Hi everyone!! I am back with an os!! But before starting it I want to confess a truth that, this is not my os, I mean not my story! Its plot and story totally does not belong to my brain! So confessing this truth, I start the os!!
An 18 year old girl is shown. She was sitting on the terrace hearing some melody songs and smoothly shaking her head to the music. She was enjoying the loneliness along with a silent atmosphere shining with moonlight. She was lovingly looking at the moon and she whispered in herself ‘I need to get a good life partner’. She smiled thinking her wish and blushed. She closed her face and ran inside her room. She is 18 years old Ragini!!
Now, a 23 year old girl is shown coming out from the same room. She is revealed to be a mature and beautiful princess Ragini!! She was seen in the same terrace looking at the full moon with enjoying the cool breeze. But her face had some tensions and worries.
Ragini’s POV,
U knows completely about me naa Luna (moon)? I am a normal girl. I was not so chubby and openly speaking and socializing girl. I am generally quiet and won’t mix with anyone so easily. But if I start to trust someone I will be behaving like a different girl with them. I will be more and more comfortable with them. I will share everything with them. I have very less friends but still I am happy with them and also with my family. I was always given a thing which my family chose for me. I won’t deny anything which they give me also I won’t demand anything for me because I am much comfortable with what they provided me. Beside these all I love loneliness that too spending my time with u Luna along with soft music. It makes my heart feel really happy. I always wished to god to give all the happiness which my family deserves. But I wished only one thing for me in my whole life. I think only u know that Luna. It’s about my future part of my life. It’s about my life after marriage. I believe in love after marriage Luna. I am the one once more excited to know about my future husband, marriage and that this. But now it’s completely changed. Nowadays I have some weird feelings like upset, sad, depression also anger and so on r playing inside me while I am thinking about marriage.
I am feeling uncomfortable or say insecure by hearing the words ‘marriage for me’. I don’t know how he will be, how his family will be, how his character will be, how his behavior will be, how his support will be, how his likings will be, how his job will be, how he will react when I smile, cry, anger, sad, or mood off? I don’t know anything about him!!! But still I have to live with him. I don’t know how to express my feelings but I hope u can understand me Luna. I can say that I don’t want to be cheated in my belief of ‘Love after marriage’. I hope so. A new proposal has come. It seems like my family will accept it. They feel that… (Ragini was thinking his name, but she has forgotten. Then she had a ‘whatever’ expression and continued) he will be perfect for me. He was having a permanent job and a good family background. Today they forced me to see his photo. But the truth is I really didn’t saw his face so correctly. I just had a glimpse of his photo. So I don’t remember his face. Wow Luna, u sees I don’t know my future husband’s name or even his face. Oh Luna!! I don’t know what I am going to do!! Please help me in come out of these confusions.
Thinking this she went to her room to welcome a peaceful sleep at least this night.
2 days passed, Ragini was now fixed to that boy whom her parents have selected. They both have never met till now as he was busy in his work also Ragini was not so bothered in meeting him.
One day she was allowed to go out with her friends after a lot of requests. Her friends were busy in shopping and Ragini left them to have ice cream. She was cutely having ice cream at that time she felt a gaze on her. She looked here and there but couldn’t find anyone. At that time she heard,
A voice: Hi!
Ragini turned around and found a boy may be 24 or 25 standing before her with a small smile. He was wearing a blue shirt and dark blue jeans. He was revealed to be Laksh. She thought that he was saying to someone else and started to walk. Again she heard,
Laksh: Hey Ragini, I am saying ‘Hi’ to u only!!
She was very much confused and with that confusion she asked: How does u know my name??
Laksh with raised brows: You don’t know me??
She innocently nodded her head in ‘NO’. Laksh with a smirk said: Oh!!
She was about to ask something but he went from there. She has no guts to call him but still she looked at him going. She then left from there and forgot about this.
