Hello friends… NILASH back with the next part. Thank You so so much for all your amazing responses. HAPPY READING
“Okay so let’s start…” Shivay now started to describe how they got married but got interrupted by his son “but papa I have a condition” he said as like his mother says before agreeing to any of his father’s decision. Shivay smiled on the resemblance of this trait of the mother-son duo.
“Yup… what condition?” Shivay asked.
“Omi di will not ask a single question in between before you complete” this was Shivay’s trait that his son perfectly got. If anyone comes and says something then Anika always interrupts in between by asking her question and he thinks that how many questions she has in the pitara of her hypothalamus and similarly Omisha, she keeps on asking question if anyone narrates a story or something.
“Hehehehe… okay our billa” Omisha said and teased her brother as she knows how much he gets irritated listening to this. Other two little heads were also laughing but yeah hand is there on their mouth to hide it from Kush.
“Papa… scold Omi di, she is calling me billa” Kush complained frowning. Omi showed tongue to him and asked Shivay to continue with the story. Shivay was all giggling seeing his daughter (Omi) and son (Kush) fighting and remembering his and Anika’s fights.
Kush a boy who is not exactly like someone but he has traits of everyone in built in him. He really can sing amazingly, his mind is sharp to understand the terms his father uses while cracking some deal over phone. He loves to discuss about business with his father and he also gets training from his Rudra Chachu about flirting with girls.
“So…” Shivay now started.
ELEVEN YEARS BACK
Shaadi in Oberoi Mansion can never go softly. Anika was missing and a note was their beside her bed “WILL RETURN THE BRIDE ONLY WHEN MY DEMANDS ARE FULFILLED” everyone was astonished at the fact that last time in Shivay’s marriage, Shivay got kidnapped and now in Shivay-Anika’s marriage Anika is kidnapped.
Pinky sat on the bed and started crying “Mummy ji… my Anika… bring her back… Mummy ji…” this continued and daadi and Jhanvi sat beside Pinky to console her. This time Pinky was also unaware that who have kidnapped Anika.
On the other side the bhola bhala kidnapper was getting constant punches on his back as he was putting Anika up and she has not seen his face.
“Luchcha tuchcha ghar me biwi nahi hai jo dusre ki biwi ko chura kar lata hai, chor mujhe kamine (stupid, cheap, idiot, don’t you have your own wife that you have stole someone else’s leave me idiot)… leave me…” her punches and the attacking point his back.
“Uffff… it’s enough” at last the kidnapper put her down after bearing all the hard punches. His face was covered by a black cloth.
“Hey wait wait… I have heard this voice, and wait your figure also resembles someone” Anika said touching his body from shoulder till waist as her eyes were covered by black cloth.
“Hehehihihehehe…” the kidnapper started laughing as her hands traced his curves because it was tickling him, wow nice kidnapper did not get aroused.
“Shivay… you stupid, idiot, fool haan haan… wait lemme think of words… no… no more words left in my English dictionary… so what hindi mata di jai… ullu, gadhe, bhagad bille, kanji naino waale stupid maharaj how dare you to kidnap someone else’s bride from her marriage?” she stopped after showering him with not so pleasant but cute words.
“Arre you are going to get married to me only you stupid, ohhh sorry maybe your brain went to litter” he teased him back.
“Open my eyes and then I will show you” she howled back trying to open her eyes by her hand but Shivay stopped her in middle.
“I have something for you, I know that this is nothing to what you have gifted me but I want this to be ours, us forever” he said and held her shoulders in a firm grip and removed the clothing from her eyes, the entire surrounding was dark.
“Shivay…” she said and all the dim lights lightened over her portraits, yes portraits… some are made by Yuthang and some by Omkara. The big portrait was adorning on the center stage that Shivay admired during the art exhibition in London.
Suddenly a spotlight fell on Anika and another on the band standing at the stage.
“Today I will narrate our story in my own way…” he smiled and made Anika sit over a chair and went to the stage.
