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JOURNEY TOGETHER….
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Ragini being a early waker opened her eyes and found her life line lying at d other side of d bed..
Her face glowed up seeing him
He was looking cuter even in his sleep too..
Ragini smiled sheepishly.
She sat up still looking laksh.
Laksh lying by his front and ragini could see his lovely face
Ragini moved little forward and touched his forehead and rubbed his hair
Ragini(mind voice):-Ap ka dil bohot bada hai laksh..
Ap ne hame maf kiya aur upar se u accepted me in ur life
Ragini smiled and bent forward to peck his forehead
Her lips were an inch away from his forehead..
Her hot breath touched his forehead.
Laksh’s lips curled into a smile in sleep
And Laksh’s hot breath touched ragini’s neck.
But Ragini stopped and her smile shortened
She remembered laksh’s words and moved back a little.
The one inch gap became 4 inches now.
But again Ragini remembered laksh pecking her forehead last night
Her cheeks turned pink due to her hard blushing…
her beautiful eyes were big…
her lips curled into a smile
She filled d gap again.
The 4 inches gap was reduced to zero
Ragini closed her eyes and pecked laksh’s forehead
Laksh’s eyed were closed but his lips curled into a cute smile..
Ragini opened her eyes wider and her lips were still on his forehead..
Laksh:-Not fair ragini…
Ragini moved back hearing his voice and she lowered her head down..
She was biting her lower lip in tension that wat laksh will think now and wat will be his reaction now??
Laksh sat up from d bed..
Laksh:-look at me ragini..
But ragini was not having enough courage to face him
She looked him with her corner eyes..
He was looking her..
Laksh:-ragini I said look at me
Ragini slowly raised her eyes and looked him nervously
Laksh stared her…
Now ragini’s heart beats raised
Ragini:-Laksh woh… (she stopped and frowned her eyes)
Laksh was holding his stomach and rolled on d bed in laughter. (ROFL moment ??)
Ragini opened her mouth to speak:-Laksh… (she winced cutely with puppy eyes and pouted lips)…..
But laksh was still laughing aloud???……..
Ragini:-laksh…ap has kyun rahe ho(with her sweet and polite tone)
Laksh suppressed his laughter a little and sat up
Laksh(controlling his laughter):-look…look at ur face ragini..(he was still controlling d laughter) tum dar gayi.. .he laughed again.
Ragini lowered her head down and made a cute pout?….
Laksh found ragini’s pout and he stopped his laughter……..
He moved near her and lifted her chin up……
He made her face him……
Both looked each other’s eyes.
Laksh:-Wats d need to get scared now??Isiliye na ki u kissed me!!
Tume laga ki I will shout at u..hena??
Ragini nodded affirmatively with lowered eyes
Laksh continued
Ragini this is ur right…nobody can snatch ur rights.
Haan…I agree I said I need time to accept this relation
Iska Yeh matlab nahi ki someone can stop ur wify rights..(he patted her cheeks)
Ragini looked him amazed with her beautiful big eyes.
Laksh:-now come on…u gave a kiss, give me a smile too
Ragini tried to smile
Laksh:-haan…little more
Ragini smiled fully…
laksh too smiled looking her.??…..
He patted her cheeks again
Laksh got down from d bed and walked towards d washroom door and held d door handle to open…..
He opened d door.
But instead of getting in, he turned to ragini who was getting down from d bed…….
Laksh:-umm ragini…
Ragini looked him
Laksh:-Next time plz don’t take this long to kiss (he winked??)
Ragini blushed with his talk and wink☺☺…….
wat to say…???? he was making her crazy everytime……
His each acts and making her fall more weak..
Ragini too took her cloths and went to guest room to get ready as it was getting late for morning aarthi.
After taking bath..
Laksh came from washroom and saw ragini sitting on dressing table in an orange floral lehenga (one she wore after her punarvivaah with Laksh)
He was just in his grey jeans n white vest..
Ragini was about to wear her earrings but just then Laksh held her hand in middle
Ragini was confused
Raglak had a deep eyelock..
He made he wear her earrings borla, her bangels n then her mangalsutra..
He made her stand holding her shoulders..
This was just like something unexpected for her and a tear escaped from raginis eye.
Laksh wiped it nodding in no.. n another shock came for ragini when he kissed her forehead..
Ragini bursted in a loud cry n hugged Laksh..
He cared her back letting her flow all the pain she stored in her all this years..
