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Ready to break up 13
The unknown goons have surrounded Uttara and they caught her.
Laksh: who the hell are you..? leave her..!!
One goon: don’t shout. Otherwise, we will kill your sis.
Uttara shouts.
Laksh: how do you know that she is my sister..?
Goons look at each other. Then other goon laughs as villain in movies. Other goons tremble at once and look at that laughing goon. Raglak look them confused.
Goon 2: we know that she is your sister and that Ragini is your wife and you both have a fight..!
Ragini: but, what do you want..?
Goon1: revenge..!!
Raglak: revenge..?
Goon2: yes..! we hate Laksh maheswari and we love what he hate.
Laksh: why do you hate me…?
Goon 3: hey..! don’t ask us questions. Just do as we say..!! we want you to do the most hating thing ever.
Laksh: what is that..?
Goon 1: go and kiss your wife..?
Uttara: how can that be hating thing to bhayya..? he loves bhabhi so much… so kisses her happily.
Ragini looks at Laksh in smile. Laksh keeps a disgusted expression. “No, no. I don’t love her anymore..!!’
Ragini face becomes sad with his words.
Goon 2: that’s why, go and kiss her..!!
Laksh: I will kill you all first… ( Laksh tights his fists)
Uttara shouts: ahha, bhayya… they will kill me..!!
Goon 1: yes..!! Kiss your wife Mr. Laksh maheswari..!! otherwise, we will kill your sis.
Laksh loses his fists,
‘So, if I kiss her.. will you leave my sister..?’
Goons: we always stand on our promise. Because we are mahe….
Uttara stamps on one Goon foot. Laksh won’t observe it.
Laksh takes a sigh and turns to Ragini. She was bending her head. All goons keep looking.
Laksh goes near her and holds her hand and turns her to him. She looks him like statue.
‘I’m sorry for this. I’m helpless. I have to save my sister..’ he says to Ragini.
Ragini moves closer to him. ‘Even I would like to save her. I’m ready to do anything.’
Ragini keeps her hands around his neck looking lovingly into his eyes. Laksh holds her waist and grabs her very near.
A goon closes Uttara’s eyes. ‘pari bhabhi, let me see..!!’ says Uttara slowly.
‘Shh..’ other goon says. They all too closes their eyes.
Ragini and Laksh are very close to each other now. laksh turns his eyes away from her. he hesitates to kiss her. ragini turns his face towards her holding his chin. But, Laksh closes his eyes. Ragini smiles looking at his lips.
She moves her long fingers in his hair, which unknowingly brings a smile on his lips. Ragini pulls Laksh’s head towards her and she pulls his collar so that he falls on her. Now, both of their lips join. Laksh was rubbing his hands on her waist and head, her hands were moving in his hairs. Both were having a passionate deep lip lock,
While goons aren’t aware what’s happening.
Goon1: are they kissing..?
Goon2: who knows Tanya..? we all are closing our eyes here..!!
Raglak are still kissing. Tears keep forming in Ragini’s eyes not because of hurt but, she is feeling emotional. She missed Laksh for a week. She wanted to shout and say that She is in love with him now. yes, she hated him once, but now she loves him madly. Deeply..!
She never came apart from that kiss, at least to tell him that she needs him. She needs him back in her life… not just as a friend.. but, as her husband..!!
Laksh was trying to go apart, but she was holding his head close to her with her hands.
At last, Laksh unwillingly, removes her hands from him. He pushes her back slightly. Ragini gets back, her eyes were red in tears. She wanted to burst out her feelings.
Laksh rubs his lips and looks at Goons. They were closing their eyes and they closed even Uttara’s eyes.
Laksh: why did you ask us to do this and why are you closing your eyes..??
Goons opens their eyes.
Goon1: we said you to do. We didn’t say we will see you..!!
They leave Uttara. She runs to Laksh. They go away in vehicle suddenly which came just then.
Laksh holds Uttara and take her to car. Ragini follows them. She keeps looking at Laksh. But, he never saw her.
They reach home. As soon as they came, Ragini runs into the room and she falls on bed. She keeps smiling remembering what has happened earlier.
She holds pillow, and cover her red turning cheeks.
Her heart sings,
‘Naye naye naina mere dhoonde hain..
Dar-badar kyun thuje…’
Just then Laksh comes into room and he knows how Ragini is feeling, but he won’t look at her.