Next day, she accompanied with her mom to buy some things for their house. Her mom was busy in shopping but Ragini felt bored. So she went out and thought to call her friend. At that time she heard, ‘Hi Miss!’ She turned to see and it was obviously Laksh. He was in white shirt and blue jean with coolers. She recognized him easily.
Ragini: Who r u? How does u know my name?
Laksh removed his coolers stylishly: I know u very well and u too knows me! But I think u have forgotten me!
She rubbed her forehead thinking who he was, as she too felt that she had already seen his face somewhere. She looked up but Laksh was not there. She felt really strange thinking about him. Just then her mom came and said that she has to do a small shopping and so she asked her to wait there itself. Ragini nodded in ‘yes’ and her mom left her.
At that time she felt rain drop on her hand. She looked at the sky and in no time, it started to rain but lightly only. Still she ran from there and stood below a shed to escape from rain. At that time she heard a tune, she moved her eyes to that direction to find its source.
Aadi Nee Engae.. Adi Nee Engae..
Adi Nee Engae.. Adi Nee Engae.. Adi Nee Engae
She saw someone was singing. His back was turned to view his face and of course it was LAKSH!
Chotta Chotta Nanaiyudhu Thaaj Mahaalu
Kudaiyonnu Kudaiyonnu Thaa Kiliyae
He was standing in the middle of the road drenching in the rain and singing.
Vittuvittuth Thudikkudhu En Nenju
Vekkam Vittu Vekkam Vittu Vaa Veliyae
Ragini’s eyes widens in shock. The road was jammed all were shouting at Laksh but he seems lost in Ragini’s thoughts and his song.
Adi Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
Nee Engae Nee Engae Poo Vaiththa Poo Engae
Mazhai Thanni Usira Karaikkudhae Usir Ulla Oruththikku Thaaj Mahaala
Kattik Koduththavanum Naandhaandee
Laksh started to dance like welcoming the rain and soon some people joined him and danced with him.
Adiyae Nee Engae Engae Nee Engae
Kanneerila Mazhaiyum Karikkudhae
He pointed his finger towards Ragini that only she could understand it and the crowd had surrounded Laksh and dancing.
Adiyae Nee Engae Engae Nee Engae
Kanneerila Mazhaiyum Karikkudhae Chotta Chotta Nanaiyudhu Thaaj Mahaalu
Kudaiyonnu Kudaiyonnu Thaa Kiliyae
Laksh with his eyes gestured Ragini to come and join with him in the rain dance.
Vittuvittuth Thudikkudhu En Nenju
Vekkam Vittu Vekkam Vittu Vaa Veliyae
He placed his hands on his chest like touching his heart and took one hand and gestured Ragini to come to him.
Adi Nee Engae.. Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
Laksh does some movements and all liked it and does like him.
Unakkaaga Parisu Ondru Kondaen
Edharkaaga Nee Vilagi Ninraai
Naan Mazhaiyallavae Aen Odhungi Ninraai
Then he slowly stopped dancing and made a heart shape with his hands near his chest and showed it to Ragini.
Unakkaaga Parisu Onru Kondaen
Edharkaaga Nee Vilagi Ninraai
Naan Mazhaiyallavae Aen Odhungi Ninraai
Then he closed his face with his hands but saw Ragini with only one eye through his fingers. He gave a sign ‘Why?’ with his face.
Enaikkandu Senra Kanavae
Uyirai Thundu Seydha Malarae
Vandhu Mazhaiyilaadu Mayilae Mayilae..
Then he gave his mesmerizing smile with closed eyes while feeling some wind and slowly opened it now only to look at Ragini.
Un Naanam Enna Kannae Maegam Atchadhai Poadumboadhu
Thalaiyai Neetta Vaendum Kannae Kannae
Laksh gestured Ragini to understand his feelings and come to him and dance.
Neerukkum Namakkum Oru Dhaevabandham
Anbae Uruvaanadhu Neerukkul Mugam Paarththa Joadi Onrai
Meendum Mazhai Saerththadhu
Laksh smiled looking at Ragini’s wide eyes with a shocked, surprised, confused reaction on her face.