When laksh found ragini went silent he broke the hug n she faced him with soked face n teary dull eyes..
Laksh took vermilion box from dressing table n filled her maang n again kissed her forehead..
Just there was a knock on door..
Raglak stood a bit far n ragini open the door with a smile to find AP there..
AP too was happy after watching smile on raginis face..
L:- Maa aap yaha??? hum niche hi aarahe the.
Ap:- Its ok Laksh I came here to say that its Raginis first Rasoi now n then her muh dikhai in afternoon..
N yes u have to take her to baadi also for pagphere..
Raglak nodded in yes..
AP cupped raginis face.
AP:- I know beta its tough for u both to accept this situation.. but whatever happens is for good..
Whenever I had imagined someone at my DILs place always Raginis face came to my mind.
U r not my DIL ragini u r my daughter..
Feel free to talk to me or whatever u want to share.
I m always there for you both.
Hmm.???
Ragini nodded in yes n hugged AP.
Laksh smiled at their cute bonding.
AP broke the hug. N kissed raginis forehead before leaving the room.
As AP left Ragu turned to Laksh smiling.
Laksh too smiled back at her and said.
L:-Ragini I want ur help to sort out the misunderstandings between mishti maa n baba..
(Forwarded his hand)
Will u help me n b my partner.???
R( keeping her hand on his palm):- I m already ur partner laksh. Ur Life partner. U dont need my permission for any step.
I will accompanist u wherever u want.
Laksh smiled n kissed back of her palm which was in his hand making her blush..
All rituals of the day went well except at some points sujatas taunting hurt ragini n made her cry but Laksh presence n his assurance of supporting her stoped her from breaking down..
At evening they went to baadi where dada dadi n shekhar welcomed them warmly..
After some nake( gifts) rituals shekhar asked Ragini.
Sh:- Toh what does my princess want as her pagphere gift from her dad..????
R:- will u really give me whatever I ask???
Shekhar nodded in yes smiling while dada dadi were confused as Ragini was having a diffent expressions on her face..
Ragini marked Laksh something through her eyes..
Laksh nodded understanding her n left.
Ragini again faced a confused shekhar n continued..
R:- papa I have got everything whatever asked since childhood n now also I expect a yes from u.
Now dada dadi n shekhar were confused at this weird words from Ragini.
Just then their eyes truck something at door. N they were freezed.
Shomi was standing there with soked n pale face n was supported by Laksh.
Ragini went to her n brought her in.
Dadi:- Ladoo ya aurat mhare ghar main na avegi..
R:- Dadi ye aurat hamari maa hain hamare papa ki legally wedded wife.
Aur jitna haq aapka hain iss gharpe utna hi inka hain.
Aur agar ye yaha nahi rehe sakti toh aap bhi nahi rehe sakti kyun ki aap dono iss gharki bahuye hain.
Shomi looked at Ragini lovingly n was adoring this bold side of her daughter.
Laksh too was proud of his wife who was taking stand for her step mother.
Ragini left shomi n went to shekhar.
R:- Plz papa plz complete my wish I promise I wont ask for anything hereafter from u.
Shekhar nodded in yes kipping a hand on her head n she hugged him in happiness.
Dadaji finally spokeup
Dadaji:- I will allow her to stay here but she should break her all ties with that girl who humiliated us.
Shomi was about to say something but ragini stpped her holding her hand tightly n asked her to say yes trough her eyes.
Shomi was shocked but truthfulness in raginis eyes forced her to trust her n she agreed to dadaji..
Ragini in happiness hugged shomi but shomi didnt hugged her back.
Dadi already left in anger followed by dadaji..
Ragini understood Shomis action n made her sit on sofa n knelt near her holding her hands while Laksh was smiling n shekhar was confused still
Ragini started to speak.
R:- Maa dont u trust ur Ragu????
Shomi nodded in yes half heartly.
Laksh too now knelt beside Ragini n held shomis hands which were already held by Ragu.
Ragu slightly blush at his touch but then came to reality again.
Laksh saw this through corner of his eyes n smiled naughtily but then composed and said.
L:- Maa no need to take swaras tention. Me n Ragini will surely find her out.
N its promise of this son of urs.
Shemish were assured now n they nodded in yes.
Like this all went good except dadis cold behavior towards shomi n sujatas taunts for Ragu.
Laksh was always beside Ragini like a wall.
A MONTH LATER
N slowly their friendship grew deeper.
