whoohoo”laksh goes and twirls her…
“laksh…laksh…leave me na…”Ragini smiles and nervous too…
“thank you…thank you so much…for my little princess…”laksh kissed her forehead…
“how do you know it’s a girl…what if it may be a boy!!”Ragini lifts her eyebrows…
“because I am her father…that’s why and my little princess is on the way…once she came means we will play together and enjoy together…you,me and vrishali…happy family hey na…”laksh hugged her…
“we haven’t confirmed yet but you finalised the name too uh…not bad Mr.Maheshwari…”Ragini grinned…
“actually me too want a baby girl only…so only I can make her wear different different gowns…different different colours and she will be same as like me na…not like her boring father…”Ragini winks by controlling her laugh…
“am I boring…how mean yaar…i will tell my princess to not talk with you…mind it…”laksh warns her…
“areyy you gonna have kids soon but still behaving like a kiddo’s…stop blabbering…Ragini open your mouth and you too laksh…”said ap and feed them with Bengali sweets…
“maa..don’t tell anyone…let’s confirm first…”Ragini said in choking tone…
“don’t worry Ragini…it will be positive only…god is there…laksh you take Ragini to hospital…i already talked about it with our doctor…she gave appointment @10’o clock…go and get ready both…”ap urge them to go for check up…
RagLak got ready and comes down…
Ap makes Ragini sit and she feeds her…laksh smiles first but later get jealous…
“maa…this is not fair…you forgot your son for your new entry…”laksh makes a pout…
“no laksh…new entry nahi mera pothi/potha hai wo…mera beta ki waaris…”ap wipes her tears…
“maa…tum bina…”Ragini consoles her…
After finishing breakfast RagLak gets the blessings from ap and leaves from there…
Since dp,rp and Sujatha went to Mumbai for a function…ap is alone at home…she doesn’t know what to do because of her excitement…
Just now only they leaves to hospital but she waits outside itself for their arrival…
RagLak reached the hospital…
“Ragini you wait here…i will be back within few minutes after parking the car…”laksh points towards the direction to wait over there…
She nods…he came back after parking the car…they goes inside…
Laksh enquired about the doctor to nurse and she took them inside…
“hello…Mr.Maheshwari…Annapurna ji said everything…you please wait outside..i will take some test and confirm..”doctor takes Ragini inside…
Laksh waits outside her cabin…
Few minutes later…
“sir..doctor asked you to come inside…”said nurse…
Laksh gets nervous…he entered into the room…
Doctor sighs him to be seated…he nods and sits…
Doctor gave blank expression…
“is everything ok na doctor…Ragini is fine na…”laksh got tensed even more…
“Congratulations Mr.Maheshwari…good news for you…tu paapa bannewaale…”doctor wished him…
Thousand volts bulb glows on his face…
“tq…tq…tq so much doctor…”laksh was in the air…
“but…”doctor stammers to tell something..
“but what doctor…everything ok na…”laksh was curious…
“no Mr.Maheshwari…Ragini is so weak…”doctor got interrupted by him…
“yes doctor..i know but she isn’t listening me..doing all the works by herself…don’t worry hereafter I won’t allow her to leave from bed..she needs some bed rest na…i will take good care of her…”laksh explains about his emotions…
“Mr.Maheshwari…please let me speak…weak in the sense not what you said now…weak means baby’s growth is weak…it doesn’t have sufficient space in ragini’s womb to grow…i will prescribe injection for growth…let’s hope for the best…till then as you said she needs bed rest and energetic food but don’t give her fruits which cause cold and sweet shouldn’t be taken often…got it Mr.Maheshwari…next week take her again and we will do scan again…”doctor explained about Ragini’s health condition…
Laksh gets shattered…
“don’t worry..next week we will decide what to do further…please take care of her..”said doctor and injects growth injection on Ragini..
Laksh fears seeing injection…
“aahh..”laksh winces…
“laksh…doctor haven’t injected yet..you turn to other side…”Ragini giggles…
“ouch…”Ragini screams..