Chotta Chotta Nanaiyudhu Thaaj Mahaalu
Kudaiyonnu Kudaiyonnu Thaa Kiliyae
Laksh clapped his hands and danced lightly. The crowd followed his movement and enjoyed with him.
Vittuvittuth Thudikkudhu En Nenju
Vekkam Vittu Vekkam Vittu Vaa Veliyae
He slowly looked Ragini at the corner of his eyes and smiled looking at the same reaction.
Adi Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
He moved his hands freely and twirled feeling the rain drops on him with his eyes closed and Ragini’s thought with a small smile on his face.
Nee Engae Nee Engae Poo Vaiththae Poo Engae
Mazhai Thanni Usira Karaikkudhae
Ragini’s mom came and said ‘let’s go!’ without even looking at her. She took Ragini’s hand started to walk. Ragini’s eyes were fixed only on Laksh.
Usir Ulla Oruththikku Thaaj Mahaala
Kattik Koduththavanum Naandhaandee
Laksh looked at it and stopped dancing and saw her moving away from him.
Adiyae Nee Engae Engae Nee Engae
Kanneerila Mazhaiyum Karikkudhae
A small tear came from his eyes which mingled with rain drops and same was felt in Ragini.
Adiyae Nee Engae Engae Nee Engae
Kanneerila Mazhaiyum Karikkudhae
His voice slowly goes down and keeps on looking at Ragini trying to move from the crowd.
Adiyae Nee Engae Engae Nee Engae
Kanneerila Mazhaiyum Karikkudhae
At last Ragini’s image was disappeared. A small smile, genuine smile came to his lips and once again moves his hands freely on the air feeling rain drops.
Nee Engae.. Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
Nee Engae.. Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
Nee Engae.. Nee Engae.. Nee Engae..
He gave a cute smile to everyone in turn they clapped for his performance and all moved away to do their works. (Please don’t ask me how, why that this. This is just an imagination. So, no logical application!! okkk??)
10 days passed,
Ragini was completely confused because of Laksh’s behavior and his song and dance. It was really new to her. She didn’t felt like this before. She doesn’t know what Laksh was trying to say and how he knows her and how he knows her name, though she doesn’t know anything about him. Her father just then came into her room and gave her groom’s mobile number. She just stored it as husband without even knowing his name, because she was sure in one thing that she will be married to the man whom her family chooses. So she just thought to leave about Laksh’s thoughts. Neither she nor he had called each other.
2 days passed,
One day she got a call from an unknown number. Ragini looked confused but still attended the call.
Ragini: Hello?
Opposite side: Hi!
Ragini: Who’s this??
Opposite side: You don’t know me?
She found that it was Laksh. She doesn’t know what to talk to him or how to talk to him. So she simply cut the call.
That day evening, Ragini was sleeping cutely at that time the groom had called her. Ragini’s eye brows frowned and took the call without even looking at the caller id.
Ragini: Hello, who’s this??
Groom with a smirk: Hello madam!! We are calling from XYZ bank. Do you want any loan madam?
Ragini pouted angrily and said: I don’t want!
Saying this she cut the call and continued to sleep. Later she checked her mobile and found that her groom had called her. She doesn’t know what to do. So she thought to say sorry and called him. He took the call.
Ragini: Hello!
Groom: Hi!
Ragini doesn’t know how to start, but still she gathered some courage and said: I am sorry. I got ur number now only.
Groom smirked: I know! I know that u got my number 2 days before.
Saying this he started to laugh and Ragini felt embarrassed.
Then groom: It’s ok!
Then they talked for few minutes just formally and ended their conversation.
Next day, Ragini was alone in the house. At that time someone pressed the calling bell. She opened the door and was shocked to see Laksh. He was smiling at her. She looked at him even more shocked, feared and confused looking at a post in his hand.