“PYAAR KI EK KAHANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
HOTI HAI KYA JAWANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…”
The female singers of the band sang and stopped while Shivay started his narration “I met a girl in this coffee shop, a carefree, bubbly and sweet girl… yeah daring too, no one has ever dared to call me the great Shivay Singh Oberoi according to some as billu… other than my Daadi, but she did… I was amazed and mesmerized by seeing her dance and then I noticed that her friend is going away because she was embarrassed as everyone were staring them when she was dancing, I opened the coffee shop door to get in when she landed in my arms, a strange feeling I felt… that feeling I never felt before, but somewhere I liked that feeling… she stood straight and ran after her friend to calm her down but she turned to me and said we will meet again… I said as if she is doing the bavishyavaani, but she said correct, we met again… she met me to save our family” he stopped when the singers started to sing again…
“WO BHI EK DAUD THA
WAQT HI AUR THA
JAB WO THE AJNABI…
DONO TANHA SE THE
PAR WO KEHTE KISSE
BAAT JO DIL ME THI…”
Shivay started and the female singers stopped “we met at my friends engagement party the second time, she was so sweet that she ran to me and asked about my well being, but I was such an egoistic and arrogant person that I insulted her and I am sorry for that Anika… but thank you for being there to accept me as the way I am, changing my bad habits into good one and introducing some new habits too… that time falling in love was nightmare for me and now, going away from you is nightmare…be it whatever Anika please don’t leave me and I will be there to take almost all the share of your frustration, anger and sorrows”
“PYAAR KI EK KAHANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
HOTI HAI KYA JAWANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
WO BHI EK DAUD THA
WAQT HI AUR THA
JAB WO THE AJNABI…
DONO TANHA SE THE
PAR WO KEHTE KISSE
BAAT JO DIL ME THI…
PYAAR KI EK KAHANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
HOTI HAI KYA JAWANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…”
The singers repeated the lines and stopped, Shivay started “her officers advised her to be with me always; everywhere as my shadow… she promised my daadi that if she dies also she will not let anything happen to me and my family. She came to our house as a PG and now she will become the elder daughter-in-law, my wife… she always irritated me but whenever she was close I always felt that I am the special one to her and one day she went away from me for two days… I was restless and was enquiring about her to everyone when I realized that I have fall for her… I was a person who was never good at expressing feelings so all the feelings were getting stored in the deepest corner of my heart but she never seemed affected by my presence, it was her duty to be close to me and so she sided her feelings too”
“GUMSUM GUMSUM REHTE THE DONO
PHIR BHI DIL ME KEHTE THE DONO
KOI SAPNA HUM BHI TO PAAYEIN…
EK DIN TUTE GHUM KE WO GHERE
JHILMIL JHILMIL AAYE SAVERE
MAUSAM BADLA JAAGI FIZAAYEIN…
WO MIL GAYE, WO KHIL GAYE
AUR PYAAR HO HI GAYA…
JO CHAHA THA, WO PAYA TO
HOSH KHO HI GAYA…”
The singers stopped, Shivay’s narration continued “Anika became my employee; I thought I was paying her but little I knew that she was there to ensure my financial security not hers. One fine day Tia another friend of mine along with her husband returned from Toronto and Tia directly came to my office to meet me. I was so overwhelmed and happy that I ignored Anika on that day without even realizing that I have hurt her unintentionally. I spent the night with my friends and returned the next day. She thought…” he stopped and chuckled looking at Anika. She looked down feeling embarrassed and he continued “…she thought that I like to spend nights with girls… I hope you got the meaning Anika… but then I confessed no we confessed that we love each other, so deep was our feelings that staying away from each other became impossible for us for longer time. Daadi fixed our marriage, but then an unfortunate call separated us… made me to hate her, made her to ran away from me on the day of our engagement. But she came back again, because we were destined to be one but this time… again to save me, she accepted all the blames I showered on her, she saved me again and again” he stopped as the singers started again.