“dekho…that’s why I said..but you won’t listen to me…”laksh makes a sad pout…
“am sorry my sweet husband…i will do whatever you say..promise…”Ragini holds her ears…
Doctor coughs…
RagLak smiles a little and leaves from there after getting back the report…
They reached maheshwari mansion…laksh tells Annapurna about ragini’s weakness…
Ap gets shocked first but laksh makes her understand and she tooks care of Ragini without letting her get down from bed…ap offers everything to ragini’s hand by not getting her walk a little bit…
Who can get a mother in law like…Ragini feels that she is so lucky to have a family like this…
A month passes by and it’s Tuesday…for the past two weeks tablets have been given to ragini for baby’s growth…morning itself laksh takes Ragini to the hospital…
RagLak reached the hospital..Ragini was little bit nervous…
She holds laksh’s hand tightly due to fear…doctor asks laksh to wait outside and after analysis she asked laksh to get in…
“Mr.Maheshwari I am really sorry…i tried my level best but no use…no growth and today the heart beat of the baby also gets reduced compared to last week…there is no use of keeping it inside Ragini’s womb…for your satisfaction if we protect the baby means it will born with some defects or it may be an critical situation during delivery and it may results in ragini’s death too…ragini’s HB also very low…it’s all in your hand now…how fastly you decide to clean i mean dnc then your wife will be normal…”doctor explained about her health condition…
Laksh gets shattered…
“doctor there may be some other options na..because it’s our soul doctor…how I will tell this to Ragini…”laksh cries and he hears a sound…
Laksh turns back and sees Ragini stands in shock and she feels dizzy…
Laksh rushes towards her and holds her…
Doctor checks her and put saline…
Laksh informed everything to ap…ap and other family members gets shocked…they reached the hospital and sees Ragini’s condition and cries badly…
“maa…paapa..i decided that we don’t want this kid…it will take away my Ragini from me if we proceeds further…”said laksh by controlling his tears…but he broke down and hugs ap and sobs..
“what wrong we two did mom…we loved each other and we loved our baby more than that…but what if anything happens to Ragini…i can’t live in this world without her…she is my life and everything to me…so I decided to what doctor says…”laksh cries his heart out…
“sir mam gains conscious..”nurse comes out and informed about ragini’s state to them…
Laksh rushed towards her and was about to explain the situation…before that Ragini removed the trips and ran towards him…
“laksh…please don’t say ok…no matter what…even am ready to face my last breath…i am ready to die for my baby laksh…i know you will take care of our princess na…then why I have to fear…i barely want her…i will smilingly face my
death why can’t I die this family gave me all the happiness that I need throughout my life…i am ready to die laksh…please don’t let them kill our baby…”Ragini cries bitterly and hugged laksh tightly…
“Ragini how can you say like that..you will leave me uh..don’t you think about me…what will happen to me when you leave…you are so selfish..you think about you only…just think about me only once Ragini…i will get shattered without you…i will die at the second when you leave me alone in this world…just try to understand the situation Ragini…i need you barely you…our baby will return back to us soon after taking treatment dear…please understand the situation…what happens if our baby gets affected due to your decision…please Ragu..”laksh said by cupping her face and she chokes…
Finally the family makes her understand and she agrees…
Dnc process starts and Ragini suffers more…ap rushed inside due to her scream…
Few minutes later…doctor came outside and said everything ok…
“if my pothi/potha have born means I will lift her happily in my arms na but see now at this age I have been left out in this situation…what did I do…see my bahu’s condition…”ap cries by hugging dp…
Laksh rushed inside and sees Ragini not in her conscious…her face turns pale due to the pain…
Slowly Ragini opened her eyes and sees laksh in tears…she was about to get up…
Laksh makes her sit properly and kept her in back rest by placing pillows at her back…