Laksh: Miss. Ragini Gaddodia?
Ragini slowly nodded her head in yes. He gave a paper to sign and get the post. She immediately took the pen and signed. She was about to take the post but Laksh took it behind his back with a naughty expression. This time Ragini felt really angry and started to shout at him.
Ragini: What does u want now? Why r u following me? If u follows me again, then u will regret for that. U has to face severe consequences.
Looking at Ragini’s angry face, Laksh smiled a little and he forwarded the post.
Laksh: Look at this post then u will know me.
Ragini still angrily: Why I have to see it? I don’t want to see it.
Laksh: Its ur wish. But this has ur future.
Saying this he just placed it in Ragini’s hand and went from there. Ragini was numb now. She doesn’t know to open and check the post or simply throw it in dustbin. But the words ‘ur future’ were bothering her. She then took a sigh and opened it. It had a letter and some photos of Laksh. She slowly took the letter in her hand and with a lot of confusions she opened it to read. In that letter,
Hi Sweetheart,
U has asked me many times who I was. First I thought u was kidding and teasing me. But later I understood that u really don’t know me. So I am saying, ‘I AM UR FIANCE, UR WOULD BE HUSBAND’ (Ragini’s eyes widens in shock) {Except Ragini no one will be shocked, am I right guys??} (She once again read those lines and tried to register it in her mind. She then read further) Even now I wouldn’t have revealed myself. I thought to surprise u on our engagement day which was just in 5 days. I wanted to see ur reaction at that time. But I felt it was wrong. I don’t know why u didn’t remember my face or even my name. May be u r not interested in marriage. This is ur life! U have to decide whether u want this unknown guy or not! But I am feeling that I really like u or say I really love u. If u enters into my life then I am the luckiest person in this world. U just thinks and decides. If u r not interested then inform ur parents. But I am eagerly waiting for ur answer. I have attached my photos with this, so that u can at least remember my face. Bye!! I am waiting for ur answer, so please soon dear!! Bye!!
After reading the letter, Ragini’s face was full of red. She was having happy, shy, blush, embarrassed reactions on her face. She then took some time and recalled all their moments. Then she took her mobile and dialed his number. Laksh immediately attended her call.
Ragini: Hi!
Laksh: Hi!
Ragini doesn’t know how to speak. Suddenly she forgot how to speak and her words were lost. Luckily Laksh took that for her.
Laksh: So r u not interested in this marriage. If not I will inform the parents.
Ragini immediately nodded her head in NO and said: No! No! It’s not like that!
Laksh grinned like a small kid and teased her: So u like me?
Ragini: …………………
Laksh got no reply so he took the phone to check if she was in line and after conforming he said: Hello?
Ragini suddenly without thinking: Ok!
Laksh felt very happy but still teasingly: What ok??
Ragini felt shy and said: I
Laksh grinned like kid and said: Hmm
Ragini let out a deep sigh and said: Like u!
Laksh was not in this world. His happiness was like borderless land! He was so much happy that he forgot to say the same to her. There Ragini was blushing hardly and waiting for Laksh’s reply. Then Ragini thought what happened to him as there was no reply.
Ragini: Hello?
Laksh still dreaming: Hmm
Ragini: Why r u not saying anything?
Laksh in a flow said: I am that much happy that if u r infront of me then I would hug u and kiss u!
Ragini blushed and her face turned into deep red like a red rose.
Laksh realized what he had said: Sorry!! I just said it in a flow.
Ragini: It’s ok!
Laksh with a naughty smirk: So shall I hug and kiss on ur cheeks??
Ragini could not blush more than that and said: Please!
Laksh: So u wants the kiss on…
Ragini could not take it anymore and immediately cut the call and jumped on her bed and hided her face on the pillow thinking about Laksh. Whereas Laksh started to laugh and jump on his bed and went to his lala land in Ragini’s memories.