“PYAAR KI EK KAHANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
HOTI HAI KYA JAWANI SUNO…
EK LADKA THA, EK LADKI THI…
“WO BHI EK DAUD THA
WAQT HI AUR THA
JAB WO THE AJNABI…
DONO TANHA SE THE
PAR WO KEHTE KISSE
BAAT JO DIL ME THI…”
He started as the singers paused “she shot me to save me… she saved me and went through many unwanted incidents but now we are together… today is our marriage, we will become one officially. I love you Anika… will you marry me?” he asked as he sat on his knees in front of her.
“Yes…” she said and hugged him sitting down. Her tears went down, she relieved all the moments together in just few minutes. He is gem she knew but this man is much more than that. This man never fails to surprise her and he always makes her fall in love for him, again and again.
They entered the big wedding venue… THE OBEROI MANSION hand in hand, smiling looking into each other’s eyes, Shivay narrated everything and the entire environment turned to happy again.
Romantic music started to play again in the back ground. The time for shaadi arrived. Groom and Bride sat side by side.
“Mangalam bhagwaan Vishnu… Mangalam garuradbhajam… Mangalam kundarikaksha… Mangalaya tanohari… Mangalam bhagwaan Vishnu… Mangalam garuradbhajam… Mangalam kundarikaksha… Mangalaya tanohari…” chants echoed through the wall of the big mansion, two souls, and two hearts got tied for ever.
Seven rounds were taken and the promises were kept in front of the holy fire of their love, her hairline was filled by him, the nuptial chain, mangalsutra, adorned her neck. “I love you…” he muttered before he clicked the lock of the chain. She was happy to be his, thus a tear drop went down her eyes.
Now it was Om and Rudra’s turn to tease Shivay before he goes in to celebrate his special night. Daadi scolded them and shooed them away and allowed Shivay to enter.
Anika was sitting on the bed and veil has covered her face entirely. He went to her and lifted up the veil and he muttered “you are looking so beautiful my queen” she blushed on his comment. “Hey Anika…” he called she turned to him and hummed “kuch nahi” he replied smilingly. She rested her head over his chest and he pecked over her head. Sessions of discussions continued as they discussed about the turns of their life the entire night. She dozed off to sleep soon while he kept on saying about his and her friendship. He then also slept.
Next morning she woke up first “good morning Shivay” she wished him and pecked over his forehead. He pulled her over him and kissed over her cheek and locked her between his hands.
“Choriye mujhe… sab kya sochenge” she said blushing and hiding her face in his chest.
“Yehi ki Shivay is romancing his wife” he said and looked at her. They smiled together as he pushed her more to him.
Her treatment was going on; she was recovering gradually and slowly. Shivay has still not touched her because according to doctors her condition can get worsen if she becomes intimate to him. But everything gets healed up with time, her condition too healed up as they become one in every sense without any fear.
It was a bright night in London, she is here for treatment. Dr. Smith has declared that she can become mother. She was very happy and so was he. She wanted to give Shivay the best gift of his life, their first night. She arranged for everything. Shivay returned from the hospital after collecting every positive report of Anika. The room was dark as he entered. A cold hands wrapped him from back “thank you so much Shivay… for everything, you have given me everything… you know from my childhood I wanted someone to love me and protect me as my father, you do so… you are my everything” she said. He turned towards her; she was in the same dress that she wore on the day of their marriage.
“Anika you are the most beautiful person I have met in my life, you taught me to be me, you taught me what actual love is and you know we can still wait” he said. She rested her head over his chest and continued “Shivay I know we can still wait, but I want to get loved completely by you” she buried her face in his chest and he wrapped her in his protective embrace.
He slowly lifted her chin up and made her look into his eyes. He bent down and placed kisses over her eyes and face followed down. He traced the lips that were so nicely painted over her face. He never wanted to hurry so he put her up and went near the bed. The lights were still off, he switched on a dim light, all the candles were arranged in row, and he smiled and lightened up one candle keeping her down over the bed. After lightening up all the candles he switched of the light and came back to her with a candle in his hand.
