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Part 12
Storm of love 13
Ragini pushes Laksh back. He falls on bed. Ragini blushingly rubs her lips. Laksh again hugs her.
Ragini: prana nath, now get down fast. All are waiting for us.
Laksh: Teju…
Ragini: chalo…
Laksh smiles and gets ready.
Ragini sets herself and after Laksh going into washroom, she bursts her tears out. She cries a lot sitting on the floor.
Ragini: I don’t want to die. I want to live with you forever Nami..!!
She cries holding her face in her knees.
Then she feels a warm hand on her head. It’s Laksh again. His eyes are red but has smile on his face. He sits beside Ragini and she hugs him tight. Laksh rubs her back and head.
Laksh: what’s your next wish Ragini..?
Ragini smiles painfully,
‘you have seen your house, I want to see my house Laksh. I want to see my childhood.’ She says. Laksh kisses her forehead and says ok. They have already enquired about Ragini and they both go to their house which is not too far.
Ragini opens the doors of her house and sees all her pics, her parents pics and childhood pics. She gets emotional. Laksh is silently looking at her.
Ragini gets little little flashes of her past.
She goes to terrace, she reminds standing on a small pillar, and enjoying the cool breeze. Now, she too stands on it and extends her hands. she raises her head up and enjoys the cool breeze. Laksh was just looking at her. suddenly, the day becomes dark with the black clouds covering the sky.
Ragini feels pain in head and she falls. Before, she falls on ground, Laksh catches her in his arms. She falls in his most strong and secured arms, now the rain starts. Ragini was closing her eyes showing she is unconscious.
*Now, imagine any slow flute music you like*
Scene shifts to, Ragini and Laksh are in ambulance. Laksh was holding her hand no tears in his eyes, but only his blank face and Janaki is crying beside Ragini.
They reach hospital. Sanskar and Swara takes Ragini on stretcher to the operation ward, Laksh’s hand parts with Ragini’s hand and Laksh remains alone in that rain.
His eyes were looking somewhere and his thoughts were lost, but his heart was singing and imagining like this,
Back ground song:
{Laksh was in desert, searching desperately for his love.
‘Namish..!’ he hears a call from Ragini and she was dragged away by some men.
Laksh runs for her. but, his leg gets struck in sand. Ragini is placed in between a square and those men start putting bricks around her.
*just imagine salim-anrkali tragedy here*
Laksh sings,
‘O’ saki..
Don’t leave me..
In the sands storm..
In this love thirst..!’
Ragini sings in tears,
‘O’ premam..
This was destiny..
Can I cross..?
Can I stop..?’
Laksh raises from the sand and tries to come forward, but he was blocked by men.
*imagine, Laksh is wearing a black patiyala and black shirt and buttons are open*
‘the destiny or the fate,
Can’t separate us
The truth is the only love,
Which will be alive forever..!’
He sings.
She sings,
‘the love is strong than all,
But, the truth is it’s weak
Before the fate..!’
*she is wearing a black Punjabi dress and she has black veil on head*
Those men covers Ragini half with bricks.
{in the operation theater, doctors are treating Ragini. And she is slowly going into unconscious, remembering Laksh’s face.}
Now, imagination runs with her.
{song continues,
*Laksh was thrown into sand by those men’s, Ragini was holding a wall of that is built around her and she is looking at him.*
Laksh tries to get up, but he can’t.
Ragini sings,
‘Forget the memories,
Just as the dreams…
Think that a spring,
Never comes again..!’
Laksh stands and tries to walk near her.
‘we are thrown in the desert,
Where there is no oasis even..!
Our, dreams just shatter,
Here itself..!’
She sings looking weakly at Laksh.
Laksh then coming near her furiously,
‘If death is the destination of our love,
Then let me, come with you..!
If there is no place on earth to live,
Then let’s meet in heaven..!’
Laksh sings and falls at her bricks around her.
‘O’ premam…’ she sings…
‘O’ saki’… he sings…
The only brick covers even her face too.
Laksh lays there itself, and he is covered by sand due to sand storm.
*tragic flute music follows*
——-end of song—–
Laksh face is shown. He is under a tree. He listens to chirping of birds. Then his head is softly smoothed by a soft hand. His head is on some soft lap.
He opens his eyes and finds his Ragini. He is sleeping in her lap.
A tear falls from her eye on his cheek. She wipes that tear. Laksh wakes from her and hugs her.
‘So, at last we met in the heaven..!’ he says.
Ragini looks on…
He breaks the hug and cups her face.
Laksh: ‘See, even death didn’t separate us. We are always together Ragini.. my Teju..’
Ragini: ‘Laksh..! we are..’
Laksh keeps finger on her lips.
Laksh: shh..! no one can disturb us here. We couldn’t complete our life there, let’s complete here.
He takes her face near and about to kiss her.
‘Do this when you are alone..!’ they hears a voice. Laksh trembles and moves far to Ragini.
Sanskar, Swara, JAnaki, Sujatha and Ram are around them.
Laksh: what..? you guys also came to swargam..?
Sanskar beats on his head.
San: are you dreaming..? Teju’s operation is successful. And, you were sleeping under this tree since yesterday evening.
Now, all laugh.
Sujatha: nami, let’s go home now. later you can enjoy with your Teju.
Ragini smiles and Laksh hides his face.
——————
Ragini and Laksh are sitting at their favorite place.. (did you remembers, once they go to a village for swasan marriage, then Laksh(nami) shows Teju(Ragini) a place with hills.
Ragini is laying her head on his shoulder. Their fingers are entangled.
Laksh: Ragini.. Ragini…
She was not responding.
Laksh: I’m calling you…
Ragini: my name is Teju.. Mr. nami.
Laksh: ok, mrs. Nami teju…
Ragini blushes listening to it.
Laksh: shall we complete this ‘storm of love’ book where I stopped.
Ragini: yes, do complete it. let’s say this story to our kids.
Laksh: ok..
Laksh starts writing where he stopped once. Ragini was looking at him smiled…
Both of their closeness is seen and enjoyed by the nature.. and sun too smiled and set very fast, to give them a sweet lonely time… which makes both of them together…
————- The End-—————–
Next part: epilogue.
/* that’s the end of storm of love of RagLak.. now, no storm.. only their peaceful love story. How, was the whole story guys..? did you all like it..? I started the story with an emotional teaser and I have written many songs on my own for this(except moh moh ke dage) do tell me how you felt about songs. And, I will tell in epilogue, how the idea of this story came to mind.
Bye.. bye guys.. meet you all in next fan fiction.. */