Few days later they were officially married and united as RAGLAK!! As per Ragini’s wish, she got a really loving husband, who always take care, laugh with her, support her, put small fight with her and above all LOVE her more and more than anything!!
Happy ending!!
I am very late in wishing Teju’s birthday! I think I am the last one!! But still I am wishing her a happy birthday also wishing god to give her the name and fame which she deserves.
So guys post ur comments on this os!! I hope u all will like it!
82 Comments
Superb…
I want to say u thank u personally because for ur support in my os competition!! Thank u!! 🙂
It’s ok…. Once again all the best for the competition…. ??
Honey diiiiii it was completely sweet like honey❤❤❤❤❤ and very very very very veryyyyyyyy cute and lovely like the title ??????? I know whose idea is this she is our shy sister na… She helped me in the last part of RNRN too… and then hesitated to give her name… she will be like this always..? but then also loves her alottttttt…..!!!!???
The Idea maybe of her but the words r yours na….It was very wonderful os diiii…I wish I could also write something but I really didn’t got a single idea…!!???
I hope one day I will also write os as beautifully u write diii…I really love the way you write…u were wrong diiii… you shouldn’t proud to be my sis..I should proud to be your sis????
Your OS r always brilliant and heart touching…I really feel to hug you tightly whenever I read your os..????
I said Very much i think…u know na..I am lil talkative type.I couldn’t stop Myself after reading your os
Take care
Love you ????????????
Ur comment made my day da cutie pie!! Don’t worry if not now u will definitely get!!! Also I want to say one more thing that ur all works r all unique and beautiful!! Also those dialogues were also not mine!! Only the words, background, song and dance is mine in this os. But still I enjoyed very much in writing this os!! I am also giving u a tight hug da!! Take care of ur bone!! hehehehe!! Once again I am saying, only ur comment made me smile first in this day!!! Love u so much cutie!!! U too take care!! ummmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Wow..wow..!!
Such an awesome and lovely..,cute OS…
I really enjoyed it a lot da sissy ??
That song was awe and laksh’s dance..,Ragini’s reaction..,laksh postman avtar..,bank loan fun..,laksh’s revelation of truth and respecting ragini’s feelings..,finally their sweet..,cute moments mde my day…
U mde my dy strt with smiles…!!
A tight hug from my side da sissy ??
Expecting mre like this from you…
Tc da and love you ????
I am really very happy that I made u smile today!! 😀 U know naa akka, I won’t get the unique ideas like post man avatar, loan call, letter, next phone call!!! These only belongs to the one who said told me this story. I take the credits for dance and song!! Because I only worked there in this os!! So thank u for it akka!! Also no more expectations akka!! That too not on me!! Please!! Also a tight hug to u too akka!!
Take care akka, love u tooooooooo!!
Outstanding os dear and loved it a lot ????Raglak scenes are so cute ????? please write more Raglak stories and also post Ur ffs. Love you and take care ? ??????
First of all I thank u so much for commenting my ffs!! I won’t reply back but still I know ur comments and will feel happy!! I am glad that u liked this os dear!! I will try my best to post my ffs soon!! Love too!! bye!! take care!!
Awesome da chellame..wowwww its mindblowing dear..maybe it’s not ur story.. Bt ur writing in the sketch is superb dear…loved it too the core hari..raglak scenes r superb da…First of all I loved the tajmahal song..Its perfectly match to our lovely couples..loved the rain scene so much da..!!!??? I totally involved in the song wid oru beautiful pair??Waiting for ur stories da.. Post its soon da..Take care
Naa ungalukku thanks lam solla maaten!! only kiss and hug dhan ka!! Love so much!!! So u enjoyed the rain song aa ka!! I am happy that u liked it akka!! I love u so so so so much akka!!!! I will post wife soon akka!! I started to write, I can say that I will post it before ur exams will over akka, hehehehhehehe!!! 😀 All the best akka!! My wishes will always be with u!!!! I am missing our sister times and chatting akka!! But still I will wait for u akka!! Once again all the best akka!! U too take care akka!!! Love u more and more akka!! Ummmmmaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!