Laksh too had realized his feelings for Ragini
Raglak went to a party at Lakshs friends place in hoogly but it was too late when they Returned n it was Raining badly..
Suddenly something struck to Laksh n he said while stpping car at a side.
L:- Ragini weather is too bad I cant drive properly so we need to halt.
Ragini was scared now but still she trusted Laksh so she nodded in yes.
R:- but we can’t spend our night here Laksh
L:- Dont worry Ragini we have our farm house a kilometer away. We can stay there.
Ragini nodded in yes n Laksh took the car towards farmhouse.
As they stopped Ragini opened the car door n ran out to play in Rain.
Laksh tried to stop her but it was too late.
He too came out from car n was hooked on a totally wet n s*xy Ragini.
She was in a Lavender net saari with Silver diamond work on it n a silver glitter lace n silver blouse with neted lavender sleeves till her elbow…
Silver large hoops in ears, hairs tied in messy bun with wooden hair stick , her vermilion n her mangalsutra…
Laksh was hooked on her well tonned body n creamy skin exposed through her wet saari and she was spinning in rain while facing sky n hands spread..
He slowly started moving to her hooked n Ragini too stopped finding him coming near resulting in their eyelock…
As he reached her the watchman of that house came there running resulting n his voice brought them to Reality..
W:- Laksh bhaiyya aap aur bhabiji yaha.???
L( while fumbling):- Ha kisi kaamse Hoogly gaye the aur ate hue late hogaye.. isiliye ruk gaye.
Chabi do gharki
Watchman handled him the keys.
W:- thik hain bhaiyya kisi baat ki jarurat ho toh mujhe bulalijiyega main yahi hoon.
Raglak nodded in yes n he left.
Laksh gestured Ragini to proceed n they went in..
As soon as they reached Laksh Room Laksh took a towel from his cupboard n saw a shivering Ragini sitting on bed.
He took his bathrobe n gave it to her.
L:- Saari change karke ise pehenlo or u will catch cold. I will ask Gopal( the caretaker) to bring us ginger tea. U will feel better.
Ragini nodded in yes n took it. Laksh called up Gopal n asked him for tea..
He was about to leave but went to ragini n left open her wet hairs open while removing the stick n placed it in her hand..
then went to washroom with a crook smile leaving behind a blushing Ragini.
When Laksh returned Ragini had already changed and was looking very hot in that bathrobe with her legs below knee exposed..
She was standing near room window with its support n was watching the Rain sipping the tea..
She turned to Laksh after hearing the opening of door n gestured him to have his tea while she kept her empty cup down.
But her eyes freezed on his tonned body visible as he was only in his night pants which were his spare cloth here.
But Ragini slapped herself in her mind n again faced the window while blushing..
Laksh noticed this n smirked as he finished the last sip.
He kept the cup on side table n slowly moved towards Ragini.
Ragini who was still blushing flinched as laksh encircled his arms around her waist..
n moved her wet hairs at a side in front while nuzzling his nose in her neck.
Raginis hands cluched his hands on her stomach n she closed her eyes .
He slowly started kissing her neck.
Ragini was moaning his name resulting his desires to increase
Laksh slowly moved away from her n made her turn holding her shoulders.
N suddenly said looking straight in Raginis eyes while cupping her face.
L:- I LOVE YOU RAGINI
And raginis world freezed for a moment
The words for which she was carving this many days were finally on his lips n she too heard it.
It was the most happiest moment for her of her whole life
Her love was reciprocated.
This was too unexpected for her.
Tears started to roll down her eyes n Laksh wiped them nodding her head in a no.
Composing herself Ragini replied
R:- I love u too Laksh. N she buried her face in his chest shyly.
Laksh was on cloud nine. N he too reciprocated her.
Slowly he broke the hug n Cupped her face while looking in her eyes for her permission to procced.
Ragini was touched with his gesture n closed her eyes surrendering herself to him.
Laksh quickly caught her lips in his n started sucking them.
She first hesitated but gaveup lateron n reciprocated
N with this Lakshs lips curved into a smile.
He tried to deepen the kiss but found ragini out of breath n struggling so he let go of her lips while she left a gasp.
Laksh slowly Picked her up in bridal style n she encircled her hands around his neck while they shared a brief eyelock.
He made her lie on bed n came over her partially while taking care of not putting his weight upon her tiny figure.