“I promise you Anika in front of this pure flame that I will be gentle… I will show my love today, if I ever become rough please do stop me because I want to love you forever” he completed. She kissed his forehead “Shivay I know you will be gentle and soft because for you I am your heart and no one becomes harsh to their heart” he put down the candle on the bed side table and captured her lips. She too pushed him more towards her. The kiss was passionate but not wild, their love kept it as soft as possible.
The night witnessed the respect for her in his eyes, the love for her in his eyes and her trust over him. He made her completely his. The wails gave them pleasure and marked their eternal love. They were complete in every sense.
PRESENT TIME
The bachcha party has gone back to their room long back after Shivay narrated the story of his marriage to complete their task when Shivay and Anika were busy thinking about their first night. That night was so special that they can never describe it in words.
“I love you Shivay” she said resting her head over his chest.
“I love you too Anika” he replied with a smile of contentment as he wrapped her in his embrace.
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Here comes the end doodles. Please for the last time do like and comment and read the down written paragraphs. I request, for the last time.
Hello to everyone, this is Nilanjana… your dear friend. Maybe this is the last time I am posting the note for my gratitude to everyone of you. You have given me everything what I dreamt off once, when I joined this site. I have got so many friends that now at this point of time, I just can’t stay away from this site. All the love and support that I received was much much more than I expected and I am grateful to everyone of you. This story has taught me many things, I hope I have portrayed all those which I learnt. Everyday whenever I used to open the submit new article tab I used to go through many thrilling emotions, previously in every stories all the emotional and sad parts I wrote just like that (we say na haste khelte). Many pop songs used to play in the background whenever I used to type any sad part but this story has taught me to be sad when it’s needed and happy when it’s needed. There were many days I used to stay low but every part had some magic for me and so at the end of the day my face used to glow with a soothing smile.
I owe all the smiles I had on my face because of this story to all of you.
Thanks a lot to everyone who read and commented sparing their time.
Pushpa Sadia Afrin MANAV SABIKHI Shivika Banita UF3355 Anj Pakhi007 Niriha Nikita_jai29 Alekhika20 Ashwinee ItsmePrabha Ritu Ritika Raji Ori Aayushi_kul Sukeer Anusha Appadu Jannat Maha Arpita6 Brisha Sonia Farjuman BAVATHARINI BABU Jeeta Aditi Diya Qwerty123 Pazaib An Ayra Nati Aashi9 Nida
Thank You to everyone who read and liked also.
Lastly before I wrap this up. Probably this is my last fan fiction. Maybe I won’t write anymore so my heartfelt wishes to everyone of you. Rise high and do shine in your life. I said probably because I go through different fluctuations of decision so if my mind changes I will surely write for you all again. And will post CHUDAILBAAZ soon, it’s already completed and I am dying to post the next chapters.
Thank You everyone for supporting and loving always. Will miss you all a lot. BYE
LOVE LOVE- NILANJANA
36 Comments
Your stories never fail to entertain us. You are so very awesome. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story
Thank You so much Maha. ???? I am so honoured darling, thanks a lot for all the sweet words.
will miss you a
lot nice and fabulous update
Thank You so much Manav. Will miss you too.
Awesome update you are a wonderful writer i loved your this story marriage was so dhamakedar ye journey itni khubsoorat thi ki chodne ka man nhi kr rha comeback with another story?
Thank You so much Ori. Hahaha…thank you so much re for supporting throughout. Will surely try to make a comeback ?
Oh god I m in love with this its each and every character.
Just loved it to the core. It made me hooked with it that I used to wait for it very and in b/w the exams too when I get time.
Will miss u di but ya jab man kare na tho jarur lekhna.
Lots of love di
Take care
stay healthy and safe
Thank You so much Ritu. Thanks a lot darling for reading and expressing all your views. Loads of to You too darling. Will surely write dear after a break because I have realised that I can’t stay away from writing much longer.