She sits on bed normally, controlling her feelings. But, in bg song keeps playing.
‘Naye naye manzar yeh takhte hai
Iss kadar kyun mujhe’
He goes away, and she stands on bed. She feels like she is taking flower bath..
‘Zara zara phoolon pe
Jhadhne jaga dil mera..
Zara zara kaaton se
Lagney lagaa dil mera..’
Ragini throws pillow aside, she sings aloud…
Main pareshaan pareshaan
Pareshaan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahan
Main pareshaan pareshaan
Pareshaan pareshaan
Raanjishein hai dhuaan
Haan………
Ap, Pari and Tanya runs into their room.
‘Ragini..! are you ok..? why are you singing aloud like that..??’ asks Ap.
Ragini gets down from bed and scratches her head. ‘Hehe, nothing maa. I just sang…’
They three go away. She turns her head aside and sees that Laksh has seen all what she has done. She silently moves into wash room to avoid the eye contact.
Next day,
The mehendi and Sangeeth function of Uttara. Ragini is getting ready in her room. She stands before mirror, she was wearing a violet saree. Her waist is visible through it.
Laksh just comes out of wash room after a bath and gets mesmerized to see Ragini like that.
She knows that he is looking at her and she simply gets busy in her work. Laksh really wanted to hug her from behind. But, he gets busy in wearing his suit.
Suddenly, Laksh throws his suit aside and goes near her and he hugs her tightly from behind. Ragini shocks at once. She smiles.
He slowly bends towards her neck and gives a kiss to her there. She falls back biting her lower lip and she really falls on floor.
It was all her imagination.
Laksh who wears suit just then, comes near her and makes her stand.
Laksh: are you ok..? how did you fall..?
He asks and make her sit on bed. Ragini was just looking at him.
Laksh: did you feel dizzy or what..?
He pours water in a glass and gives to her. Ragini was just looking at him. Then Laksh remembers that he was not talking with her.
Ragini knows that he won’t talk with her, even if she say sorry now. she thinks to be naughty to get back her Laksh.
Yes..! her Laksh..!
Laksh keeps glass aside and he was about to go away. Ragini holds his wrist and stands.
He looks at her. Ragini suddenly kisses his cheek and runs.
Laksh holds his cheek in shock. Ragini runs into the hall.
Again bg plays,
‘Gush khaake galiyaan
Udney lagi hai..udney lagi hai…’
Pari tries calling her, but she won’t respond… in her lost thoughts.
‘Raahon se teri
Judney lagi hai..judney lagi hai…’
Ap gives a flower tray to Ragini and she just holds it. song flows…
‘Chaubaare saare yeh
Milon ke maare se
Pooche hai tera pataa….’
She was still walking…
‘Zara zara chale se
Thakne laga dil mera
Zara zara udhne ko
Karne laga dil mera….’
Ragini throws all flowers up. Those flowers fall on her. she dances and sings,
‘Main pareshaan pareshaan
Pareshaan pareshaan
Dil kashi ka samaah
Main pareshaan pareshaan…!
Pareshaan pareshaan
Khawaaishon ka samaah…………..’
She stops dancing realizing that she is in between all people. All others clap. Ragini smiles and looks up.
Laksh was seeing her. and, when she looked at him. He turns away his eyes from her.
Then,…
Dinner time.
All ladies have mehendi to their hands. their husbands are feeding food for them. For uttara sometimes Adarsh, Dp or Rp.
All ladies are happily eating while husbands are making them eat. It was just Ragini who left alone.
She feels little sad.
Ap sees this and calls Laksh. He was talking with someone eating his own meal.
Laksh: haa maa..
Ap: who will make her eat if you go away..? come on feed Ragini..!
Laksh: maa..?
Ap just looks at Laksh to follow her order.
Ragini is not aware of this, that Ap maa has said Laksh. Laksh comes near Ragini with the plate.
As Ragini was sad, slowly tears are forming in her eyes which are ready to jump out from her eyes.
Laksh clears his throat. Then she looks beside and feels amazed.
Soon a tear falls on her cheek. She raises her hand to rub it. But Laksh wipes that tear with his finger.
Now, other tears won’t stop in her eyes.
They keep coming out of her eyes as a flow. She tries to control but, her Laksh was now sitting beside her and he came to feed her and he even wiped her tear. She was very emotionally happy.