awesome
Thank u so much dear!
it was so sweet & lovely
Ohhh!! thank u so much dear!!! :$
This is soooo awesome.. I imagined everything in my head… 🙂 One of the… No THE BEST OS I have ever read… Breath-takingly awesome…loved it to the core.. Looking forward to reading more of your works.. 🙂 ((only of my exams would leave me..:( )))
All credits to the one who gave me this idea!! I am just saying thank u on behalf on that person!! Thank u !!! Also don’t worry about exams dear!! U can score well!! All the best!!! Bye !! Take care!!
Wow it’s so nice. U r really amazing.
Thank u so much dear!! Thank u for commenting!! 🙂
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i loved your os very much you have written it very beautifully and one who gave you this idea tell her that her ideas and concepts are amazing. she should disclose her name afterall i also want to know her
Thank u so much for this complement!! Yes I know her ideas r really amazing and superb!! But she didn’t want me to use her name. So I didn’t say her name!!!! Of course I will pass ur comment to her!! thank u so much for encouraging her!! It means a lot to me!! Once again thank u!!
I loved it.
Fabulously written by you Priya dii.
Hope to see you with new one soon.
I found it from recent comments.
Thank u so so so much!!! :$ I really thank u as u have read a Raglak story and commented even though u r swasan fan!! Thanks for that!! Also one more thing, why r u calling me as di??? I am just turned 17 this may 9! How old r u bro?? When is ur birthday??
Fantastic os
Thank u so much dear!
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Awesome and I love it very much?
Thank u so much!! I am happy that u liked it!
harini chellam it’s fantablous dear….omg it’s such a cute sweet os…loved loved loved it alot dear….letter scenes amazing dear….tajmahal movie song omg it’s fav female version of thz song omg i love that…love u dear for thz wonderful os….love u big teddy hug to u dear….everytime u rock and stole my heart….love u…tkcr chellam…
love u too akka!! A big hug to u too akka!! enakkum female version romba pudikum!! I am happy that u loved it akka!! U too take care ka!! Love u so much!! Ummmmaaahhh!!
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I don’t know about Ragini but I was definitely blushing red like a tomato the whole time! This OS was coated in honey and sugar, so sweet and cute????
First of all, the characters were canon, totally like the characters in the serial. So it was easy imagining them.
Second, Lakshya was love here. Like, literally, I was in love the whole time.
And third, phew, his rain dance and sing????
Amazing OS???
Wow!! I made my sister to blush!!! hehehehheheheee!! 😀
Thank u so much for ur lovely comment akka!! 🙂
Simply superb di…..raglak part was cute
Thank u so much dear!!
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Wow,wow dear. I was smiling like an idiot while reading Raglak phone conversation. Raglak were so cute. What if you wish first or last, your love for Teja will never going to be reduce, that is enough for our princess,she will be happy. By the way I came to know that your age is 17 from your comment, one doubt you are in 12th or going to join college dear ? If you are going to join the college, then choose the field you love the most because it only helps in your future, if you are in 12th study well dear. Anyways ALL THE BEST dear because both are important in life. Finally try to write more OS dear and I forgot to tell that I love that song very much and you too dear.
Bye dear. Take care.
Thank u thank u thank u so much akka!! I am really happy after reading ur comment!! I am going to join college akka, also I am going to choose the one which I love the most!! Thank u for ur blessings and wishes akka!! Ur words really made my day akka!! Thank u, thank u for that!! Yes of course I will write os and ffs akka on RAGLAK! hifi akka I too love that song!! So r u tamil akka?? If not its okk!! I am really thankful to u!! Thank u!!!
Yes dear, I am also a Tamilian. I am glad that my comment drew a smile on your face dear and by the way which stream and degree you love the most dear?
Bye dear. Take care.