Take care, stay blessed and keep smiling darling??
Beautiful nd Lovely ending PIC….. Fully enjoyed ur this ff that filled with a lot of thriller , fun nd lovely chappies….
I still against of ur this decision nd with d support of ur nxt decision too… Waiting to read more of ur stories… So don’t forget to mention me… Nd tujhe miss kon karega… Iske alawa vi bahat kaam hain mere paas…
Baa bai…
Thank You so much PIC.
Haan haan I know and you also know my latest decision to please guchcha mat laho na, please meli chimpanjee didi… hehehuhuhahaha…. Hahahaha… okay chal phokat ka entry ilwangi tujhe 😛
haan haan zarur meri devi, tu kar apne kaam mujhe pata hai ki ek Chimpanzee Bandar ko hamesha miss karti hai… hehehuhuhaha. ??
One of the most khidkitod Ff of your till date
Don’t you dare to say that this my last ff..you have to write for us..i don’t know anything.
And dying to read CHUDAILBAAZ……
Bring back soon..
Waiting waiting waiting waiting. ………
Love you soooooooooo much My Nilash…
Yes Arpita I will also agree 🙂
Hahahaha… arre haan I will write but after how long that’s not sure, so I said I am leaving
Donno re when will I post but let’s hope to post it soon
Love you too my Arpita baby
Oh please nilanjana don’t say like this it’s my last part. Plus I’m requesting from my bottom of the heart. Your writings n stories should be going on n so on like river flows. Actually your ffs are just like effective novels, romantic rhythms, n more over inspirative ascepts. Please change your decision that not to write please be continued to write if you do so I’m very much kind n great to you. If you are busy n not able to write plz spare little of your time as not more than that like before. I’m very much attached to your writings in short time n these writings will remain with me in future difficulties. take care. I hope you will consider this request too as you did the same. Your one of wisher .
Raji the actual problem is time these days, I am not getting time to frame anything now. I won’t lie but a plot is running through my mind but not getting time to pen it down. I donno how will it come out if I start doing so but I hope I will surely comeback someday. I am not only considering it but taking it to my heart darling, I promise to manage sometime but let’s see when what happens 🙂
It is lovely my rocking girl.. Stay happy and blessed dear
Thank You so much Niki darling. ????
You too take care and stay happy darling.
Great ending…… Will miss this story…..plz, don’t stop writing FF’s…… I am a such a big fan of your’s…….. Everyday, I used to wait for this story sharply at 10:30pm, after reading the written update, I’ll be waiting for your update…. I am terribly going to miss this story….. I know I didn’t comment regularly but what to do, I am very bad in expressing my thoughts….. Plz, don’t stop writing….. Plz, plz, plz…… Take care and stay healthy…… With lots of love, bye…. Forgot to say, waiting for chudailbaaaz…..
Thank You so much Bavatharini, will miss your comments a lot too. Thank You so much dear for all the love and support, this means world to me thanks a lot lot lot dear. Hahahaha… who said you are bad at expressing? See you have expressed so much and thanks a lot dear. Will surely try to comeback with something interesting soon and about CHUDAILBAAZ, donno when I will post but will surely post 🙂
Darling..this epi is just AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW…….i mean just like how billu never fails to surprise anudi..you also never fail to surprise me with your atrangi style of writings..Shivika are already magical but you made them more magical..while reading this chappy i relived the entire FF once again in a single go..and you Chudail..dont tell byes and all ha..itni achi chapter dene ke baad utni emotional speech kaun detha hai..waise bhi tu chudailbaaz se wapis aa tho rahi hai na..toh aise bye math bolna.. will be waiting for your next..till then bye…Love you..Take care..