Zara Zara Behekta Hain
Mehekta Hain Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Laksh slowly nuzzled his face inside her neck n she slowly closed her eyes enjoying his touch.
Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan Main
Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Laksh entangled his hands with her above her head..
Ragini was just lost in his touch..
Suddenly ragini opened his eyes when Laksh opened dori of her robe.
But Laksh assured her that he had accepted her by kissing her forehead
Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa
Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re
Laksh removed her robe fully n threw it away.
Ragini closed her eyes in shyness covering her fully naked body with her hands.
Yuhi Baras Baras Kaali Ghata Barse
Hum Yaar Bheeg Jaaye Is Chaahat Ki Baarish Mein
He slowly removed her hands from her body holding them at both sides n kissed her forehead
Meri Khuyli Khuli Lato Ko Suljaaye
Tu Apni Ungliyon Se
Main To Hoon Isi Khwaayish Mein
Laksh slowly Removed strands of her wet hairs amd tuck them behind her ears.
Sardi Ki Raaton Mein Hum Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Mein
Hum Dono Tanha Ho Na Koi Bhi Rahe Is Ghar Mein
After sometimes they both were covered with a quilt n Laksh was kissing her nape leaving there a trail of wet kisses…..
Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Aaja Re Aa Re
Laksh parted away and then buried his face in her stomach resulting her back to arch and a morn escaped from her mouth……
Tadpaye Mujhe Teri Sabhi Baatein
Ek Baar Ay Deewani Jhootha Hi Sahi Pyaar To Kar
Ragini closed her eyes and remembers Laksh saying he loves swara and not her and tears escaped from her eyes..
Main Bhooli Nahin Haseen Mulakaatein
Bechain Karke Mujhko
Mujhse Yun Na Pher Nazar
R:- Laksh u wont leave me na???
She asked him. While he moved up again to face her..
L:- Never ever. U r my responsibility n now my love, my life..
Said he kissing her on her lips n she too reciprocated satisfied by his answer.
Roothega Na Mujhse Mere Saathiyan Yeh Vaada Kar
Tere Bina Mushkil Hain Jeena Mera Mere Dil Mein
He made her turn and started placing wet kisses on her bare back.
Ragini Cluthed the pillow tightly enjoying this new feelings.
Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Laksh made her face him again and she hugged him while blushing..
Laksh smiled watch her blushing.
Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa
Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere
Aaja Re Aaja Re Aaja Re Aaja Re..
Finally Laksh removed all barriers and they consummated. She shouted his name n soon they dozed off in eachothers embrace while they were drenched in sweat..
Next morning.
It was too difficult for ragini too dressup as Laksh kept kissing her n resisting her to wakeup but then they finally dressed up n left.
@MM.
AP was really happy after watching the happiness on both of her childrens face..
But Sujata again traunted Ragini that the happiness she is enjoying is deserved by someone else and she snached it.
This hurted Ragini and she Left to room running but now her Laksh was with her to console her.
After that night Raglaks life took a romantic turn n Laksh became over possecive about Ragini.
A LEAP OF 5 MONTHS..
@MM During Dinner,
Ragini was serving dinner to all.Ap asked her to sit and have dinner with all…
Ragini sat next to laksh’s chair at left..
Laksh just gave a smile and continued eating
He looked up and noticed everyone who were busy in their dinner plates
Laksh looked uttara’s plate
Uttara was next to laksh at laksh’s right side..
Laksh:- uttara…have one more roti..u have became lean now-a-days
(all looked laksh and then continued their own works)
While sujata spoke,
Su:-Haan chori…u have became a stick bcz of ur dating..
Uttara sighed:- maa…its dieting.
Sujata:- haan wahi toh hai..
Roti was nxt to ragini…….
laksh got little up from his chair
He moved close to ragini giving a reason of taking roti.
Raglak’s faces were very close
Laksh quickly kissed her cheek? without anybody’s notice and took d roti in d nik of time……
Ragini’s breath stopped for a moment when laksh did this………..
Ragini looked around whether anybody noticed it……
Thank god nobody saw them……
She blushed touching her cheek and lowering her eyes
Laksh placed d roti in uttara’s plate and smirked naughtily looking ragini.
Within some seconds Laksh again looked wats nxt to ragini other than roti
His eyes spotted kheer.. and he smirked.
Laksh:- Uttara…tum kheer khao na..
(again all looked laksh and then put their heads down to have their food)
This time laksh did ulta..