“our dream…our baby…our soul everything gets shattered within a day laksh…”Ragini cries by resting her head on his shoulder…
Laksh tries to console her…
“maa…”Ragini heard some kid’s voice…
“laksh our baby..is calling me..”she wipes her tears and was about to get up…
“Ragini please come back to reality…it’s just your hallucination…”laksh shooks her shoulders hardly…
Ragini comes back to reality and cries saying”we lost our treasure laksh…we lost our vrishali…”
Tears were gushing like a hell from laksh’s eyes…
5years later…
“maa..where are you!!”a cute little boy searches for his mother…
“areyy mera bacha…maa will be back soon…she is out for a temple…you know na raksh… maa will do puja for your vrishali di na…she will be back …till then we will play game na…come come…”laksh lifts his son in his arms and they played video game…
It’s been 5 years that incident happened and after a year of proper treatment raksh born to them…
Few minutes later Ragini returns back and calls”kaha hai mera bacha..raksh where are you my boy…”
Raksh drops down the game when he heard ragini’s voice and rushed downstairs…
“arey areyy careful na raksh…”laksh followed him…
Raksh hugged Ragini tightly and says”I missed you mumma…”raksh kissed her cheeks…
“aww..me too missed you mera bachcha…”Ragini kissed her cheeks and laksh too joined them…
“areyy waah raksh by hearing your mom’s voice you forgot your dad na…”laksh makes a pout…
Raksh kissed his cheeks and Ragini kissed on laksh’s other side cheeks…
“you go and play na…maa and paapa will come soon..”Ragini points towards the garden…
Laksh sighs her…she starts crying…
“it’s been 5 years laksh…our baby left us…but still I can’t forget this day…”Ragini hugs him and sobs…
Laksh consoles her and wipes her tears…
Raksh calls them out for playing with him…laksh makes her calm and takes her outside…
“don’t get break infront of raksh…orelse he will start crying like before…”laksh convinces her and she nods positively…
All the three combo plays in the garden…
Whatever may be…baby is baby na whether it is alive or not is not a matter to mom…their children’s are always precious to them…
The end•••
Every kids are same to mom..there is no difference and doubt in that…because they are carrying us for 10 months…it’s easy to say that what’s a big issue it’s just a carrying process na…but that’s the most toughest phase of life…A big salute to all the mom’s in the world…they are taking punar janam..
Respect your mom and make them proud…
Love you ?❤ my mom…my chithi and my Periamma…(chachi nd badimaa)
Without you we are no more…
Dedicated to all the mom’s…
~Darshu
49 Comments
Awesome
Tq lovely ? glad that you liked it…
Awwww sweetie as you said mom is mom…Noori saamigal irundhalum amma unnai pol aagiduma….??? awesome da it was too good you rocked it
Tq so much da sweetie…s amma maattam varuma…it’s an real incident of my bro and manni da…
I added something xtra in it…
Thnks a lot for liking it dear…
Ohhhh I am sorry for them da you really give that feel
That’s ok da..i just wanna mke it on RagLak…so I did it sweetie…i am so angry on u whn u gonna updte ur ff da…
Awesome
Tq Sindhu dear ? glad that you liked it..
Awwww darshu di this was the best os i have ever read yes tou said right moms are really an inspiration and we must salute them
Thnks a lot my dr sissy…am so glad that you liked it…
Moms are really great…
Sooo beautiful story Darshini, it’s worth reading..!!, I saw the word “Tribute” , so thought to read..!! I got tears by the end..Yups you are soo rit MAA is so precious for us. Seeing them having a satisfying smile is more than enough to give us peace.!!
Loved it dear..!! Thnk u.. ;-*
Tq kaku? aww that’s so sweet of you dear sissy…
Am so sry dear for mking u sad *holding ears*
Thnks for cmnting dear…
TC..bye da sis!!
Heart melting Ra..emotional…keep writing..
Tq my dear chlm…adhukulla paduchitiya…gd girl…
Am so hpy that u liked it…
Tq so mch and love u a lot..??
~Ur’s VP
darshu dear na padichudhula one of the best os…..Idhu emotional than dear…yeana than nadanthalum amma amma than….yaralaiyim avunga place fulfil pana midiyathu…..ya folly dear sonathu correct than….nooru samigal irundhalum amma unai pol agiduma….kodi kodi yai koduthalum ne thantha anbuku idaguma….
love u ma….
it’s not fair darshu….nenga en amma chachi ya enaku neyapaga paduthidenga….Ipa yeana panrathu…..missssssss u amma….
