Hii dear readers & silent readers, Niyati is here with the next part. A big thanks to all who comment on previous post.
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Ratri is hell irritated with Naman’s interference. She drag Megha in a corner.
Ratri : What’s going on your mind ? Are u crazy? What’s the need of telling our names to him & talking to him.
Megha : Ahh…..He is so hot yaar. You know I am sure he like you.
Ratri : If u don’t stop your rubbish talks, i will kill you. Stop this nonsense.
Megha : I am scared…..You talk like that u are going to kill me in reality.
Ratri : You are dumb…..Now let’s go home .
Megha : Rati , Plzz some more time …..
Ratri : Fine, I am going…..You want to stay here, So enjoy.
Megha : No way….You don’t do this.
Ratri : Ok then come with me……(cut in between by Naman).
Naman : May I dance with u ?
Ratri : Excuse me ! I already told u that I don’t talk with strangers. One more thing don’t try to flirt with me again.
Naman : Flirting….nice joke ……It’s exactly called daydreaming. I just ask u for dance . Don’t misunderstood my words.
Ratri : Shut up ! You know what go to hell.
Naman : Really …..You are really stubborn….Megha , Can u dance with me ?
Megha : Ya, of course why not.
She nods her head in disbelief .
Ratri : Megh , We are leaving from here na .
Megha : Forget about that darling.
They both move toward dance floor & she is fuming in anger. They start dancing on song (Pyaar ki ek kahaani suno).
She move toward other side of pub. She was really angry on Megha. She is walking & lost in thoughts. Suddenly, she realized that she didn’t recognize that place . She lost her way.
She listen no music . That place is full of darkness. She saw a shadow & start running without turning toward that.
She bumped on someone . She is about to fall when the person hold by her waist. They both share eyelock. She realized her position.
Naman : You are scared like that u see any ghost.
Ratri : How I come here.
Naman : What ! Don’t tell me u have powers to travel another world. Are u serious ? Who talk like that? You are here only…..
She look around & found herself in pub. She listen that loud music & saw crowd.
He waved his hand infront of her.
Naman : Where are u lost ? Why are u tensed?
Ratri : It’s none of your business . Don’t interfere in my matter. Wait a sec You & Megh are dancing , then why are u here.
Naman : Our dance is already finished. What happen to u ?
Ratri : Aisa kaise ho sakta hai . I don’t see anything.
Naman : Ya, I think u have button in place of your eyes.
Ratri : I don’t like these type of jokes.
Naman : If u don’t believe me , then ask to your friend na.
Ratri : You don’t have any need to tell me. I know what is right for me . Where is she ?
Megha : What are u guys discussing without me ? (from behind).
Ratri : Where were u ?
Megha : I am going to take drinks in front of your eyes.
Naman : See now u believe .
Megha : What happen to u Rati . You might be ok na.
She nods her head though she still not believing that everything is imagination.
Megha : Come let’s go to home……
They both leave from there while he is losr in her beauty & looking at her .
PRECAP
Naman in Ratri house……
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# What is he doing in her house ?
# Was she really imagine things or some supetnatural power behind this ?
Do comment & drop down your suggestions or guesses on comment box. Kindly ignore grammatical & spelling errors. So sorry for late update as my exams are going.Be happy & Stay safe . Keep smiling.
With wishes & regards
Niyati.
11 Comments
It is interesting. Is ratri really imagaing things? I liked the little banter among naman and ratri.
Thank u so much di for your comment.Glad that u like this.Di, it’s only the mystery. Gm di . Have a sweet day.
Is she really imagine things??
Brilliant ability you gave perfecte effect and I also lost in ratri’s imagination.❤❤❤❤?????
Aww,thank u so much for your kind words bhai . It really means a lot to me . Glad that u like this.Gm . Have a sweet day bhai.
Wow wonderful niyu… I was totally lost in your story manoo jaise ratri k jagah main hi thi… Awesome story n please update the next part soon…
Aww, glad to know that swetie . Thanks for your comment . Ya, will update soon. Take care & stay safe.
It is interesting di.. Really very interesting… Was rathri really imagining things… I was lost in your writings… It is wonderful.. Full of mystery.. Do update the next shot soon as I can’t wait so long for the next shot. It is really very interesting dii.. Just loved it. Lots of love from your lil sis
Aww, thank u so much darling for your lovely comment .It really means a lot to me . Glad that u found it realistic & lost in this . I am happy from your comment . You make my day lil sissy. Ya,will post next one soon & about imagination i don’t want to disclose that as it’s only the mystery. Lots of love to u my lil sis.Post your teaser soon.
I always wait for Ur good morning messages!!!! U also make my day di..
Aww….. dearie it’s too good…..I don’t understand what is happening to her is it any sort of illusion….or something else…or she can see anything that others couldn’t…just a guess….it’s just awesome love you loads
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Aww, thank u so much bestie for your comments. It’s only the mysetery . I will send u the link of previous parts to mae u understand. Glad that u like this. Luv i too dear. Gm dear.