Fist he took d kheer and then he noticed everyone and moved back slowly
He again pecked ragini’s cheek without anybodys notice
Ragini was freezed…
she looked him again
Thinking in her mind about what laksh did..
he smirked again raising his eyebrows..
Sujata who was next to uttara was d victim now..
Laksh:Chachi…u too have a roti
Ragini looked up laksh stood up little..
But bfr he comes closer
She took d whole rotis,”Laksh…i will help u and moved it nxt to laksh..
Ragini even passed kheer to d other side
Naughty Lucky boy sat with a pout
But laksh is laksh…
His face brightened…
He intentionally dropped down his fork on floor..
Laksh:- ohh..no..
Ragini bent down to pick d fork.
Ragini picked with her hand and suddenly laksh caught her hand
Both were still bending down
Ragini looked him with her big eyes.
.Laksh kissed her forehead..
Ragini Immediately sat straight..
Laksh too..but he caught her hand in his..
He even got d fork from her
He continued eating while ragini was trying to pull her hand back..
But poor ragini couldn’t..
Ragini was blushing ?☺putting her head down and laksh was pressing her hand gently…..
Naughty Laksh, he was enjoying it……
He looked at her from his eye corner and found her blushing with his acts……
Her head and eyes were lowered…
She was trying to free her hand from laksh, but couldn’t..
Ap noticed ragini who was not having her food.
Ap asked her if she was fine to which ragini replied haan ma
Ap asked her to have her food.
Laksh smiled looking ragini’s state
Ragini:Maa..woh…
Laksh left her hand as she has to have her food
Ragini sighed and had her food
Suddenly a voice Came from stairs.
V:- wont u invite us too Badi maa????
And the screen freezed on everyones shocked face..
Precap:- Final showdown.. Some old cards to reopen n Ragini to get kidnapped..
Tada..
Here is the second shot of our Ts.
N romance credit.. #kitkat..
Plz comment n tell us how is it.
Last shot to b posted soon..
Here #kitkat and #manju signing off……..
37 Comments
Simply superb di….post next soon
thank you….
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
thank dear…. next part will b posted soon….
kitkat di and manju di!! how r u both?? coming to the episode it was fabulous, awesome wonderful loved it totallly
raglak moments were so cute and lovely in love with all of them!!!
and i think the voice if of either of swasan!!
anways waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing!!
lots of love!!
I m all good dear…. thank you…. let see how much ur guess is correct…. love u too….
Loved it, keep going
thank you
Awesome
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Oh this is love. I guess Sanskaar is back with Swara. Really excited for the next, I wonder who will kidnap her……….
Amazing ???
thank u sweetheart….. let’s see does ur guess is correct or not in final shot… n ragu’s kidnapping is a mistry……
Superrrrrr duperrrrrr part
thank u Mona….
Awesome episode
Fantastic dear
awesome dear…loved it alot…raglak scenes r amazing dear….naughty laksh poor ragu…eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…
so sweet of you dear…. thank u n really our laksh is very naughty….. u too to…..
Manju di and kitkat di (I love ur name though) , I loved it , wow I read the first part and was eagerly waiting for the next and yes u both surprised me by posting this , wooooooooow
Coming to the story as u both know very well that u r awesome writers so no need of me telling u the same still i wud say u both were prolific , i have always loved manju di’s works but miss kitkat (can i cally u kit??) i loved urs work as well ………..awesome dearies keep it up
awesome so sweetheart of u……. thank u so much n ya u can call me whatever u want i wont mind baby….. n its my n manju’s part time job to surprise others…..????…… so thanks a lot for such a sweet comment n this much of ur love….. love u too from mine n manju as behalf…..
kitkat i loved ur os bliss , it was like excellent and this was also awesome , anyways update soon
thank u so much dear….. I cant hands this much sweetness….. I will get diabetic…..????????????
Superb… Cute One…
Naughty Laksh…
Interesting dear
Superb part
Awesome
Superb update
Awesome dear
Nice
Wonderful episode di and cute raglak and can’t wait for next episode
thank you sweetheart…. final part on way….
Fantastic amazing awesome
I’m really sorry for the late comment, but what to do, I’m busy with onam celebrations. It’s outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are beautiful. Precap is seem to be scary and eagerly waiting for next episode. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care
Thank ammu… its OK sweetheart…. and happy onam from me n manju…..
Fantastic dear…Loved it
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Loved it
Love you!!
Take care
keep writing 🙂
thank u my baby….