Hello guys….
The next part of o saiyyan will be updated shortly…but I had 2 stories in my mind for our ragini lovers:-
1. PYAAR DOSTI HAI
A boy is shown in a room covered with a blanket upto his waist . He is shirtless and snoring away to glory . A girl with just a white men’s shirt comes out of the washroom and goes towards the boy . She starts sprinkling water on his face through her wet hair which irritates his sleep . He pulls her towards himself and she lands on his chest they share a long eyelock …just an inch gap is there between their lips …they are about to kiss when they are disturbed by a shrill voice on his phone…showing….JERRY calling…on the dialing screen
Suddenly he wakes up from his deep slumber and realizes that it was all a dream…he moves his hand in his hair blushing but soon reality dawns on him that the phone call was not a dream its still a reality
He starts panicking and moves out of the bed hurriedly saying..
“sanky ke bacche ajj toh tu gaya kaam se….woh tera murder kr degi aur teri body cheel ko khila degi
(sanky .u are dead…she will kill you and will feed your body to vultures)
He gets ready in a jiffy and moves out of the house…..with his parents cursing him from behind his back
He takes out his car and soon stops it in front of a café named ‘The burning eyes’ …and sees a girls wearing a jeans and a top sitting with a face red with anger and his two other friends looking as if their death sentence has been passed
He comes their smiling sheepishly …seeing him the girl takes hold of the knife kept in front of her and starts playing with it…..
The screen freezes on his scred face and the girls smirking face…
It’s the story of two best friends sanskaar and ragini who are best of friends helping each other in their tough times. They love each other but no realization till now . They understand each other’s importance in their lives when sanskaar gets into a serious relationship with krisann his childhood crush ( actress will be decided shortly…or u people choose….) and ragini goes on a trip with her school buddies among whom is her ex boyfriend who wants her in his life again.
Will these two realize their feelings on time or it will be too late…
2. Junooniyat
Baadi is shown….a man in white kurta pajama is sitting in the verandah reading newspaper …..a lady comes there holding a tea tray and keeps it in front of him…they start sipping tea….
Two girls of about 7 years of age come running to them
Girl 1: maa baba let’s play hide and seek
Shekhar: par gudiya let us drink tea naa
Girl 2: no….right now..please naa baba
Shomi: laado don’t force naa baccha
The 2 girls start crying
Shekhar: ohoo… laado , gudiya…stop crying naa bacha …accha we will play…me and your mother both will catch u ok
The 2 girls start start jumping in happiness
A lady of about 50 years of age comes out carrying a toddler of 2 years
Lady : sharmishtha , shekhar…I am going to temple and also taking shone with me..will return in an hour…..
Shemish: thik hai maa
The two girls go inside and hide in different places
And shemish cover their eyes….they start finding their daughters
Shekhar catches hold of a man who is in an attire of a villager…he unfolds the cloth and is shocked to see the person……
Shekhar: Gopal tum??
Man: yes me gopal…whom u had send to jail by being an eye witness to the murder I committed…I told you not to say anything but u didn’t listen to me…now u will pay for it
Hearing the commotion shomi also unfolds the cloth and is shocked…
Shekhar: no no please don’t……
And he starts running towards the house
But gopal shoots him on the back and he falls down wincing in pain..sharmishtha runs towards him shrieking his name but gopal shoots her also in the abdomen…she falls down.
Both of them are crying and trying to hold each other’s name and gopal starts laughing like a maniac
The girls come out from their hiding places and stop at the entrance…seeing their parents they get scared and one of them starts shivering and hides behind the door…the other one runs out to them.
Shemish shouts at her to go back inside but she stands there crying not able to understand anything.
Gopal moves towards her
And lifts her in his arms
Shomi : (crying) please meri bachhi ko chod do…she is very small…please
Gopal ignores her pleas and goes away with her
Shemish ( shouting) : GUDIYAAAA….
And then they close their eyes holding each others hands
This entire scene is seen by two scared eyes….
20 YEARS LATER…….
A girl of in mid 20s is standing near a window holding a picture of a couple
“ Maa Baba where are you…I miss you…please come back to me…I wish I could have saved you that day….but my condition….please forgive me…give me one more chance…I will make you feel proud.”
A lone tear escapes her sad eyes
Someone calls her
“ aayi dadi” ( coming dadi )
Some place else
A girl is running from a group of people . she is not in a good condition…wearing torn clothes and having a scratch on her face . she somehow hides herself from them. While hiding she takes out the picture of the same couple
“ I hate you people..u made me an orphan..I have lived a life of an orphan inspite of having parents…how could you do this to me”
She stuffs the picture in her dress and runs from there…..
The CS will be given later on…..this will be both ragsan and raglak…..and equal importance will be given to both the pairs….so it’s a treat to both the fandoms
These plots were going in my mind from a very long time…so thought of penning them down….
So guys these are the two promos of my 2 new ffs…..
The one with maximum votes will be started first and the other one will be started afterwards
Ragini will be the main lead in both of them.
So guys comment and do let me know…the next part of o saiyyan and the new ff will be posted on Monday…so time till Sunday evening …..do tell me
also me and aditi are starting an ff together from 20th of july named ‘jab sanskaar met ragini’
the promo link is given below
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-jab-sanskar-met-ragini-promo/
P.S. Message from Aditi Ayansh
Due to some technical problem and personal commitments she won’t be able to post her ffs for a few days…..her both the ffs ‘ Will you cross the skies for me?’ and ‘U were my new dream’ will be posted between 10-17 july
Thank you guys
Take care