Laksh keeps plate aside and wipes her all tears with his kerchief.
Laksh: please don’t cry Ragini. Plz….
But, she closes her eyes and runs into balcony where no one are there. Laksh goes behind her.
She can’t hold anything as her hands are full of mehendi. She was just crying. Laksh comes.
Laksh: why are you crying Ragini..?
Ragini in crying voice,
‘You know why..!!’
Laksh: you don’t love me however. That’s why, I was ignoring you. You wanted this only right..!!
Ragini (she is not facing Laksh)
‘But, I love you now..!!’
Laksh: just as a friend right..!!
Ragini: no…!! Laksh, plz stop giving me this punishment. I have realized your love.
Laksh: but, you also broke my heart Ragini. I’m a cheater right..!
Ragini then turns to him. Her eyes were red with tears and her face is also all red. Laksh feels sad looking her like that.
Ragini: any girl in my place at that time, would felt like that only..!! I started loving you when you were beating those goons for me..!! but, when I saw myself with scattered hair and changed dress on a messed up bed, I thought you did something with me..! and, as I got feelings on you, I got such a dream..!! is it my mistake..??
Laksh was just looking at her. her words are sometimes broke by her cry.. but he was listening to her patiently.
Ragini: I slapped you..! thinking that you have cheated me..! you may ask, ‘you fell in love with me, then what’s problem in starting a relation..?’ I don’t have problem in that… but, I thought you did something wrong in my absence of mind. You took advantage of me..!
Laksh looks on..
Ragini: but, you did nothing like that. I know, it’s my blunder mistake. I expected your anger Laksh. And, I was ready to face your anger. Your rejection. Your ignorance..! because, I’m in love with you..! and I know very well you love me still..!!
Laksh keeps looking.
Ragini: but, I can’t bear your hatred Laksh. I want you back in my life..!
She falls on her knees. Laksh goes near her holds her shoulders and makes her stand.
She was bending her head. Laksh raises her head by chin and wipes her tears and even liquid coming from her nose.
Bcz, her hands aren’t free.
Laksh: I’m sorry Ragini. I made you cry a lot. Our relation would have gone very well if I didn’t do that stupid thing at our first night.
Ragini looks on.
Laksh: with that only, chain of misunderstandings have started between us. Sometimes, I was angry.. sometimes you are angry..
Ragini keeps looking.
Laksh: I tried to show my love always Ragini, but in return I got only your misunderstanding. How, could you think that I may have cheated you..?
Ragini bends her head.
Laksh: that’s not love Ragini. May be you were in the effect of that drug and felt attracted towards me.
Ragini looks at him shocked.
Laksh: till then, you hated me. And, how can I believe that you got love suddenly..? in that drug effect, your mind have been gone crazy and got some mad thoughts. That’s it.. it’s not love..!
Suddenly Laksh gets a slap. Her mehendi design is on his cheek now. and her mehendi on hand was shattered.
Ragini: what rubbish you are talking haann..? I was crazy..? how can you think me like that Laksh..?
She holds his collar.
Ragini: when I got feelings for you..! when I started feeling for you.. loving you.. you are telling those came on drug effect..? if that was true, I would have dreamed any other boy there..!! but, I got only you…!! Only you…!!
She tears his shirt in upset. She falls down on her knees.
She is crying deeply. Laksh stood like a rock in his bare front as shirt torn.
Ragini: is that not called love laksh..? do you think I have only lusty feelings on you..?
Laksh closes his eyes.
Ragini: yes, even I thought same with you once. I was wrong. But, now I came to know truth. It’s not me who don’t have love, it’s you..! it’s you who don’t have love on me..! it’s you who don’t have trust on me..!!
She stands.
Ragini: not you laksh. I’m telling now… let’s breakup..!! LET’S BREAKUP..!!
She shouts and runs from there. Laksh looks on…
To be continued….
/* namaskar my dear mitroo…(friends),
Laga naya shock..??
Hahahah..
Then what to do…? With this epi, Laksh wiping her tears… actually he accepts her and ff gets over. I don’t want to end this ff this early.. so extended with a new shock and twist..
Is it nice..? haha.. */
56 Comments
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
thank you so much
Nice
But poor ragu
She ws rihght and even laksh too
But this time he said something that hurted her alot
yes yar. you are right. he really hurt her.. thank you dear.. yaa.. i will post soon..