Thank You so much darling. Hahahaha… I am in search for your Billu also 😉 😛 awwww thank you for the compliment. Hahahaha… after writing the episode only I realised ki ye to pure ff ka summery ho gaya 😛 but chal you loved na so I am very very happy. Hehhehehe… arre re mai aaungi na wapas but thoru dino ka break lelu uske baad pakka 🙂
Mai deti hu, hands raised 😛 arre wahi to problem hai na Chudailbaaz post karne ka man nai kar raha, mujhe khud episodes padhke achche nai lage so I will include changes in them and phir post karungi 🙂
Love you too, bahut sara, Tum bhi take care. Will miss you re
Fabulous lovely dear….I loved this ff so much.
I really going to miss u and this ff
Love you ?? Take care and stay safe dear
Thank You so much Niriha. Thanks a lot for supporting always darling. Miss you too dear.
You too take care, stay safe and keep smiling.
Lovely ending..sorry for not commenting yr previous FF was a bit busy but I still read and hit on the like button.
I hope u continue with yr FF. I just love the way u right the story. Anyway good luck and take care.
Thank You so much Jeeta, it’s okay dear, thanks a lot for supporting silently.
Hope to comeback soon dear.
Good luck to you too, take care 🙂
It’s a such maha n great epic love that you showered between perfect people n you done the made for each other to the most happiest understanding n beautiful couple. U narrated to the level of awesome n difficult love to the different love story with a creative n credible memorable end. Actually I noted to make happy end but you did a fabulous amount of cherishfull lively moments filled the life of shivika that they succeed in every aspect of their of life. Thanks once again to this amazing creative perfect ending n what not. I too agree with commenting n sharing view n is the mark of our talent n hardworking but I assure that you are sure a good effective talented n efficient writer ho n your writing acts as tension relievers to me n to face effective in my hard times n not to deviate from my nature in odd times in my view. So better you should not leave this job of writing please.
Thank You so much Raji. All your words are just like I am relieving the episodes again and this comment made me remember all the beautiful moments I spent while writing the story. Thank You so so much again. This means much more than I can even express, I am so happy and honoured darling that you found my writing as the part to indulge in life too, thanks a lot for that. Saying thanks would be really a small word for expressing everything but then too thank you so much for supporting me and being there with me in this journey. Will surely write darling, but the only thing is after a loooooooooong or maybe short break. Let’s see what can I do 🙂 ??
I LOVE YOU NILASHHHHHHHHHHH <3 …That's all I can say …and this ff too….Will miss you for sure <3
Thank You so much Ayra. Love you too darling. Will miss you too alot. ??
Lovedddd this ff a lot nilu…probably ur best ff till now….each n every chaptr of this ff was A MAZING….nd dont say lyk this k tera last ff h…bahut maar khaegi??…m waiting k tu kb mre fb msg ka reply degi nd kb whatsapp pr aaegi…m missing u a loooot…
Lubbbb u nilu baby take care will miss u
Thank You so much Aayu. Haan re it’s true best ever ff, nai last nai hai… forming a plot in my mind, dekhte hai ki kab likhti hu 🙂 ?? please mat maar see maine bol diya ki I am not leaving writing but wapas kab likhungi not sure. Aa gayi WhatsApp par darling, fb ka msg nai aaya hai.
Love you too bahut sara. Take care and don’t miss me
Beautiful ending
Thank You so much Alekhika
your all part are just awesome ????? I will miss you?
Thank You so much Sadia. Will miss you too
first thing thankyou for this awesomely lovely update. you gave the whole summary of the ff in one go. beautifully drafted sequential update. everything was in place.and coming to the last part……..
wwwwtttttttttttfffffffffff??? your not going to write anymore????? ok ok i respect your decision but please come back soon badi jhalliiiiiiiiiii pleaseeeeeeeeeeee….anyway take care di and love you dherrrrr saaraa
sorry once again for being late!
Your welcome Choti Jhalli, bahut din ho gaye tumhe iss naam se pukaare hue 😛 Thank You so much dear. Arre no sorries accepted I said na, everything is fair in love and war and we two love each other na so it’s to big wala fair 😉
Yeah thought so because of busy schedule but after reading the comments I am getting urge to return back so let’s see what can I do 🙂