So guys …..
I am planning to extend this ts as a ss..
What say ???
The thing is one of my readers had told that i had not given enough punishment to Laksh.. I thought of it.. actually it was true.. even in the serial Laksh never suffered as much as Ragini.. So now .. Im gonna add few more shots to it…
First of all thanks to all of you who have supported and liked my story..
Im sorry if i couldn’t reply to any of your comments..
Im sorry guys from now on the episode will be short as I have to manage my studies too..
He kissed her fore head cupping her face.. She was cherishing the moment closing her eyes..
He cupped her face and wiped her tears …
She looked into his eyes.. But he wasn’t .. .his gaze was stuck on her lips…
He slowly traced the out line of her lips with his thumb .. she closed her eyes and took a breathe in..
She could feel him coming more closer to her … his nose touched her ..
She shivered and clutched her sari.. .
Their chests were touching each other..
their lips were abt to touch ..
Tada… uttara opens the door..
” bhabhi ma.. ”
She immediately turns around embarrassed.. closing her eyes tightly …
Ragini immediately pushed laksh away blushing beet red..
” wo wo. Im sis sorry bhai .. bhabhi.. wo.
Im sorry… I swear I didnt see anything .. ”
” uttara ki bachchi.. dont you have manners.. is this how you enter someone room .. That too a couple’s room.. ” said laksh being damn irritated .. He was about have a lovely moment with his wife and this chipkali spoiled it. …
” wo bhai. Im sorry I didnt .. I never knock because always bhabhi is alone here na.. ” she said without thinking..
Laksh who was fine till now became really sad… How much loneliness his bacha has suffered because of him.. How much she sacrifices every time .. It was always she who suffered and sacrificed… And it was always him who got all the advantages of her sacrifice… He felt useless.. He felt worthless … He actually did not deserve such a lovely wife as ragu ..
Ragini understood his state of mind..
She soon wanted to change the topic..
” ahh. Uttara.. btw.. why did you come.. “asks Ragini..
” haa wo bhabhi.. maa was calling you guys for lunch.. .. come down fast .. She says and goes.. ”
Ragini sees Laksh who was still upset..
She moved closer to Laksh..
And placed her hands on his shoulders.
” laksh.. pls.. todays a really good day lets not spoil it by being sad.. ” she says and pulls him down for lunch..
While he thinks how can a girl be so selfless that inspire of him hurting her many times.. She wants to see him happy…
After sometime they all had their lunch and was sitting on the sofa and chitchatting..
Laksh was the least interested. ..
Since their kiss was left incomplete.. He was eagerly waiting to spend some time alone with Ragini..
He wanted to makeup for leaving her alone by marking her his… He actually started to dream their small family..
Laksh was eyeing Ragini to co e to room. B ut Ragini was adamant she was not ready .. whereas thinking what would others think of they left in between..
At that time they hear a knock on the door.. ” raagini beta . Pls go and see na who is there in the door. ” ap says.
” ji maa” Ragini says and goes to open the door only to find the gadodia family there..
Ragini was really happy ..
” arrey dadi ma.. papa.. ma.. come in.. ” she said as she hugged them.
They all wished Raglak HAPPY WEDDING ANNIVERSARY..
” ji ap ji.. we have come for a very important thing.. we all know na Swara is in her seventh month.. And now she needs her mothers care the most… so we came to take her to badi . ” dadi said..
” haa kaki sa.. You are right.. we wil send her.. Ragini beta.. pls help swara in helping her luggage.”..
Sanskar was sad.. But somewhere he was happy .. He wouldn’t have to deal with her mood swings.. it was only Ragini who could handle it. ..
Laksh was also sad because since the gadodia family came now Ragini will be full time with them..
He huffed..
Ragini and Swara went to pack Swara luggage and they came back after sometime…
The gadodia were camouflage when Swara started..
” maa ek min.. let Ragini too come with us for few days na.. otherwise I will feel really lonely..” Swara pleaded to sharmishta..
” Swara s .. what are you saying.. Ragini has to take care of Laksh na.. ”
Sharmishta says..
” maa.. pls.. just for few day.. ” she again plead s..
Ragini was sad.. She just Had got some time to spend with her Laksh and now Swara wants her to come to badi.
Laksh was cursing his fate.. all the time while he was working it was true thaT he was engrossed in his work . But that doesnt mean he did not miss Ragini.. He badly wanted to feel her love and care..
And finally he was happy everything was over and he could spend some time with his beloved and now this Swara ..
” achac.. teekhi hai sharmishta ji let Swara come with Ragini .. Its only a matter of few days na.. ill manage Laksh.. Ragini go pack ur bags.. ”
Said annapoorna..
Ap purposely send Ragini because she wanted her son to know the amount of loneliness her daughter had suffered…She was the one who saw to what extend Ragini was affected . She tried making her engaged.. But a mother cannot fill the husbands place.. They were times she went ready seeing Ragini’s condition.. She wanted teach Laksh a lesson.. yes now Ragini was as important to her as Laksh was..
Ragini went or her room to pack the bag.. And Laksh followed.
They entered the room ..
Ragini took her bag and kept it on the bed.. She went to the cupboard to take her dress with a sad face..
At that time Laksh back hugged her ..
” Ragini pls tell them na you can’t come.. pls.. You were the one who asked me spent the rest three days with you na.. ”
“Laksh what can i do.. I cant vo against Swara.. She is pregnant na.. ”
” laksh pouted… But still Ragini..
Its all my fault.. I should have made you pregnant too.. ” he said whole Ragini blushed .. .
” laksh .. ” she said with asha blush .. She pushed him and continues packing whole Laksh looked at her with a sad smile..
So next epi after some days ..
26 Comments
Awesome dear
Very nice loved the punishment of laksh make him suffer more and more ??in last shot I was upset as ragini forgave him so easily ??now I am very happy that laksh is getting his punishment ??can’t wait for the next shot pls post ASAP nd makemake sure laksh will get more ignorance
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Awesome
Interesting dear
Superb awesome continue
Nice
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Awesome episode
Loved it, keep going
Excellent dear
Awesome ??
Lovely episode didu and lovely raglak moments and post next episode di
Awesome
Fantastic dear
Awesome episode
Firstly thank you so much for extending this story ???? it’s interesting episode dear ??? Raglak scenes are beautiful ???? so ap is going to make Laksh understand same pain which Ragini suffer. It’s interesting. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care ???????????
Nice part
Amazing dear and do continue
Superb di
Quite interesting plot
Superb…
Nice keep going
Superb dear
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Yes dear…