God couldn’t be everywhere so he created a ma…..love u ma….
takecare darshu dear…
Truely said da asra…
Oh my dr sissy am so sry da for mking u sad *holding ears with puppy face *
Chorry…
I knw da It wil b so tough to stay in hostel…am extremely sorry..
Tc dr…
Olunga saapdu enna puriyutha
Superb. Loved it…..
Tq so much teito? am glad that you liked it…
Awesome
Tq vk? glad that you liked it…
aswme dear…
Tq dear ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome…
Tq Saranya ? glad that you liked it…
Amazing sis.. It’d really touching…!!!! The word tribute is correctly suitable to dis os dear..!!!! Enaku indha os padichadhum amma amma song dhn da niyapagam varudhu…!!! Unmaiyavey avunga namakaga evalo sacrifice panirukanga nu niyapagam varudhu..!!! Evalo nal namaku mudilaina amma thungama nama pakathula ukandhurupanga..!!!! It’s emotional dear..!!!! I loved it..!!! Thnq for the awesome os sisy..!!! Idhu raglak perfect ah suit aakudhu da…take care dear
Thnks a lot da…
All the credits goes to you only da…u hav been there supporting me all the way…
U only asked an OS…
It’s fully dedicated to you…
I got a such a wonderful frnd cum sissy…
Thnks for being with me dear ?
Love you ?
Luv u too sisy.. ???? na onnum panla dear.. I just asked u..!!! Bt nenga dhn na kaeta nala eludhuninga..!!! Athu nala ella pugalum ungaluku dhn..!!! u r such a amazing sis nd frnd..!!!?? Indha mari os expect panala dear.. Loved it too the core..!!! ??
Aww that’s so sweet of you da??❤?
Such a lovely os dear. Romba correct ah sollirkinga. Loved it
Tq gayu dear ? glad that you liked it…
heart touching os awesome
Tq dharani dear ? glad that you liked it…
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…
akka….Sathiyama enala mudila…I’m crying very much…god is mom…Samma heart touching akka..Amma Evalo sacrifice panraga la nambulukaga..I love my mom..she is undergoing with soo much pain to give birth to us..evalo heart touching ahhh eludhuviga nu Nan nenachi kuda pakala akka..really ur great akka..proud to be a girl …thanks ka for this lovely Os…love u akka..keep smiling..bye..Tc..
Aww thnks a tonne da?
Am so sry dear for mking u crying *holding ears*
Infact I cried while typing this OS…
Without our mom we are nothing…
Glad that you liked it…
Tc da…
Tata!!
Outstanding os and emotional too. Loved Raglak scenes a lot
Tq ammu dear ? sry da for mking u sad…glad that you liked it…
Awesome! I loved it?
Tq dear…glad that you liked it…
Awesome and emotional one and you said true all mom’s are great who carry baby in there womb for 9 months and overcome the all the hurdels and pain gave birth to baby by keeping there life under risk to give birth to new soul into the world.
Moms are only our first lovers who love us immensively without seeing just by feeling us and accept us with our flaws and love us immortal.
True said dear..they accept us with our flaws…
Watevr may b the reason they won’t leave us at any sort of time…
Thnks dear for liking it…and am Cho chorry for mking u sad…
Chella kutty..sema sema??…
Ipdi enna azha vekariyae idhu neyama????????….
Andha disclaimer enakku dhan…too emotional os…nalla irukku?..but azhugachi varaadhu???..
“Amma amma dhan”…. too good dharshu???????….
My eyes filled with tears?????..
Aii u cmntd am so hpy dear…
Cho chorry da sweetheart for mking u sad…*holding ears*
Tq so much for liking it…
Am waiting for your OS dear…
Take care da?
So sweet of you dear????
Nxt OS concept illa dharshu??
awesome dude loved it its amazing u r right the pain a mother goes through to us birth its just known to her it can’t be compared and parents luv their childerns equally amazing waiting for ur other works
That’s so nice of u dear friend…
Thanks for supporting yaar…
Will post soon…
S mom’s love is uncomparable..
Superb
Tq rehna dear ? glad that you liked it…