But poat soon
Wantbyo knew story more now
Gud …..very gud…… .i also don’t want u to end it so soinnnnnnnn.. …. Excellent wrk…
thanks a lot… ???
Astuuuuuuuuuuuuu haiii ur back wow my astuuuuu is back amazing… U missed you so much yaar…. How are you…. U always makes me speechless hats off to u… And thank you so much for not ending ur ff… That kiss ufff ragini kissed laksh…. Ya yaar I can understand ragini if somebody says our loves is fake… We can bare it…..i don’t know what laksh going to do again… I don’t have any idea about coming epi… I eagerly waiting yaar do it asap… Love you so much yaar… Keep rocking…
thank you so much dear.. yes dear. i agree with you…
Asthu..wat is this yaar…first hlf was superb..RagLak moments were awesome but last part gve me heart breaking dear…
Y you r planning for ending da…
U shld continue …bt no shcks dr…my heart is small one it can’t able to bear these kind of shcks…
Take care dear
thank you darshu… no yar. u have to bear shocks.. bczz.. giving shocks in this ff is common know… hehe…
Omg loved it an amazing episode can’t wait for more please don’t let them break up xx
thank you shana… haha, i never make them breakup yar.. btw… when r u starting raglak ff..?? plz post soon…
Thank you so much for this extension
Awesome part new twist?
thank you so much dear…
Amazing dear… Omg another shock..!!!! Stupid laksh.. He don’t understand her feelings..!!! He must think before he speak.. Ragz got hurt by his words..!! Wat they going to do???? Waiting for next part.. Post it soon
thank you mintu.. he said in frustration, but yes..he is wrong… hmm we will see..
Hahaha…yoy should be truly named the queen of twists. I had missed the previous one too. Read two episodes in a go and awesome as usual. Even I want this ff to go on for a long time hence expecting more twists and turn. Keep rocking yaar
haha.. thank you so much gayu…
shocks queen awesome shock but u hurt both raglak huh i am angry on u
u r angry with me… *asking with puppy face..* haha, thankyou dear..
amazingg shock yaar mere ko laga now everything is going to be okk but again twist aa gya superbb yaar
ya.. when road is going straight suddenly giving a speed breaker or a turning point… gives me excitment… hehe.. thank you dear…
superb
thank you saranya..
You are late ?but your awesome update make me cool
yes yar.. I’m too late.. but not again.. thank you dear…
Awesome
thank you jaan…
shocks queen what’s thz yar….first part i thought everything s going so smooth….but in last part u give me 1000000vats shock to me….omg i can’t take thz much shock dear…first ragu didn’t understand anything talk stupid to laksh….now laksh s doing the same thing…Ohhh my ragu soooo much cried….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….
hahahaha….. thank you dear… hehe..
Wat is this yr ??
plzz no separation… Nokjok will b okk.. Wanna see laksh manofying Ragini nw.. plzz plzz
i won’t seperate them yar… thanks dear..
Amazing dear
thank you dear
Awesome
Finally I planned something
Mission ASTRA – plan to kill ASTRA for giving me heartattackssss
Where are you living?
I will come to your place and kidnap you
Okay okay now I’m forgiving you
hahaha… I won’t tell u where am i… hehe… ok, thank god u forgave me… thanks abi..
Awesome episode dear and Raglak scenes are beautiful. But last scene is shocking. Waiting for next
thank you so much ammu..
Superb
thank you malu..
Amazing amazing amazing… have no wrds for you…. update soon…
thank you so much dear..
Imagine part of Ragini is ha ha ? but came with a shock amazing keep going
thank a lot dear..
Amazing dear …….
thank you ashnoor..
Woowwww..awewme update dr…
thank you dear..
awesome episode astra di
raglak moments were awesome
but in the end you gave a really big shock
waiting for the next part
thank you so much dear…
yeah, i know i know, i am late…… dont look at me like that, face palm.
coming to the chappy, shock laga laga, shock laga……
why ragini why, why did you say something like that, u broke my heart, first laksh now you, i thought now i can see love of raglak but no u both have decide to make me feel sad. uuuhhmm…. now i am not talking to you kattiiiiiii…..
awesome update astra baby/…..
thank you dear,,, ya, ya, u r very very late.. btw.. shock acha laga kya… ?? hehe…
Amazing Yaar….
What a shock Yaar ? Loved it ?….
thank you kun..
Shock after shock, liked it dear